人教版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)unit12寫(xiě)作教程課件-2

1、人教版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)unit12-寫(xiě)作教程課件人教版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)unit12-寫(xiě)作教程課件whowhenwhy/howwhatwhere記敘文的要素 When talk about an event:Pre-writing 記敘文寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)whowhenwhy/howwhatwhere記敘文的要素 Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）1Unit topic languages（單元話題語(yǔ)言） 以連線、標(biāo)序號(hào)等形式列舉本單元與本話題寫(xiě)作相關(guān)的詞塊、句子。(1)Chunks（詞塊）動(dòng)詞詞塊： wake up, go off, rush out of, be about to將要, drive by開(kāi)

2、車經(jīng)過(guò), give sb. a lift in ones car用小車送某人一程be late for,be full of,turn into,Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）1Unit topi介詞詞塊： by the time, as soon as一就, on the street, at least至少, (1)Chunks（詞塊）介詞詞塊：(1)Chunks（詞塊）（2）Patterns（句型）I will always remember the date日期；This was the luckiest /unluckiest day of my life；I couldnt

3、 believe ；I think.；What a lucky/an unlucky day! （2）Patterns（句型）I will always r2. Extensive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)言）Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、諺語(yǔ)、警句與經(jīng)典例句） 1. Plans can never catch up with changes. 計(jì)劃沒(méi)有變化快。 2. Every dog has his day. 凡人皆有得意日。 2. Extensive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)

4、言）F 在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中，我們經(jīng)歷了許許多多的事，事情的經(jīng)過(guò)或結(jié)果可能會(huì)出人意表，以致令我們至今難忘。請(qǐng)以“An Unexpected Day in My Life” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇記敘文。 要求：內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。 在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中，我們經(jīng)歷了許許多多的事，事情的經(jīng)過(guò)或Step 1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）審題體裁_人稱_時(shí)態(tài)_第一人稱 一般過(guò)去時(shí)記敘文Step 1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）用詞方面: 代詞主格,賓格； 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)；動(dòng)詞搭配；副詞位置 句子方面: 篇章方面: 細(xì)節(jié)方面: 句子完整；主謂一致；動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)；連詞使用內(nèi)容完整；要

5、點(diǎn)齊全；布局合理 單詞拼寫(xiě)；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；大小寫(xiě) Step 3 Check（查一查）用詞方面: 代詞主格,賓格； 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)；句子方面: 篇An Unexpected Day in My Life Last Monday morning, when I woke up, I found my alarm clock didnt go off. It was already 7 oclock! I was worried. So I rushed out my home without brushing my teeth and having breakfast. By the time I got

6、 to the bus stop, the bus had already gone. Just when I felt I was about to cry, my classmate Kevins dad drove by and asked if I needed a lift. I was so excited. Then he gave me a lift in his car. As soon as I reached the classroom, the bell rang. I wasnt late for school. Every dog has his day. I th

7、ought it was the luckiest day for me! when, so, by the time, then, as soon as等詞語(yǔ)的使用，使時(shí)間脈絡(luò)很清晰。 本文表達(dá)連貫，措辭準(zhǔn)確，句子流暢，行文自然。文章交代清楚事件的背景、發(fā)展及結(jié)果，讓讀者清晰地理解事件的本身。Every dog has his day.諺語(yǔ)的使用，給本文增色不少，起到錦上添花的作用。An Unexpected Day in My Life wAn Unexpected Day in My Life Last Friday was my birthday. After I got up, I

8、thought my mom would say “Happy birthday” to me. But she didnt. I was very disappointed and went to school. After school, I invited my good friends Lily and Lucy to my home for dinner. They said they would go to the movies. They must forget my birthday, either. I was so upset and went home alone. Wh

9、en I opened the door, I heard “Happy birthday”. My dad smiled at me. My mom bought me a big cake. Lily and Lucy gave me birthday gifts. I was quite surprised and happy. It was really an unexpected day in my life! 文章語(yǔ)言表達(dá)生動(dòng)，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)法正確、用詞得當(dāng)、語(yǔ)言標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。選材新穎，能讀者耳目一新，引起閱讀的興趣。另外作者選取身邊的事例，寫(xiě)出真情實(shí)感，容易打動(dòng)讀者。but, either

10、反襯出作者的失望。very disappointed, so upset描述出作者的心情，敘述親切、自然，讓讀者身同感受。quite, really與之前的心情形成強(qiáng)烈的對(duì)比。An Unexpected Day in My Life 文第十二單元今天是你最不幸的一天。昨天我有許多作業(yè)要做，所以昨天晚上我熬夜到很晚。今天我的鬧鐘沒(méi)響，所以我起床晚了。在我起床后我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的自行車壞了。然后我跑著去車站。不幸的是， 到我到那里的時(shí)候公共汽車已經(jīng)離開(kāi)了。當(dāng)我到達(dá)學(xué)校時(shí)，老師已經(jīng)開(kāi)始講課。當(dāng)我坐到我座位上是，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我把背包忘到了家里。在中午我想吃午飯，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我沒(méi)錢(qián)。放學(xué)后，我不能進(jìn)我的房間因?yàn)槲野谚€匙忘到

11、了學(xué)校。多么不幸的一天 My Most Unlucky DayToday is my most unlucky day. Yesterday I had a lot of homework to do, so I stayed up too late last night. And today my clock didnt go off, so I got up too late. After I got up, I found my bike was broken. Then I ran to the bus stop. Unluckily, by the time I got there,

12、 the bus had left. When I got to school, the teacher had begun her class. When I sat at my seat, I realized I had left my backpack at home. At noon I wanted to have lunch, and I found I had no money. After school, I couldnt go into my room because I had left my keys at school.What an unlucky day it is!第十二單元今天是你最不幸的一天。昨天我有許多作業(yè)要做，所以昨Summary:記敘文5要素 本文根據(jù)要求是一篇記敘文。它主要是說(shuō)明事件的時(shí)間、背景、起因、過(guò)程及結(jié)果，即我們通常所說(shuō)的五個(gè)“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why ）和一個(gè)“ H ”