書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)建議信.ppt

假如你是 李華. .,審題,體裁: 信件 (a letter of advice),主體時(shí)態(tài): 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱: 第二人稱,假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你收到正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)筆友Peter的電子郵件，說(shuō)他在漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了困難，感到非常著急。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信并提出建議，幫他來(lái)解決這方面的困難。 1.不要擔(dān)憂，要有信心。 2.給自己更多練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)。 3.讓自己浸泡在漢語(yǔ)的環(huán)境當(dāng)中。,假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你收到正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)筆友Peter的電子郵件，說(shuō)他在漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了困難，感到非常著急。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信并提出建議，幫他來(lái)解決這方面的困難。 1.不要擔(dān)憂，要有信心。 2.給自己更多練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)。 3.讓自己浸泡在漢語(yǔ)的環(huán)境當(dāng)中。,1.Beginning:state the problem & your purpose(問(wèn)題和目的),2.Body:give advice&reasons (建議和理由),3.Ending:express your hope(表達(dá)希望),3parts,假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你收到正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)筆友Peter的電子郵件，說(shuō)他在漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了困難，感到非常著急。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信并提出建議，幫他來(lái)解決這方面的困難。 1.不要擔(dān)憂，要有信心。 2.給自己更多練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)。 3.讓自己浸泡在漢語(yǔ)的環(huán)境當(dāng)中。,I have received your letter. Im sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now Im writing to give you some suggestions.,Dont be anxious and trust yourself. Grab every opportunity to practice using the language. Involve yourself in a Chinese environment.,Looking forward to your improvement soon.,write an outline,Dear Peter, I have received your letter. Im sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now Im writing to give you some suggestions. To begin with, dont be anxious and trust yourself. Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world, so its normal for a beginner to have some trouble. Besides, grab every opportunity to practice using the language. The more you practice, the more fluent you will be in it.,organization,Above all, involve yourself in a Chinese environment. Make sure that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese, and by friends speaking Chinese, which is essential to the learning of any language. Looking forward to your improvement soon.,Writing.1,假設(shè)你是李華，你的好朋友Jane最近發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在發(fā)胖很煩惱，她寫信請(qǐng)你給她就如何減肥提建議，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容給Jane寫一封信。 要點(diǎn)：1.健康飲食；2.多鍛煉；3.喝足夠多的水。,It is important to have a healthy diet. It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be a good idea to drink enough water.,I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy.,1.Beginning:purpose,2.Body:advice,Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give you some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits. Besides, it is helpful to do more exercise. The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. In addition, it would be a good idea to drink enough water. Because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight.,I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. Yours, Li Hua,Writing.2,假設(shè)你是李華，得知你的老師Mr.Huang喜歡吸煙，并且已經(jīng)養(yǎng)成長(zhǎng)期吸煙的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，向他提出戒煙的建議。 要點(diǎn)：1.擔(dān)憂老師的身體健康。 2.提出戒煙理由和如何戒煙的建議。 3.祝他早日戒煙成功。,write an outline,Since I knew that you have got into the the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.,First, choose a day when you are relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you can get from stop smoking. Then, reread the benefits when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.,Dear Mr.Huang, Since I knew that you have got into the the habit of smoking, I have been very worried. You see, not only smoking wastes your time and money, but it is also harmful to you health physically and mentally, so I believe you should stop smoking immediately. Here are some suggestions for you.,First, choose a day when you are relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed. I hope my suggestions are useful to you, and you will make it soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Homework,1.Polish your writing1. 2.Try to finish writing2.,sentence patterns套用句型,A.state your purpose,1.Im sorry to learn thatso Im writing to give you some suggetions. 2.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 3.Knowing that you., Id like to share some suggestions with you.,B.give your advice,1.Trust yourself. Dont worry. 2.Its helpful/important to. 3.It would be a good idea to. 4.should/be supposed to do sth.,Remember！,C.express your hope,1.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration/account. Looking forward to your improvement soon. 2.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3.Im sure if you take my advice