歷年高考英語(yǔ)作文樣本

1、 歷年高考學(xué)生作文樣本2007 假設(shè)你就是信中的ari，父親在你出生的時(shí)候?qū)懥诉@封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你準(zhǔn)備以寫(xiě)信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內(nèi)容(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好)：1以約30個(gè)詞概括父親在他信中對(duì)你的期望；2以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感恩，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：(1)讀信后的感受；(2)以你自己成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷說(shuō)明你的感受；(3)表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感激和祝福。2008學(xué)校最近組織了一次中美學(xué)生交流活動(dòng)，你參加其中的“大學(xué)校園生活”討論。聽(tīng)完mike的發(fā)言之后，你準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“preparing myself for college life”，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1. 以約30

2、個(gè)詞概括mike的發(fā)言要點(diǎn)；2. 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括： (1) 對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受； (2) 理想的大學(xué)生活； (3) 中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。20091以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；2然后以約120個(gè)詞就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括： (1)人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照； (2)假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)； (3)你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。1.5+2020101.以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.以約120詞對(duì)用金錢(qián)鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你對(duì)用金錢(qián)鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法：(

3、2)你的父母（或其他親人）是如何鼓勵(lì)你學(xué)習(xí)的；(3)你認(rèn)為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)_w w.k*s*5 u.co m考試院公布答案：概要應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：1）ethan used money to encourage her son but fail 2) kids are happy3) teachers and psychologists are upset. ethan, a boy addicted to tv, quit watching tv and got paid from his mother , with which he purchased a tv. recently

4、many schools pay the kids for good performances . school kids are satisfied with it while some other adults worry about its bad effects. the authors classmate who was addicted to tv used the mother his mother rewarded him to buy a new tv. there is a debate about rewarding kids with cash. teachers an

5、d kids admire it while adults and psychologists show their concern. 專家們的點(diǎn)評(píng)2010版高考作文如何抓住評(píng)卷老師的心1以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；2然后以約120個(gè)詞就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括： (1)人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照； (2)假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)； (3)你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。15分“should ban the tourists take photos with the animals”?the passage tells us that a

6、ll the koalas are easily unhappy and complaining with the reason is that many tourists are hugged and photographed them, which lead to they cant sleep.different people will offer quite different ideas. some people think that they should take photos with the animals when they go to visit them, so, we

7、 shouldnt ban it. however, others believe that we can not affect the animals sleep and they also have the freedom of sleep, so, they think should ban it.some may proclaim that it is a pleasure to take photos with the animals and it is also a nice memory thing. in the contrary, the objectors think th

8、at we should respect the animals idea and do well with them.in my opinion, i think we should ban the tourists take photos with the animals. if i were animal, i must hate others affect my sleep.no matter what we do, we should always get along well with all animals. animals is our friends. （1+14）點(diǎn)評(píng)：得分

9、點(diǎn)： 基本能表達(dá)出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)（雖然語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出錯(cuò)）：i think we should ban the tourists take photos with the animals； 大致都涉及到題目要求的三方面的內(nèi)容； 嘗試運(yùn)用高級(jí)的詞匯，如proclaim，和多樣的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，如it is a pleasure to take photos.; no matter what we do等。失分點(diǎn)：1概括部分：過(guò)分概括，把澳大利亞某些動(dòng)物園里考拉的情況說(shuō)成是所有考拉的情況：all the koalas are easily unhappy；只有一句話的概括，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)漏百出：with the rea

10、son is that.這是run-on sentence，要拆開(kāi)兩句話來(lái)寫(xiě)；many tourists are hugged and photographed them這一句主動(dòng)、被動(dòng)不分；which lead to they cant sleep這里lead要用單數(shù)形式leads；介詞to后不能直接加句子；此外，概括也不夠全面，沒(méi)有提及政府部門(mén)的態(tài)度，因此，概括部分1分。2寫(xiě)作部分：（1）標(biāo)題不規(guī)范，為什么要用引號(hào)？問(wèn)號(hào)也不應(yīng)該寫(xiě)在引號(hào)之外；標(biāo)題的句子表達(dá)不正確，沒(méi)有主語(yǔ)，也不能說(shuō)ban sb. do sth.；（2）語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出錯(cuò)較多，除了在概括部分提到的之外，第二段so的使用，不能前后逗

11、號(hào)；they think should ban it 從句沒(méi)有主語(yǔ)，多個(gè)謂語(yǔ)堆在一起，根本沒(méi)有英語(yǔ)句子的概念；第三段in the contrary應(yīng)改為：on the contrary。第四段都是“run-on sentence”（句子堆在一起表達(dá)）：we should ban the tourists take photos., i must hate others affect my sleep. 另外，in my opinion和i think是意義上的重復(fù)，只用其一即可；（3）不注意使用冠詞、名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)等，并且，隨心所欲地堆砌詞語(yǔ)表達(dá)，讀起來(lái)沒(méi)有英語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)感，感覺(jué)是生硬的中文式英語(yǔ)，例

