大學英語四級作文模板修改PPT學習教案

1、會計學1大學英語四級作文模板修改大學英語四級作文模板修改第1頁/共44頁四、評分標準：四、評分標準： 1作文題滿分為15分。閱卷標準共人為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。2分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數為嚴重錯誤。5分-基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴重錯誤。8分-基本切題，表達思想比清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多。11分-切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分-切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤。閱卷人員根根據閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為某一分數文件次（如8分）相似，即定為（8分）；若認為稍優(yōu)

2、或劣于該檔次，則可加一分（9分）或減一分（7分），但不得加減半分。字數不足應酌情扣分：少10字少20字少30字少40字少50字少51字累計字數110119100109909980897079 69扣分123455注：1、如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結束句，均不得記入所寫字數。2、 只寫一段者：04分，只寫兩段者：09分（指規(guī)定三段的作文）3、白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想,則給零分。2. 設作文最低分，采用下列成績計算方法： 1）作文分為0分者，總分即使高于60分，一律作不及格處理； 2）作文分大于 0 分小于 6 分者，按下 列方式計算成績： 最后報道分 = 原計

3、算總分 6 + 作文實得分第2頁/共44頁第3頁/共44頁第4頁/共44頁四級作文命題透析第5頁/共44頁第6頁/共44頁第7頁/共44頁第8頁/共44頁第9頁/共44頁第10頁/共44頁第11頁/共44頁第12頁/共44頁第13頁/共44頁1) Be brought into public focus ：引起人們的關注 2） call for 要求、需要第14頁/共44頁Arouse the greatest concern: 引起極大關注第15頁/共44頁Be brought to our attention:引起了我們的注意第16頁/共44頁本模板第本模板第3句的空格中應該填上某個需要解

4、釋的現句的空格中應該填上某個需要解釋的現象或事件，第象或事件，第4句提出原因句提出原因I，第，第6句提出原因句提出原因，第第8句提出原因句提出原因，第，第5、第、第7和第和第9句對這句對這3個原因個原因進行了進一步論述。進行了進一步論述。1) Give sb a deep insight into :使、對、有了深入解； 2)foregoing：前面提到的（above-mentioned） 3) contributor :促成因素，貢獻者第17頁/共44頁Account for 解釋第18頁/共44頁Rewarding: 有報酬的、值得做的第19頁/共44頁具體句子數量可根據實際需要調整。具體

5、句子數量可根據實際需要調整。第20頁/共44頁第21頁/共44頁第22頁/共44頁第23頁/共44頁1) Attach importance to 重視 = place importance on 2) spare no efforts to 竭盡全力、努力去做 3）take some measure to 采取措辭第24頁/共44頁Top priority :應予最優(yōu)先考慮的事 第25頁/共44頁steps=measures 2) undo=solve3) Contribute to 有助于第26頁/共44頁本模版中第本模版中第6句為主題句，第句為主題句，第7、8和和9句提供句提供3個個途徑

6、，第途徑，第10句為結論。句為結論。第27頁/共44頁Make joint efforts to 共同努力做、第28頁/共44頁第29頁/共44頁第30頁/共44頁第31頁/共44頁第32頁/共44頁模式模式1Different people have different opinions about （討論主題）. Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that （觀點1）. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that (觀點2)./ Other peo

7、ple, however, think that （觀點2） As for me, I agree with the former/latter idea. (I am in favor of the first/second idea.) (The following are the reasons of/for my choice/personal inclination.)First of all, (論據1).More importantly, (論據2).Most important of all, .(論據3).In summary, (總結觀點). As a college st

8、udent, I am supposed to ( 表決心).或 From above, we can predict that (預測). 模式模式2 Peoples ideas/opinions/views on （討論主題）vary from person to person. Some people hold/think that .(觀點1). From their point of view, .However, others hold/think that (觀點2). In their opinion, ./ Yet other people dont think in thi

9、s way. They argue that (觀點2).As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, ( 論據1). For another, (論據2). Last but not the least, (論據3)./ First of all, ( 論據1)。Furthermore, (論據2)。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, (論據3)。To concl

10、ude, (總結觀點). As a college student, I am supposed to (表決心). 或 From above, we can predict that (預測).模式模式3Different people have different views on (討論主題) . Some people think that （觀點1）. Other people hold that (觀點2).Those who hold the first opinion think that （觀點1） ( 論據1，2，3)On the contrary, those who h

11、old the second view think that （觀點2） ( 論據1，2，3) As for me, I agree with the former/ latter opinion. ( 論據1，2，3)Therefore I hold that (觀點觀點1/2.)練習：練習：1. 1. 有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運。有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運。 2. 2. 我認為數字和運氣無關，我認為數字和運氣無關， Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?第33頁/共

12、44頁第一、寫作中的常用句式第一、寫作中的常用句式一、開頭常用語式一、開頭常用語式( (主題段的引入主題段的引入) )A proverb saysAs the proverb saysSome people say thatMany people believe thatIt is generally believed thatWe all know that As we all know It is quite clear that Various views exist as to , butThere are many arguments/opinions/views aboutTher

