2018年廣州市中考英語作文專題復(fù)習(xí)(五)計(jì)劃與愿望(共6頁)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上2018年廣州市中考英語作文專題復(fù)習(xí)（五）計(jì)劃與愿望一、 與話題相關(guān)的單元：1. 相關(guān)單元：初一上 Unit 5 Visiting the Moon,  Unit6 Travel around Asia.             初一下Unit 1 Traveling around the world，Unit 8 From hobby to career  &

2、#160;          初二下 Unit 8 Life in the future.2. 詞語相關(guān)：高頻詞：modern, Asia ,beauty, outside, building, across, guide ,centre, sightseeing, traditional return, diary, if, leave, nervous, camera, w

3、ithout, able, work, breathe, speech, text, chance, whole, rich, poor, hide, shy, choose, notice, treasure, topic, several, winner, advise, attack, else.高頻短語：be able to , plan to, try ones best, try to do, for this reason, should do,  asas, ought(not ) to do, should (shouldnt ) do

4、 sth, be going to do,take photos, in the future, grow up, used to, places of interests, would love to拓展詞及詞語：desire, determination, will, expect, express, desire to do, experience,3. 經(jīng)典句型：a. I would rather that.b. How I wish.c. I wish/hope/want to/ believe/ think/ a

5、m sure of .d. I want to make my new ideas and wishes come true.e. Im going to do.f. He decides to .during the vacation.g. You ought toh. I/ we should 二、經(jīng)典例題：（2012年 初中畢業(yè)生學(xué)業(yè)考試指導(dǎo)書）假設(shè)今年暑假一批英國中學(xué)生要來你校訪問，你準(zhǔn)備參與接待工作。為了提前做好各項(xiàng)準(zhǔn)備，學(xué)校要求參與接待的學(xué)生用英語擬定一個(gè)接待計(jì)劃。請根據(jù)下面的構(gòu)思圖來擬定你的計(jì)劃，內(nèi)容包括：1. 

6、;你計(jì)劃要做的事情（圖中1-3項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容）及其原因或目的2. 你準(zhǔn)備為來賓安排的1-2 項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右（計(jì)劃的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；2. 不能透露個(gè)人的任何信息（例如：具體的學(xué)校和姓名等），否則不予評分。Some UK high school students will come to our school during this summer holidays. To help them, I . 解題思路：1. 審題：a. 本文共有  4  個(gè)要點(diǎn)b.

7、0;時(shí)態(tài)主要采用 一般將來時(shí)c. 人稱是_2. 可能用到的短語和句型a. 你計(jì)劃要做的事情（圖中1-3項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容）及其原因或目的 1).主要連接詞 so, also, whenb. 你準(zhǔn)備為來賓安排的1-2 項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。 2). 主要句型I am going to  I will  I can   I think  3. 成文：      So

8、me UK high school students will come to our school during this summer holidays. To help them, I will do some practice about speaking English, it can improve me communication for the UK students. And then, I should know the UK students who like something best and are good at something. In m

9、y opinion, if they are interested in playing baskeball, the baskeball compete will be held by them and our students. But the most important thing is to tell them about Guangzhou culture, history and famous places. Of course, I will visit the famous places with

10、 them. Whats more, we can play the game about Guangzhou culture and UK culture together.     Im sure that it can make our relationship better and better, and we all learn the culture from each country.點(diǎn)評：   整篇文章對要點(diǎn)的把握基本到位，但是拼寫和簡單的語法錯(cuò)誤較多。部分句子的表達(dá)過

11、于中式4. 檢查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果沒有問題的，請?jiān)陧?xiàng)目后打。2. 如果有問題，請?jiān)陧?xiàng)目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改。項(xiàng)目 第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)  人稱 時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致  動(dòng)詞搭配、介詞搭配   拼寫錯(cuò)誤   好詞好句   分項(xiàng)分檔評分表項(xiàng)目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意，體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)6-5554.5 4.54-3.5  3-2.521.510有所發(fā)揮準(zhǔn)確性6分語  法6

12、-5.554.54-3.5     43-2.521.510詞  匯機(jī)械性：大小寫，拼寫和格式等錯(cuò)誤流暢性3分結(jié)構(gòu)3-2.52-1.5  210.50000自評總分： 10.5 5. 參考例文：     Some UK high school students will come to our school during the summer holidays. To help them, I think I need to 

13、practice my English more so I can successfully pass on my meaning to our foreign friends. In order to understand the UK students better, I will try to learn about their interests and hobbies. Also, I should learn more about the history, culture and places of interest of Guangzhou so that I can

14、show them around the city. As Guangzhou is famous for its food, I will take them to taste the delicious local foods when they come and I will also take them shopping.四、  練習(xí)：  緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來一個(gè)輕松的暑假。請根據(jù)下面方框內(nèi)的提示寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆?jì)劃。暑假計(jì)劃1. 好好休息，學(xué)會(huì)放松  短語_2. 讀書，因?yàn)樽x書既有趣又能

15、學(xué)到很多知識   短語_3. 陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)  短語_4. 參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，了解社會(huì)  短語_5. 。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80-100個(gè)      2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名      3. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。解題思路：1. 審題：a. 本文共有    個(gè)要點(diǎn)b. 時(shí)態(tài)主要

16、采用            c. 人稱是_2. 可能用到的詞語（寫在要點(diǎn)旁邊）_3. 可能用到的句型    _ 4. 成文：  _ 檢查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果沒有問題的，請?jiān)陧?xiàng)目后打。2. 如果有問題，請?jiān)陧?xiàng)目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改。項(xiàng)目 第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)  人稱 時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一

17、致  動(dòng)詞搭配、介詞搭配   拼寫錯(cuò)誤   好詞好句    參考例文：  The summer holiday is coming. Im going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and he