最新中考英語作文講義 寫作話題1：校園生活-(教師版)

1、最新中考英語作文講義 寫作話題1：校園生活-(教師版)中考寫作話題1校園生活( School life)重要性時態(tài)1.Tom的寵物狗已經(jīng)死了5天了。( have been)(2017寶山一模, 37）_2.一下飛機，所有旅客就會被直接帶到酒店。( as soon as)(2016徐匯一模, 38)_3. 因為我有事情要告訴他，我會等到他回來。( until)(2016虹口一模, 35)_4. 直到昨天在瑜伽俱樂部碰面，我才認識這位新同學。（not. until）(2016奉賢二模, 42)_5. 這個運動員正在跑1500米時，突然摔倒了。（while）(2016松江二模, 38)_（考題關聯(lián)）

2、2016中考真題- Im ready2014中考真題- This time next year2017浦東二模- I want to be a/an in group work2017普陀二模- Our last class meeting in junior high school2016寶山一模- School uniforms2016嘉定一模- How to celebrate graduation2016長寧、金山二模- Students should not work too hard2015浦東一模- I get from my class life2015崇明一模- Change

3、s in my school2015虹口一模- My last winter holiday in junior middle school2015金山一模- One problem/ question I met in my English study2014閔行一模- A happy memory in my junior high school2014靜安、青浦一模- A suggestion letter to my dear school2014普陀二模- The thing Id like to do most after the entrance examination（真題再現(xiàn)

4、）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topicChanges in my school.(以學校發(fā)生的變化為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference。(以下提示僅供參考)What changes have taken place in your school?What do you think of these changes?(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名，校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。)(2015崇明一模)審(Read)的：簡開從作文標題“Chang

5、es in my school”中可得知，主要的寫作內(nèi)容應為校園的變化，再根據(jù)題干中所給提示：1 .What changes have taken place in your school? 2. What do you think of these changes?可將書寫方向定為：1. 校園發(fā)生的變化是？2. 我對這些變化的看法是. 然而，寫到這里，我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)題干中并沒有之前所預想的第三點提示，在這種情況下，則要按照傳統(tǒng)寫作的三大段模式，自行附加結(jié)尾，即：3. 對校園生活進行總結(jié)提出期望。寫( Write)根據(jù)之前所講寫作步驟：作文題目一寫作框架一添加素材一初稿，初稿作文題目素材寫作框架開

6、篇 中間 結(jié)尾 即可進行如下書寫步驟的拆解：開篇：The changes have taken place in my school are.中間：I think the changes are.結(jié)尾：In conclusion./ I hope my school.1. What changes have taken place in your school?2. What do you think of these changes?3. Conclusion. /Hope.接下來，我們需要思考，涉及到校園生活類話題時，可以應用多少詞匯及句式，才會使文章的內(nèi)容變得更加豐富?？捎盟夭脑~匯大搜羅

7、名詞：1. environment(495) 2. health(700) 3. knowledge(836) 4. life(868)5. part(1087) 6. playground(1140) 7. rubbish(1295) 8. school(1318)9. student(1464) 10. teacher(1506)11. thing(1513) 12. time(1546)13. year(1713)動詞：1. believe(146) 2. can(224) 3. feel(555) 4. have(659)5.grow(673) 6. help(709) 7. love

8、(896) 8. make(912) 9.pollute(1157) 10. protect)1202)11.say(1316)12.see(1334)13. spend(1430) 14. talk(1497) 15. teach(1505) 16. worry(1705)形容詞1. bad(113) 2. better(154) 3. clean(258) 4. great(667)5.important(763) 6. long(889)副詞1. everywhere(509) 2. much(980)3. seriously(1346) 4. usually(1616)連接詞及短語大搜

9、羅表時間when, while, as表轉(zhuǎn)折but, yet, however表因果so, therefore, as a result常見句型大搜羅1. When we, we, 當我們.，我們.2. We all believe that我們都相信3. In recent years,.在最近幾年里4. As we know, 眾所周知，.5. As students, 作為學生，.運用以上單詞、連接詞以及句式，就可以在已寫出的文章框架(開篇、中間結(jié)尾)的中心句的基礎上，添加必要的寫作素材，從而形成文章的初稿，如下：初稿：Changes in my schoolWhen we talk a

10、bout our school, we usually have a lot to say, including the teachers, the students and so on We all believe that the school is an important part in our life. It teaches us knowledge and helps us grow up. We love it so much. However, in recent years, the environment there has been seriously polluted

11、, and we feel worried. We could see the clean playground in the past, but now it becomes a “new” one with rubbish everywhere. As we know, the polluted environment is bad for our health. Therefore, we must do something before things get worse. As students,we spend longer time at school. So, love our