12、如第三段a nice memory thing，if i were animal, animals is our friends.（4）照套固有的模板（different people have different ideas. some think.others think.i think.），沒(méi)有按題目要求的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，而是寫(xiě)了些無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容。第二段開(kāi)始different people will offer quite different ideas. 令讀者不明白，因?yàn)樯衔牟](méi)有提到任何話題，不同的人到底對(duì)什么提出不同的觀點(diǎn)呢？接下來(lái)寫(xiě)一些人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該拍照，一些人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該拍照，這都沒(méi)

13、有根據(jù)題目的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)去寫(xiě)；接下來(lái)第三段其實(shí)是第二段的重復(fù)：一些人認(rèn)為拍照好，反對(duì)者認(rèn)為要尊重動(dòng)物?？忌皇窃诘谒亩尾盘岢鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn)，但沒(méi)有展開(kāi)應(yīng)有的討論。啟示與提升：（1）題目沒(méi)有要求，不必自擬標(biāo)題；（2）多朗讀英語(yǔ)文章，培養(yǎng)語(yǔ)感，尤其要留意冠詞、名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、動(dòng)詞的正確形式等。英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)不是簡(jiǎn)單的單詞堆砌；（3）切不可不顧實(shí)際而生硬套用事先背好的寫(xiě)作模板，尤其是那些三段論，平常的訓(xùn)練不要只是用一種模式，要切合題目實(shí)際，靈活運(yùn)用各種寫(xiě)作的方式。2011年廣州“一模”第六號(hào)文章2011年廣州“一?！被A(chǔ)寫(xiě)作： p62“ on one hand, some students suggested t

14、hat we should drive private cars less by sharing a car with others more often . on the other hand.these solutions are beneficial as they are money-saving , time saving as well as envrionmentally friendly.審題： 假設(shè)你是英語(yǔ)周報(bào)的編輯big paul, 你準(zhǔn)備給劉軍回信，以下是信的內(nèi)容（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好）：1 以約30詞概括上文小華面臨的困難。2 以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)所概括的困難提

15、出自己的看法， 并包括如下要點(diǎn)：（1） 你讀完這封信后的感受；（2） 你對(duì)小華面臨這些困難的建議或看法；（3） 表達(dá)你對(duì)小華的評(píng)價(jià)和祝福。dear liu jun i am glad to receive your letter._學(xué)生樣本：“ according to the passage, lixua had trouble with others. ”“after reading your letter, i feel sympathy for you. you are so kind-hearted and broad minded but you are often laughed

16、 by others. ”09佛山二模閱讀下而的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。 if you got 100,000 dollars by chance，how would you spend it? here are some answers of our readers：elizabeth stahl：i would donate it to an arts program for young boys and girlsthe decrease in the creative arts programs such as music，art and drama in th

17、e schools have left many young artists out in the cold in academicsmuch like sports，art in any form，can and does make a difference in young peoples lives marjorie c：although i agree with elizabeth stahl 100，id give my money to each of my children to ensure the very best of educations for my two gran

18、ddaughters. clark：with one hundred thousand dollars1 would distribute it among those whom i know that are in need and ask that they inturn then share half of what theyve received with others that they personally know are in needcarol wilson：first, i would take care of all my debts and gain good cred

19、it again，and then i would spend the rest on a new carafter all said and done，take a nice long vacation寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 美國(guó)某網(wǎng)站的論壇就 “how would you spend 100,000 dollars?” 為主題進(jìn)行調(diào)查。上文是一些網(wǎng)友的回復(fù)，你閱讀了上文后，準(zhǔn)備就該主題發(fā)表白己的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括： 1以約30個(gè)詞概括上述網(wǎng)友的觀點(diǎn)； 2然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，并包括以下要點(diǎn)： (a) 你想用這筆錢(qián)做的一件或幾件事情； (b) 說(shuō)明你這樣做的原因。summary : _?參考答案

20、：people would spend 100,000 dollars in different ways if they got it by chancesome would donate it to charity for various purposes while some others would take care of their own business with the moneyi decided to divide the money into 3 parts. first of all, i will deposit half of it to pay for my t

21、uition. secondly i will give some to my parents .last but not least , i will donate the rest to the affected area, helping the children in wen chuan.the reason why i donated it is that most of children are suffering from the hardship. 2009屆六校聯(lián)考：就“態(tài)度決定一切”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包含以下的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，該部分的字?jǐn)?shù)大約120詞左右。1 你從三兄弟的

22、故事中得到什么啟示？2 你對(duì)“態(tài)度決定一切”如何理解？3 舉一對(duì)比事例說(shuō)明不同的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度產(chǎn)生不同的結(jié)果。 in our daily life, we should take positive attitude towards the trouble we meet. only with active attitude can we beat the difficulties. for example, i found it hard to improve my english at the beginning of senior 3. i didnt lose heart but worked

23、 harder than before. with my great effort, i got no.1 in the final exam.英語(yǔ)周報(bào)35期：if you put a buzzard in a pen six feet square and open at the top, the bird (in spite of his ability to fly) will be an absolute prisoner. when a buzzard begins a flight from the ground, he always starts with a run of te

