中考英語(yǔ)作文題型分析與例文評(píng)析

1、學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載中考英語(yǔ)作文題型分析與例文評(píng)析：命題作文命題作文即給出一個(gè)統(tǒng)一的題目，限定考生寫(xiě)作的具體范圍，要求考生就同一主題展開(kāi)敘述或評(píng)論。寫(xiě)好命題作文的關(guān)鍵是緊扣主題、立意明確、觀點(diǎn)清晰。命題作文例1To be a lovely Shanghainese（20XX年上海市英語(yǔ)中考題）審題：該題的重點(diǎn)在于闡述作為一個(gè)可愛(ài)的上海人，我們關(guān)鍵應(yīng)怎樣做？在20XX年的考生作文中，有一部分同學(xué)發(fā)生了嚴(yán)重的偏題，把描述重點(diǎn)放在形容上海是怎樣的一個(gè) 大都市，因此失分很多。由此看來(lái)，審題的準(zhǔn)確是非常重要的。學(xué)生作文：Shan ghai is develop ing quickly everyday. Q

2、uite a few foreig ners come tovisit Shan ghai. As the hosts of Shan ghai, we must be lovely Shan gha in eses to tell thevisitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do ourbest to make the city more beautiful to show our en thusiasm. Next, we should b

3、e kind and frien dly toevery one. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal.Fin ally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shan ghai is develop ing and we shouldmake progress to follow the epoch.教師評(píng)析：該篇作文行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，以“firs,Next,Fin ally的結(jié)構(gòu)描述，層次感很強(qiáng)。不定式的恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)了考生較好的語(yǔ)法功底。教師擬評(píng)分：9分例2Four

4、 years school life審題：該題要求考生對(duì)四年的初中生活進(jìn)行回顧和總結(jié)，適合以?shī)A敘夾議的方式來(lái)寫(xiě)作。（此外，從情感教育的角度來(lái)看，閱卷老師總希望讀到考生回憶自己美好、快樂(lè)的初中生活，而不是討厭自己的母校、老師、同學(xué)等消極情緒的體現(xiàn)。）學(xué)生作文：rve bee n in my middle school for four years. Four years school life playsan important role in my life. I enjoy making friends, getting knowledge and having interesting ti

5、me inmy school. I have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and I have also bee n taught differe ntless ons by lots of differe nt patie nt teachers. I have grow n up a lot i n the past four years. I will n everforget my four years school life.學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載教師評(píng)析：整篇作文非常明快、流暢，體現(xiàn)了考生對(duì)母校依依不舍的情懷。由于是對(duì)初中生

6、活的回顧和總結(jié)，考生恰當(dāng)?shù)剡x擇以現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)作為主要的時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)影響和結(jié)果 文中plays animportant role這一詞組和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的正確運(yùn)用也體現(xiàn)了考生良好的詞匯和 語(yǔ)法功底。教師擬評(píng)分：10分中考英語(yǔ)作文題型分析與例文評(píng)析：應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作應(yīng)用文主要包括信函、電郵、日記、通知、廣告、電話等形式，它要求考生不僅能表達(dá)題中的主要內(nèi)容，還能夠正確地運(yùn)用各種文本格式進(jìn)行規(guī)范的書(shū)寫(xiě)，這也是 考生對(duì)于英語(yǔ)傳統(tǒng)文化了解多少的反映。因此，考生應(yīng)在臨考前系統(tǒng)地復(fù)習(xí)各種文本格式以及打電話 的規(guī)范用語(yǔ)，以做到處變不驚、百戰(zhàn)百勝。例3寫(xiě)一封信給你在云南省西雙版納市的筆友李帆，告訴他你很愿意與他交朋友，并邀

7、請(qǐng)他到上海來(lái)旅行。審題：該題要求考生以規(guī)范的信件格式來(lái)書(shū)寫(xiě)，并把題中所出現(xiàn)的信息點(diǎn)都涵概在內(nèi)。建議考生可把題目中的信息點(diǎn)都一一劃出，以免發(fā)生遺漏。學(xué)生作文：Lifa nXishua ngba nnaYunnan Province Ch inaMay 25th, 2004Dear Lifa n,Thank you for your letter. Im glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old,but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbann

