高中英語作文教學(xué)(1)

1、英語作文一、書面表達應(yīng)該注意的幾個方面：1、開頭三句話要規(guī)范地道,如果第一句話就不規(guī)范或錯誤很多,閱卷老師在心里很可能把該作文定在一個很低的檔次. 即使后面有一兩個較好的句子,也很難改變這個印象,后面的好句子很可能被忽略了,因為閱卷老師太累或類似的試卷太多.大多數(shù)作文的檔次都是在評卷的前10秒鐘決定的,如果前三句話看起來像高檔次的作文閱卷老師就會在這一檔次的作文分?jǐn)?shù)段里選定一個合適的分?jǐn)?shù).2、寫要點的句子要突出、清楚、不要讓閱卷老師在字里行間費力搜索文章的要點。要把要點放在明顯的地方，讓閱卷老師一看便知道這篇文章有幾層意思，不要遺漏了漢語提供的要點，無論你把其中某一個要點或兩三個要點寫得多么好

2、只要沒寫完，作文的檔次就上不去。3、卷面要整潔。4、標(biāo)點符號要規(guī)范：獨立的簡單句用句號, 并列句在有并列連詞時才可用逗號，如果沒有并列連詞，就只能用句號或分號, 復(fù)合句中主句和從句之間可以用逗號，從句前一定要有引導(dǎo)詞（從屬連詞或副詞）。并列句之間、主從句之間要用逗號，除此之外，大多數(shù)情況下句子之間都要用句號。5、單詞拼寫要正確。6、作文字?jǐn)?shù)要足：在寫作時字的大小最好適中，這樣整篇作文看起來要充實些。二、英語作文教學(xué)中的幾個步驟：（一）、審題：1.審格式 體裁 題材 主題 2.審時態(tài)人稱 (書信、議論文以現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)為主) 3.審要點：根據(jù)漢語意思判定幾個要點,一定要把漢語提供的要點寫完, 主要

3、以五種簡單句為主,適當(dāng)使用定語從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝句、強調(diào)句、名詞性從句。第一段主要簡介討論的觀點；第二段為正文要點寫作；第三段發(fā)表作者觀點。（二）、審好題以后就找出與短文相關(guān)的主要句型。比如說要寫一篇書信類文章，開頭和結(jié)尾一般比較固定：書信的開頭套語：1.I am writing to tell you that +（賓語從句） 2.Im writing to ask you about whether +（賓語從句）3.Im glad to tell you that +（賓語從句）4.How is everything going? 5.How are you getting alon

4、g with your studies / work ?結(jié)尾套語：1.Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. 2.Expecting / Hoping to hear from you as soon as possible. 3.Give my best regards / wishes to your father / mother .4.Looking forward to your next visit to China.再比如說要寫一篇觀點對比類文章，開頭和結(jié)尾一般為：開頭句式：介紹討論的主題1.We h

5、ad a discussion about whether students should be allowed to . 2.Weve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to 3.Im writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to 過度句：1.Opinions are divided on this issue. 2.Opinions are mainly divided into

6、two groups. 3.Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. 4.Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.提出正方觀點的句式：1.Sixty percent of the students are for the idea. 2.Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to 3.Some people think that According to

7、 them, all of us should提出反方觀點：1.However , Forty percent of the students think 2.On the other hand, Forty of the students think（三）、審好題以后就找出與短文相關(guān)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞：First of all, Besides（此外）, Whats more?(再者) Moreover(而且); therefore（因此）; however（然而）, otherwise（否則）, on the contrary（相反）, on the one hand（一方面）, on the ot

8、her hand（另一方面）, in other words（換句話說）; As far as I know（據(jù)我所知），As all know/As is known to us（正如大家都知道的那樣）; Generally / speaking（一般地說）, in a word（總之）. (四）有用的短語：in order to do(為了),take some measures to do (采取一些措施做某事）， adopt/take / follow ones advice采納某人的建議,give some advice on sth 就某事提出建議, advice sb. to d

