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1、考研寫作考前48小時(shí)：臨門一腳主講：潘赟公共微信：panyun117新浪微博valerie潘潘5篇預(yù)測(cè)的應(yīng)用文，12點(diǎn)以后再下載附件！2022/9/15課程內(nèi)容1、簡(jiǎn)單粗暴容易背的萬(wàn)能救命句2、熱點(diǎn)話題擴(kuò)展和三大模板（英語(yǔ)一、二通用）3、應(yīng)用文預(yù)測(cè)范文及信件中間段運(yùn)用4、溫馨提醒 萬(wàn)能救命句（英語(yǔ)一、英語(yǔ)二）話題引起描述圖畫描述圖表文字說(shuō)明意義概括具體意義原因后果舉例調(diào)查觀點(diǎn)分析主題升華態(tài)度評(píng)論預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì)建議措施憧憬未來(lái)大膽結(jié)論開頭段中間段結(jié)尾段找主題詞找主題詞： 先找圖畫中核心事物- 翻譯成中文單詞（名詞）再找圖畫下方的文字說(shuō)明-翻譯成中文單詞（名詞）看圖，反復(fù)用一個(gè)單詞表達(dá)圖畫的含義 - 中

2、文單詞*所有的主題詞都會(huì)歸于簡(jiǎn)單詞主題句怎么寫？- 主題詞很重要。 主題詞很有害。很重要：sth. plays a key role in 某一方面。sth. is beneficial to sth. 或doing sth. Nothing is more important than sth. 很有害： sth is detrimental to sth. 或 doing sth. sth. plays a negative role in 某一方面。2022/9/15主題詞的重要性： the importance of 主題詞主題詞的有害性： the detriment of 主題詞主題

3、詞的有害性和重要性并存：coexist of importance and detriment of 主題詞A 和 B 的關(guān)系 ： the relation between A and B. A 對(duì)B 的影響： the impact of A on B. A 的定義： the definition of A. 2022/9/15開頭段2022/9/15話題引起正中反通用，英語(yǔ)二可不寫It is universally acknowledged that an increasing number of people, men and women, old and young, are doing

4、 sth. . No one can have failed to notice a not mon phenomenon that (同上）The picture/graph does mirror a not mon social issue that (同上） There has been a heated discussion about the picture in the newspaper. (不到萬(wàn)不得已不用這個(gè)最low的句子）2022/9/15圖畫（表）描述兩個(gè)基本公式：圖畫描述：如圖所示，在哪里有什么核心事物，它同時(shí)發(fā)出什么動(dòng)作，旁邊還有什么細(xì)節(jié)事物。As is clear

5、ly indicated in the drawing, in front of us exist(s) 核心事物， doing sth., with + n.(細(xì)節(jié)事物）+ 介詞結(jié)構(gòu)或doing sth.(主動(dòng)） 或 being V-ed（被動(dòng)）. 圖表描述：根據(jù)圖表，清晰可見：主題詞的數(shù)量從開始點(diǎn)到終點(diǎn)的變化。As is clearly indicated in the graph, the number of n. (主題詞=分主題疊加）increase(上升）或decrease(下降) slowly(緩慢地）或 steadily（穩(wěn)步地）或sharply（陡然地) from 起點(diǎn) to

6、 終點(diǎn)。2022/9/15兩個(gè)圖或兩個(gè)主題的圖表怎么辦？看主題，找關(guān)聯(lián)詞連接基本公式。主題相同： similarly, likewise 主題相反： yet, however, on the contrary, ironically, regrettably, unfortunately 通用：meanwhile 2022/9/15文字說(shuō)明The caption reads, “” 標(biāo)題或字母是， “” 如果是標(biāo)題，不要忘了首字母大寫2022/9/15意義概括（可省略）字多就省略，也可以放在二段開頭結(jié)合具體意義寫（參照觀點(diǎn)分析的中間段的寫法）Simple as the picture seem