8、a is a very beautiful place.There are a lot of pla nts and ani mals. You know I look forward to visit ing Xishuangbanna. Would youlike to come to Shanghai? Id like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holiday. Shan ghai is also abeautiful place. It is a moder n city. There are a lot of interesting pl

9、aces such as the Oriental Pearl TVTower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載Walkway.If you come here, I will show you around Shan ghai. You can live at my home and my mother willcook you much delicious food. Lets be best frien ds!Yours sin cerely,Xiaomin教師擬評(píng)分：9分例4寫(xiě)一篇題為 “A Visit To_的日記。審題：該題為半命題式作文。考生

10、除了要注意運(yùn)用正確的日記格式，還可根據(jù)自己的 經(jīng)驗(yàn)和熟悉程度來(lái)選擇、確定文章的主題.學(xué)生作文：May 25th, 2004sunnyA Visit To Jinmao Buildi ngJinmao Building has Chinese traditional styles and it is also modern. It is the signal con struct ionof Shan ghai. It is located in the cen ter of Lujiazui Finan cial Area. Our family visited Jin mao Buildi

11、ngtoday.The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway.And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor ofJinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Buildi ng, andyou will get s

12、ome un expected gains there.教師評(píng)析：整篇作文主題明確，對(duì)于金茂大廈的描述也較具體，文中“thesig nalcon structi on一詞是全文的亮點(diǎn)。但整篇文章的層次不夠清晰，句子也以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，對(duì) 于參觀這一動(dòng)詞的闡述還不夠充分。教師擬評(píng)分：8分中考英語(yǔ)作文題型分析與例文評(píng)析：看圖寫(xiě)話看圖寫(xiě)話學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載看圖寫(xiě)話是初中英語(yǔ)作文常考的一種形式，但隨著牛津版教材的大量應(yīng)用，學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作能力有了較大的提高，因此中考作文的要求和難度也相應(yīng)提高。所以，在中考作文中繼續(xù)出現(xiàn)簡(jiǎn)單的敘事型看圖寫(xiě)話的可能性很小，但有可能會(huì)提供給考生一些具有寓意的漫畫(huà) 或圖片，要求考生從中發(fā)

13、現(xiàn)問(wèn)題、提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，這對(duì)考生的邏輯思維能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的嫻熟運(yùn)用都提出了更高的要求。審題：這幅漫畫(huà)蘊(yùn)涵了一個(gè)深刻的主題即戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)與和平，這與當(dāng)今世界的熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題密切 相關(guān)，它不僅考核考生是否能流暢地表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，更需要考生站在人文關(guān)懷的高度來(lái) 觀察整個(gè)世界。學(xué)生作文：A Represe nt of Freedom and PeaceAlmost everyday we can see there are always a huge nu mber of pige ons enjoying the sun bathin some large squares, but do you ofte n c

14、are what a white pige on sta nds for? That is peace. For hundreds of years, people always regard pige ons as a represe nt of freedom and peace. That is becauseof not only its lovely pure figure, but also its great passi on to the outside world. Till no w, I still canthelp thinking of such a picture:

15、 In Iraq, a boy was watch ing a white pige on over his head. Thebackgro und was full of woun ded solders and guns. Thus, this lovely white pige on was con trastive tothis iced backgro und and gave people a deep con siderati on. Sudde nly, athought comes into mymind: Why there have bee n so many wars

16、 in the world just for some on es own in terest? Why cantpeople live like as mall pigeon with freedom? I hope there will not be wars, FOREVER!教師評(píng)析：應(yīng)該說(shuō)，要把這篇看圖作文寫(xiě)好是有相當(dāng)難度的，但考生以非常流暢的筆 調(diào)從鴿子聯(lián)想到自由與和平，再聯(lián)想到發(fā)生在伊拉克的戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)。文風(fēng)成熟老練，這在初中生 的作文中是難能可貴的。教師擬評(píng)分：10分例6審題：該圖要求考生先看懂漫畫(huà)，對(duì)它進(jìn)行清晰的描述，同時(shí)根據(jù)其隱藏的 寓意提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，如在此圖中應(yīng)關(guān)注樹(shù)木被砍伐而

