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1、How to write a letter for adviceQIN2011.9.8Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.如何算是一篇好文章？覆蓋了所有的要點應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。要點全詞匯,句型 （高級）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語言地道連接詞Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5

2、 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.假如你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點：參考詞匯: 穿行 thread ones way 天橋 overpass 問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家長接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 As

3、pose Pty Ltd.第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?題材：人稱 Person (The first/ third person)時態(tài)：Tense (the simple present tense)要點： a letterEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然

4、十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的題材是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？ (order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài)) (when)第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.建議信篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 說明建議的內(nèi)容； 提出具體建議的原因； 指出采納建議的益處。注意事項：語言要委婉、禮

5、貌，顧及對方感受。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.適當(dāng)運用模板Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to

6、(引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaEvalu

7、ation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope

8、youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家長接送。交通更擁擠

9、；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對著大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.Our school stand

10、s next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.推薦句型：There be+并列句非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.潤色小建議Next to a primary scho

11、ol將介詞短語提前（全倒裝） stands/lies/is our school, faced with / facing a main street.可將stand next to替換為高級詞匯/短語be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to與毗鄰在對面 be opposite toEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Th

12、e traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙.traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.so. thatwith結(jié)構(gòu)With so many cars and buses going on the road, Evaluation only.Created with Aspos

13、e.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.潤色小建議“高峰期”可意譯:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙”可譯為:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被堵塞/塞滿Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011

14、Aspose Pty Ltd. 加之孩子小,家長接送,交通更擁擠 sendto, fetch. , 非謂語結(jié)構(gòu).Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier. , which.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.

15、Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.加之孩子小，家長接送，交通更擁擠Whats more, pick up. make.To make things worse/ whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school a

16、nd fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NE

17、T 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意譯為： so. that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替換為：causing, leading to, re

18、sulting in“sendfetch” 可替換為短語：pick up潤色小建議Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型It is +adj.

19、for to do.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.潤色小建議2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 靈活運用其它的短語進行意譯： 適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞： it is extremely dan

20、gerous，it is of great/ tremendous dangerEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表語從句固定句型 It is high time that(虛擬語氣

21、)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.簡單句Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.1. In order to release the stress of t

22、raffic problems, 潤色小建議2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government shouldA. 適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B. 語義的意譯3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of t

23、raffic, it is significant to buildC. 添加形容詞和副詞I strongly suggest, active/effective measuresEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.第三步. 連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. _, its crammed wi

24、th cars during the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A. As a consequence B. According to th

25、e phenomenon stated above C. When it comes to traffic jamsD. What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2

26、011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5

27、 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.不推薦字體Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.優(yōu)秀作文范例1優(yōu)點：考生能靈活地處理各個信息點，大量運用非謂語，介詞短語，從句，連詞等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個性和語言功底。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .

28、Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運用there be句型，介詞短語，從句，非謂語，套用句式等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點：考生運用倒裝句，so that句式，精彩的表達以及虛擬語氣等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。Evaluation only.Created

29、 with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.優(yōu)秀作文范例4優(yōu)點：該考生最大的特色是運用了大量的高級詞匯等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語言底蘊。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Cl

30、ient Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.優(yōu)秀作文范例5Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.優(yōu)秀作文范例6Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Congestion n. 阻塞, 擁擠, 充

31、血Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.適當(dāng)運用模板Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyrig

32、ht 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(依我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this mat

33、ter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important t

34、o . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyrigh