四級(jí)作文講解

1、writingaccording to the direction, write down outline of the following subjects Shopping on the Internet 1. 現(xiàn)在流行網(wǎng)上購物 2. 網(wǎng)上購物的利與弊 3. 我的觀點(diǎn) Campus Certificates Craze 1. 目前大學(xué)生熱衷于考取各種各樣的證書， “考證熱”成為潮流 2. 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因 3. 你的看法 Opinion on Campus Marriage 1. 國家允許在校學(xué)生結(jié)婚 2. 在校學(xué)生結(jié)婚對學(xué)生的影響 3. 你的觀點(diǎn)應(yīng)用文、議論文諺語型、說明文、Lette

2、r (申請工作、學(xué)校，反映問題等）Argumentation （對立觀點(diǎn)、說明利弊） Proverbs（諺語的涵義）Exposition （圖表寫作、分析問題原因、解決問題方法等）2004年6月四級(jí)作文題及范文Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following g

3、uidelines: Your role: a tour guide Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: some welcoming words the schedule for the day a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.) You should make the introduction inte

4、resting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.2005年1月四級(jí)作文題Directions: A Campaign Speech 1、你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件（能力，性格，愛好）可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作？ 2、 如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么？2005年6月18日英語四級(jí)作文Teachers Day ： 1. 向老師致以節(jié)日的問候。2. 回憶件老師的教誨中難忘的事情。3. 我如何報(bào)答老師。2005年12月24日英語四級(jí)作文及范文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 mi

5、nutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below : 1名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)2校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放，人們看法不同3我認(rèn)為2006年6月英語四級(jí)作文Directions:For this part ,you are allowed 30minute to write a short essay on the topic of st

6、udents selecting their lectures.You should write at least 120 words following the outline when bellow:1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師2.學(xué)生選擇教師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素3.學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題2006年12月23日大學(xué)英語新四級(jí)(CET-4)真題試卷Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selectin

7、g their lectures. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜看春節(jié)晚會(huì)2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)3.我的看法2007年6月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)試題及參考答案Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club. You should write at least 120 words follow

8、ing the outline given bellow:歡迎辭，歡迎加入俱樂部。標(biāo)題：Welcome to our club書寫提綱：1.表達(dá)你的歡迎；2.對你們俱樂部作一個(gè)簡要介紹。2007.12 CET4What electives to choose1. 各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2. 學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3. 以你自己為例2008.6 CET4Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Apology according to the outline given

9、below. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1.娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣2.娛樂活動(dòng)可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性3.作為大學(xué)生，我的看法 2.稱呼(頭銜/職位+姓氏) Dear Professor xx,關(guān)系密切，比如朋友 Dear + 名字，（不是姓）如給某個(gè)機(jī)構(gòu)或者不認(rèn)識(shí)的人寫信 Dear Sir,如不知道對方的性別時(shí) Dear Sir or Madam,以“，”結(jié)尾3.正文縮進(jìn)式：每個(gè)的段落開頭空兩格分段分點(diǎn)寫，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰日期無論要求中有無寫明，日期一定要給出MM/

10、DD/YYDec.27th, 2008 書信簡介5.簽名位于正文下一，二行處，中間偏右，首單詞字母大寫，句末用“，”常用： Yours ever/sincerely/truly姓名在下方，不要任何標(biāo)點(diǎn)4.結(jié)束語一句就足夠常用：Best wishes to you. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Dec.27th, 2008Dear xx , (3-5) _. _. Best wishes to you. Yours sincerely, xx 書信作文中的注意事項(xiàng)1.避免出現(xiàn)口語化表達(dá)及簡寫e.g. Hello How are you

11、? Im xx. (開頭) OK, Thats all. Gook luck. Bye. （結(jié)束）2.上下文連貫e.g. First.SecondLast On the one handOn the other hand To begin within addition 3. 全文時(shí)態(tài)一致 College life gives me it offered me錯(cuò)句：1. I come true my dream.2. I was enter the college.3. I am very think you.4. I have not a lot of classes.5. My room

12、have four people.6. I become more and more better.7. more and more farModels for letters申請工作反映問題求職申請信首先表明寫信目的、所需要的工 作。第二段重點(diǎn)介紹本人的才干和工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)。最后希望能有面試的機(jī)會(huì) Dec. 27th, 2008Dear sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show my interest in the position you advertise in the Sunday Paper for a laboratory assist

13、ant. Next year I will receive a Bachelors degree in Chemistry, and I believe my major and experience closely parallel our requirements. As the resume indicates, I have taken many courses in chemistry and developed a great deal of practical expertise, and can, at this point, perform most laboratory p

14、rocedures with little or no difficulty. Because my primary interest is in polymer chemistry, I feel assured that I could carry out any assignments you would give me. Besides taking courses, I have done other work in chemistry. During the past two years at the university, I have been working in the l

15、aboratory store rooms of the Chemistry Department. In addition, I spent last summer helping Dr. Wang do research in quantum chemistry. I would welcome the opportunity to join your staff because you enjoy a reputation. Would you please arrange an interview at your earliest convenience? I am looking f

16、orward to the interview. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Jeff反映問題信件（投訴信）首先表明寫信目的，提出問題簡述問題帶來的危害。分析問題的原因。建議（強(qiáng)烈要求）解決問題，并倡議（強(qiáng)烈對方）解決方法。Dec.27th, 2008 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to submit my opinion and proposal of how to eliminate the harmfulness of fake commodities be

17、cause I find it quite a necessity for an attentive and conscientious citizen to do so. There are many factors which give rise to the problem. I will venture to explore some of the most conspicuous ones. Firstly, there is extremely high profit of producing the selling fake commodities. Secondly, ther

18、e is a lack of an effective rule to regulate them. Finally, . While the problem can not be solved immediately, still there are ways out. The most efficient one is that the government take measures to fight with fake commodities. Another is every customer should join in the campaign to stay away from

19、 fake products and protect their own interest. If we remain to the problem, there is every chance that the problem will cause negative effects to the development of economy. Therefore, I sincerely wish that you could attach adequate importance to what Ive proposed and take proper actions accordingly

20、. Thank your for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Jeff議論文寫作結(jié)構(gòu)安排要領(lǐng)：“提出問題分析問題解決問題”第一段： 說明現(xiàn)狀第二段： 列舉原因第三段：歸納結(jié)論、提出建議（My view/solution）Argumentation 型 1）觀點(diǎn)對立型 Peoples opinions about _(主題) vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that _(觀點(diǎn)A). A case in point is that_(支持觀點(diǎn)A的例子). Others may

21、have a quite different view. According to them, _( 觀點(diǎn)B). They point out that _(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由1). In addition, _( 支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由2). As far as I am concerned, I agree with _(你的觀點(diǎn)). It is true that _, but I think, _(重申你的觀點(diǎn)). Are Pets Good for People?1. 有人認(rèn)為養(yǎng)寵物好2. 有人認(rèn)為養(yǎng)寵物不好3. 我的觀點(diǎn)。 Peoples opinion about whether pet

22、s are good for people vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that the great virtue of pets is that they can keep us company, and we all need companions to keep us feeling happy. A case inpoint is that a cat or a dog can comfort us at times when human words dont help. Others may have a

23、 quite different view. According to them, keeping pets is just a waste of time and resources. They point out that some pets can cause serious illness. In addition, some people nowadays are crazy about pets that they even neglect caring for others health and the environment of the public places. As f

24、ar as I am concerned, I agree with the latter argument. It is true that pets can keep us feeling happy, but I think, we should think of others happiness and health. Pets are not good for the benefit of all people.2)說明利弊型例題：Video Games1.玩電子游戲機(jī)有許多好處2.但也有些壞處3.我的看法 Nowadays many people prefer playing vi

25、deo games because it playsa significant role in our leisure time. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. To begin with, they bring great pleasures to youngsters,train them to respond quickly. In addition, they stimulate their imagination and interest in electronics and computer science. B

26、ut everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are alsoapparent. Some young people, especially school children, spend too much time playing them. To make matters worse, it will do harm to their health and eyes and affect their school achievements. In conclusion, whatever effects they ha

27、ve, one thing is certain, onlyIf one has enough self-control, can he benefit from video games.諺語型例題：Haste Makes Waste1、為什么“欲速則不達(dá)”？2、 試舉例說明。第一段：對諺語的理解，開門見山的引出諺語， 并對其進(jìn)行解釋第二段：例證一，可以使用學(xué)習(xí)，生活中的事例 來說明其寓意，若有必要，引用第二個(gè) 例證進(jìn)一步說明第三段：結(jié)束全文，總結(jié)句可以與文章主題呼應(yīng) 格言諺語型格言諺語型范文： Haste Makes Waste Haste makes waste. This is a pr

28、overb full of logic. By this proverb, it is meant that if we are to accomplish anything, we must do it step by step. If we hope to achieve our desired goal, we have to do some solid, steady, and down-to-earth work. In other words, the more we hurry, the more likely we are to make errors. Sometimes,

29、too hasty an action may well result in a complete failure. Examples can easily be found to make this point clearer. A case in this point is a well known Chinese story“ trying to help the shoots grow by pulling”. It is said that a man in ancient China was worried that the shoots of his crops might no

30、t grow fast enough, so he pulled every one of them a bit upward, only to find that they all withered away. His haste, then, caused a great loss. Another case is that Rome was not built in a day and haste does not pay. Whatever you do, please remember the saying “Haste makes waste”. If you understand

31、 it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily benefit a lot from it.Exposition解釋說明型1. Hot Issue( 模板(1) (2)的選用依照題目要求而定。題目要求解決方法，選（1）；題目要求分析原因，選（2）例題(1)：How to Solve the Traffic Problems 1. 交通事故經(jīng)常發(fā)生。 2. 解決交通問題方法很多。 3. 我的看法。范文：How to Solve the Traffic Problems In most of the big cities, wit

32、h the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the heavier and heavier traffic. Accordingly, there are quite a few people who get involved in the road accidents and some of them even lose their lives. Confronted with the increasing traffic problems, we should take a s