17、提出環(huán)保的重要性。學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載學(xué)生作文：Seeing this picture, we know that these trees have bee n cut dow n. But as a very littlebaby in the picture, he must be puzzled. He will ask: What are these? Are these trees? Ofcourse, in our imag in ati on, trees must be tall, strong and gree n eno ugh. Actually, his questions

18、hows humans a problem that is worth thinking about. The covering rate of the forest in the world haskept decreas ing these years and it caused a lot of problems onenvironment. As we all know, trees are very important in our life. They can make the airfresher, reduce natural disasters and soon. So I

19、appeal: Dont cut down trees. Let s make our earthgreener for our later generation. Dont let the children think trees are only roots!教師評(píng)析：整篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，全文分三段，第一段詳細(xì)地描述漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容；第二段闡述其蘊(yùn)涵的寓意即環(huán)保對(duì)于世界和后代們的重要性；第三段提出作者的號(hào)召，使文章的 結(jié)尾明快、有力！教師擬評(píng)分：10分提示性作文：就是給出一個(gè)標(biāo)題或無(wú)標(biāo)題，給出具體的內(nèi)容，規(guī)定一定的字?jǐn)?shù)，讓考生寫(xiě) 出作文。由于這類(lèi)作文已經(jīng)規(guī)定了文章的中心思想和主要內(nèi)容，因此考生可以

20、不再列出提 綱，只要把注意力集中在如何正確、完整地用英文詞句表達(dá)出中心思想和內(nèi)容就可以了。寫(xiě)好提示性作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)：1、仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。對(duì)所給信息反復(fù)閱讀，弄清這個(gè)題目要表達(dá)什么，然后對(duì)所給信息進(jìn)行整理、組織，按照自己的寫(xiě)作思路使之條理化。2、確保語(yǔ)言精煉。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，考生應(yīng)時(shí)刻提醒自己按照已給出的信息點(diǎn)去寫(xiě)，不必有太多的發(fā)揮。但也不必按照信息點(diǎn)去逐句翻譯。用自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)、句型去體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)。掌握好文章的長(zhǎng)度，不要字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多或過(guò)少。例題分析一、漢語(yǔ)提示根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須用上。字?jǐn)?shù)6070左右。1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。學(xué)習(xí)必

21、備歡迎下載2、在路上我遇到了一個(gè)外國(guó)人。3、 他向我詢(xún)問(wèn)去溫泉飯店(the Hot SpringHotel)的路。4、我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)彎處向左拐就能看見(jiàn)飯店。5、他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。提示詞語(yǔ)：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happythat(分析)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：根據(jù)提示我們了解到這是一篇記敘文，所以考生應(yīng)馬上想到時(shí)間(yesterdayevening)，地點(diǎn)(on the road)，人物(I, my mother and a f

22、oreigner)，事件(how toshow the way)。其次觀察信息點(diǎn)，我們確定這篇文章應(yīng)用過(guò)去式來(lái)表達(dá)。然后，確定這 個(gè)事件應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述。最后，按照信息點(diǎn)合理組織文章，別忘用上提示詞語(yǔ)。(例文)Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreig ner.He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel .I told him to walk along the road and take the thirdturning on

23、 the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help .I was happy thatI could help him.二、英語(yǔ)提示你收到一封咨詢(xún)信，請(qǐng)你以旅行社工作人員的身份完成任務(wù)。Dear Ace Travel,Im Li Mi ng, from the east of Chi na. For the coming win ter vacati on, my family and I want tospend our vacation in a foreign city for ten da

24、ys. We would like to go somewhere not only warm butalso in terest ing. We dont mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swimeveryday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expe nsive but clea n and comfortable. We like to payno more tha n $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you pleas

