高考英語作文滿分技巧-看圖作文

1、第 1 頁 共 10 頁寫作指導(dǎo)(3)看圖作文看圖作文也叫做圖畫式作文， 是一種常見的高考題型。它是指根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息寫一篇短文，或敘述一件事， 或通過幾幅相關(guān)的圖畫說明某個(gè)問題或得出某個(gè)結(jié)論。 一般性圖畫式作文都包含六個(gè)要點(diǎn)： 時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、過程、結(jié)果。這些要點(diǎn)往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。一、看圖作文的考查特點(diǎn)1命制思路特點(diǎn)看圖作文的主要考查特點(diǎn)是生動(dòng)、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。它要求行文時(shí)做到：主題明確，即文章能概括圖畫所反映的中心思想；圖文一致，即文章能體現(xiàn)圖畫中所反映

2、的主要內(nèi)容。第 2 頁 共 10 頁2能力表現(xiàn)特點(diǎn)看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)倪壿嬎季S能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現(xiàn)出來的良好的書面表達(dá)能力。3語言表達(dá)特點(diǎn)表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確， 過渡自然。 看圖作文行文時(shí)要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇， 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。表達(dá)過程中要注意圖畫信息的連接方式，尤其要注意句與句，段與段之間的意思連貫。 為此，考生應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)靈活使用連接詞、 指示代詞等， 適當(dāng)?shù)馗鶕?jù)自己的需要和文章的進(jìn)展調(diào)整信息出現(xiàn)的順序。二、看圖作文的寫作步驟1仔細(xì)審題，確定要點(diǎn)2緊扣要點(diǎn)，組句成篇3表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然4規(guī)范書寫，檢查潤色美國中學(xué)生 jeff將要到你所在的紅星中學(xué)

3、學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給第 3 頁 共 10 頁jeff 寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。注意： 1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好；2詞數(shù)不少于 60。dear jeff，my name is li hua.im from beijing hongxing middle school.im very happy to learn that you re going to stay with my family while youre in beijing._第 4 頁 共 10 頁best wishes.yours，li hua案例分析1認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱和

4、時(shí)態(tài)通過閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說明文，須用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，同時(shí)，也可適當(dāng)使用一般將來時(shí)。2挖掘材料，列出要點(diǎn)和提綱要認(rèn)真觀察每幅圖片，同時(shí)還要注意參考詞匯、圖中所給的文字提示， 準(zhǔn)確而全面地理解圖片大意。通過觀察圖片， 我們可以知道這是一篇介紹“紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)生活以及jeff 寄宿房間的布局”的說明文。此題可以歸納出以下四個(gè)要點(diǎn)：(1)寄宿你家以及房間的布局； (2)從你家到紅星中學(xué)的距離以及上學(xué)的方式；(3)學(xué)生食堂； (4)課后娛樂活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，擬出以下提綱：provide you with a rooma room with a bed ， a desk ，

5、 a couple of chairs and a tv；have your own bathroomthe school is close to our home；go to school 第 5 頁 共 10 頁together by bikehave lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunchfinish classes at 4 in the afternoonjoin other students in playing ball games or swimming3選用句式，連詞成句巧成文根據(jù)文章體裁的不同

6、適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充時(shí)間、 地點(diǎn)、目的、方式、原因、結(jié)果等細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展句式；恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┚哂谐猩蠁⑾伦饔玫倪^渡性詞匯或過渡句；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子順序，使文章語言簡練、連貫、流暢。(1)we will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk ，a couple of chairs and a tv .(2)our school is quite close to our home.we could go to school together by bike.(3)we will have lunch at the school dining hal

7、l.(4)you will like the delicious chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)you can then join other students in playing ball 第 6 頁 共 10 頁games or swimming.(7)well try our best to make your stay here in beijing a pleasant ex

8、perience.4認(rèn)真核查，注意語言的連貫和得體要做到“四查”：(1)查句式?？淳渥映煞质欠裢暾?、 語序是否正確等。(2)查動(dòng)詞。看謂語動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確，主謂是否一致，非謂語動(dòng)詞形式是否正確等。(3)查習(xí)語、搭配。看是否符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(4)查拼寫、詞數(shù)?？雌磳懯欠裼姓`、 詞數(shù)是否合適。dear jeff，my name is li hua.im from beijing hongxing middle school.im very happy to learn that you re going to stay with my family while youre in beij

9、ing.while you are here， we ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk ，a couple of chairs 第 7 頁 共 10 頁and a tv set.you ll also have your own bathroom.our school is quite close to our home ，so we could go to school together by bike.at noon we ll have lunch at the school dining hall.i m

10、sure youll like the delicious chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.you can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.itll be a lot of fun.if you have any questions or requests ， please let me know.well try

11、our best to make your stay here in beijing a pleasant experience.best wishes.yours，li hua你們學(xué)校在征集改善道路交通狀況的文章，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)題目要求及下面圖畫的內(nèi)容提示，為學(xué)校的壁報(bào)寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勀銓?duì)交通狀況的思考。注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于 120；第 8 頁 共 10 頁2應(yīng)包括圖畫中的全部內(nèi)容：3標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好；4參考詞匯：行人pedestrian ；人行橫道zebra crossing；隔離護(hù)欄divider。whats wrong with them?take a look at the road

12、 conditions of today.something must be wrong with today s people._第 9 頁 共 10 頁【參考答案 】whats wrong with them?take a look at the road conditions of today.something must be wrong with today s people.quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.they cross roads any

13、where as they like ，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.many drivers act like f1 racers on thehighways.they drive at considerable speeds without care.they usually speed through zebr

14、a crossings ，even when pedestrians are there.when there is a red light at an intersection ，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.they all forget where they are.sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses ， or worse， drink and drive， which can make the road into a bloody battle field.why do such things happen? in my opinion ，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people 第 10 頁 共 10 頁ignore various traffic rules， road safety ， or even the lives of others.this leads to their bad and reckl