非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中應(yīng)用

1、關(guān)于非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用第一張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月閱卷老師喜歡的句子 、同位語結(jié)構(gòu)、with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡潔、通順；盡量使用動(dòng)詞短語和詞組、定語從句等復(fù)合句，修辭潤色文章。使用分詞短語(非謂語動(dòng)詞）第二張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Non- finite Verbs in writing非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用第三張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . 2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an e

2、njoyable thing. 3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook. Correction寫作中非謂語動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤Seenclimbingcalling第四張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月1. When she heard the news, she burst into crying._ the news, she burst into crying.2. Australia is located on the west coast of the Pacific. Austr

3、alia is the largest country in Oceania.Australia， _ _ the west coast of the Pacific， is the largest country in Oceania.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句子Hearinglocated on 第五張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月3. Though I admit what he has said, I still doubt he didnt do his best. _ _ _ _ _, I still doubt he didnt do his best.4. Because I

4、 missed the bus, I went to school late. _ _ _, I went to school late.Admitting what he hassaidMissing the bus第六張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月5.When I was walking in the street , I saw him. _ in the street , I saw him. 6.If you work hard,_hard , you will succeed. WalkingWorking第七張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月7.Althoug

5、h he had failed many times , he didnt lose heart. _many times , he didnt lose heart.8.As she was scolded by the teacher, the girl sat there without lifting her head._ ,the girl sat there without lifting her head.Having failedScolded by the teacher第八張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月例文(1)： Getting back what you h

6、ave lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed(刻). Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to

7、 my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat. Enjoy two essays第九張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月There is always someone behind us, caring about us .On everyday morning, walking out of the doorway to go to school,we may be told to pay attention to the traffic, not to fight o

8、r quarrel with others, and may even be told to chew slowly at table. Being a child ,we may feel tired of those words.when we come home after school, she has tried her best to provide what she has for us. Even if what we need is just a glass of water, she will alsokeep it in mind. 例文(2)第十張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)

9、作于2022年6月When noticing her grey hairs and the wrinkles around her eyes, I realize I have grown up while she is no longer young.Its time that I should do something for her, even only giving her back somemassage or making a cup of tea for her can make her feel that she seems to be the happiest woman i

10、n the world. Do you know who she is? She is our Mom.第十一張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Fun time!Pick out a picture and finish the task 第十二張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月play musicmakehappy Playing music makes them happy.make a sentence using nonfinite verbs第十三張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月_ by the reporter from CCTV,the man said

11、 he was very happy. (interview) Interviewed Finish the sentence using nonfinite verbs第十四張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月e.g. Having finished my homework, I went on to help my parents.listen to / burst out laughingHaving listened to the song called “Gangnam style”, we burst out laughing.Follow the example and m

12、ake a sentence.第十五張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月3. Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters. Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第十六張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Combine the following sentences1. As soon as they arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at t

13、he school, they felt the happy atmosphere.第十七張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月2. If I am given another chance. I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed.第十八張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月3. He wants to improve his English(目的) He studies harder. To improve his English, he studies harder.第十九張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月4

14、.When he left the classroom, he didnt say goodbye to me.5. Because he is ill, he cant attend the meeting. When leaving the classroom, he didnt say goodbye to me. Being ill, he cant attend the meeting.第二十張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月6.The policeman saw the thief who was stealing a bike.7. The boys who swam i

15、n the river were in danger.The policeman saw the thief stealing a bike. The boys swimming in the river were in danger第二十一張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月8.Because he hadnt seen the film before, he went to the cinema.Not having seen the film before, he went to the cinema.第二十二張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子1.

16、因?yàn)樵谶@國家沒有朋友，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。用連詞becauseBecause she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Having no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.第二十三張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月2.這本用簡易英語寫成的書很容易讀懂用定語從句 The book, is easy to understand.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) The book , is easy

17、to understand用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子which was written in simple English, written in simple English,第二十四張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月3. 他們是來自于幾個(gè)國家的游客。用定語從句 They are visitors who come from several countries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)They are visitors coming from several countries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第二十五張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月4.發(fā)現(xiàn)他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開

18、心。用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Finding his best friend frustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第二十六張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more hea

19、lthy. It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)合并下列句子用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第二十七張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get highe

20、r marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章第二十八張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont

21、work hard at their lessons.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章第二十九張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. They cheat to get higher marks so that they c

22、an be praised or even admired. 用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章第三十張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章第三十一張，P

23、PT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exam

24、s.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化后的文章第三十二張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月要求：1. 用2- 3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性necessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the base for our further study and work.（2011高考模擬）高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣 。Having a try第三十三張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月翻譯: 高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣 。Step1：

25、拆分成幾個(gè)簡單句(中文)高考臨近。 (National College Entrance Examination) 保持良好的心態(tài)很重要。 (have a right attitude)它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。Step2：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡單句National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a try第三十四張，PPT

26、共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Step3：合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties

27、 bravely.Sentence1:Having a try第三十五張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Step3：合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps u

28、s to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip: Try to use differentways to express.Having a try第三十六張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月要求：1. 用2- 3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 2- 3句話要有連貫性（2011高考模擬）Having a trynecessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the base for our further study and work.第三十七張，P

29、PT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Having a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep .Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.第三十八張，PPT共四十九頁，

30、創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.Having a try第三十九張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 With College Entrance Examinati

31、on coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work. Besides, do

32、ing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health. Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet.第四十張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月二. 使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力四. 嘗試多 樣化表達(dá)方式一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力強(qiáng)調(diào)句With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)定語從句名詞性從句(主賓表同從句)各種狀語從句被動(dòng)語態(tài)第四十一張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月1. beggar, lie, sleep2. Mr.

33、 Li, hurry, pay no attention to3. stick out，trip over(絆倒) , angry A beggar第四十二張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月1. 一天，一個(gè)乞丐在路邊討錢，但是李先生匆忙趕路上班，沒有注意到那個(gè)乞丐。2. 結(jié)果這個(gè)乞丐很生氣，伸出拐杖，差點(diǎn)把李先 生絆倒了。3. 意識(shí)到他是個(gè)殘疾人，李先生想給他一些錢。4.于是他拿出了一張百元鈔票,突然一陣風(fēng)把鈔票吹到 了空中。5. 看到被風(fēng)吹到空中的百元鈔票，乞丐迅速跳起來去 追那張鈔票，使李先生非常驚訝。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：用五個(gè)句子寫出下列信息點(diǎn)，注意非謂語和復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用。第四十三張，PPT

34、共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月A beggarWriting2. Mr Li hurried home, paying no attention to a beggar.1. The beggar lay on the ground, sleeping.3. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs ,tripping over Mr Li, which made him very angry. Make an ending第四十四張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 Exchange and discuss your partners composition, following the criteria.Pair work第四十五張，PPT共四十九頁，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 A beggar One day, hurrying home, Mr. Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground, sleeping. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping Mr. Li over, which made him very a