英語專業(yè)四級寫作課件

1、英語專業(yè)四級寫作英語專業(yè)四級寫作專業(yè)英語四級作文評分標準(standards of grading)一星級第1 級者得3-5 分,其特征是:“幾乎無交流”,具體表現(xiàn)為“根本沒有滿足寫作要求。既無結構,又無內(nèi)在邏輯。幾乎所有的句子都存在單詞,拼寫,標點或句法方面的錯誤。缺乏準確地使用語言的能力。即使相當努力地閱讀,大部分行文仍然難以理解?！睂I(yè)英語四級作文評分標準(standards of grad二星級第2 級者得6-8 分,其特征是:“錯誤頻出,交流有礙”,具體表現(xiàn)為“文章只是滿足了部分寫作要求。文章結構差,在流暢,清晰,一致和支撐諸方面時有缺欠。在單詞,拼寫,標點或句法方面錯誤百出。表明作

2、者準確地使用語言的能力有限。全文閱讀有一定的障礙?！倍羌壍? 級者得6-8 分,其特征是:“錯誤頻出,交流有礙三星級第3 級者得9-11 分,其特征是:“交流尚可,稍有錯誤”, 具體表現(xiàn)為“文章正確地滿足了大部分的寫作要求。盡管在流暢,清晰,一致和支撐方面偶有欠缺,總體而言,結構展開充分。盡管文章在單詞,拼寫,標點或句法方面偶有錯誤,并時而導致語意模糊,但作文在一定程度上表明作者具有比較準確地使用語言的能力。全文閱讀偶有障礙?！比羌壍? 級者得9-11 分,其特征是:“交流尚可,稍有錯四星級第4 級者得14 - 12 分,其特征是:“近乎無誤的良好交流”,具體表現(xiàn)為“盡管各部分之間有所起伏

3、,但文章正確地滿足了幾乎所有的寫作要求。一般地講,有主題,有論證,結構展開充分,邏輯嚴緊。相對來講,很少單詞,拼寫,標點或句法方面的錯誤。作文表明作者具有準確地使用語言的能力。全文閱讀很少障礙。”四星級第4 級者得14 - 12 分,其特征是:“近乎無誤的 五星級第5 級者得15 分,其特征是:“準確高效的交流”,具體表現(xiàn)為“文章富有成效地滿足了寫作要求。結構展開充分,邏輯嚴緊,主題明確,論證充分詳實。無單詞,拼寫,標點或句法方面的錯誤。作文表明作者具有相當?shù)臏蚀_地使用語言的能力。全文閱讀無障礙。” 五星級第5 級者得15 分,其特征是:“準確高效的交流”StructureTitle： The

4、 first letters of the first word and all the content words should be capitalizede.g. Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? (Title)Part I:Introduction (about 60 words)Part II:Body (about 100 words)Part II:Conclusion (about 40 words)StructureTitle： The first lettIn the first part, you should sta

5、te specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.In the last part, bring what your have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. In the first part, you should MOREHandwritingClear structure (3 or 4 paragraphs)No spelling mistakes N

6、o or less grammar mistakesAvoid complex sentencesCheckMOREHandwriting寫作構思示意圖標題引論正文結論1 回應論題或者闡述別人觀點 2 話題一轉(zhuǎn)，闡述自己的看法觀點1 觀點2 同上1 觀點陳述2 例子一句話總結。指出問題所在，提出建議。觀點3 不推薦寫作構思示意圖標題引論正文結論1 回應論題或者闡述別人觀點 Example (TEM 4 2009)Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists ma

7、y bring harm to the environment, while others dont think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?Example (TEM 4 2009)Tourism isModel Essay范文Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? (Ti

8、tle)Model Essay范文Will Tourism BrinIntroductionIn recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. (others viewpoints)But what these people fail to see is that tourism may

9、bring about a disastrous impact on our environment. As for me, Im firmly convinced that too many tourists bring harm to the environment. (my viewpoint)IntroductionIn recent years, BodyThe bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways. (introductory sentence 引語)

10、BodyThe bad impact of tourism One way is the process of exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This process usually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mount

11、ainous places, trees are being cut down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land slides and mud-rock flows come up. viewpointFacts and evidencesOne way is the process of explAnother way the development of tourism has damaged the environment occurs when tou

12、rists go to scenic spots. Some tourists dont have the awareness to protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill the local wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment. Evidence 1Evidence 2viewpointAnother way the dev

13、elopment ofConclusionIt is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. (what and why?)We must keep in mind that (Because)too much tourists bring harm to the environment. (What to suggest?)We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing the pollution

14、they cause to a minimum.ConclusionIt is wrong to sacriStudents model 學生范文0815 Du Wanru0816 Hong JingruStudents model 學生范文0815 Du WaWill Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? -0815 Du Wanru In the age of information and communication, tourism plays an important role. It has become a popular global l

