池國祥-英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題

1、英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題university of reginaimportance of publication- scientific records- communication with international community- contribution to scientific advancement- social-economic impacts- career development-寫作過程也是科研的一部分：激發(fā)思維，推敲研究結(jié)果的意義寫作過程也是科研的一部分：激發(fā)思維，推敲研究結(jié)果的意義。-審稿和修改過程對(duì)科研有促進(jìn)作用。審稿和修改

2、過程對(duì)科研有促進(jìn)作用。英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題語法和用詞問題其它問題其它問題投稿注意問題投稿注意問題科技論文寫作的主要問題是論文結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題，而不是英文問題。科技論文寫作的主要問題是論文結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題，而不是英文問題。結(jié)構(gòu)好而英文不好的論文很容易修改，而結(jié)構(gòu)不好的論文則很難改。結(jié)構(gòu)好而英文不好的論文很容易修改，而結(jié)構(gòu)不好的論文則很難改。highlight 只說做了什么，沒說發(fā)現(xiàn)什么只說做了什么，沒說發(fā)現(xiàn)什么-detailed petrographic work carried out-important constrain

3、t on u mineralization recognized-xenotime coeval with uraninite in athabasca basin-onset of u mineralization related to volcanism and brine formation引言的核心是引言的核心是 what why how不要把研究結(jié)果在前言里講出來沒有分清目的沒有分清目的 (purposes) 和目標(biāo)和目標(biāo) (objectives)this paper aims to carry out detailed field, petrographic, stable iso

4、tope and fluid inclusion studies of the poplar mountain gold deposit.this paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the poplar mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies.空洞的文獻(xiàn)總結(jié)空洞的文獻(xiàn)總結(jié)empty review: the sedimen

5、tary and stratigraphy of the viking formation have been studied by smith (1978) and walker et al. (1990). little work has been done on diagenesis, except a stable isotope study by lee (1998). the petroleum system has been evaluated by cook (1989), .informative review: the viking formation has been i

6、nterpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones (smith, 1978; walker et al., 1990). a diagenetic study of calcite cements by lee (1998) yielded d18o of -18 to -15%o (pdb), which were interpreted to indicate參考文獻(xiàn)的引用不恰當(dāng)參考文獻(xiàn)的引用不恰當(dāng)有些地區(qū)前人已做了大量工作。但這不意味這你要引用所有工作。引用有些地區(qū)前人已做了大量工

7、作。但這不意味這你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得當(dāng)。什么和不引用什么要得當(dāng)。引用要放在恰當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?。引用某文（或圖）等于告訴讀者引用要放在恰當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?。引用某文（或圖）等于告訴讀者“請看請看”。要把要把 credit 給該給的人。給該給的人。cite references in chronological orderthere are a number of previous studies in this field (smith, 1999; andes et al., 2001; sun et al., 1988).there are a number of previous st

8、udies in this field (andes et al., 2001; smith, 1999; sun et al., 1988).there are a number of previous studies in this field (sun et al., 1988; smith, 1999; andes et al., 2001).for first author of the the same name, the order of listing references is single-author first, two-author second, and multi

9、-author last (in chronological order)li, s., 2011, li, s., anderson, k. and wang, l., 2000, .li, s. and baker, a., 2003, .li, s., wang, n. and zhu, c., 1989, .li, s., 2011, li, s. and baker, a., 2003, .li, s., wang, n. and zhu, c., 1989, .li, s., anderson, k. and wang, l., 2000, .區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景沒有根據(jù)本文的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行取舍

10、區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景沒有根據(jù)本文的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行取舍區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景的介紹是很有講究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地質(zhì)背區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景的介紹是很有講究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地質(zhì)背景，要根據(jù)本文的重點(diǎn)有所側(cè)重。景，要根據(jù)本文的重點(diǎn)有所側(cè)重?，F(xiàn)象或數(shù)據(jù)的描述與解釋混雜在一起現(xiàn)象或數(shù)據(jù)的描述與解釋混雜在一起we have detected high concentrations of co2 in the fluid, which is most likely derived from the mantle. however, some crustal co2 has also been detected, as

