高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)寫作技巧

1、which composition feels more attractive, why?漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點(diǎn)影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面(neatness)影響給分的因素之二：文中所采用的語(yǔ)言材料 (words, phrases and sentence patterns)人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝a. 詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，b. 句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用靈活多變;writing a composition is just like making a hamburger.詞匯詞匯, 倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，主從倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，主從復(fù)合句，復(fù)合句，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，it做做形式主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ)形式主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ) 1

2、.覆蓋了所有的覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 4. 語(yǔ)言得體語(yǔ)言得體要要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)全全連接連接詞詞（遞進(jìn)，（遞進(jìn)，轉(zhuǎn)折，轉(zhuǎn)折，因果，因果，目的，目的，歸納）歸納）語(yǔ)言地道，語(yǔ)言地道，規(guī)范規(guī)范“my way to learn english” as we all know, english learning is more and more important. its a big problem to improve our english. i used

3、 to be poor at english. but after trying many useful ways, i make some progress. i was poor at reciting. to slove this problem, i write down the words list. i read it when i am waiting for the bus or waiting in line. after using this way and working hard, my english has improved a lot. what a useful

4、 way to learn english. 這篇文章中規(guī)中矩，思路較為清晰，語(yǔ)法也沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤。但在考場(chǎng)上也拿不了高分， 這篇文章要修改，主要可從以下幾個(gè)問(wèn)題上入手：1.語(yǔ)言平平無(wú)奇、繁瑣；2.句式單一；3.缺少?gòu)?fù)合句； 接下來(lái)我們一個(gè)點(diǎn)一個(gè)點(diǎn)地來(lái)修改。 as we all know, english learning is more and more important. its a big problem to improve our english. 潤(rùn)色語(yǔ)言（改換已經(jīng)用爛了的短語(yǔ)）；潤(rùn)色語(yǔ)言（改換已經(jīng)用爛了的短語(yǔ)）；as far as im concernedits a big prob

5、lem to improve english because english learning is more and more important.1.添加復(fù)合句（添加復(fù)合句（because ）2 i used to be poor at english. but after trying many useful ways, i make some progress. i was poor at reciting. 語(yǔ)言重復(fù)繁瑣且單調(diào)。 改：i used to be poor at reciting english words. but after 注：使用了方法并取得進(jìn)步可以放在后文進(jìn)行具

6、體的交代。3 to slove this problem, i write down the words list. i read it when i am waiting for the bus or waiting in line. to solve this problem, i try writing down the words list and carry it with me so as to memorize and go over them anytime.4 after using this way and working hard, my english has impr

7、oved a lot.改：with the help of this useful way and my hard work, i make big progress in my english learning. 注：看似句子變長(zhǎng)了，但是將時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)改為介詞短語(yǔ)，更加能突出這種學(xué)習(xí)方法對(duì)我的幫助之大。而且后半句明確點(diǎn)出我獲益于這種方法。 這句話也成了全文的中心句！5 what a useful way to learn english. 這種結(jié)尾真是太不給力了，一點(diǎn)都不出彩這種結(jié)尾真是太不給力了，一點(diǎn)都不出彩。如果放在一篇好文章的結(jié)尾顯得虎頭蛇。如果放在一篇好文章的結(jié)尾顯得虎頭蛇尾，很有可能會(huì)影響閱卷老師的最后評(píng)分尾，很有可能會(huì)影響閱卷老師的最后評(píng)分。 改：改：therefore, why not try the way yourself to improve you english. 使用提議的句型能在總結(jié)的基礎(chǔ)上發(fā)出呼使用提議的