WritingSkillsletterofadvice實用教案

1、I cant make friends第1頁/共21頁第一頁，共22頁。I cant sleep!第2頁/共21頁第二頁，共22頁。How to become clever?第3頁/共21頁第三頁，共22頁。we need advice!第4頁/共21頁第四頁，共22頁。read & compare第5頁/共21頁第五頁，共22頁。 What makes a composition good?第6頁/共21頁第六頁，共22頁。H: handwritingC: contentL: languageS: structureHCLS 原則(yunz)第7頁/共21頁第七頁，共22頁。Mr.

2、WorriedMr. Helpful第8頁/共21頁第八頁，共22頁。A person called Worried wrote a letter to you. Can you guess what worried him? 第9頁/共21頁第九頁，共22頁。Dear Mr.Helpful, Im a high school student and Im in trouble. I used to be crazy about English, but now I have some difficulty with English, especially with oral English

3、. You know I want to take part in English talent competition in the future, maybe in my university, so I want to prepare it from now on. I wonder how I can speak like a native speaker. I do want to be one of the top ten and go to a world-famous university. But my oral English is not good enough. Wha

4、t should I do? Worried第10頁/共21頁第十頁，共22頁。請你仔細閱讀所給英文信,然后給Worried同學(tngxu)寫一封回信.要求包含以下內(nèi)容：1.寫信目的2.你的建議和理由(至少兩條)3.你的期望要求：可適當增加細節(jié)詞數(shù)100左右.第11頁/共21頁第十一頁，共22頁。審題 建議信建議信一般一般(ybn)現(xiàn)在時和一現(xiàn)在時和一般般(ybn)將來時將來時第12頁/共21頁第十二頁，共22頁。 Para.1(beginning)Para.3(ending)Para.2(body) structure of an advice letterintention advice

5、,reasonsexpectation第13頁/共21頁第十三頁，共22頁。outline?列提綱列提綱(tgng)并遣詞并遣詞造句造句第14頁/共21頁第十四頁，共22頁。建議信經(jīng)典(jngdin)套用句型閃亮(shn lin)篇首句1.I know you have trouble in. after reading your letter.2.Im writing to offer you some advice on/about3. Im glad to give you some suggestions.4.Its my pleasure to offer you some advi

6、ce on.出彩篇中句1.Firstly, why not.?By doing this, .2.Besides/whats more/in addition, you should. That way,.3.Last but not least, it would be a good idea to.精彩篇尾句1.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. .第15頁/共21頁第十五頁，共22頁。writingtime(about10min)連句成篇

7、連句成篇&修改修改(xigi)潤色潤色第16頁/共21頁第十六頁，共22頁。make commentsusing HCSL第17頁/共21頁第十七頁，共22頁。Reference model（范文(fnwn)賞析）Dear Worried, I have received your letter and Im glad to give you some suggestions. First of all, dont be disappointed and just believe in yourself. In order to speak well, you must learn t

8、o read and listen much, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your English speaking. 第18頁/共21頁第十八頁，共22頁。Besides, youd better wacth some wonderful American or Bristish TV shows, where you can enjoy many real English and pick up some very useful expressions. Last but not

9、 the least, its necessary to practise speaking as often as possible,for practice makes perfect. Follow your dream and youll find success is just around the corner! I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 第19頁/共21頁第十九頁，共22頁。Homework Reviseandpolishyourcompositionandhandinbeforetommorrownight!第20頁/共21頁第二十頁，共22頁。謝謝您的觀看(gunkn)！第21頁/共21頁第二十一頁，共22頁。NoI