11、reflected by its carbon isotope composition. the ores are characterized by laminated structures, which are likely of syngenetic origin the syngenetic structures are commonly found in all the deposits in the study area, suggesting that these deposits are probably of sedex type. 缺乏詳細(xì)的地質(zhì)描述缺乏詳細(xì)的地質(zhì)描述缺乏詳細(xì)

12、的巖相學(xué)描述缺乏詳細(xì)的巖相學(xué)描述marine calcitereplacement dolomitepore-filling dolomitestylolitesphaleritegalenacalcite (cl zoned)calcite (cl dull)authigenic quartzfluoritebaritepre-oresyn-orepost-oreca. 300 maca. 348 ma把前人或自己已發(fā)表的數(shù)據(jù)列在結(jié)果部分把前人或自己已發(fā)表的數(shù)據(jù)列在結(jié)果部分data sourcesliang et al. 2008liang et al. 2008zhu et al. 201

13、1this studythis studythis studythis study展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分5. discussion5.1. ages of mineralization5.2. sources of ore-forming components5.3. ore precipitation mechanisms5.4. ore genesis礦床類型不等于礦床成因礦床類型不等于礦床成因:ore genesis: based on the geological and geochemical

14、characteristics, this mineral deposit is considered to be a mvt deposit. 把礦床成因和礦床類型混肴把礦床成因和礦床類型混肴討論部分沒有與引言呼應(yīng)，沒有以事實(shí)為依據(jù)討論部分沒有與引言呼應(yīng)，沒有以事實(shí)為依據(jù)introduction: this paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the poplar mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic,

15、stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.discussion: in this section we will focus on the origins of gold deposits in southwestern new brunswick, especially on the role that crustal evolution may have played in mineralization.討論部分把在引言部分說過的話又說一遍討論部分把在引言部分說過的話又說一遍introduction: the origin of the pop

16、lar mountain gold deposit has not been well understood. some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .discussion: the origin of the poplar mountain gold deposit has not been well understood. some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others th

17、ought .討論部分與結(jié)果部分小標(biāo)題重復(fù)討論部分與結(jié)果部分小標(biāo)題重復(fù)2. results2.1 oxygen isotopes2.2 carbon isotopes2.3 fluid inclusions3. discussion3.1 oxygen isotopes3.2 carbon isotopes3.3 fluid inclusions3. discussion3.1 sources of mineralizing fluids3.2 ore precipitation mechanisms圖例說明沒有直接標(biāo)在圖例旁邊圖例說明沒有直接標(biāo)在圖例旁邊參考文獻(xiàn)格式?jīng)]按要求參考文獻(xiàn)格式?jīng)]按要

18、求-作者沒列全-錯(cuò)字太多-名字縮寫不統(tǒng)一-期刊名稱縮寫或不縮寫不統(tǒng)一-卷號(hào)及頁碼格式不統(tǒng)一-多余的空格英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題語法和用詞問題其它問題其它問題投稿注意問題投稿注意問題“the” 的用與不用的用與不用jinding deposit is a large zn-pb deposit. there are many sn deposits in the southern hunan. the jinding deposit is a large zn-pb deposit. there are many sn dep

19、osits in southern hunan. there are many sn deposits in the southern hunan area. “the”, “a” 及復(fù)數(shù)的使用及復(fù)數(shù)的使用-要根據(jù)上下文而定要根據(jù)上下文而定-“the” 含有含有“那個(gè)那個(gè)”或或“那些那些”的意思的意思沒有必要的副詞沒有必要的副詞verydefinitelyobviouslyextremely strongly放在句子前面，可有可無的的副詞放在句子前面，可有可無的的副詞basically, actually, if fact, 不客觀的肯定語氣不客觀的肯定語氣the deposit must h

20、ave been formed from fluid mixing. the deposit may have been formed from fluid mixing. the deposit was likely formed from fluid mixing. 不可數(shù)名詞不能用復(fù)數(shù)不可數(shù)名詞不能用復(fù)數(shù)this conclusion is supported by many evidences. this conclusion is supported by several lines of evidence. researches, equipments, zircon and zi

