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2008年專八翻譯試題講評 1 漢譯英 都市寸土千金 地價炒得越來越高 今后將更高 擁有一個小小花園的希望 對尋常之輩不啻是一種奢望 一種夢想 我想 其實誰都有一個小小花園 這便是我們的內(nèi)心世界 人的智力需要開發(fā) 人的內(nèi)心世界也是需要開發(fā)的 人和動物的區(qū)別 除了眾所周知的諸多方面 恐怕還在于人有內(nèi)心世界 心不過是人的一個重要臟器 而內(nèi)心世界是一種景觀 它是由外部世界不斷地作用于內(nèi)心漸漸形成的 每個人都無比關(guān)注自己及至親至愛之人心臟的健損 以至于稍有微疾便惶惶不可終日 但并非每個人都關(guān)注自己及至親至愛之人的內(nèi)心世界的明暗 2 中文作者 梁曉聲標(biāo)題 心靈的花園 本文選自英文報ShanghaiDaily翻譯大獎賽第11期 07年8月 3 我想 其實誰都有一個小小花園 這便是我們的內(nèi)心世界 Infact Ithinkeveryonehasasmallgardenandthatisourinnerworld Ithinkeveryone ineffect hasasmallgardenoraflowerbedofhisown namely ourinnerworld 4 人的智力需要開發(fā) 人的內(nèi)心世界也是需要開發(fā)的 People sintelligenceneedstobedeveloped sodoestheinnerworld Thereisaneedforhumanbeingstotapintotheirownintelligence asisthecasewiththeirinnerworld Justasthereisaneedforhumanbeingstotapintotheirownintelligence soisthecasewiththeirinnerworld 5 人和動物的區(qū)別 除了眾所周知的諸多方面 恐怕還在于人有內(nèi)心世界 心不過是人的一個重要臟器 而內(nèi)心世界是一種景觀 它是由外部世界不斷地作用于內(nèi)心漸漸形成的 Thedifferencebetweenpeopleandanimals inadditiontothemanywell known isalsointheinnerworld Theheartisanimportantorgan however theinnerworldisalandscape Itgraduallytookshapeundertheconstantinfluenceoftheoutsideworldontheheart 6 Whatdistinguishesbetweenhumanbeingsandanimals apartfromthevariousaspectswhichareuniversallyknown mayprobablybeinthathumanbeingshaveaninnerworld Heartisnomorethananimportantorganwhereastheinnerworldconstitutesalandscape whichgraduallytakesitsshapeunderthecontinuousinfluencefromtheoutsideworld 7 每個人都無比關(guān)注自己及至親至愛之人心臟的健損 以至于稍有微疾便惶惶不可終日 Everyoneissoconcernedaboutthehealthoftheheartsoftheirlovedonesaswellashisthataslightdiseasewouldcausegreatanxiety Sogreatistheimportancethateveryoneattachestothephysicalconditionofhisownheartorthoseofhisclosestanddearestones thatmerelyaminordiseasewouldenduringlyweighonhismind 8 但并非每個人都關(guān)注自己及至親至愛之人的內(nèi)心世界的明暗 Butnoteveryoneisconcernedabouttheinnerworldofthemselvesandtheirlovedones 9 參考譯文 Infact Ithinkeveryonehasasmallgardenandthatisourinnerworld People sintelligenceneedstobedeveloped sodoestheinnerworld Thedifferencebetweenpeopleandanimals inadditiontothemanywell known isalsointheinnerworld Theheartisanimportantorgan however theinnerworldisalandscape Itgraduallytookshapeundertheconstantinfluenceoftheoutsideworldontheheart Everyoneissoconcernedaboutthehealthoftheheartsoftheirlovedonesaswellashisthataslightdiseasewouldcausegreatanxiety Butnoteveryoneisconcernedabouttheinnerworldofthemselvesandtheirlovedones 10 Ithinkeveryone ineffect hasasmallgardenoraflowerbedofhisown namely ourinnerworld Thereisaneedforhumanbeingstotapintotheirownintelligence asisthecasewiththeirinnerworld Whatdistinguishesbetweenhumanbeingsandanimals apartfromthevariousaspectswhichareuniversallyknown mayprobablybeinthathumanbeingshaveaninnerworld Heartisnomorethananimportantorganwhereastheinnerworldconstitutesalandscape whichgraduallytakesitsshapeunderthecontinuousinfluencefromtheoutsideworld Sogreatistheimportancethateveryoneattachestothephysicalconditionofhisownheartorthoseofhisclosestanddearestones thatmerelyaminordiseasewouldenduringlyweignonhismind 11 英譯漢 原文 But ashasbeentrueinmanyothercases whentheywereatlastmarried themostidealofsituationswasfoundtohavebeenchangedtothemostpractical Insteadofhavingsharedtheiroriginalduties andasschool boyswouldsay goinghalves theydiscoveredthatthecaresoflifehadbeendoubled Thisledtosomedistressingmomentsforbothourfriends theyunderstoodsuddenlythatinsteadofdwellinginheaventheywerestilluponearth andhadmakethemselvesslavestonewlawsandlimitations Insteadofbeingfreerandhappierthaneverbefore theyhadassumednewresponsibilities theyhadestablishedanewhousehold andmustfulfillinsomewayoranothertheobligationsofit Theylookedbackwithaffectiontotheirengagement theyhadbeenlongingtohaveothertothemselves apartfromtheworld butitseemedtheyneverfeltsokeenlythattheywerestillunitsinmodernsociety 12 本文選自朱厄特的文章 新生活 TheNewLifebySarahJewett薩拉 奧恩 朱厄特 SarahOrneJewett 1849 1909 生于緬因州南貝里克鎮(zhèn) 十幾歲時就已開始寫作 初期寫的短篇 收集在 深港 里 Deephaven 1877 出版后反應(yīng)良好 其后又寫了一些短篇 幾部小說和詩歌 大部寫的都是緬因州的生活 一八九六年出版的 針樅之鄉(xiāng) TheCountryofthePointedFirs 是她最著名的作品 13 But ashasbeentrueinmanyothercases whentheywereatlastmarried themostidealofsituationswasfoundtohavebeenchangedtothemostpractical 但是正如其他許多已經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情一樣 當(dāng)他們最終結(jié)婚后 發(fā)現(xiàn)最憧憬的生活變得再實際不過了 14 Insteadofhavingsharedtheiroriginalduties andasschool boyswouldsay goinghalves theydiscoveredthatthecaresoflifehadbeendoubled 他們非但沒有分擔(dān)各自原先的責(zé)任 正如那些學(xué)生們所說 一半一半 相反卻發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的重?fù)?dān)加倍了 15 Thisledtosomedistressingmomentsforbothourfriends theyunderstoodsuddenlythatinsteadofdwellinginheaventheywerestilluponearth andhadmakethemselvesslavestonewlawsandlimitations 這使得我們那兩個結(jié)婚的朋友時常覺得沮喪 他們突然發(fā)現(xiàn)自己并沒有過著天堂般的生活而是仍實實在在地生活在地球上 而且成為了新規(guī)則和新約束的奴隸 16 Insteadofbeingfreerandhappierthaneverbefore theyhadassumednewresponsibilities theyhadestablishedanewhousehold andmustfulfillinsomewayoranothertheobligationsofit 生活并沒有比以前更自由 更幸福 因為他們要去承擔(dān)新的責(zé)任 既然成立了一個新的家庭 那就無論如何也要盡一點家庭的義務(wù) 17 Theylookedbackwithaffectiontotheirengagement theyhadbeenlongingtohaveothertothemselves apartfromtheworld butitseemedtheyneverfeltsokeenlythattheywerestillunitsinmodernsociety 他們深情地回想起訂婚的那段時光 曾經(jīng)如此地渴望擁有彼此而忘掉這個世界 然而現(xiàn)在最深切的感受卻是自己仍是這個世界的一份子 18 但是正如其他許多已經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情一樣 當(dāng)他們最終結(jié)婚