江蘇專轉(zhuǎn)本英語作文評分標準及范文模板

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上作文評分標準2分 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。5分 基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。8分 基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。11分 切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分 切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。字數(shù)不足應酌情扣分：Part One 背誦范文1觀點類作文對命運的兩種看法自己的觀點結(jié)論：命運掌握在自己的手中 My View on FateDifferent people have d

2、ifferent views on fate. Some people think that fate is predestined and nobody can change it, while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe all men are bor

3、n equal and nobody is destined to always succeed or fail in his life. For another, if a person is diligent and determined, he will realize his dream no matter how poor, humble or unlucky he may be. Just think of Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother a

4、nd got seriously injured himself.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, “ Everybody is the architect of his own f

5、ortune.”2利弊類家教的好處家教的壞處結(jié)論 Advantages and Disadvantages of Family TutoringRecently more and more people begin to engage family tutors for their children. They argue that family tutoring brings several advantages. First, family tutoring can help weak students to keep up with others in class. Second, th

6、e society is developing at a high speed and family tutoring can help the child make preparations for the future competition.Family tutoring also brings many problems. Firstly, students may not welcome family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. Secondly, the quality of the

7、teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. Finally, the student may depend too much on family tutoring and overlook learning at school.From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the disadvantages are more obvious. Teachers and

8、parents should help students improve efficiency both in and out of class experience tells us that the best students need no family tutoring. 3辦法類畢業(yè)生關注找工作問題找工作的三個解決辦法總結(jié)How to Get a Job After GraduationThe past decade has witnessed a more and more fierce competition in the job market. Consequently stu

9、dents voice growing concern over how to get a job after graduation. To this problem, in my mind, there are at least the following approaches.First of all, the main approach is to take part in grand recruiting fairs in big cities. The students hands in his resume and waits for the notice of an interv

10、iew. Secondly, the student can go over the advertisements on newspapers, TV or the Internet to find a satisfactory job. Of course, he should also wait for replay after sending out applications. Finally, going directly to an ideal company is a brave behavior, which sounds pretty rare among the job hu

11、nters.Personally, I would like to choose the second method in my own practice. On the one hand, I dont want to have a try at those companies which have not advertised in the mass media. The success rate is so rare that I cannot afford the time and energy. On the other hand, I would not like to go to

12、 those crowded recruiting fairs, which often provide only poor-paying posts which are neither challenging nor promising. As long as I am sure of making sufficient preparations and distinguishing myself during interviews, it is out of question for me to get the ideal job which I have been dreaming of

13、.4時政類奧運將在北京召開奧運對中國的巨大影響作為大學生我們能為奧運做什么Beijing Olympics and IThe Olympics Games will be held in Beijing on August 8, 2008. All the Chinese feel very proud of this great event. As the historic sports meeting, Beijing Olympics will not only bring along splendid sport competitions, but also offer golden

14、opportunities for the development of China.To start with, Beijing Olympics will great boost Chinas economic development. According to experts, the Olympic Games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. More importantly, Beijing Olympics will greatly enhance our international infl

15、uence. During the games, large numbers of tourists will visit China and experience Chinese culture, thus improving the communication between Chinese people and people from all over the world.As college students, we should contribute our share to this historic event. For example, we can carry out Oly

16、mpic education among citizens, familiarizing them with Olympic spirits and Olympic knowledge.5. 應用類-通知An English speech contest sponsored by the University English Club will be held on May 4th at the university auditorium to memorize the 86th anniversary of the May 4th Movement. Any of full-time stu

17、dent in this university is entitled to take part in the speech. The student interested in the activity is required to submit a draft of his/her speech before April 30th to the Speech Organization Committee Office at Room 1512 of the No.2 Student Dormitory. Please email your speech draft to . For fur

18、ther information please contact us at .Part Two 結(jié)構(gòu)與模板作文開頭部分1. 開門見山The Best Way to Stay HealthyThe best way to stay healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology. 2. 正反表態(tài)Advantages/Disadvantages of Advertising on TelevisionNowadays more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some peop

19、le think that advertising on TV can bring us a lot of benefits, but others hold the different opinions. In my opinion, I am in favor of the former.3. 讓步法Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?Nowadays, young people choose to phone each other rather writing letters. Some are worried that letter writing will

20、 be useless in the future. Even so, I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones. .4. 提問法Factors Influencing Young AdultsOf the different factors that can have influence on young adults, the family and friends stand out most. Which of the two is more important? My view is that

21、 it is friends who have the most important influence on young adults. 常用句型1. When it comes to , some think/believe/hold 2. There is a public debate today that 3. Recently, . has been brought into focus.4. Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to 5. Nowadays, it

22、is heatedly discussed topic to many people that .6. . has aroused much public concern in 7. In my opinion/Personally .8. From my point of view, I think .9. My view is that .10. As for myself/For my part, I would like to say .11. As far as I am concerned, I .12. We can assume 作文主體部分段落的展開主題句: 本段要說什么問題

23、; 具體; 簡潔擴展句: 說明和支持該主題 表示各種邏輯關系的過渡詞連接各個句子1. 列舉時常用詞語: for example, for instance, such as, like, thus, takeas an example, to illustrate.2. 分類時常用詞語：to begin with, first, second, furthermore, besides, in addition, moreover, finally, 3. 因果關系常用語匯: because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of,

24、hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused by, lead to, result in4. 比較常用語匯：at the same time, similar to, accordingly, both, similarly, the same as, in the same way作文結(jié)尾部分1. 總結(jié)歸納Advantages/Disadvantages of Advertising on TelevisionFrom the above, we can see that TV advertising is beneficial both

25、to manufacturers and consumers because of the information it provides.2. 再次強調(diào)Factors Influencing Young AdultsGenerally speaking, in most cases, friends are the most important influence on young adults.3. 提出建議GlobalizationIn order to survive the competition of globalization, we must go along with the

26、 historic tide of globalization, and actively cope with the opportunity and challenge that the economic globalization brings.常用句型1. In summary, 2. In short, .3. In brief, .4. To sum up, .5. In conclusion, .6. All in all, .7. On the whole, .8. In a word, .9. From what has been discussed above, we may

27、 draw the conclusion that.10. Thus, it can be concluded that.11. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that .12. We can conclude from the foregoing reasons and examples that .常見作文模板Nowadays ,there are more and more . It is estimated that Why have there been so many ?

28、Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that .Besides,. The third reason is.To sum up ,the main cause of .is due to . .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,.On the other hand ,. All these measures will certainly.For most of us today, .From above ,we can find that the reasons why .are as follows.The primary reason , I think,is Second, .The third reason is .Therefore, .These days we often hear that .It is common that.For one thing ,.For another,.What is more, .Since ., it is natural that .To solve the