33、eries of effective measures to cope with the situations. For one thing, we may widen main roads. For another, we may open up more bus lines, if the main streets are widened, traffic jams will be decreased and it will be convenient for drivers to drive. If we open up more bus lines in downtown areas,

34、 citizens will have several choices for their destinations if they take buses. Finally, we can also build subways. As far as I am concerned, we must build more overpasses, underpasses gallop bridges and open up more bus lines to decrease the number of cars, trucks and bicycles in the main streets. C

35、onsequently, I am confident that a bright future is awaiting us because these measures help reduce traffic problems effectively.例題(2) ：Brain Drain1. 現(xiàn)在人才外流的現(xiàn)象越來越嚴(yán)重。2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因。3. 解決辦法。范文： Brain Drain Nowadays with the advent of globalization, a number of people have gone abroad with still more read

36、y to go. And we have to face a problem that some of them have been staying overseas beyond their time limit, although many colleges and universities are wringing their hands over the lack of talented people. One may wonder: what has led to the departure of many intellectuals? I will venture to explo

37、re the reasons as follows. To start with, some people go abroad to seek fortune, but most of them emigrate because they cant bring their talent into full play in their motherland. Backward management and unreasonable distribution system together with poor living and working conditions have caused th

38、e outflow. Whats more, they joined the rush abroad to further their studies and keep up with the latest academic development. In addition, the overseas environment offers a better chance to better themselves and to move upward. In view of the seriousness of the problems, effective measures should be

39、 taken. First, it is time that we created a better environment for their development. For another, the government should issue a package of benefits to attract them to return and contribute to the future of our country.圖表類圖表作文提示部分包括圖表和文字要點(diǎn)提示兩部分。圖表的類型主要有：圓形（餅型）圖（piechart）、柱形圖(直型圖)（graph）、曲線圖（chart）和數(shù)

40、據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)表(表格)（table）。圖表作文的寫作內(nèi)容包括綜合理解、客觀詳述和主觀表達(dá)。 圖表類寫作要領(lǐng)： 1、審題：分析圖表中出現(xiàn)的文字，分析圖表中現(xiàn)象的原因、可能的發(fā)展趨勢 2、描述數(shù)據(jù)時(shí)抓住重點(diǎn)，不要面面俱到，抓住極端點(diǎn)，如最好、最壞、最多、少 3、主題句要明確，放文章開頭例1：Student Use of Computers (2002.6)Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should

41、write ate least 120 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 上圖所示為某校大學(xué)生平均每周使用計(jì)算機(jī)的時(shí)間，描述其變化請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計(jì)算機(jī)的用途、價(jià)格或社會(huì)發(fā)展等方面加以說明）你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計(jì)算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題模板一As is clearly shown in the chart, _ .(圖表整體描述，指明時(shí)間段) Especially, _. (指出突出的變化)There are three factors leading to the

42、change.(分析原因) To begin with, _.(原因1) In addition, _ .(原因2) For example, _ . Last but not least, _ .(原因3)To sum up, _( 簡要總結(jié))As for me, _. (你的觀點(diǎn)) On the one hand, _. On the other hand, _. In brief, _. (總結(jié)）例文 As is clearly shown in the chart, the average number of hours a student spent on computers inc

43、reased from two to four per week form 1990 to 1995. Especially, the number reached approximately 14 hours per week in 2002. Why are there such great changes during these years?There are three factors leading to this phenomenon. To begin with, because of the sharp decline in the price of computers, m

44、ost college students now can afford to buy one. In addition, the internet provides access to various kinds of information students are interested in. Last but not least, playing computer games or surfing online is relaxing. To sum up, low price, easy access to information and wide use make students

45、use computers a lot.例文As for me, student use of computers is a double-edged sword. On the one hand, it is a good helper in searching for information, drawing pictures, etc. On the other hand, various computer games might distract students from their studies. In brief, computers can serve us well if

46、they are used in the right way.例文圖表型： How People Spent Their Holidays1. 上圖所示為1990、1995、2000年某城市人們度假方式 的情況，請描述其變化：2. 請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因。3. 得出結(jié)論。Year 1990 1995 2000Traveling 37% 51% 76%Staying at home 63% 49% 24%圖表范文: How People Spent Their Holidays As is seen from the table, the past decade have witnessed

47、dramatic changes in the way people spent their holiday between 1990 and 2000. In 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure dropped considerably to 24% in 2000. It can be observed easily that people tended to be more and more mobile, and they wanted to get entertainment in th

48、e outside world. There are many reasons responsible for these changes. In the following paragraphs, Ill venture to explore the reasons. For one thing,with the rapid development of economy, people earn by far more money than they used to. Thus, people are able to afford traveling expenses. For anothe

49、r, people think it important to get well-informed about the outside world in this new era when everything is on the move. Traveling, of course, is a sure way to achieve this goal. In addition, in this competitive society, people are usually under great stress. However, it is not difficult to find traveling an effective way to relieve peoples stress and get relaxation. Last but not the least, by traveling outside, people are close to nature, which is not only beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In conclusion, people prefer to go traveling rather than stay at