高三概要寫作課件

1、怎樣概括記敘文的要點怎樣概括記敘文的要點 How to write a summary 記敘文的概要記敘文的概要, 一般包括記敘文的六個要素一般包括記敘文的六個要素(who; when; where; what; how; why), 也就也就是考生應(yīng)先通讀閱讀短文，找出這六個要是考生應(yīng)先通讀閱讀短文，找出這六個要素素,然后用自己的話將這六個要素串成一兩然后用自己的話將這六個要素串成一兩句話即可。句話即可。 (有的文章不一定全包含有的文章不一定全包含6個要個要素）素）記敘文記敘文(narrative)的概要寫作方法的概要寫作方法 串串聯(lián)要素法聯(lián)要素法閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左

2、右的英語短文。 Once a young man was in love with a girl and folded 1,000 paper cranes for her. Although his future didnt seem bright, they were very happy together. But one day, his girlfriend told him she was going to Paris and would never come back. Heartbroken, the young man started working even harder,

3、 trying to make something out of himself. Finally he set up his own business.One rainy day, while the young man was driving, he saw his former girlfriends parents.Eager to show them his luxury car, he drove slowly beside them. To his amazement, the couple were walking towards a cemetery(墓地). He got

4、out and followed them. There he saw his former girlfriend-a photograph of her smiling at him from her tombstone, and those precious paper cranes in a glass bottle! He walk over and asked the couple what had happened.They explained that she didnt actually leave but she had contracted cancer. She had

5、believed that he would succeed someday, but didnt want her illness to be his barrier. She asked her parents to put his paper crane beside her, because, if the day came when fate brought him to her again, he could take them back with him. The young man wept regretfully.1.以約30個詞概括這個故事主要內(nèi)容：2.以約120個詞就“一

6、個感人的故事”為題進(jìn)行寫作，包括以下內(nèi)容：（1）你讀完上述故事的感受；（2）你曾讀過的另一個感人的故事；（3）你從該故事中悟出的道理。解題過程解題過程第一步第一步, 根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容2, 快速獲取大意。快速獲取大意。解題前解題前, 可以通過寫作內(nèi)容可以通過寫作內(nèi)容2和材料文體和材料文體,快速準(zhǔn)確地把握閱讀材料的主要內(nèi)容并形成快速準(zhǔn)確地把握閱讀材料的主要內(nèi)容并形成概要的基本框架。如本題閱讀寫作內(nèi)容概要的基本框架。如本題閱讀寫作內(nèi)容2,并掃視材料可知是記敘文并掃視材料可知是記敘文, 于是可推知于是可推知,本文的概要框架應(yīng)是：女孩發(fā)生了什么事、本文的概要框架應(yīng)是：女孩發(fā)生了什么事、地點、原因

7、、影響和結(jié)果。地點、原因、影響和結(jié)果。第二步：閱讀材料，找出以下這幾個第二步：閱讀材料，找出以下這幾個W questions”。who what why 等等Who:A girl, her boyfriendwhat:Left her boyfriend and faced the cancer aloneWhy:Because she didnt want to affectHer boyfriend futureWhat is the result:Her boyfriend learnt the truth and felt broken-hearted第三步：用自己的話將其串聯(lián)起來。第

8、三步：用自己的話將其串聯(lián)起來。Summary： The story is about a girl, who chose to leave her boyfriend and faced cancer alone, in order not to affect her boyfriends future. When the successful young man learned the truth, he was broken-hearted.若是夾敘夾議的文章若是夾敘夾議的文章, 還要加上作者的看法、還要加上作者的看法、觀點、感悟。其中觀點、感悟。其中, 最重要的要點是某最重要的要點是某(

9、who)做了某事做了某事(what)。因此。因此, 概要中一般應(yīng)包括：概要中一般應(yīng)包括：誰做了什么？誰做了什么？(who did what)結(jié)果怎么樣？結(jié)果怎么樣？(what was the result)文章揭示了什么？文章揭示了什么？(包括作者的看法、觀包括作者的看法、觀點、感悟，或?qū)懽髂康?。假如原文沒有提點、感悟，或?qū)懽髂康?。假如原文沒有提及及, 概括時可以不寫概括時可以不寫)（例2）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. This is Li Hua from Senior Three. Im h

10、ere today to share with you a good lesson from an overseas Chinese student living in Germany. It is a true story.After years of hard work, this Chinese student graduated with amazing academic achievements. Everyone thought he was going to get a good job easily and have a bright future. But to his di

11、sappointment, he was not even allowed the chance for an interview! The third time he was turned down, he couldnt help telephoning the company to ask why they didnt want him. The answer was simple. “We dont hire dishonest people in Germany.” What was wrong you might wonder? The truth is, shortly afte

12、r he arrived in Germany, this clever student found that it was easy to skip buying subway tickets. So, to save money, he often went without a ticket. As a result, he had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times.From this story, we learn that we may get short-term benefits by dishonest

13、means, but the truth will come out sooner or later and the cost is high. So remember: honesty is the best policy.Thats all for my speech. Thank you!【寫作內(nèi)容】1.以約30個詞概括這篇演講稿的主要內(nèi)容；2.然后以約120個詞寫一篇讀后感，說明“誠信的重要性”，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你讀后的感受；（2）以你或他人的經(jīng)歷說明；（3）談?wù)勀銖闹形虺龅牡览怼?(who did what?) an excellent Chinese student stole r

14、ides at the subway( what was the result?)couldnt find a job in Germany shows:honesty is the best policy主題：誠實才是上策主題：誠實才是上策1.The author tells a story about (某人某人) a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement who (做某事做某事) couldnt find a job in Germany (原因原因)because of his stealing rides at

15、the subway, (啟示啟示)which shows honesty is the best policy. (廣州一模廣州一模)超級仿寫超級仿寫 第二節(jié)第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)讀寫任務(wù)（共（共1小題；滿分小題；滿分25分）分）閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左詞左右的英語短文。右的英語短文。 My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because

16、she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically

17、showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at V

18、alley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!” What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容1.以約以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.以約以約120個詞就老師影響學(xué)生的話題談?wù)剛€詞就老師影響學(xué)生的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕愕南敕? 內(nèi)容包括：內(nèi)容包括：（1）上文使你想起哪位對你幫助最大的老）上文使你想起哪位對你幫助最大的老師；師；（2）舉例說明該老師對你學(xué)習(xí)或成長的影）舉例說明該老師對你學(xué)習(xí)或成長的影響；響；（3）你怎樣看待老師對學(xué)生的影響。）你怎樣看待老師對學(xué)生的影響。Summary_評分時，應(yīng)注意以下幾點：