24、n or twelve feet. without space to run, he will not even attempt to fly, but will remain a prisoner for life in a small cage with no top. the ordinary bat cannot take off from a level place. if a bat is placed on the floor or flat ground, all it knows to do is shuffle about helplessly until it reach

25、es some slight elevation from which it can throw itself into the air. then, at once, it takes off like a flash. a bumblebee, if dropped into an empty drinking glass, will be there until it dies unless it is taken out. it never sees the means of escape at the top, but persists in trying to find some

26、way out through the sides near the bottom. it will seek a way where none exists, until it is completely exhausted and dies. in many ways, there are a number of people that feel like the buzzard, the bat, the bee and the flea. they are struggling about through life, feeling trapped with all their pro

27、blems and frustrations, not realizing that the answer is right there “above” them.（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）1 以大約30個(gè)詞概括以上文中第三段的內(nèi)容；2 以執(zhí)信中學(xué)2010屆高三第一學(xué)期期中考試閱讀下列短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。 dear patti, im writing to you for some advice on my studies. as you know, football is a very popular sport in the world and i am attracted

28、to it and i have fallen in deep love with it, which makes me feel so crazy. i have been spending lots of time doing many things related to it, like watching football matches, reading newspapers and magazines, and searching the web for more information about football. as a result, it has certainly di

29、sturbed my normal study. though i know to be a football fan is my hobby and my major objective is to learn more knowledge in school, i cant concentrate on my lessons and gradually i am tired of them. i am still a senior two middle school students, and ill have my own business even when i grow up, so

30、 i am not likely to do a job in the field of football. but now i cant stop myself from getting involved further with football. so i feel very depressed and want to know how to deal with the contradiction (矛盾) between my studies and hobbies. sincerely yours, li ming寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 假如你是李明的筆友patti,請(qǐng)根據(jù)他信中所訴說(shuō)的苦惱回封信

31、。以下是回信的內(nèi)容（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好）：以約30個(gè)詞概括李明的苦惱；以約120個(gè)詞發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：你認(rèn)為李明應(yīng)該如何處理好他的學(xué)習(xí)和業(yè)余愛(ài)好的關(guān)系；以自己的事例說(shuō)明你的理由；表達(dá)你對(duì)他的希望。【寫(xiě)作要求】可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的觀點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；1. 信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)習(xí)名稱。dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. sincerely yours, pa

32、tti參考答案也跑題了？why?dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. you are very depressed because of the contradiction that you cant tear yourself away from football, which has been disturbing you so much that you cant concentrate on you lessons. hob

33、bies are very important to a person, without which life wont be as colorful as it should be. they can cheer you up and improve your comprehensive abilities, but they also require time and devotion. you are still a student, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, so you must know which is more i

34、mportant thing to do in different life periods. otherwise, you would regret having been too much addicted to that in the future. a hobby is like gold under the ground, and it will not come to you unless you dig it out yourself. if you can treat study as one of your hobbies, it will be more enjoyable

35、. i hope you can find yourself in the right place and have fun from your study. sincerely yours, patti基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作目的：考察學(xué)生整理信息、并用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、句型和語(yǔ)言手段產(chǎn)出的篇章能力。要求：只能用5句話表達(dá)全部信息。常規(guī)題型：信息整理+信息呈現(xiàn)（08-2010年）；信息聽(tīng)取+信息呈現(xiàn)（07年）預(yù)期的語(yǔ)言手段：同位語(yǔ)手段、關(guān)于主題的呈現(xiàn)手段、呈現(xiàn)某人觀點(diǎn)、比例的表達(dá)、排位的表達(dá)、建議的表達(dá)、 提示的表達(dá)（很多學(xué)生只是翻譯，但信息不一定是字對(duì)字的，決定因素是所掌握的語(yǔ)言手段。）反思：基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作的技巧？

36、上周，我們以“誰(shuí)是你的偶像”為題，在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：.寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫(xiě)一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容： 1調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問(wèn)題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象； 2男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異； 3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差異； 4男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同； 5你的偶像及理由。last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students on the “ who is your idol “ the survey shows that half of the girls choose film and tv stars

37、 as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . as the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but the for the boys. however , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. as for myself, thomas edison is my idol because his inventions h

38、ave greatly changed our life.你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的一名志愿者，負(fù)責(zé)編寫(xiě)奧運(yùn)比賽項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提綱，編寫(xiě)射擊項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹：背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。1896：第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目1904：中斷1928：中斷1932：重回奧運(yùn)會(huì)1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運(yùn)會(huì)只有三項(xiàng)射擊項(xiàng)目，現(xiàn)今有17項(xiàng)。寫(xiě)作要求只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport

39、only in the late 19th century. the sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games. the sport returned to the olympics in 1932. women were first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting in 1968. the sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 olympics, and now there are seventeen vents in all.2009你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況： 時(shí)間：上周末 對(duì)象：眼科醫(yī)生(eye-doctor)王教授 主題：我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視(short-sightedness)問(wèn)題 基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50 (2)人數(shù)：世界第一 專家解讀：(1)原因：很復(fù)雜 (2)治療：沒(méi)有哪一種藥物能治愈近視 (3)建議：不要過(guò)度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng) (4)特別提示：如何握