9、o sth. 建議某人做某事, have an active /optimistic attitude to sth 對待某事有積極/樂觀的態(tài)度, prevent/stop/keep sb from doing sth 阻止某人干某事 make full use of time/room 充分利用時間/空間 比如關(guān)于環(huán)保的話題作文我們就可以這樣寫：Our environment has suffered from a lot of pollution,In order to protect our planet.We should have an active attitude to it a

10、nd take some measure to prevent some people from cutting down trees and throwing litter away(四) 范文假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生魏華。最近你班同學(xué)正參加上海中學(xué)生英文報“大家談”欄目的一個討論，本次話題：父母的收入有沒有必要讓孩子知道？ 請你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。（議論文） 70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1.父母的收入應(yīng)該讓孩子知道2.知道后,知其來之不易,能夠更加努力學(xué)習(xí)3.知道后,可以理解家長艱辛,學(xué)會節(jié)儉,為大人分憂.1.父母的收入沒有必要讓孩子知道.2.如果知道父母收入

11、較好,會助長亂花錢風(fēng)氣.3.知道父母收入后,會認(rèn)為不用努力也能靠父母,影響學(xué)習(xí)動力Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether we should know our parents income.We do have different opinions on this matter. Most of us (70%) think we should know our parents income since it will help us understand how

12、 hard our parents have to work, no matter how much they earn. Then we will study harder and will not waste money any more. We may also learn to share our parents trouble.About 30% of my classmates think it unnecessary to let the children know how much their parents earn. If they know their parents h

13、ave enough money to support the family, they will not study hard since they neednt worry about the future. It is said, especially when their parents have a relatively high income, the children will easily from a wasteful habit. 附：英語寫作常用句型一、There be句型,注意下列幾種形式(1)There is a writing desk, a computer an

14、d piles of books in the room. (2)There seemed to be no one who really understood me(3)There used to be an old temple. (4)There will be a party next week.(5)There is a party to be held next week. (6)There is a man coming to us.二、形式主語句型:1. It is +形容詞 / 名詞 + (for / of sb. ) to do sth (不定式作主語); 2. It is

15、 +形容詞 / 名詞+ that + 主語從句三、形式賓語句型:在形式主語句型前面加上sb. think / believe / find / feel / consider / make 等， 后面的部分就成了賓語從句， 如果把從句中的is / was 去掉， 就成了形式賓語，句型如下：1.sb + think + it + 形容詞+ (for sb.) to do sth 2 .sb. +think + it + 形容詞+賓語從句.四、 “據(jù)稱,” “據(jù)說” “據(jù)報道.”等It is said / believe / reported that sometime in the future

16、 man can travel from one planet to another.五、強調(diào)句型:對句子中除謂語以外的成分進行強調(diào),可以用 “It si / was +被強調(diào)部分+ that / who + 其他成分”It was Tom that I met in the park on Friday morning.對謂語強調(diào),可以用Sb. does / do / did do sth, 但只適合謂語動詞為實義動詞且時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時或一般過去時.They do have difficulty understanding the lecture.六、表示倍數(shù)的句型：1.A is twice

17、 / four times as big / old / longas B.2.A is twice / four times bigger / older / longerthan B.3.A is twice / four times the size / weight / length / widthof B.七、(1)with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)一般用作定語或狀語，有以下幾種形式：1. with + n. / pron. + adj. / adv. / prep. phrase / to do / doing / doneWith the bus moving slowly, we felt ti

18、red and sleepy.With the homework unfinished, the boy dared not go to school.(2) with用作介詞的常用結(jié)構(gòu)： With the development of society/economy/science and technology.With the help of my teacher/my parents/my classmates/my friends八、表示“花時間”的句型1.It takes sb. some times to do sth. 2.Sb. spend / waste some time

19、(in )doing sth.3.Sb. spend / waste some time on sth.九、表示“花錢”的句型1.Sb. spend some money on sth. 2.Sb. pay some money for sth. 3.Sth cost sb. some money. 4.Sth is worth some money. 5.Sth is sold at the price of(三)比較下面的句子非謂語動詞: 去年在洪水中被毀的那座橋已被重新修好了。普通：The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt.高級：The bridge destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt.倒裝句: 工廠絕不應(yīng)該把廢物往河海里倒。普通：Factories should never pour waste into rivers or seas.高級：Neve