12、school and protect the environment to make it a better one.到此為止，評分標準中的第一個8分已收入囊中，但切勿忘記，考題除了對文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容有要求外，文采及語法也分別占有很大的分值比重。為了避免解決文采問題后再產(chǎn)生新的語法錯誤，故接下來先要進行文章的美化，即包裝句式，詳情如下：美( beautify)根據(jù)之前所講的寫作步驟：初稿一包裝句子Step 2包裝句子初稿在進行此步驟前，需要仔細閱讀初稿中的每句句子，按照開篇中所講美化文章的要點，則可發(fā)現(xiàn)，文章在句式方面出現(xiàn)了如下問題：初稿：Changes in my school1.When

13、we talk about our school, we usually have a lot to say, including the teachers, the students and so on. 2. We all believe that the school is an important part in our life. 3.It teaches us knowledge and helps us grow up. 4.We love it so much. However, in recent years, the environment there has been s

14、eriously polluted, 5.and we feel worried. 6.We could see the clean playground in the past, but now it becomes a “new” one with rubbish everywhere. As we know, the polluted environment 7.is bad for our health. Therefore,8. we must do something before things get worse. As students,9.we spend longer ti

15、me at school. So, love our school and protect the environment to make it a better one.1. 單純使用時間狀語從句。2. 單純使用賓語從句。3. 五大基本句型+并列句的使用。4. 五大基本句型x2。5. 五大基本句型3。6. 五大基本句型4。7. 短語使用過于簡單。8. 五大基本句型5+單純使用時間狀語從句。9. 五大基本句型6。根據(jù)以上問題，可將初稿修改成如下版本：準終稿：Changes in my school When talking about our school, we usually have a

16、 lot to say, including the teachers, the students and so on. There is no denying that it plays an important role in our life We must admit it is school that makes us knowledgeable and helps us grow up. We love it more than anything else. However, in recent years, the environment there has been serio

17、usly polluted, which makes us worried. The clean playground that we could see in the past has become a “new” one with rubbish everywhere. As we know, the environment has a great influence on our health. Therefore, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. As students, the time we spe

18、nd in school is much longer than that at home. So, love our school and protect the environment to make it a better one.以上修改過程，主要用到了如下單詞及句型超綱詞匯大搜羅1. role rl n.作用；角色2. admit dmit v.承認；允許3. knowledgeable nlidpbl adj.博學的；有學問的4. influenceinflns n.影響5. effective ifektiv adj.有效的；起作用的6. measureme(r) n.措施高分句

19、式大搜羅固定句式：When+ doing, sb.譯為：“當時，某人”l 考點鏈接：原句：What do you want to be when you grow up.（新世紀教材七年級第二學期Unit3 Lesson1）替換為： What do you want to be when growing up.固定句式：There is no denying that.譯為：“不可否認”l 考點鏈接：原句：I think the most important thing in a friendship is to respect each other.(牛津教材九年級第一學期Unit6)替換為

20、： There is no denying that the most important thing in a friendship is to respect each other.強調(diào)句：It is/was+被強調(diào)部分+who/that+其他譯為：“是”l 考點鏈接：原句：The Beatles have remained the biggest selling group in the world with one billion CDs, tapes and records sold.(新世紀教材八年級第二學期Unt3 Lesson3)替換為： It is the beatles t

21、hat have remained the biggest selling group in the world with one billion CDs, tapes and records sold.比較級表最高形式：We love it more than anything else.譯為：“我們最愛它”l 考點鏈接：原句： But I think shopping is the most important.(新世紀教材七年級第一學期Unit1 Lesson1)替換為： But I think shopping is more important than anything else.

22、非限制性定語從句：句子，+ which.譯為：“的”l 考點鏈接：原句： Dongfang International School was set up in 1954. As it is one of the best schools in the city, it attracts excellent students from both home and abroad.(新世紀教材八年級第二學期Unit2Leon3)替換為： Donfang International School, which is one of the best schools in the city, was s

23、et up in 1954, and it attracts excellent students from both home and abroad.固定短語：have an influence on.譯為：“對有影響”固定句型：. effective measures must be taken before things get worse.譯為：“在情況變得更糟糕前，必須采取有效措施?！钡酱藶橹?，評分標準中文采的4分也已得到，接下來，按照正常的書寫步驟則要進行錯誤篩查來避兔語法失分，即：查( check)根據(jù)之前所講寫作步驟：包裝句子一檢查語法一成文，改正語法錯誤。Step 3成文包裝

24、句子檢查語法由于在以上的書寫過程中已將所有語法錯誤避開，所以本環(huán)節(jié)可省略。章節(jié)中省略原因雷同。但仍要提醒各位學生，自己進行文章書寫時，此步驟十分必要，大家可以參考以下常見語法錯誤來進行檢查：1.單詞拼寫有誤2.名詞單復數(shù)不分。3.動詞不用三單(主謂不一致)。4.形容詞級別混淆。5.介詞使用錯誤。6連詞使用不當。7.時態(tài)分不清楚。8.前后主語不一致。以上所有步完成后，即可形成文字終稿，如下：終稿：Changes in my schoolWhen talking about our school, we usually have a lot to say, including the teache

