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1、WELCOME1.Do you have any trouble in writing English?2.What are they?English Writing 英語書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練課堂練習(xí)寫一篇短文 書面表達(dá)請根據(jù)下面的提示，以“Internet and Our life”寫一篇文章，80個詞左右。開頭已給出。 1、21世紀(jì)是信息時代，隨著科技的發(fā)展，信息越來越重要。 2、電腦改變著我們的生活。電腦帶來了嶄新的聯(lián)系方式，縮小了世界。電腦提供了大量的信息，滿足了人們的需要。 提示： communication n. 聯(lián)系，交流 communicate v. 聯(lián)系 Internet and O

2、ur life It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age.作業(yè)選評要改進嗎？為什么？精彩范文賞析 It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age. With the development of science and technology, information has become more and more important to everyone. Nowadays, more and more people have their own compu

3、ters and the Internet plays a very important part in their daily life. First, the Internet brings us a new way of communication. In every corner of the world we can find internet. We can communicate with our relatives and friends living abroad on the internet. Second, the internet brings us a lot of

4、 information. We can know what is happening in the world and what were interested in. With the internet, we can see the world has become smaller and smaller.書面表達(dá)六 步 法書面表達(dá)六步法書面表達(dá)六步法一、審題確定基本要素:5W1H何 時 何 地 何 人 為何 如 何 做 了 何 事書面表達(dá)六步法二、抓要點確定主要行為What happened?書面表達(dá)六步法三、擴展成句形成基本語義單位Who did what?書面表達(dá)六步法四、連句成文時間 空間 細(xì)節(jié)連貫 呼應(yīng)書面表達(dá)六步法五、查錯改錯要盡量剔除錯誤書面表達(dá)六步法六、謄寫卷面不工整要扣分第二步 抓要點時態(tài)直達(dá) 語態(tài)到位介/副詞緊隨抓要點，配動詞第三步 擴展成句把要點變成完整的句子。注意使用介/副詞第四步 連句成文增加細(xì)節(jié) 呼應(yīng)首尾句與句相連詞與詞搭配第五步 查錯改錯主謂一致嗎？時態(tài)正確嗎？語態(tài)正確嗎？有“半截話”嗎？第六步 謄