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1、寫作評分范例Dear Zhang Hua, Yesterday was my first day of teaching in No.100 Middle School. It was really an unforgettable day. During my first class, all of my class were listening to me carefully when suddenly a bird with colorful leather flew toward our classroom quickly. Bump! It hit the window! The w

2、hole class were talking about the bird with excitement and paid no attention to the text. I didnt know what to do. However, I couldnt shout at my students. So I said, “Boys and girls, look, the bird envies you because you have the chance to receive education. Besides, my class is somewhat attractive

3、, isnt it?” Then the whole class laughed. Interested in my words, they concentrated more on my class. From this case I realized that we teachers should handle problems I proper way, especially problems about our students. Only when they consider us to be their friends can we get along better. Hope t

4、o hear from you soon and best wishes. Yours, Li Hong 24分Dear Zhang Hua, Im quote excited. Now I want to tell you a story which happened in my first class. The story is interesting. And it give me a deeply impression. The story as follows. Yesterday during my first class, I found a boy student was sl

5、eeping well in his dest. I didnt know the boys name, so I steped to his place, quite. And I pushed him. He was awake. As he saw me beside him, his face turned red. He told me he was ill. I touched his head. It was hot. I dragged him to the school hospital as quick as possible. Two hours later, he wa

6、s well. I was very happy to hear this. I thought we would be good friends. Because I was his teacher and he was my student. Yours, Li Long 14分Dear Zhang Hua, Hello, I have a good news tell you. Im a new teacher now. Im very happy! I think you are happy. The day I first teach the class student. They

7、are very happy and like talk with me. One class talk a difficult question: Are you sure you can teach me and make me happy and good. I think a little time and tell them to a story: one feeling bed man look at beautiful flower. She may be think the flower is very angry. but if one feeling happy man look at the beautiful flower his maybe the flower is better in the word. So if you happy you should believe me and belie