25、rs, the students and so on. There is no denying that it plays an important role in our life We must admit it is school that makes us knowledgeable and helps us grow up. We love it more than anything else. However, in recent years, the environment there has been seriously polluted, which makes us wor

26、ried. The clean playground that we could see in the past has become a “new” one with rubbish everywhere. As we know, the environment has a great influence on our health. Therefore, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. As students, the time we spend in school is much longer than

27、that at home. So, love our school and protect the environment to make it a better one.（總結(jié)檢測）【Section One： 詞】A. 根據(jù)音標寫出單詞、詞性及詞義音標單詞詞性詞義 rl dmit nlidblinflnsifektiv me(r) 【Section Two： 句】A.句型替換訓練1. 原句： I want to start my own business after I graduate from university.替換為： I want to start my . .2. 原句：We

28、cant deny that water is important in our life.替換為： that water plays an important role in our life.B.句子翻譯訓練1.是母親給了我生命。(it) 2.我們和伙伴們玩要，這使得童年更加五彩繽紛。(which) C.語法改錯訓練 1. It took Jack two hours climb the mountain. 2. The tomatoes I picked are much more redder than yours. 3. They have never had the chance

29、to be there ago. 老師帶著學生回顧本節(jié)課內(nèi)容，建議10min(實戰(zhàn)演練）請運用前文所述寫作方法，根據(jù)以下標題及要求，寫一篇不少于60個詞的文章。Write at least 60 words about the topic “This time next year”.（以明年此時為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的作文，標點符號不占格。）你是否想象過，明年此時，你的生活會發(fā)生怎樣的變化？你對自己或他人有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）The following sentence patterns are for the

30、reference only.（以下句型僅供參考）l I hope to/I hope that.l Perhaps I will.It l It will be exciting/necessary /terrible to.(2014中考真題)Step 11. What will be the changes in your life?2. Whats your hope of yourself or others? What can you do for it?3. Conclusion.開篇: 中間: 結(jié)尾: 可選詞匯小貼士：名詞：1. activity(13) 2. amusemen

31、t(59) 3. art(84) 4. artist(86) 6. attention(94) 6. attitude(95) 7.bag(114) 8. basketball(125) 10. bell(147) 10. bicycle(156) 11. blackboard(165) 12. book(176) 13. boy(186) 14. breakfast(191) 15. broadcast(199) 16. brother(200) 17. building(204) 18. camp(223) 19. chair(250) 20. chance(251) 21. chemis

32、try(264) 22.childhood(269) 23. choice(274) 24. cinema(278) 25. class(282) 26. classmate(283) 27. classroom(284) 28. college(304) 29. competition(313) 30. concert(318) 31. contest(329) 32. course(346) 33. desk(396) 34. dictionary(405) 35. diet(406) 36. dream(440) 37. education(463) 38. effort(466) 39

33、. exam(511) 40. experiment(526) 41. foreigner(601) 42. friend(620) 43. friendship(622) 44. fun(632) 45. game(637) 46. girl(652) 47. goal(657) 48. grade(662) 49. habit(678) 50. happiness(679) 51. headmaster(699) 52. holiday(724) 53. homework(728) 54. interest(780) 55. invention(790) 56. joy(810)57. l

34、anguage(842) 58. lesson(861) 59. library(866) 60. match(924) 61. moment(961) 62. network(1005) 63. opinion(1056) 64. paper(1083) 65. pen(1101) 66. pencil(1102) 67. physics(1115) 68. picnic(1118)69. playground(1140) 70. pollution(1156) 71. postcard(1166) 72. programme(1196) 73. research(1260) 74. say

35、ing(1317) 75. school(1318) 76. song(1417)77. Student(1464) 78. suggestion(1476) 79. surprise(1687) 80. teacher(1506) 81. tennis(1516) 82. tradition(1569) 83. tree(1576) 84. uniform(1602) 85. university(1605) 86. violin(1625) 87. volleyball(1629)動詞：1. agree(34) 2. allow(43) 3. become(136) 4. believe(

36、146) 5. change(252) 6. choose(257) 7. communicate(309) 8. consider(326)7. create(351) 10. dance(366) 11. decide(381) 12. desire(395)13. develop(400) 14. enable(479) 15. encourage(480) 16. enrich(491)15. exercise(520) 18. expect(523) 19. find(569) 20. forget(604)21. gain(636) 22. give(653) 23. have(659) 24. help(709)25. imagine(760) 260. improve(766) 27. invite(793) 28. join(806) 27. know(835) 30. learn(854) 31. let(962) 32. make(912) 31. may(928) 34. meet(937) 35. miss(954) 36. need(999) 35. offer(1039) 38. plan(1131) 39. play(1138) 40. pollute(1157) 41. practice(1173) 42. prove(1204) 43