25、e give us your suggesti ons for vacati on spots?Thanks a lot.Yours,Li Mi ng學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載請(qǐng)你根據(jù)來(lái)信，從下列所給的地方中選擇一個(gè)或兩個(gè)符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議。(80字左右)Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：這篇作文結(jié)合了提示性作文和應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作要求。首先，我們要讀懂英語(yǔ) 提示的內(nèi)容，也就是那封咨詢(xún)信的內(nèi)容。其次，我們要知道書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作方法。針對(duì)本道題， 還要注意，這封信是以旅行社工作人員的身份來(lái)寫(xiě)的。最后，還要注意咨詢(xún)信后的要求-從下列所給的地方中選擇一個(gè)或兩個(gè)

26、符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議及字?jǐn)?shù)限制。下面，我們來(lái)看看范文是怎么寫(xiě)的。One Possible version:Dear Li Min g,rm Gina. Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots.According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warmand in teresti ng. There are some in expe

27、 nsive hotels, which are clea n and comfortable in bothplaces. Whats more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney.(Its also a wonderful place forshopping.)And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is qu

28、ite educati onaland historical.(And you can also enjoy exotic dan ces.)Thats just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.Yours,Gi na對(duì)于，提示作文的寫(xiě)法大家都會(huì)了嗎？不管什么作文的寫(xiě)作，都要要求我們對(duì)英語(yǔ)的 詞匯、短語(yǔ)以及常用的表達(dá)方法有一定的積累。所以，在學(xué)習(xí)寫(xiě)作的同時(shí)，不要放松對(duì)以 上幾個(gè)方面的復(fù)習(xí)。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是中考中檢測(cè)學(xué)生語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力的最重要部分。提高中考寫(xiě)作水平，需要有效的訓(xùn)練。正確無(wú)誤的造句能力和各種文體的寫(xiě)作技巧，兩者缺一不可。正確無(wú)誤的造句

29、能力學(xué)習(xí)必備歡迎下載這得從初中一開(kāi)始就抓起，首先可以從替換單詞、擴(kuò)詞造句訓(xùn)練，做到有效積累，擴(kuò)大視野，靈活運(yùn)用。女口：如何修飾一個(gè)最簡(jiǎn)單、 最常用的 說(shuō)”我們就可以寫(xiě)出許多：say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly ki ndly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely con fide ntly)還可說(shuō)say some thing in a friendly way.替換了一個(gè)副詞，生動(dòng)地表達(dá)了說(shuō)話時(shí)的不同心情。擴(kuò)詞有：play football- play foot ball in the play

30、 ground- play football in the playgro und with my friends- play football in the play gro und with my friends after school.對(duì)其中的動(dòng)詞我們還可替換成playgames,play the piano等，后面的狀語(yǔ)都可以有相應(yīng)的更換。又如：a friend- my friend-my close friend- my close friend named Mary.以此類(lèi)推，我們可以模仿著進(jìn)行擴(kuò)句訓(xùn)練。The stude nts love life.- The stude nt

31、sof ClassOne love enjoyable school life verymuch.為了避免句型的重復(fù)，我們還可以轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型，來(lái)表達(dá)同一內(nèi)容。 女口：The dictionary is so big that it doesnt fit in tomy pocketThedic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket. -The dict ionary is not small eno ugh to fitinto my pocket.這樣訓(xùn)練寫(xiě)句的方法，可以幫助學(xué)生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，從而造的句子符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的習(xí)慣。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，我們可以試著用課文中所學(xué)的句型和詞匯，設(shè)計(jì)一些中譯英句子，雖然對(duì)初中學(xué)生有一定的難度，但長(zhǎng)此以往可以有效地掌握正確的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，鞏固所學(xué)詞匯，做到活學(xué)活用，為中考作文作好鋪墊。在牛津7B開(kāi)始，我們針對(duì)所學(xué)的句型和學(xué)生日常學(xué)習(xí)生活的真實(shí)情景，設(shè)計(jì)了許多中譯英，如：1.盡管我的爺爺奶奶已80多歲了，他們還能每天早上堅(jiān)持鍛煉。(although)2.你與其他同學(xué)不同，你總是喜歡獨(dú)自一人呆在家里。(be