初中英語 滬教牛津版 9B U3 Writing：A day in the life of Gary Green 課件

1、 授課教師：馬雪夢深圳市南山外國語學(xué)校（集團(tuán)）高新中學(xué)Unit 3 The EnvironmentWritingLearning AimsAt the end of this class, students can improve their composition byknowing the purpose of the article.writing in good stucture.using proper words and phrases.What kind of environmental problem is in the video?What is the effect of

2、the pollution?Lets watchAir pollution.Birds, fish and trees died because of the waste gases.Lets discussWhat can we do to be green in our daily life?Plant more treesSave waterUse recycled paperConsumeless electricityTake public transportationCherish your stuffTurn off lightsRide a bicycleLets discus

3、sWriting Task Your school is going to encourage students to protect the environment by introducing a cartoon character Gary Green. He will act as a role model for the students.Writing Steps寫作意圖結(jié)構(gòu)框架內(nèi)容草稿PurposeStructureContentsDraft1234What is the purpose of your writing? Underline the best answer. To

4、 (inform/encourage/criticize) readers to protect the environment in their daily life. Step 1: Purpose Opening Body EndingStep 2: Structure Introduce the background/purpose of the article.The ways Gary do to protect the environment.Garys suggestions for people.no paragraghopeningbodyendingWell begun

5、is half done.All details should be stated well.Effective ending is important.Step 3: ContentsOpeningBodyEnding 你校英語社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語賽， 就“是否應(yīng)該縮短初中生在校時間為8小時”這一論題進(jìn)行辯論，請你作為正方代表，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.保證充足睡眠 2. 提高學(xué)習(xí)效率 3. 增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時間 As a junior high school student, I think this is right, because hard study is right but l

6、ess sleep will make us tired. The reason why we should do this are: As a junior high school student, I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to study should be reduced to 8 hours a day, the main reasons are following:Which opening do you like better?The second one provided useful backgro

7、und information in beautiful sentences.Step 3: OpeningStep 3: BodyWhat does Gary Green do in the morning?How does he go to school?He takes a shower instead of a bath. He rides a bike to school.save watersave energy Step 3: BodyWhat does Gary Green do after he washes his hands?He turns off the tap af

8、ter he washes his hands. What does Gary Green do when he leaves the classroom?He switches off the lights when he leaves the classroom.save watersave energy Step 3: BodyWhat does Gary Green do when he does his homework?He uses both sides of the paper.What does Gary Green think people should do?All pe

9、ople should be green in order to protect the environment.save energyHe switches off the light when he turns on the table lamp. Step 3: Words Banktake a shower instead ofturn off the tapswitch off the lightsuse both sides of the paperbecause, because of, thanks tobut, however, on the contrarybesides,

10、 whats more, in addition for example, such as, for instance Step 3: Transition Words and Phrases因果關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系羅列增加舉例關(guān)系so that, in order to, so as toin general, in brief, in a wordfirstly, secondly,thirdly though,even though,although Step 3: Transition Words and Phrases目的關(guān)系歸納關(guān)系時間序列讓步關(guān)系 FluencyEasy to readI

11、n a word, the whole society should take action to.In my opinion, all of us should come to realize.Its difficult to say.is right or not, but.Step 3: Some Common EndingsCall to actionRepeat ideasSummarize the topicStep 4: Draft1. You learn to write by writing.2. There is no good writing; only good rew

12、riting.3. Good handwriting means a lot.1. Now people get a lot of informations on TV. information2.What good time we had last night!a3. Child as he is, but he knows a lot.4. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.particularlyStep 4: Check for Errors Which one do you prefer?Lets conclude寫作意圖結(jié)構(gòu)框架內(nèi)容草稿PurposeStructureContentsDraft1234PurposeStructureContentsDose your composition achieve the writin