7、s to be, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean. Funny 或 Ironic 或 ridiculous 2022/9/15中間段2022/9/15具體意義Without a doubt, the authors purpose is to show us that due attention should be paid to the issue of 主題詞。Simple as the picture seems to be, it does mirror a thought-provoking phenomenon that 主題句。

8、2022/9/15論證舉例：For instance, The point is best illustrated by the case of sb. Among all touching fact that I have heard, noticed, and experienced, the most impressive one is the following one. 調(diào)查：According to one latest research 或 report ， .2022/9/15原因：What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Its

9、a thought-provoking question. Why does such phenomenon (like the example mentioned above) emerge? 后果：一般結(jié)果： So, 或者 consequently,壞后果： The problem mentioned above is bound to generate several consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to it. 2022/9/15觀點(diǎn)分析：When it comes to 主題詞， views may vary from pers

10、on to person. Admittedly, some people hold the view that 正方觀點(diǎn)和理由。Yet, the rest hold the other side of this picture. 反方理由和舉例子。2022/9/15主題或例子的意義強(qiáng)調(diào)升華好：Were there no such thing, never would we taste the fruits of success. 壞：Were the situation to continue, we would pay high price. 2022/9/15結(jié)尾段2022/9/15態(tài)度

11、評(píng)論壞The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective and efficient measures to solve the problem.正中反:Considering every aspect of this phenomenon, we should bear in mind that 主題句。中立：主題詞，if used carelessly or without restraint, could prove to be a double-edged sword. 2022/9/15建議措施

12、揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短：We should , therefore, as the common saying goes, “absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks.”政府：The government has the responsibility to educate citizens to do sth.個(gè)人：The public should enhance the consciousness of 主題詞。2022/9/15預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì)After considering all the information presented above, I, as

13、 , most of others will do, safely draw a conclusion that if the exciting/disturbing things have taken places in some other places later, this trend will be going on in a better/depressing direction. 2022/9/15憧憬未來(lái)With a proper law and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before things e the

14、 history. Only in this way can we taste the joy of life. 2022/9/15三大類話題預(yù)測(cè)拓展及模板正面話題中立話題負(fù)面話題2022/9/15正面話題理想與現(xiàn)實(shí)（需要一切個(gè)人品質(zhì)和良好心態(tài)）Ideal and realityPersistence堅(jiān)持, cooperation合作, independence獨(dú)立,自信self-confidence, 創(chuàng)新innovation , think out of box 健康health , 不能過(guò)度學(xué)習(xí)工作 overloaded work /study行勝于言 actions speaker l

15、ouder than words. 2022/9/15教育科技：讀書 reading , 科技technology 人際交往：關(guān)心他人 love, care for strangers 傳統(tǒng)美德 traditional virtue誠(chéng)信 honesty 好習(xí)慣的養(yǎng)成： formation of good habits 2022/9/15開頭段It is universally acknowledge that As is vividly shown in the cartoon, 基本公式。The caption reads, “”Simple as the picture seems to

16、be, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean. 2022/9/15正面話題中間段（舉例子）-史上最萬(wàn)能的例子The authors purpose is to showcase the real meaning of 主題詞，by stressing the fact that 主題詞 is emotional / spiritual strength, which supports us no matter how hard the world around us es. Among all the touching facts that I h

17、ave heard, noticed, experienced, the most impressive one is the following one. Jack Ma, the CEO of Alibaba, starts from the scratch yet promotes Alibaba into one of the most valuable technology companies in the modern world. According to a recent report, 馬云的故事一句話概括。Were there no such spirit(或者與主題詞相關(guān)

18、的精神）， never would he taste the fruits of success 或者 happiness. 2022/9/15結(jié)尾段Considering every aspect of this phenomenon, we should bear in mind that 主題句。During the process, we should , therefore, as the common saying goes, “absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks”.Only in this way can we taste t

