高考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)-審題及遣詞造句

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上高 中 英 語(yǔ) 書 面 表 達(dá) () -如何審題、如何遣詞造句1、書面表達(dá)解題步驟：1）、審，即：審定體裁、題材、人 稱、時(shí)態(tài)、結(jié)構(gòu)等； 2）、編，即：編寫要點(diǎn)，按順序列出；3）、寫，即：連詞成句，連句成文；4）、查，即：查內(nèi)容，查格式，查語(yǔ)法，查書寫等。2、如何審題？最近，你校師生幫助輟學(xué)的李明同學(xué)返校。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀介紹這一情況。 李明情況師生情況1、學(xué)習(xí)好；品德好；2、父病故；母病重；3、退學(xué)； 1、震驚；2、捐款、募捐；3、使李明返校學(xué)習(xí)； 注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好。 2、詞數(shù)：100左右。 3、參考詞匯：捐款 offer mo

2、ney; 募捐collect money1、審定體裁、題材；_2、審定人稱；_3、審定時(shí)態(tài)；_4、審定要點(diǎn)；_5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)。_學(xué)生習(xí)作1：Dear editor， Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school.Li Ming was one top students of of our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to

3、 help others. However, he has to leave school. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. The whole school was shocked at the news and anxious about it. Quickly they decided to help him out. Every teacher and student offered money to him and some students went to look after his mother i

4、n turn. At weekends they went out to collect money. With their help, Li Ming will return to school soon. Thats all. Thank you. Yours, Wei Fang3、如何遣詞造句？增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果的技巧（1）. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯: 詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。Practice：1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable._, our journey was comf

5、ortable.2.We all think he is a great man.We all _.3. She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Austria_.（2）. 使用較豐富的句式: 運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。（感嘆句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句 ，倒裝句 ，省略句 ，with短語(yǔ) ，V-ing形式，過去分詞，定語(yǔ)從句 ，各種名詞性從句 ，各種狀語(yǔ)從句 ） 1）掌握5種簡(jiǎn)單句句型1、主語(yǔ) vi.2、主語(yǔ) vt. 賓語(yǔ)；3、主語(yǔ)連系動(dòng)詞表語(yǔ)；4、主語(yǔ) vt. 雙賓語(yǔ)；5、主語(yǔ) vt. 復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)

6、；6、There be 2)書面表達(dá)五大常用句型1、There be 句型；2、It is (was) + 被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分 + that (who) ；3、it 作形式主語(yǔ)或形式賓語(yǔ)的句型；4、to/ in order to/ so as to/ so that/ in order that 表示“目的” 5、sothat/suchthat/soas to/enough to/tooto 表示“結(jié)果”3）、Practice：1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）._l.2. To his surprise, the littl

7、e girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） _3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)_（3）. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞: 使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。 A. 常用的連接詞1）. 表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2）. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是，然而，相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; o

8、n the contrary.3）. 表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4）. 表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless否則: or else5）. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng) 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until一就 : as soon as后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; r

9、ecently 自從 :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on6）. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系首先，最主要的: above all 其次: secondly然后: then; next最后: finally; in the end7）. 換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 8）. 進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9）. 用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you

10、the truth10）.  對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word11）. 其它常用到的副詞 Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally; B. 、Practice：1.Xiao Ming was walking in the street he heard someone cry for help.2. He ad

11、vised that I hire a car I could travel around in the west .3.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. , it may make us fat.4、學(xué)生習(xí)作欣賞與評(píng)比！學(xué)生習(xí)作2Dear editor， Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school. Li Ming is a student of our

12、 school. He is not only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help L

13、i Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to collect money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has already returned to school. With best wishes! Yours, Wei Fang高考作文欣賞給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。習(xí)作1（17分）: I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had

14、many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.習(xí)作2（滿分

15、25分）:Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Neve

16、rtheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.

17、In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.5、Homework:Writing. 聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國(guó)某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：   1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。 2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。 注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。 2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。附：1.作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種

18、： 1開門見山，揭示主題文章一開頭，就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣度假)的開頭是： I Spent my last vacation happily 下面是題為"Honesty"(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開頭： Honesty is one of the best virtuesAn honest man is always trusted and respectedOn the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar"，and is loo

19、ked upon by honest people 2交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開頭在文章的開頭，先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的開頭： The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回憶性的

20、開頭 用回憶的方法來開頭。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的開頭是： I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4概括性的開頭即對(duì)要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個(gè)概括性的介紹。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書的快樂)的開頭： People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. B

21、ut I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5介紹環(huán)境式的開頭即開頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如“An Accident”(一場(chǎng)事故)的開頭是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I w

22、as on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6交待寫作目的的開頭。在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的，如通過文章要表?yè)P(yáng)誰(shuí)，批評(píng)誰(shuí)，或說明一個(gè)什么問題等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的開頭： In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.2.文章結(jié)尾的形式也是多種多樣的，常見的有以下幾種： 1首尾呼應(yīng)，畫龍點(diǎn)睛在文章的結(jié)尾，把含義較深

23、的話放在末尾，以點(diǎn)明主題，深化主題，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her" (我忘不了她)的結(jié)尾： After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people. 2重復(fù)主題句結(jié)尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，

24、達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我愛家鄉(xiāng))的結(jié)尾： I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland. 3. 自然結(jié)尾隨著文章的結(jié)束，文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Fishing”(釣魚)的結(jié)尾： I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late. 4含蓄性