13、e is much discussion about/attention to It is well known thatIt is said thatIt has been found thatIt is easy to see thatThe pie graph showsA recent survey providesThe chart/graph/table showsNo one can deny that Nowadays,.At present 第34頁/共44頁二、二、 中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）通常按重要程度排列，我們習慣于先說最重要的，西方人則

14、相反，但都得符合邏輯順序。1表示“首先”first, firstly, first of all, to begin with 在跌降法里用first and foremost 但不可用 at first。2表示“第二”、“此外”“其次”、“況且”second, secondly, and, besides, moreover, additionally, furthermore, whats more, in addition, besides+名詞短語，in addition to+名詞短語，another+名詞短語3表示 “最后”finally, last, lastly, 但不可用at

15、 last 或 in the end。4表示 “最重要的是” above all, most important of all，在跌降法里用last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的是。5.表示“更嚴重的是”、“更糟糕的是” more serious, even worse, to make matter worse6. 表示“最為嚴重的是”、“最糟糕的是”most serious of all, worst of all例如：1 1）First of all, First of all, 論據1. More importantly,More importantly, 論據2.

16、 Most important of all,Most important of all, 論據3. In In summary,summary, 總結觀點.2)2) The advantages can be listed as followsThe advantages can be listed as follows：First,First, 好處1. Besides,Besides, 好處2. Most Most important of all, important of all, 好處3. But every coin has two sides. The negative asp

17、ects are also apparent.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,To begin with,壞處1. To make matter worse,To make matter worse,壞處2. Worst of all,Worst of all,壞處3. From the above analysis, I believeFrom the above analysis, I believe 觀點.3 3）For one thing, For o

18、ne thing, 論據1. For another, For another, 論據2. Last but not the least,Last but not the least, 論據3. To To conclude, conclude, 總結觀點或 From above, we can predict that From above, we can predict that 預測. 4 4）First of all,First of all, 論據1。 Furthermore, Furthermore, 論據2。 Among all of the supporting evidenc

19、es, Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,one is the strongest. That is, 論據3。 A natural conclusion from the above discussion is A natural conclusion from the above discussion is thatthat總結觀點。 或 From above, we can predict thatFrom above, we can predict that 預測.第35頁/共44頁

20、例文Key to Success In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in his life. But how to achieve success? in his life. But how to achieve success? In my opinion, there are three main key

21、s a clear objective, strong willpower and diligence. FirstFirst, , it is very important to set up a goal before you start. No one can be successful without a goal in his mind. BesidesBesides, , you need a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to success.

22、Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent enough. Last but not leastLast but not least, , everyone who wants to suceed should be diligent. There is and old saying, “No pains, no gains.” Most successful people owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein.In conclusion

23、In conclusion, , if we want to be successful, we have to master the three main keys mentioned above.There is no shortcut to success. The three keys will assure you to realize your beautiful dream.練習：Advertisement 1） 廣告給人們帶來的益處。 2） 廣告給人們帶來的煩惱。Advertisement can be a service to people. First, First, it

24、 is informative, and can help people buy and sell goods. Second, Second, it can widen peoples knowledge, and make people more experienced. Lastly Lastly, people can enjoy themselves through those programs which advertisements have been put into. Some advertisements, however, however, are not very us

25、eful to people, sometimes even harmful. An advertisement like this, for example, for example, may put thousands of women and girls into trouble. Disillusioned with life, love, marriage? You need help. Phone me. And the Savior gives his phone number to his sheep. 第36頁/共44頁5其他詞語或句式：1）用于強調：after all, a

26、ny way, in fact, indeed, apparently, clearly, obviously, especially, 2）用于對比：however, on one hand, on the other hand, in contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, instead, but, different from, 3）用于比較：similarly, likewise, like, in the same way, 4）用于列舉：for example, for instance, such as,

27、takefor granted, except(for)5）表示時間：later, then, next, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, after that, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, after some time, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, presently, since, as soon as, after

28、wards, some time later, temporally, in the meanwhile, after a while,6）用于解釋：in other words, as a matter of fact, that is,7) 用于讓步：although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if, though, no matter how8) 用于結果：consequently, thus, as a result, as a consequence, hence, so, therefore, accordingly9) 其他

29、：not onlybut also, as far as I am concerned, when it comes to, in practice, in principle, another key aspect ofis, it is true that, what is more serious is, there is no doubt that,but it is a pity that,but the trouble /problem/point is 例1 Brain Drain in China (接開頭)1）中國人才流失的現狀；2）對人才流失的看法；3）如何解決人才流失。H

30、owever, people see this phenomenon in different perspectives. Some hold the opinion that China suffers a lot from brain drain. They argue, on the one hand, that brain drain considerably weakens our international competitiveness. On the other hand, they believe that the talent should serve their nati

31、ve country first.In contrast, others highlight the advantages of international exchange and cooperation. They claim that Chinese youths should go abroad to study and gain more experience. Whats more, the long-term benefits will outweigh losses we suffer now. 第37頁/共44頁三、結尾常用句式（終結段的連接）三、結尾常用句式（終結段的連接）

32、1表示 “總之 ”、 “總而言之 ”、 “簡言之 ”in conclusion, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, to sum up, in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole2“綜上所述 ”from the foregoing, from what has been discussed above, from what has been mentioned above, from the above analysisObviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion thatThus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find t