英語寫作 第三周PPT課件

1、English Writing: Week Two 句子寫作技巧第1頁/共27頁句子寫作句子寫作 1. 句子類型 (for revision) 3. 語法病句 4. 寫作病句第2頁/共27頁1. 句子類型句子類型 According to use, sentences are declarative陳述句, interrogative問句, imperative 祈使句or exclamatory感嘆句 According to structure, sentences are simple簡單, compound并列, complex復(fù)合, or compound-complex并列復(fù)合 F

2、rom a rhetorical point of view, sentences are loose松散句, periodic掉尾句, or balanced排比句第3頁/共27頁simple sentencescomplex sentences compound-complex sentencesstructureTypes of sentencescompound sentences第4頁/共27頁 loose sentences periodic sentences balanced sentences rhetoricalTypes of sentences第5頁/共27頁Ident

3、ify the types of sentences Open any English textbook available to you and check up the sentence types contained at any page. Which is more and which is less? Which sentences do you frequently put in use? What should we do?第6頁/共27頁Sentence writing 2 1. 語法病句 2. 寫作病句 3. 句內(nèi)強(qiáng)調(diào)：從屬連接方法第7頁/共27頁1. A. Grammat

4、ical errors from textbooks Dangling modifiers 懸垂修飾語 A modifier that opens a sentence must be followed immediately by the word it is meant to describe. Otherwise, the modifier is said to be dangling. E.g. While reading the newspaper, my dog sat with me on the front steps. Dancing on their hind leg, t

5、he audience cheered wildly as the elephants paraded by.第8頁/共27頁Misplaced modifiers 修飾語錯位修飾語錯位 Misplaced modifiers are words that, because of awkward placement, do not describe what the writer intended them to describe. E.g. He nearly brushed his teeth for twenty minutes every night. The woman picked

6、 up a heavy frying pan with arthritis.關(guān)節(jié)炎 第9頁/共27頁Run-ons 粘連句粘連句 A run-on is two complete thoughts that are run together with no adequate sign given to mark the break between them. Run-ons can be divided into two types: fused sentences混合句 and comma splices逗號誤接句 . E.g. The bus stopped suddenly I spil

7、led coffee all over my shirt. Mario told everyone in the room to be quiet, his favorite show was on.第10頁/共27頁Fragments 不完整句不完整句 Every sentence must have a subject and a verb and must express a complete thought. A word group that lacks a subject or a verb and does not express a complete thought is a

8、fragment. E.g. After I cashed my paycheck. I treated myself to dinner. Whenever I spray deodorant噴灑除臭劑. My cat arches拱起 her back. She thinks she is hearing a hissing enemy. To get to the bus station from here. You have to walk two blocks out of your way. 第11頁/共27頁2. B. Grammatical errors from studen

9、ts writing 現(xiàn)在分詞誤用 1）Taking all the reasons above into account, it is naturally for phone take place the letter at last. 2）After owning this special experience, its easier and more comfortable for those young people to get along with colleagues after graduate. 第12頁/共27頁現(xiàn)在分詞可以獨立使用的成分是現(xiàn)在分詞可以獨立使用的成分是 Co

10、nsidering that six of them can sustain the payment, with their parents permission, its proper to employ anyone they want. Regarding 第13頁/共27頁句子結(jié)構(gòu)問題句子結(jié)構(gòu)問題 Not only but also They reap many benefits from this good habit not only in the age of students but also after entering the workplace. To do the la

11、undry by ourselves leads the right way to not only a well-arranged schedule but also to our diligence. Whats more, keeping a good mood can not only do good to ones own mental health, but also is beneficial to others by radiating sanguine spirit to people around.第14頁/共27頁主語問題與謂語問題主語問題與謂語問題 1. make fr

12、iends online increases possibilities of suffering internet frauds. It maybe killed and replaced by phones in some peoples opinion. 2. Hence, refreshing brains by taking part in physical activities is considerably attribute translation system to the recovery of energy and vigor. 3. These damages can

13、never be return to former appearances. 4. Cars which tourists drive bring more automobile exhaust and broke the original tranquil, with declined of air quality. 5. All my class mates were stare at me. 第15頁/共27頁主謂一致性主謂一致性 1）It stop peoples pressing step and send them to wait then make them think what

14、 all is about. 2）bad person spread harmful messages, such as facetiaes, erotic films, several male net friends even invite girls to have a date and carry out sexual assaults. 3）For this reason, it exist danger to make friends online. 4）He climbs to the balcony of her room, and open the door quietly.

15、 5）He never knew that he is the one to open up a fresh new world.第16頁/共27頁逗號問題逗號問題 1 ） College students are grown-ups, they have every right to make decisions without others judgments. 2）Hiring a cleaner enchants their daily life, then it could be a optimal choice. 3）These days, making friends onlin

16、e came to a trend, young generation think it is a fashion and make them seems popular. 4）This is because having net friends requires more time to be spent in front of computer, thus adolescents apply less time to former friends and participate in less outdoor activities. 5）Xiao Wangs unfortunate exp

17、erience persuasively reveals that with the feature of invisibleness, net friends pose a risk to us. 6）A sweet voice chuckled, the echo is sound again and again.第17頁/共27頁連詞問題連詞問題 1）While I am in favor of that the internet for college students is a blessing than a curse. 2）While others on the opposite

18、 side argue that it is reasonable to do so for we students today are filled with such pressure as well as so little spare time. 3）While Jessie entered this family after both her parents died. 3）Whereas letters can be easily kept in a drawer and taken out whenever one feels like rereading them, which

19、 is of great help especially for the aged to recall their old memory. 4）Whereas that isnt the exclusive view, and we students require a quiet study atom-sphere to take in excessive knowledge facing with intensive competition which is only can be indulged in the study hall. 5）Because people have chan

20、ged and so have the instruments to achieve environment protection.第18頁/共27頁2. 寫作病句寫作病句: 內(nèi)容或形式上不一致內(nèi)容或形式上不一致 1. Du Fu was one of the greatest poets. 2. A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. 3. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman. 3. We hav

21、e great faith and high hopes for her. 4. He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious. 第19頁/共27頁 5. Im going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because he is a dramatist I like. 6. Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach. 7. To get ready for th

22、e trip, all the things she needed were put into a suitcase. 8. She bought several picture books and put them into her bag, which she intended to give to her children.第20頁/共27頁 9. An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize. 10. Those who wish to take Linguistics are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper. 11. Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. Dont rely on your teachers help. 12. She reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exer