19、he joy of life. 2022/9/15中立話題科技與教育（六級(jí)考點(diǎn)）科技 technology, 教育education 電子圖書ebooks, 傳統(tǒng)圖書 traditional books 在線課堂 online course, 傳統(tǒng)教學(xué) in-class courses科技對(duì)生活網(wǎng)購(gòu)：online shopping , 實(shí)體店購(gòu)物：in-store shopping整容： plastic surgery 歸國(guó)就業(yè)： return homeland and find local job 幸福和成功的路徑 the way to success / happiness 2022/9/

20、15開頭段It is universally acknowledge that As is vividly shown in the cartoon, 基本公式。The caption reads, “”Simple as the picture seems to be, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean. 2022/9/15中間段（觀點(diǎn)分析+后果）Simple as the picture is, it does mirror a not mon social phenomenon that an increasing number of s

21、tudents rely on technology overly. Admittedly, technologies, especially the computer and Internet, enhance our work or study efficiency many times. Yet, others hold the other side of this picture. They claim that the more frequent way for the students to deal with their assignment is searching answe

22、rs online or using electronic dictionary to write English sentence. Thus, college students in mounting numbers are losing the ability of thinking independently. 2022/9/15結(jié)尾段主題詞, if used carelessly or without restraint, could prove to be a double-edged sword. Therefore, we should, as the common sayin

23、g goes, “absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks.”O(jiān)nly in this way can we enjoy the joy of life. 2022/9/15負(fù)面話題學(xué)生對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)電腦的過(guò)度依賴：Rely on technology overly 安全（食品安全、交通安全）Safe , security , food, traffic 環(huán)境(破壞，污染，交通帶來(lái)的空氣污染）Environmental pollution , air pollution, deforestation 傳統(tǒng)文化或傳統(tǒng)美德的喪失：Loss of tradit

24、ional culture , perish 消逝 冷漠的社會(huì)（不扶老年人）: indifferent society 2022/9/15網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)教育的影響（過(guò)度依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)電腦，弄虛作假等引發(fā)誠(chéng)信危機(jī)）2022/9/15交通環(huán)境（酒后駕駛、生命健康、交通、環(huán)境污染）2022/9/15開頭段It is universally acknowledge that As is vividly shown in the cartoon, 基本公式。The caption reads, “”Simple as the picture seems to be, the meaning behind it is

25、as deep as ocean. 2022/9/15中間段（原因+后果）史上最無(wú)恥最漂亮的中間段（正反話題通用）：一字不改，三個(gè)排比押韻What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Its a thought-provoking question. First and foremost, current enforcement of laws and regulations might (not) be ineffective and inefficient. Plus, pertinent actions taken by the public m

26、ight (not) be little and limit. Last but not least, coverage of mass media, such as radio, television and internet, might (not) be partial and prejudiced. Therefore, the trend of the problem mentioned above tends to be an increasingly exciting / depressing issue. 2022/9/15有中文翻譯的原因后果段2022/9/15結(jié)尾段The

27、situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective and efficient measures to solve the problems. For one thing, mass media, such as radio, television and internet, should make every effort to propagate and advocate or prevent it. For another, we ourselves should take practical action

28、s to do sth. With a proper law and alert public, it will only be a matter of time to solve the problem. 2022/9/15英語(yǔ)二：圖表作文2022/9/151、考生也要關(guān)注一下圖畫描述的基本公式2、內(nèi)容最好也區(qū)分正面中立和負(fù)面話題3、第二段不會(huì)寫的情況下背誦“原因后果”段4、三大段框架分別是：第一段：圖表描述 + “盡管數(shù)字孤立，但緊密聯(lián)系”（可省）。第二段：原因后果論證 （也可以舉例子，也可以觀點(diǎn)分析）第三段：預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì) + （可添加憧憬未來(lái)）開頭段2022/9/15四種圖表開頭段2022/

