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考研英語寫作教程 目錄 考研英語寫作介紹議論文反面信息圖議論文正面信息圖議論文爭議信息圖應(yīng)用文考研英語寫作遣詞用句常見錯(cuò)誤考研英語寫作遣詞用句升級(jí)練習(xí) 考研英語寫作介紹 小作文形式 應(yīng)用文內(nèi)容 信件為主分值 10分字?jǐn)?shù)要求 100詞左右時(shí)間要求 大約20分鐘 大作文形式 議論文內(nèi)容 看圖說話分值 20分字?jǐn)?shù)要求 160 200詞時(shí)間要求 大約40分鐘 應(yīng)試寫作的三個(gè)層次 寫得出寫得對(duì)寫得好 考研英語寫作難點(diǎn) 大腦一片空白基本無話可說表達(dá)漏洞百出可讀性相當(dāng)差中式英語泛濫考官哭笑不得表達(dá)捉襟見肘詞句鮮有亮點(diǎn)口語痕跡明顯好似娓娓道來 考研英語寫作要求 謀篇 觀點(diǎn)突出結(jié)構(gòu)合理謀段 論證充分言之有物謀句 正確多變關(guān)聯(lián)謀詞 準(zhǔn)確多變 課程安排 總體介紹考研英語寫作講解議論文反面信息圖寫作講解議論文正面信息圖寫作講解議論文爭議信息圖寫作講解應(yīng)用文寫作考研英語寫作遣詞用句常見錯(cuò)誤考研英語寫作遣詞用句升級(jí)練習(xí)學(xué)生例文講解 議論文題目分類 反面信息圖 199820002003200520062007正面信息圖 2001200220042008爭議信息圖 2009圖表數(shù)據(jù)題 19971999 第五檔 A9 10 B17 20 很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 語言自然流暢 語法錯(cuò)誤極少 有效地采用多種銜接手法 文字連貫 層次清晰 格式與語域恰當(dāng)貼切 對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者 即語言接受對(duì)象 完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果 第四檔 A7 8 B13 16 較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 允許漏掉一兩個(gè)次重點(diǎn) 使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 語言基本準(zhǔn)確 只有在試圖使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較難詞匯時(shí)才有個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤 采用了適當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?層次清晰 組織較嚴(yán)密 格式與語域恰當(dāng)貼切 對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者 即語言接受對(duì)象 產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果 第三檔 A5 6 B9 12 基本地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 遺漏一些內(nèi)容 但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的需求 有一些語法及詞匯錯(cuò)誤 但不影響理解 采用了簡單的銜接手法 內(nèi)容較連貫 層次清晰 格式與語域基本合理 對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者 即語言接受對(duì)象 基本產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果 第二檔 A3 4 B5 8 未能按照要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 遺漏或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào) 詞匯有限 有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤 影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解 未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?內(nèi)容缺少連貫性 格式與語域不恰當(dāng) 未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息給讀者 LoveIsaLamp Loveisalampindarkness andthemorethevoyageis thestrongerthelightis Likethelampvividlyportrayedinthepicture lovemayseeminsignificantinatimeofpeaceandabundance butitslightcomesintofocusinatimeofturbulenceandpoverty Thesaying afriendinneedisafriendindeed exactlyshowshowmanifestlovecanbeinurgentneedofhelp 19 Toillustratethispointofview IwilltakeTaoXingzhi oneofthegreatesteducatorsinChina forexample Hewasonlytoowillingtoimpartlovetowhoeverneededitmost Toimprovethesituationofmanypoorchildren Mr Taocommittedhimselftoestablishingaschoolespeciallycateringtothem EvenafterMr Tao sdeath thesechildrenstillboreinmindhiskindness hisgenerosityandaboveall hisunselfishness 19 Loveisneededeverywhere nomatterbigorsmall Itisthegoldenthreadthattiestheheartsallovertheworld Aslongaswereserveaplaceforloveinourheart itwillgrowandblossom andyieldfruitsthatcanmaketheworldmorebeautiful Let sdosomething anythingtogiveahandtoothers thelightofloveseemstomeanlittletoyou butmeansalottotheoneswrigglingindarkness 223ws LoveIsaLamp Loveisconsideredtobeaffectionofmankind butwhatistruelove Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions Lookatthepictureabove thereanoillampgivingofflightallthetime withenergybeinguseduplittlebylittle Suchislikelove akindoflastingdevotioninsomeway Theoillampwouldrathersacrificeitselftohelpotherswhoareinrealneed 16 Ioncecameacrossanessaytellingofagraduatedevotedherselftotheeducationcause Aftergraduatingfromuniversity shecouldhavefoundagoodjobandgotahandsomesalary Insteadofdoingso shewentbacktoherhometowninamountainareaandbecameateacherthere Withoutmuchmoneyorcomfortablelivingconditions she however gainedrespectfromsociety Sheturnedoutquiteafewexcellentstudents moreimportantofall shesetagoodexampleofhowtobecomeausefulpersonforherstudents 16 Asweallknow