上課用高考短文改錯公開課課件

1、Proof Reading短文改錯短文改錯生活中，人人都會犯錯，有錯就知改。生活中，人人都會犯錯，有錯就知改。寫作中，人人也會犯錯，有錯也要改。寫作中，人人也會犯錯，有錯也要改。Play a gameFind the wrong words and correct them.Be strict at sbBe responsible with sb/sthBe in businessHave sth on commonHave an effect in sbLose the heartMake a great progressThe war was broke outThe accident

2、was happenedIn the hurryShare sth for sbA pair of shoeA lot of equipments General speakingAs soon as possiblywithforoninonthethea awaswaswaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossibleWhat is proof reading?知短文改錯知短文改錯 則百戰(zhàn)不殆則百戰(zhàn)不殆1. correct some grammar mistakes2. connection between sentences3. the main ide

3、a of the whole passage設錯方式？設錯方式？改錯格式？改錯格式？ 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有共有10處錯誤處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及錯誤涉及一個單詞一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。的增加、刪除或修改。 增加增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除刪除：把多余的詞用斜線把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉劃掉。 修改修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞在錯的詞

4、下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：注意： 1每處錯誤及其修改均每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞僅限一詞； 2只允許修改只允許修改10處處，多者，多者(從第從第11處起處起)不計分。不計分。改錯步驟改錯步驟1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行（分句閱讀，逐行找錯）找錯）3. Read the passage again,

5、 check your answers.（檢查核對，敲定終稿）（檢查核對，敲定終稿）6 I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the _ platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys . _ and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them . _ growing up. I am always young when I was staying . _ with them. I know there

6、is not easy to be a teacher. You . _ have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges . _ you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be . _ friends with your pupils and take good care of him. . _ Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win _ respect from them. Though I am

7、a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true. _beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework-Check your answers How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?Proof Reading動詞動詞名詞名詞冠詞冠詞代詞代詞連詞連詞介詞介詞形容形容.副詞副詞近近5年全國新課標卷短文改錯題考點一覽表年

8、全國新課標卷短文改錯題考點一覽表 考查內(nèi)容時間動動詞詞名名詞詞介介詞詞連詞冠詞代詞形容形容詞詞副副詞詞2010年312111012011年322110102012年312102012013年322110102014年11111023小組合作，討論學案中小組合作，討論學案中的突破考點內(nèi)容的突破考點內(nèi)容3minutesQuickly! 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2010全國）全國）On the box was a card say “ 25 cents each”2.The Great Wall of China is one of the largest constructionprojects e

9、ver complete.3.(2012全國全國) I win a national prize for painting last week.4.(2013全國全國) Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.5.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.6.Among the parks trees there are a science hall, an art centre,a gym,andsayingwondrunkcomplete

10、dholdis 歸納總結歸納總結錯誤主要錯在錯誤主要錯在時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、動詞短語、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、動詞短語、非謂語動詞（非謂語動詞（to do/ doing/ done） 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2010全國全國) If they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize.2.(13全國全國) In fact, my grandfather even scared my classmatesaway during they came over to play or do homework with me

11、.3.I will be very glad whether I can work with you.whatwhenififwhether如果如果 條件狀語從句條件狀語從句是否是否 及物動詞后的賓語從句且沒有及物動詞后的賓語從句且沒有or not是否是否 通常引導名詞性從句通常引導名詞性從句 小試牛刀小試牛刀 歸納總結歸納總結錯誤主要錯在錯誤主要錯在 并列連詞和從屬連詞的漏用和錯用，并列連詞和從屬連詞的漏用和錯用，上下文邏輯關系理解錯用上下文邏輯關系理解錯用4.(2011全國全國) I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag

12、from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.5.I received my mothers call telling me she would come, but I had to cancel the appointments with you.andso 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2011全國全國)It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.2.(2014全國全國) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a

13、crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.3.After learning English for several years, I have made agreat progress.4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait foranother 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life

14、.luggagecupsthean名詞錯誤主要錯在名詞錯誤主要錯在 單復數(shù)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)；單復數(shù)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)； 歸納總結歸納總結冠詞錯誤主要錯在冠詞錯誤主要錯在 泛指與特指；泛指與特指；a.an.the 混用混用漏用和多用漏用和多用 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2012全國全國) My father was so pleasing that he suggestedI go to England for a holiday.2.(2014全國全國) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.3.(2014全國全國) We are growi

15、ng wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.pleasedtasty4.Being a member of the Students Union makes me capable of organizing various activities. However, I am convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively.Therefore5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient.patientlywon

16、derful 歸納總結歸納總結錯誤主要錯在錯誤主要錯在 詞性錯用，副詞混用；詞性錯用，副詞混用； 原級、比較級原級、比較級最高級的混用最高級的混用 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2010全國全國)Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.2.To make my dream come true, I have told me over and overagain that Ill concentrate more on studies.3. Every year more and more people st

17、art a stamp collection of your own . 歸納總結歸納總結錯誤主要錯在錯誤主要錯在 hermyself指代錯誤；人稱代詞和反身代詞的誤用；指代錯誤；人稱代詞和反身代詞的誤用；主格賓格；關系代詞和連接代詞（復合主格賓格；關系代詞和連接代詞（復合句，名詞性、定語從句）句，名詞性、定語從句）their 小試牛刀小試牛刀1.(2011全國全國)Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.2.(2014全國全國) Nearly five years ago and with the help by our father, my sist

18、er and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. 歸納總結歸納總結 錯誤主要錯在錯誤主要錯在 inof固定搭配固定搭配聚沙成塔聚沙成塔-Summary動詞動詞時態(tài)時態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)主謂一致主謂一致勿忘記勿忘記還要注意還要注意非謂語非謂語名詞名詞多考多考單復數(shù)單復數(shù)連詞連詞并列并列和和從屬從屬上下邏輯上下邏輯要清楚要清楚形容副詞形容副詞看看詞性詞性代詞代詞前后要前后要一致一致介詞介詞搭配搭配要記牢要記牢還有還有冠詞冠詞a/an/the改完改完復查復查敲定稿敲定稿做完能力提升中的單句做完能力提升中的單句改錯和短文改錯改錯和短文改錯1.

19、 My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested.2. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.3. Since thenfor all these yearswe had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please.4. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near m

20、y house, who was a very much famous writer.abuyinghasainteresting5. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.6. For a while my parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening.7. How many times have you walked out of a

21、 room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?flewleftwhatMy dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They arethree lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For exa