高一英語必修一Unit1Writing

1、人教課標(biāo)人教課標(biāo)高一高一 必修必修 1Unit 1Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.Dear Miss Wang,Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem, Im not very good at communicating with people.Although I tr

2、y to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.Before writing the letter , youd better find out what is the problem with X

3、iao Dong.He is not good at communicating with people and find it hard to make friends with them.開門見山，表明寫作意圖。開門見山，表明寫作意圖。在本段中，寫信人應(yīng)該先簡(jiǎn)在本段中，寫信人應(yīng)該先簡(jiǎn)單介紹對(duì)方的問題。并表示單介紹對(duì)方的問題。并表示給出建議。給出建議。Dear Xiao Dong ,Im sorry you are_ However this situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some _ to help y

4、ou.having trouble makingfriendstips委婉地提出建議及改進(jìn)措施，或委婉地提出建議及改進(jìn)措施，或提出忠告，并給出理由。提出忠告，并給出理由。Find out the ways to change the situation. Make a list of your ideas and give your reasons.Ideas(Suggestion)to ask people their likes and dislikes.To join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas.If y

5、ou have different opinions , you can discuss with them rather than quarrel with them.Why(Reasons)(補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)）補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)）To find classmates with the same interestsTo get to know different people and let them see you are friendly.To respect others and make them find it easyto get along with you.用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和句型，把它們連成段落。

6、用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和句型，把它們連成段落。表示提建議的句型表示提建議的句型Why not/ You should (can)/Youd better/ It would be a good idea if適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞First/secondly/ ThirdlyFirst of all / besides / in addition / whats more / last but not leastand/ then.表達(dá)原因的句式（拓展部分）表達(dá)原因的句式（拓展部分）If you do this/ That way,/ By doing this,Only in this way can

7、youBecause/ since./asFirst,Why not ask people their likes and dislikes. If you do this, youll find classmates with the same interests.( By doing this, youll make friends with classmates who has the same interests) Secondly, youd better join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas. Th

8、en, youll get to know different people and let them see you are friendly. Thirdly, If you have different opinions , you can discuss with them rather than quarrel with them. By doing thisYou can show respect to others and make them find it easy to get along with you.禮貌地總結(jié)。禮貌地總結(jié)。 I hope youll find the

9、se ideas/suggestions/tips/proposals useful. 英文建議信屬于應(yīng)用文寫作范疇，英文建議信屬于應(yīng)用文寫作范疇，是向征詢建議者就某事提出寫信人是向征詢建議者就某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。的建議和忠告。高考中此類信件多屬于半開放性作文，高考中此類信件多屬于半開放性作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的材料要求考生根據(jù)所給的材料(多為征求建多為征求建議信議信)，提出合理化建議，或者給出有，提出合理化建議，或者給出有針對(duì)性的解決辦法。針對(duì)性的解決辦法。建議信除了遵循書信的格式之外，還建議信除了遵循書信的格式之外，還要求在信中針對(duì)別人的問題，給出你要求在信中針對(duì)別人的問題，給出你

10、的觀點(diǎn)及解決辦法，常用于建議的句的觀點(diǎn)及解決辦法，常用于建議的句式有：式有： 注意格式（書信格式）；注意格式（書信格式）；客觀地提出建議；客觀地提出建議；針對(duì)對(duì)方的問題，給出你的觀點(diǎn)；針對(duì)對(duì)方的問題，給出你的觀點(diǎn)；語言要委婉、精煉，同時(shí)要簡(jiǎn)潔，表達(dá)語言要委婉、精煉，同時(shí)要簡(jiǎn)潔，表達(dá)清楚。清楚。巧列提綱，詳略得當(dāng)巧列提綱，詳略得當(dāng):針對(duì)問題需要提出什么樣的建議，要針對(duì)問題需要提出什么樣的建議，要講哪些內(nèi)容，應(yīng)該先列出講哪些內(nèi)容，應(yīng)該先列出提綱提綱，并要，并要做到內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)突出、詳略得當(dāng)、井然做到內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)突出、詳略得當(dāng)、井然有序，達(dá)到提綱挈領(lǐng)的作用。有序，達(dá)到提綱挈領(lǐng)的作用。 翻譯要點(diǎn)，勾勒脈絡(luò)翻譯要點(diǎn)，勾勒脈絡(luò):列出提綱后，可以嘗試著將文章中涉及列出提綱后，可以嘗試著將文章中涉及到的建議要點(diǎn)或忠告翻譯成相應(yīng)的英語到的建議要點(diǎn)或忠告翻譯成相應(yīng)的英語句子，這樣全文的骨架就已經(jīng)形成了。句子，這樣全文的骨架就已經(jīng)形成了。在此基礎(chǔ)上，可增加合理的想象以及適在此基礎(chǔ)上，可增加合理的想象以及適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展。當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展。Li H