最新人教版英語(yǔ)專題訓(xùn)練中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

1、最新人教版英語(yǔ)專題訓(xùn)練中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1“ 帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué) 提建 ”。你 上就要 了，在初中的學(xué) 和生活中你一定有很多收 ， 學(xué)弟學(xué)妹 提幾點(diǎn)建 吧！要求： 1. 內(nèi)容完整， 言流 ， 寫(xiě) 范清晰。2. 短文中不能出 正式姓名，校名。100 左右。【答案】 im going to graduate from junior high school. as your senior, i have some suggestions to the young.as old saying goes, all work and no play makes jac

2、k a dull boy. to begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.moreover, you should get along well with others. to have more friends, not enemies.last but not least, you could be active in school team work. ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful sc

3、hool life as welli hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be going to ，graduatefrom ， to begin with ， both and，get along well with others ， be active in， as important as ， as well 等。而 to begin with,/ moreover,/ last but not least,

4、等短 的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué) 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，寫(xiě)作 就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有 性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開(kāi)思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2 面表達(dá)你即將升入高中，面 寄宿（a boarding school ）和走 （ a day school）兩 學(xué)校的 。 你以 “a boarding school or a d

5、ay school ?！睂?xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容 包括： 寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊； 走 學(xué)校的利和弊；你的 和理由（不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) ;100 詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。a hoarding school or a day schoolwe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】we are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will mak

6、e a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.if we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. however, we may have less time to stay with our family. if we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies.

7、at the same time computer games and tv plays may make a bad influence on us.as for me, i prefer a boarding school. we should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?xiě)。第一段要寫(xiě)總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（ a boarding school ）和走讀（ a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫(xiě)詳細(xì)敘述讀

8、寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻繉?xiě)作之前要1.審清題目，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？2.確定文章類型，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？3.確定時(shí)態(tài)，單一還是混合。4.寫(xiě)下關(guān)鍵詞、短語(yǔ)、句型。 5.列出提綱和段落，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。6.根據(jù)提綱和段落結(jié)構(gòu)句型及關(guān)鍵詞句完成文章。寫(xiě)完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of 、if we choose a boarding school 、 at the same time

9、 、 as for me, i prefer a boarding school 、 payattention to 、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。3馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場(chǎng)“ my life atschool ”主題 班會(huì) , 邀請(qǐng)全班同學(xué)參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶1.與同學(xué)融洽相處；2.得到老師的幫助；3.獲得交換生機(jī)會(huì)；4.參加志愿者活動(dòng)。不開(kāi)心的事情1.好朋友李華轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)；2.不擅長(zhǎng)語(yǔ)文寫(xiě)作。1.

10、升上理想的學(xué)校；未來(lái)展望2.能結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友；3. 請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充（至少兩點(diǎn)）my life at schoolhow time flies! its unbelievable that im going to graduate from my beloved school.【答案】 my life at schoolhow time flies! it s unbelievable that i many things to remember. m going to graduate from my beloved school. there arein the junior school, i g

11、ot along well with my classmates. the teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. the most unforgettable thing is that i got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in australia. i learned a lot from the experience. i also remember i served as volunteer to help o

12、thers. certainly, there were also unhappy things. my good friend li hua went to another school. i was very sad. luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. besides, i was not good at chinese writing.i hope i can go to a dream school and make more new friends. i also wish i can do bette

13、r in all subjects when i am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以my life at school 為題，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開(kāi)心的事情；最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語(yǔ)，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出

14、來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來(lái)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整， 構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是 目中 出的開(kāi) ，作者使用一句 引出下文；第二段是主體，介 了 去美好的回 以及不開(kāi)心的事情；最后一段 未來(lái) 行

15、了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有 次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的 和人稱， 法 范，用 準(zhǔn)確，注意了 正確形式的 化。句式 構(gòu)完整，符合英 的表達(dá) 。 言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流 。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短 ，如 the teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. the most unforgettable thing is that i got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in australia.luckily, w