15、eisure activity, and brings many benefits to our country. But with the development of our tourism, a lot of problems have surfaced. As as I am concerned, I am greatly convinced that too much tourism brings harm to the environment.( Introduction)Will Tourism Bring Harm to theBody Among various kinds

16、of bad apects, the following ones should be mentioned. For one thing, when visiting, many tourists will litter about and thus polluting our environment. For another, to attract more tourists, more and more buildings and facilities will be built and thus occupy a lot of land and thousands of trees wi

17、ll be cut down. And what seems to be the trouble is that some facilities will do harm to our environment.Body Among various kinds of baWhen benefiting from the tourism, we should not neglect its influence on the environment. It can be easily proved that sacrificing the environment for the booming of

18、 tourism is surely wrong. Only with the balance between the tourism and the environment can we really benefit. We should always keep in mind that too much tourism will bring harm to the environment and think twice before developing tourism, try our best to reduce the pollution. (Conclusion)When bene

19、fiting from the touriWill Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?-0816 Hong JingruWith the development of Chinese tourism, more and more foreign tourists have been flowing into China for a visit. And this produces many positive effects, like progress, prosperity, employment and stability on our econo

20、my and to our government. At the same time, it leads our country to have better reputation. Every coin has two sides.We all fail to see the bad effects that it may cause to our environment. We have to sacrifice and give up our natural beauty and environment to pay for all our benefits.(introduction)

21、Will Tourism Bring Harm to theFirst is the exploiting scenic spots, transportation and hotels. In order to attract more tourists, we need to exploit more scenic spots, hotels and restaurants that lead many space to be needed. Forests, mountains and trees were removed and cut down. Animals and living

22、 organisms disappear or being eaten, this process leads to the ecological imbanlance.First is the exploiting scenicSecond is the tourism. The more tourists, the more deterioration. Some tourists dont have the awareness to protect our environment. They simply throw garbage everywhere. Some of them ev

23、en step on the grass and pluck the flowers, which is distinctly not allowed. And these will also destroy the beauty of the scenic spots.Second is the tourism. The morThird is the resources and the wild animals. In order to attract more tourists and gain more profits, some local people used to kill t

24、he wild life. However, this causes the wild animals to become even rarer.Third is the resources and theconclusionIn my opinion, we can continually promote tourism but at the same time we should also be aware of the ecological balance and minimize the pollution that people cause. The government shoul

25、d also be tough on those who kill and eat wild life. conclusionIn my opinion, we c論文框架舉例frameworkWith unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that. On the other

26、 side is the view that. In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later . There is no denying that .has many positive effects. To begin with,.Secondly, . Finally, . However, every coin has its two sides. .is no exception. Many opponents say that . To conclude, . 論文框架舉例frameworkWith unpreceden文章建構實

27、用句型useful sentences文章建構實用句型useful sentencesIntroduction Recently the issue of whether or not . has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public 近來，是否_的問題已經(jīng)非常明確而且引起了社會的廣泛關注。 Recently, the issue of . has been brought into public focus. 近來，_的問題引起了社會的廣泛關注。Introduction The issue wheth

28、er it is good or not to . has aroused a heated discussion all over the country._的利與弊已在全國范圍內(nèi)引起熱烈的討論。At present, some people think .while others claim .Both sides have their merits. 目前，一些人認為_而另一些人則認為_。其實，兩種觀點都其可取之處。英語專業(yè)四級寫作When asked ., some people think. while some prefer. 說到_，有人認為_，而另一些人則認為_ 。Just a

29、s the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”. It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person. 俗話說，“人多意見雜。不同的人對此有不同的看法是可以理解的。When asked ., some people thAs far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view. 在我看來，我較同意后一種觀點。According to my p

30、ersonality and fondness, I would prefer . rather than. 根據(jù)我的個性以及興趣，我選擇_而不會選擇_。As far as I am concerned, I amBodyFirst, second, third.last Firstly, secondly, thirdly,.last but not leastTostartwith ,Next , Finally besides inaddition whatsmoretakefor example，F(xiàn)or example, For instance, History presented

31、many examples of.， In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example. Lets see an example. On the one hand, On the other hand (For one thing, For another thing )BodyFirst, second, third.laThere are several reasons for this phenomenon/why.-(as follows). 造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因如下： The reasons are chiefly as

32、 follows. 主要原因如下： The reasons are presented below. 原因如下。There are several reasons for The first and most important reason is that. 第一個而且最重要的原因是_。Another reason why . is that.另外一個原因是The third but not very important reason is that. 第三個（盡管不是很重要）原因是_。The first and most important rConclusioninsummary ina

33、word inbrief in general inconclusionIn short，it can be said that From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that Conclusioninsummary From the reasons presented above, I think the pros outweigh the cons. 從以上原因可以看出，其優(yōu)勢勝過劣勢（優(yōu)點多于缺點）。As far as I am concerned, its disadvantages outweigh its d