高考英語二輪短文改錯專項突破短文改錯集訓(xùn)

1、【專項突破】2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（十五）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident b

2、ecause the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of

3、 the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.Passage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expec

4、ted to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly befor

5、e he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.Passage 3One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at th

6、e railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats. Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked

7、around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, thi

8、s unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.Passage 4Dear Mandy， Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard，often stud

9、y late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to workas hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellentgrades. It's not fair！ The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student she's had f

10、or year. WhenI told my dad，all he said was，“You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mindon your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do nowWould you please help me out?Thanks a lot！ Yours sincerely， LisaPassage 5Theres an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to b

11、e 110 years old. This cant be proved though he doesnt have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I dont know if he really is so old, and it doesnt matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the

12、 secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”Passage 6Dear Jin Jing，Your problem is common one among middle school stu

13、dentsMaybe the following advices can help youFirst in all, believe in yourselfYour greatest problem is that you lack self-confidenceThe first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmatesOne smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any wordsYour smile will show that you are frien

14、dly to himNext, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as youYou can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbiesUnless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or herOnce you have confidence, you can make as m

15、any friends as possiblyYours,Lily2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（十五）答案Passage 1On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because thepassengers ofwet road .And all of them were trappingin the bus and what is worse, the bus ran outtrapped wasof gas and it was very cold in it. They could do not

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19、 caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should allkeep inminds: honesty is the best policy.mindPassage 3One year ago, I had a special English lessonhold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different heldfrom the regular English classes we were famili

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22、ve learner where I go. whereverPassage 4Dear Mandy,Im not doing well in my lessons at school, especialin maths. My dad says I must try hard especiallybecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy, but its not true. I work really hard, to oftenstudy late into the night! Ive tried to talk to

23、 my mother, but she alwayssaidI have to work studying saysas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard, andhe always gets excellent as but grades. Its not fair!The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says Im the best student shes had foryear. When yearsI told my dad, all he sa

24、id was, “You mustnt waste your timein art. You must focus your mind on on / overyour lessons!” Im feeling quitepuzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks puzzleda lot!Yours sincerely,LisaPassage 5試題分析：題目主要考查學(xué)生對冠詞、名詞、并列連詞、形容詞、過去分詞、定語從句、狀語從句、時態(tài)等語法知識的掌握情況?！拘☆}51】考查過去分詞作定語。man和call之間是動賓關(guān)系，即一個被叫做.的人，應(yīng)該用過去分詞作定語，故把calling改為called。【小題52】考查定語從句。who引導(dǎo)一個定語從句，sb be said to be/do sth據(jù)說某人.，根據(jù)“Theres an old man”可知短文用的是