16、e kept in touch with each other through emails. besides, i was not good at chinese writing.i also wish i can do better in all subjects when i am in high school and can go to a good college. 等。4 面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái) , 于如何安排孩子初中 后的第一個(gè)假期 ,家 和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示 ,寫(xiě)一篇英 短文 ,描述他 的不同看法 ,同 表你自己 暑假安排的 點(diǎn)。parents opinionsge

17、t ready for high school. do some houseworkkids opinionshave a good rest. do some sightseeingyour opinion注意 （ 1）表格中的 點(diǎn) 供參考 ,允 適當(dāng) ;（ 2）開(kāi) 已 出 ,不 入 數(shù) ;（ 3）文中不得出 真 姓名和校名等信息;（ 4） 數(shù) :不少于 80。how will you spend the coming summer vacation? parents and kids have their own opinions._【答案】 how will you spend the

18、coming summer vacation? parents and kids have their ownopinions.some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so its important to take summer courses. they also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. but the kidsdisagree. they think its time to take a g

19、ood rest. they need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.in my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. all work and no play makes jack a dull boy. we need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. its good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要

20、點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型： they also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. but the kids disagree. they think its time to take a good rest. they need to hang out with th

21、eir friends to go sightseeing. 這些給文章增色不少。5書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過(guò)微信（wechat）或支付寶（alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫(xiě)一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來(lái)源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、

22、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮?every spring festival i receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. now i even get it through wechat or alipay. i usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. sometimes i also buy some gifts for my parents.in order to make good use of the

23、lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. what is more, why not donate our lucky

24、money to the poor kids in need? helping others makes us happy.all in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. we should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過(guò)微信（wechat）或支付寶（alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳

25、細(xì)，寫(xiě)作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，不能逐字翻譯。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子： in order to make good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it

26、 on video games. 這些給文章增色不少。6近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅 ”。你的美國(guó)朋友sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示:1.課堂上認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講,做好筆記;2.不要害怕犯錯(cuò)誤,與同學(xué)們用中文交流;3.課下經(jīng)常閱讀中文雜志、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目;4.經(jīng)常用中文給外國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)電子郵件等。注意 :1.詞數(shù) 80-100;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫 ;3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。dear s

27、am ,im happy to hear from you. i know you want to learn chinese well. here are some suggestions._in a word,if you have good ways of learning chinese ,you will learn it well.yoursdaming【答案】 dear sam,im happy to hear from you.i know you want to learn chinese well.here are some suggestions. first, you

28、should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in chinese. and dont be afraid of making mistakes. third, youd better read chinese magazines or newspapers after class. you can also watch chinese programmes on the internet. i think

29、it can help you to improve your pronunciation. lastly, you can write emails to me or other chinese friends in chinese.in a word, if you have good ways of learning chinese, you will learn it well.yours,daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給 sam 寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。通過(guò)審題可知，這是要求寫(xiě)一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先應(yīng)和 s

30、am 先做一個(gè)交流，然后引出寫(xiě)信的目的；接下來(lái)給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫(xiě)一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)

31、題目要求給 sam 寫(xiě)了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與 sam 之間的問(wèn)候以及引出 sam 學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)這一話題，并介紹寫(xiě)信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了first，second， third， lastly 等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語(yǔ)句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型

32、，如first, you should listen to the teacher andtake notes carefully in class. 、 second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in chinese 、 i think it can help you to improve your pronunciation 、 in a word, if you have good ways of learning chinese, you will learn it well. 等等。7書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇題

33、為changes in our hometown 的英語(yǔ)短文（80 詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：過(guò)去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4 道路狹窄（ narrow ）4 街道寬闊（ wide ），干凈整潔5 居住條件（ living conditions ）差5 生活越來(lái)越好， 境（environment ）越來(lái)越舒適6 你的感想 （寫(xiě)兩到三句）changes in our hometownin the past ten years ， great changes hav

34、e taken place in our hometown 【答案】 changes in our hometownin the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. in the past, there used to be old houses. the river was very dirty. the roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. people were not rich. they went to work