21、rconswater and waterswork and works有些詞可當(dāng)可數(shù)名詞或不可數(shù)名詞，但意思不同有些詞可當(dāng)可數(shù)名詞或不可數(shù)名詞，但意思不同“-” 與與“ ”的區(qū)別的區(qū)別-fault-controlled-cm-sized-regional-scale-ice-melting-1020 cm-quartzpyrite assemblage-nesw trending-figs. ac -the huanglong formation-the huanglong and qiziqiao formationsformation 還是 formation？-the huanglong

22、 formation-the huanglong and qiziqiao formations有些中文專業(yè)詞匯可譯為多個(gè)含義不同的英文詞匯有些中文專業(yè)詞匯可譯為多個(gè)含義不同的英文詞匯成礦：成礦：metallogeny; mineralization測試：測試：test; analysis指示：指示：indicate; suggest根據(jù)：根據(jù)：according to; based on包含：包含：contain; include勘探：勘探：prospecting; exploration區(qū)：區(qū)： district; area帶：帶： belt; zone礦體：礦體：ore body; or

23、ebody特征：特征：features; characteristics不要用不同的名詞描寫同一個(gè)東西或地方不要用不同的名詞描寫同一個(gè)東西或地方the shizishan orefield is located in the lower yangtze metallogenic belt. there are numerious mesozoic granitic intrusions in the shizishan district. different types of mineralization occur in the shizishan area . the shizishan

24、deposit is interpreted to have formed from . “between and ” 和和 “from to ” 的區(qū)別的區(qū)別25333644555677888990the th values are between 25o and 90oc.the th values range from 25o to 90oc.空間副詞和時(shí)間副詞空間副詞和時(shí)間副詞often, frequently, sometimes, occasionally 等表示時(shí)間概念的詞不能用來描述地質(zhì)現(xiàn)象出現(xiàn)的普遍性或偶然性。正確的用詞應(yīng)該是 commonly, generally, loc

25、ally, in places, 等等。gold often occurs in fractures in quartz, but sometimes it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.gold commonly occurs in fractures in quartz, but locally it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.避免過長或過短的句子避免過長或過短的句子-過長的句子容易造成誤解。-過短的句子給人感覺信息量太少，效率太低。-長句短句相結(jié)合讀起來比較舒服避免主動(dòng)句和被動(dòng)句反復(fù)交叉使用避免主動(dòng)句和被動(dòng)句反復(fù)交叉使用

26、a number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area. many researchers have studied the mineralogy and geochemistry of the deposits. however, the origin of the deposits has not been well understood.a number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area. many of them have

27、been studied for mineralogy and geochemistry. however, their origin has not been well understood.兩個(gè)句子之間不能用逗號(hào)分開兩個(gè)句子之間不能用逗號(hào)分開the red lake gold deposit is located in northwestern ontario, it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. the red lake gold deposit is located in northwestern ontario

28、; it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. the red lake gold deposit is located in northwestern ontario, and it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. 美式英語與英式英語不可混用美式英語與英式英語不可混用colour vs colormetre vs metercentre vs centervapour vs vapor英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題結(jié)構(gòu)及

29、格式問題語法和用詞問題語法和用詞問題其它問題其它問題投稿注意問題投稿注意問題不要用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字開始一個(gè)句子不要用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字開始一個(gè)句子145 fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.one hundred and forty-five (145) fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures, of which 9

30、8 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.數(shù)據(jù)的小數(shù)點(diǎn)用的不對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)的小數(shù)點(diǎn)用的不對(duì)the homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100.2o to 190.8oc, and the salinities range from 27.88 to 35.69 wt.% nacl equivalent.the homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100 to 191oc

31、, and the salinities range from 27.9 to 35.7 wt.% nacl equivalent.不要用不要用 1010-6-6 做單位做單位the concentrations of cu and zn in the porphyry are 33.8 10-6 and 45.6 10-6, respectively.the concentrations of cu and zn in the porphyry are 33.8 ppm and 45.6 ppm, respectively.英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題語法和用詞問題其它問題其它問題投稿注意問題投稿注意問題submission for publication- editor: why should i publish your paper?- always have the readers in mind.- do your