托福寫作三種“高大上”的結(jié)尾寫作技巧

1、 智 課 網(wǎng) 托 福 備 考 資 料 托福寫作三種“高大上”的結(jié)尾寫作技巧很多人知道托福寫作寫一個好開頭，可以博得評卷老師的好感，增加印象分。但是托福寫作的結(jié)尾段呢，似乎很多考生就不太注意了。其實結(jié)尾結(jié)得好，對作文而言，是畫龍點睛的效果，是非常重要的，不能拋在一邊。很多人知道托福寫作寫一個好開頭，可以博得評卷老師的好感，增加印象分。但是托福寫作的結(jié)尾段呢，似乎很多考生就不太注意了。其實結(jié)尾結(jié)得好，對作文而言，是畫龍點睛的效果，是非常重要的，不能拋在一邊。一個完美的結(jié)尾需符合官方評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的兩項原則，即Displaysprogression & syntactic variety(文章的進

2、程感和遣詞造句的多樣性。所以考生應(yīng)該走出寫作誤區(qū)，將結(jié)尾段也放在備考的list中，否則在真實考場中將很難在剩下不到5分鐘內(nèi)寫好結(jié)尾。要寫好結(jié)尾段，首先我們要明白結(jié)尾段在全文起到的作用是什么。一般說來，結(jié)尾段是用來重申立場的(restatement of thesis，這里值得注意的是，結(jié)尾不要再出現(xiàn)新的論點了，哪怕它非常具有說服力，這時也必須忍痛割愛，否則就會因缺乏論證以及缺乏前后呼應(yīng)而失分。高分結(jié)尾，我們有至少三種解決方法。Plan A: 重申立場+補充，Plan B: 重申立場+反方觀點的弱點, Plan C: 重申立場+反問句。不難看出，這三種方法都具備兩個共同要素：重申立場。得分點即要

3、滿足評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的syntactic variety(遣詞造句的多樣性，也就是說若是機械地抄題目或開頭的我方立場表述，都是不可取的。l Plan A題目： There are people who learn about life by listening totheir friends or families advice. On the other hand, there arethose that learn from personal experience. Which one do youprefer?我方立場：It is better to learn from personal ex

4、perience.結(jié)尾：In a nutshell, it is quite common for us to seek advicefrom our buddies or family when faced with life dilemma, but inmost cases, more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience. After all, it is our action ratherthan other peoples words that determine wha

5、t kind of peoplewe want to be. (62 words解析：這個結(jié)尾采用的是Plan A，重申立場使用了比較法，這也是托福結(jié)尾最常用的一種方法，因為大多數(shù)寫作題目都涉及兩者對比?！翱偠灾?，當(dāng)面臨生活困境時人們往往會向朋友和家人求助，但在大多數(shù)情況下，如果我們自己嘗試一些事情，往往會學(xué)到更多的經(jīng)驗?！罢Z言轉(zhuǎn)換上，使用了換主語和換詞的方法，我方立場It is better to learnfrom personal experience，主語是It, 但在結(jié)尾換成了benefits,整個句子即變成了more benefits can be available if we

6、 pick upsome lessons by our own experience.結(jié)尾第二句話，補充了我方立場的合理性，進行了升華?！碑吘?，決定我們將來成為什么樣的人的關(guān)鍵點并非是他人的言語而是我們自己的行為?！發(fā) Plan B題目：When people go on a trip, some like to go with afriend while others like to go alone. Which do you prefer?我方立場： I would rather to travel with a friend.結(jié)尾： Taking all of the factors

7、above into account, beingaccompanied by some close friends tends to be a better optionwhen it comes to having a trip. This even makes more sense ifone is fully aware of the possible dangers of travelling on ones own, that is, being helpless when emergencies occur and havingno one to share the excite

8、ment.解析：這個結(jié)尾采用了重申立場+反方觀點的弱點?！翱紤]到以上所列出的論點，我們可得知當(dāng)說到旅游時有人陪伴是一個更好的選擇。這點更說得通，如果一個人清楚地明白獨自旅行潛藏的壞處，即遇到緊急情況的無助感以及無人分享旅途的興奮感。“語言上的主語替換尤為靈活，I would rather to travel with a friend.轉(zhuǎn)換為了Beingaccompanied by some close friends tends to be a better optionwhen it comes to having a trip.l Plan C 題目：Some people like t

9、o live in a small town, while otherslike to live in a large city. If you had a choice, where would youlike to live?我方立場：I would like to live in a big city.結(jié)尾： Although a growing number of serenity-seekersregard the smaller community as their dream homeland, I stillopt for the metropolis for its convenience and dynamic life.When it comes to living, how can one possibly deny that thepurpose of life is to explore new things that small towns fail tooffer?解析：這個結(jié)尾采用了重申立場+反問句的寫法，很大氣。“盡管越來越多尋找寧靜的都市人把小城市視作自己的夢想家園，但我仍然覺得大城市更勝一籌。當(dāng)談到生活，誰能否認生活的目的