35、on foot or by bike. but now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. we can see the clean river and the clear water . even we can see fish in the water. there are many wide and clean roads. our life is better and better the environment around us is more and more comfortable. people usually go

36、 to work by bus or by car.i am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. but i think it s still important to remembe the past. it tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮點(diǎn) 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達(dá)流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on fo

37、ot ， by bike，betterand better ， more and more 等。而 i think its still important to remember the past/it tells thatwe should cherish the present life. 等 從句 構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了 作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 ，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開(kāi)思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高

38、的分?jǐn)?shù)。8 面表達(dá)（原 ）今年春 ，很多人加入了 包的游 ，但也有人表示擔(dān) 。學(xué)校英 ?？?天地 此 行 ，假如你是一名校刊小 者， 你就此次 的 果 行 ，并 你自己的 點(diǎn)。agreement（ 75%）grabbing reddisagreementpackets on line（ 25%）1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun2.bring people closer, make more friendsspend too much time.not have enough communication with family

39、members, feel lonely1.your opinion2.提示詞： we chat 微信 grabbing red packets on line 搶紅包注意：（ 1）詞數(shù) 80 左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（ 2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（ 3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息;as we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the spring festival in 2016. from then on, mo

40、re and more people have been crazy about it. so we did thesurvey on the acti vity of“ grabbing red packets” among students._【答案】 as we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the spring festival in 2016. from then on, more and more people have been crazy about it

41、. so we didthe survey on the activity of“ grabbing red packets” among students.about 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. it can bringpeople closer , they can make more friends .grabbing red packets has been pa rt of people s lives.about 25% of them say some

42、people spend too much time grabbing red packets. they don t havenough communication with their family members .they may feel a little lonelypersonally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. also, its obvious that it is more

43、 convenient. however, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. it is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. if people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. whats worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并

44、談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容 主要包括三部分：支持的人 的理由；反 者 的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述， 可以使文章 構(gòu)清楚，有 次。寫(xiě)作 ， 注意英 表達(dá) 和 的不同，不要逐 翻 ， 從句子整體 構(gòu)出 ，以 句 主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。 提升文章檔次， 注意使用高 句型和 復(fù) 的句式。 句之 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)?接成分，使文章整體意思 、表達(dá)流 。點(diǎn)睛： 是一

45、篇 秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、 構(gòu)清晰。文章分 三段，第一段是 目中已 出的，因此了文章的 。第二段中作者表述了支持和反 玩 個(gè)游 的人 各自的理由；第三段中作者 表了自己的看法。其次短文中 言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英 的表達(dá) 。文章以一般 在 主，特 注意了 的正確形式， 法 范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了 豐富的句型，如about 75% of them think it is a popular form ofentertainment, bring them more fun.、 grabbing red packets has been part of people、 s livesabou

46、t 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、 personally,theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to peoplein a special form. 、 if people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,evenbreak their cell phones

47、. 等等。文章中也出 了一些 法上的小 ， 的來(lái) ，不影響整篇文章的 量。9 面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn) 伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你 游玩。 根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息，將你的 用英文向同學(xué) 介 。britainaustraliatimejuly 1 - july 14timevisit the buckingham palace（白金 ）activitiesvisit the british museum（大英博物 ）activitieswatch football matchesattentionchangeable weatherattentioncost20,000

48、yuancost要求：1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必 包括某一國(guó)家的所有信息及 的理由；2. 合游玩國(guó)家的情況，自 希望可以安排的活 ，并提出3. 文章不少于 90 ，開(kāi) 和 尾已 出，不 入 數(shù)；4. 通 、意思 、條理清楚、 寫(xiě) 范；5. 不得出 真 的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。august 15 -august 24visit the sydney opera house travel around the gold coast（黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalaswinter16,000 yuan1-2 點(diǎn)出游的注意事 ；the summer holiday i

49、s coming. i think it s a good idea to. travel abroadi hope i will have a good time there!【答案】 the summer holiday is coming. i think it s a good idea to travel abroad. iadhave re information about two countries britain and australia. i like britain. so i think we can go to britain.the time is july 1 to july 14. its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.the first, i want