29、9/15表格The above table clearly presents the rate about how 主題詞 varies from reason to reason (這是第一縱軸的單詞）。To be specific, in 2010 (第二縱軸）, the number of 主題詞 referring to 第二橫軸單詞，第三橫軸單詞，and 第三橫軸單詞 is 數(shù)字1，數(shù)字2和數(shù)字3 respectively. More importantly, the number of 分主題詞1和2 increased more than 5%, while the percen

30、tage of 最后一橫軸主題詞 decreased 5%. 2022/9/152000年2010年The above bar chart clearly mirrors a noticeable trend that 主題詞 es an increasingly exciting(好事）或 serious(壞事） situation . To be specific, the number of 主題詞 caused by第一縱軸單詞 increased sharply from 5 in year of 2000 to 30 in 2010. Meanwhile, the figuresr

31、elating to 第二縱軸單詞 rose from 2 to 20. Yet, the pertinent figures about 第三縱軸單詞decreased considerably. 柱狀圖2022/9/15The line chart presents data about 主題詞 from 1990 to 2010. To be specific, the figures of 主題詞 caused by 藍(lán)色和紅色的單詞 increased at different speed, especially the figure relating to 藍(lán)色的單詞 rose c

32、onsiderably by 20%. Surprisingly, the pertinent numbers about 綠色的單詞 fell steadily. 線狀圖2022/9/15The above pie chart presents the different proportion of 主題詞。 To be specific, the percentage of 主題詞 caused by 藍(lán)色、紅色和綠色的單詞 is 83% , 14% and 3% respectively. Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are conn

33、ected to on another closely. 餅狀圖中間段2022/9/15中間段（原因+后果）史上最無(wú)恥最漂亮的中間段（正反話題通用）：一字不改，三個(gè)排比押韻What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Its a thought-provoking question. First and foremost, current enforcement of laws and regulations might (not) be ineffective and inefficient. Plus, pertinent actions take

34、n by the public might (not) be little and limit. Last but not least, coverage of mass media, such as radio, television and internet, might (not) be partial and prejudiced. Therefore, the trend of the problem mentioned above tends to be an increasingly exciting / depressing issue. 紅色的字添加上，針對(duì)正面的好的話題。沒

35、有紅色字的版本，就是負(fù)面話題，壞的話題。2022/9/15有中文翻譯的原因后果段2022/9/15結(jié)尾段2022/9/15預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì)After considering all the information presented above, I, as , most of others will do, safely draw a conclusion that if the exciting/disturbing things have taken places in some other places later, this trend will be going on in a bette

36、r/depressing direction. 2022/9/15結(jié)尾段可添加：憧憬未來(lái)可添加：有恰當(dāng)?shù)姆珊途X的民眾，問(wèn)題遲早被解決。With a proper law and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before things e the history. 也可添加： 只有這樣才可以品嘗生活的美好。Only in this way can we taste the beauty of life. 2022/9/15應(yīng)用文2022/9/15應(yīng)用文寫作2022/9/15歷年考察重點(diǎn)2022/9/15各類信件表達(dá)Dear S

37、ir or Madam, (或Dear + 人名），第一段：自我介紹（私人不寫）+寫信目的第二段：總分結(jié)構(gòu)，交代內(nèi)容第三段：表示感謝 +期待回信 +保持聯(lián)系（同告示）Yours sincerely, LiMing 2022/9/15課堂截屏2022/9/15第一段第一句：自我介紹（私人信函可不寫）I am 身份 + who do sth. (和對(duì)方的關(guān)系）第二句：寫信目的：I am writing this letter to do sth. 2022/9/15do sth.-記住黃色筆的單詞！I am writing this letter to express my sincere apo

38、logy(道歉) and wonder if you fully recovery(慰問(wèn)對(duì)方是否康復(fù)）. I am writing this letter to apply for the position offered by your institution(申請(qǐng)職位或空缺，求職求學(xué)均可）I am writing this letter to give you some practical suggestions(建議)或者 proposals (倡議）或者 mendation (推薦）或 introduction（介紹信）I am writing this letter for purp