loveisakindofdevotionandcommitment Toshowloveinvolvessacrificeoneselftobenefitothers Thegreatertheneedsare themoreworthwhiletheloveappearstobe justastheoillampinthepicture Trytohelpothersgenerouslyandshowyourlove thentheworldwillbefulloflove 219ws LoveIsaLamp Myunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicurebelowisthatgivingyourhelptothosepeoplewhoareinthebiggesttroubleisthemostusefulforthemthananytime Whenpeoplehavesomedifficultywhichtheycan tdealwith thethingtheymostwantisyourhelpandyourlove yourhelpcanmakethemovercomeanythingandyourlovecanrenderthemmuchencouragement Itisalightinglampindarkthatthehelpandloveyougivethem 12 Severalyearsago someareassufferdisasterformtyhoon Thegovernmenthelpthemrebuildtheirfamilies In1999 asouthernprovincealsosuffersdisasterfromtheearthquake Manypeopledotheirbesttohelpthembydonatingmoney clothesandfood 12 Itisnecessarytotakesomemeasurestospreadlove Foronething weshouldencouragepeoplewhohaveloveandarehappytohelpothers Foranother weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatloveisbenefitforsociety What smore Ithinkthatonlyinthiswaywillwehaveabrightfuture 200ws LoveIsaLamp Inthedarkness therealwaysaflame evenitisshiningorwavinginthewildwind itgivesoflightwhichleadsyoutoreachingthesunshine Andheatthatwarmsyourheartwhenyouaregoingthroughmostdifficultiesmomentsinyourlife Asweknow loveisthemostpreciousfeeling 8 Lovehasamagicstrength Itconquerevils Createsplendidfuture andchangetheworld Sowelove weneedanyonecontributetheirloves Becauseweneedsunshine andalsowantthewholeworldfullofthelove Justtakeeverythingeasy Showyoursmiletoguywhojustfailedtheexam andyouwillbebetterthenexttime bequietwhenyourroommatesaresleepingandyouwentbacklate Thisisabsolutelytrue accordingtooneofmyfriends afterrecoveringfromaheavyill herecalledlaterthathefeltgreatcomfortwhenmanyofhisclassmatescometoaskafterhim 8 Loveisineveryday Ifyouarecarefulenoughandthinkingmoreaboutothers youareshowingyourlove Thehelpgivingtoafriendintroubleisthebestyoucanoffer whatyouneedmost That sreallypreciousandnobleamongothers 321ws LoveIsaLamp Loveisalamp Thedarkeritis moreshinethelightis Thesayingisgreat Inmodernsociety loveplaysamoreandmoreimportantrole Inspecialcountries loveworkinaspecialway 4 Inourcountry foodusedtolayanessentialroleinourlives Withthedevelopmentofeconomic thetimepassed Wedon tthinkaboutourhunger Someonegivesyousomethingtoeat Sometimes youwillthinkthatthefoodissobad Theloveissocheap However alittlefoodbecomessopreciousinotherpoorcountry Thepeoplehavetolookforfoodeverywhereforhis hernextdinner There thefoodsuppliedfreelybecomessoimportantthatmaybeinwillbringsomeup 4 However whatisthewaytoshowourlove Ithinkwhenweshowourlovewemustbehumanity Weshouldgivelovetopersonwhoneedmost Thenlovebecomesprecious 158ws 高分秘訣 要點(diǎn)全詞 句式多變錯(cuò)誤極少行文流暢 邏輯承接詞 格式正確 考研英語寫作的步驟 審題正面 反面 爭議 圖表 構(gòu)思頭腦風(fēng)暴行文三思而落筆檢查ThefirstdraftofanythingisSHIT ByHemmingway 反面信息圖的寫法 描述圖畫加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 得出結(jié)論 態(tài)度對(duì)策總結(jié) 描述圖畫 Thepictureshowsthat Alternativesof show 同義替換demonstrate display depict reveal present illustrate indicateAlternativesof picture 同義替換photo cartoon drawing修飾副詞 vividly clearly 描述圖畫 Aswecanseefromthecartoon Ascanbeclearlyseenfromtheabovepicture Asisdisplayedinthedrawing Asitisdisplayedinthedrawing Thecartoonvividlydepicts 加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursocietytoday Bydrawingthepicture thepainterintendstoinformusthat Apparently thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage 加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 Thekeymessageconveyedinthepictureisthat Thiskindofsituationcanbeseenin Thecartoonconveysasignal Thepicturedeliversamessage Thedrawingisasymbolthat 加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommon newphenomenoninChina inourdailylife intheyoungergeneration Thispicture cartoonconveysaclearmessage 加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 Thereareatleast reasonsforthisphenomenon Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon 加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 Manyfactorscontributeto leadto bringaboutthisproblem Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthissocialphenomenon Thecausesfortheproblemarecomplicated 首先其次再次 Tobeginwith Firstly FirstandforemostSecondly Inaddition WhatismoreInthethirdplace Furthermore Lastbutnotleast 加以評(píng)論 現(xiàn)象原因后果 Theeffectscouldbeadverse serious negative Itwillhaveanegative undesirableimpacton Thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Thenegativeconsequencescanbeexpected 得出結(jié)論 態(tài)度對(duì)策總結(jié) Asforme AsfarasIamconcerned Frommyview Fromapersonalpointofview Ifirmlybelievethat 得出結(jié)論 態(tài)度對(duì)策總結(jié) Mysuggestionastothebestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows Toeradicatetheproblem afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided NowIwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem 得出結(jié)論 態(tài)度對(duì)策總結(jié) Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem Therefore itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures Tosolvetheproblem acombinedeffortisreallynecessary 得出結(jié)論 態(tài)度對(duì)策總結(jié) Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue Onlyinthiswaycouldsuchathornyissuebesolved Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture Abrighterfuturecanbeexpectedifthesesolutionscouldbetaken 2006 Aswecanseefromthetwophotosclearly BeckhamhascrazyfansinChina OneboywritesthenameofBeckhamonhisface andtheotherdoesthehairstyleofBeckhaminthebarber satthecostofRMB300 Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonintheyoungergeneration Teenagersexcessivelyadmirestars Manyfactorscontributetothisproblem Tobeginwith theunder agedarecurious immatureandna ve andcanneitherresistthetemptationaroundnormakeasoundjudgment Inaddition familyandschoolfocusonacademicperformance butignoremoralandvalueeducation Lastbutnotleast mediamisleadyoungstersbyalwayscoveringsomestaraffairs Asaconsequence theeffectscouldbeadverse Theattentionoftheadolescentcouldbedistractedawayfromstudy whichistheirsoletask andsomeofthemmaygoastray Asforme theyoungshouldnotworshipthestarsinsuchablindandcrazyway NowIwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem Firstly thejuvenileshouldlearnthevirtuesfromstar suchashardworking Whatismore family schoolandthemediashouldguidethemproperly andinformthatstudydeservesmoretimeandenergythanstars Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue 2005 Thecartoonvividlydemonstratesafamilyfootballmatch whichistotallydifferentfromaregularone Withoutstrikers only4goalkeepers whoaresonsanddaughteroftheoldfather areguarding4goalsrespectively Besides theoldfatheractsasaballtoreplacetherealone Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursocietytoday theyoungergenerationtaketheirparentsasaburdenandrefusetotakecareofthem Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon Thechildrenoftheoldparentsmayburythemselvesincareerormakingafortune andtheylosethebasicmoralandconscience Soitwillhaveanundesirableimpactonbothindividualandsociety Firstly theoldmayendtheirlifeinpainandsorrow Inaddition thetraditionalvirtuesinsocietymaybelost Frommyview suchabehaviorshouldbecriticizedandcondemned Tosolvetheproblem acombinedeffortisreallynecessary Firstofall theyoungergenerationshouldshouldertheresponsibilitytotakecaretheelderly Secondly thegovernmentshouldsetupasoundelderly caresystemandcovermorepensionandmedicalcareexpenses Onlyinthiswaycouldtheelderlyhaveahappylife 2000 Thedrawingvividlydepictstheshockingdifferenceinfishingbetween1900and1995 In1900 asinglefishingboatandnumerousfishcouldbeseenintheocean Totallyoppositely in1995 theoceanaccommodatedcrowdedfishingboats butonlyonefishwasinit Bydrawingthepicture thepainterintendstoinformusthathumanactivitieshaveadisastrousimpactonthenatureandleadtospeciesextinction Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthissocialphenomenon Firstandforemost profit orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycost Besides thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandecosystem Thusthenegativeconsequencescanbeexpected Resourcesareonthedecline whichleadstoecosystemimbalanceandevenbreakdownfinally Asaresult humanbeingscannotsurviveonthisplanet AsfarasIamconcerned environmentandnaturalresourceprotectionshouldbeintoppriority Mysuggestionastothebestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows Tobeginwith ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded Secondly thegovernmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulations suchasthebanonfishingduringsomeperiodsoftheyear Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture 2007 Aswecanseefromthecartoon inafield akickerisreadytoshoot whileakeeperisguardingthegoal Meanwhile thekeepersupposeshimselftobeadwarf andthekickerconsidershimasagiant whocoversthewholegoal Thepicturedeliversamessage somemayunderestimatetheirowncapabilitywhileoverestimatethedifficultyorchallenge Inaword theylackconfidence whichusuallyleadstofailureandexamplesabound Inthelong distancerunning someplayersmayconsiderthedestinationunreachableandstopinthehalfway Besides inthepreparationofNationalEntranceTestForMA MSCandidates somestudentswouldtakeitaslongandtoughexperienceandquitinthemidwayastheathletesdo Fromapersonalpointofview confidenceisofvitalimportance Therefore itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasurestoimproveconfidence Firstly itisadvisabletosetupanachievablegoal Asitisknown theconfidencewouldcomebackifthetaskisnotsodemanding suchasmemorizing50wordsadayinsteadof500 Inaddition itisofnecessitytocheerfortinysuccess Once50wordsarememorizedeachday weshouldremindourselves Icandoit Onlyinthiswaycouldtheconfidencebeimproved 2003 Asisdisplayedinthedrawing aflowerblossomswellinagreenhouse whichcanresiststorm Incomparison oncethegreenhouseisremoved theflowercannotwithstandanymoreandwitherssoon Apparently thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage aflowerwhichisusedtothegreenhousecannotsurviveinthedifficulty andsimilarexamplesabound Achildover protectedbyparentscannotsurviveinthecut throatcompetition Likewise anindustrysurroundedbynationalpreferentialpolicycannotcompetewithforeignrivalsworldwide AsfarasIamconcerned inordertogrow almosteverythinghastobeputinthetoughenvironment Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem Accordingly childrenshouldbeindependenttobereadyforthefuturecompetition anddowhattheyareabletodo suchascookingandhousework Asforthegovernment itshouldencourageenterprisestoexpand goglobalandparticipateinbusinessworldwide Onlyinthiswaycouldtheimmaturesurviveandsucceedwhentheyfaceplight 1998 Asisdemonstratedinthecartoon ahenismakinghercommitmentandclaimingtohaveroundandcompleteeggs whicharewithoutedgesandcornersandcontainallessentialparts Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenoninourdailylife Itisridiculoustohavepromiseinallwalksoflife andexamplesabound Asitisfrequentlyseen businessmenimpressthecustomerbyexaggeratingtheresponsibilitytheyshouldtake suchasrefundablesystem Similarly banksemphasizesmileserviceandgovernmentauthoritiesclaimtoexamineandapproveapplicationwithinseveraldays Therefore thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Itistheresponsibilityofstores banksandgovernmentauthoritiestoprovidedecentservice Thesecommitmentsseemtoexceedwhattheyshouldoffer andcustomersandcitizensmaybehonoredandflattered However infact theirstatusdeclines Ifirmlybelievethatwedonotneedthesesuperficialwordsbuttheimprovementinallaspectstomeetthedemandofus Toeradicatetheproblem afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided Firstofall consumersshouldnottaketheseridiculouscommitmentsasthebonusfrombusinessmenandgovernmentauthorities Besides thegovernmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstopreventthesepromisesandbehaviors Onlybycooperationcouldaharmonioussocietybeestablished Aswecanseefromthecartoon ahen issellinghereggsandclaimingtheyarebigandharmless Inherhand acertificateprovesthatnocontaminatedingredientisinhereggs Bydrawingthepicture thepainterintendstoinformusthatfoodsafetyhasbecomeaveryseriousissuenationwide Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon Tobeginwith producers forthesakeofeconomicprofit pursuetheirsoleaimatanycostbyaddingcontaminatedingredienttothefood Whatismore thegovernmenthasloosesupervisiononthequalityoffood whichmakescontaminatedmilkpowderandeggseasilyavailableinthemarket Thus itwillhaveanundesirableimpactonthehealthofcitizens Contaminatedfoodmayleadtosomeincurablediseasesandevendeath Asforme foodsafetyshouldbeintoppriority Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem Firstandforemost manufacturersshouldberequiredtotaketheresponsibilityofthequalityofproductsandensuretheyareharmless Inaddition governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstocombatcontaminatedfood Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue Asisdisplayedinthedrawing onawastelandwheretreeshavebeencutdown littlemonkeyscanonlyplayandjumponthelongarmoftheirparents insteadoftheforest Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonworldwide Humanactivitieshaveadisastrousimpactonthenatureandtotallydestroythehabitatsofanimals Thecausesforitarecomplicated Firstly profit orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycostbydepletingnaturalresources Inaddition thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandecosystem ignoringorevenencouragingdeforestation So thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Agrowingnumberofspeciesareonthedangerlist whichposesathreattothesurvivalofhumanbeings Fromapersonalpointofview environmentandnaturalresourceprotectionshouldbegivendueattention Itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures Tobeginwith ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded Secondly governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstoconserveourhome Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture Thedrawingvividlydepictsthepuzzleoftheearth Inawhiteplasticbagcarriedbyawoman theearthisstrugglingtohaveabreath Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonworldwide Pollutionhasadisastrousimpactonthenature Thecausesforitarecomplicated Firstly forthesakeofconvenience disposableandnon degradableplasticbagsarewidelyused Inaddition profit orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycostbypollutingenvironment Furthermore thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandpollution So thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences Increasingpollution whichmeanscleanwaterandfreshairarenolongeravailable leadstoecosystemimbalanceandevenbreakdownfinally Asaresult humanbeingscannotsurviveonthisplanet Fromapersonalpointofview environmentpollutioncontrolshouldbegivendueattention Itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures Tobeginwith ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded Secondly governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstoconserveourhome suchasthebanonfreesupplyofplasticbagsindepartmentstoresandsupermarkets Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture Thecartoonvividlydepictsaninterestingphenomenon Atnight aboyislyingontheroofofhishouse Withapapermarked59 heisscaredofgoingintotheroom wherehisparentsarequarrellingbitterly Apparently thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage nowadaysschoolchildrenareundertoomuchpressure Manyfactorsbringaboutthisproblem Firstofall parentspayexcessivelycloseattentiontotheacademicperformanceoftheirchildrenandimposegreatpressureonthem Inthesecondplace itistheimpropereducationsystemwhichjudgesthestudentsbyoneexaminationonlythatshouldtaketheresponsibility Asaresult theeffectscouldbeadverse Gradually childrenwouldhavesomementalproblems beingdepressedandisolated Itisalsopossiblethattheymaygoastrayandevencommitcrime Frommyview childrenshouldberelievedfromtheseverestress Tosolvetheproblem acombinedeffortisreallynecessary Familyandschoolshouldcon