39、ose of expressing my dissatisfaction(表達(dá)不滿就是投訴信）或 appreciation (感激）或 request （請(qǐng)求）或 e（歡迎）I am writing this letter to order(訂購(gòu)信） some products in your store. Congratulation ! (祝賀）I am writing this letter to In response to your letter, I feel sorry to tell you that . (答復(fù)或回絕信）2022/9/15第二段：總分結(jié)構(gòu)第一句：相關(guān)信息如下：

40、The concerning informations are as follows. (這是2013年8分范文的二段開頭句，informations有爭(zhēng)議）或者寫成：如下幾點(diǎn)因素決定了我的這封信：There are several factors accounting for this letter. 第二句本段結(jié)束：交代內(nèi)容(自問(wèn)自答，將三句話變?yōu)榱湓挘〧irstly, I wonder if you do sth. Now, I Secondly, since I am , I Finally, what about sth. 或 doing sth.? I 2022/9/15第三段必

41、須做的一件事：表示感謝My thanks for you to your generous help are beyond words.Help 可替換成： understanding 理解 或 attention 或 patience期待回信（感謝信和道歉信不寫）I look forward to hearing from you soon. 保持聯(lián)系（通知，告示，征友啟事，招募志愿者，備忘錄，留言條一定要寫！）Feel free to contact me via email XXXX 2022/9/15重點(diǎn)關(guān)注感謝信+邀請(qǐng)信申請(qǐng)信（學(xué)習(xí)，工作）介紹 (工作、同學(xué)、活動(dòng)、一門課）慰問(wèn)信和道

42、歉信征友啟事2022/9/15重點(diǎn)關(guān)注信件的第一段表達(dá)2022/9/15介紹信（人、校園活動(dòng)、一門課）Dear Audrey: My name is Li Ming. I am very glad to have this chance to write to you and e pen pals. Let me first introduce myself. Im currently working as a computer programmer in a large multi-national company. I graduated from Chongqing University

43、 with a Bachelors Degree in computer science in 2004. My hobbies include listening to pop music and traveling. This summer, I will be traveling with Mr. Li San to Norway. If you are free, I would be very happy to meet you in person. Well, let me finish here. I am already eagerly awaiting your reply.

44、 I hope that we can e good friends. Yours with love,Li Ming2022/9/15征友啟事Looking for a foreign friend I am a senior student in law school of Nanjing University. I am looking for a foreign friend whose mother language is English. Since I am going to study in USA for a term as an exchange student, I am

45、 in great need of help with foreign culture, especially the particular customs of American. I passed TOEFL last summer that language wont be the obstacle between us. Besides, I can help you learn Chinese culture and mandarin if you would like to. Feel free to contact me via email XXXX . I am looking

46、 forward to hearing from you soon. Li Ming 2022/9/15申請(qǐng)信（求職求學(xué)）Dear Sir or Madam, I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution(求學(xué)） / your recently advertised position for

47、a staff member（求職）. I am sure that I am qualified for it. Firstly, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Secondly, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality

48、 is well suited to studying / working in your program. Lastly, my hobbies include sports and music. Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. I am looking forward to your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 2022/9/15答復(fù)投訴信（預(yù)測(cè)講義預(yù)測(cè)七）Dear Customer,In response

49、 to your letter of complaint about customer services you received from our company, I would like to apologize. Your opinion is important to us and that is why we would like to give you a satisfied explanation.The concerning information are as follows. Firstly, we will not deny that a good accent is

50、the first step of good customer services. Yet the salesman you complain about is new here for only one week, who is trying his best to get used to everything here and communicate with each customer. Additionally, we would like to give you a two-days free shipping for a new book in order to make up for all your loss. If there is anything else we can do to be of assistance, please dont hesitate to contact us. We greatly appreciate your business. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 2022/9/15慰問(wèn)和道歉