(新)中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)公開(kāi)課課件

EnglishwritingEnglishwriting1初中英語(yǔ)新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

五級(jí)寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)：能根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，收集，準(zhǔn)備素材能獨(dú)立起草短文，短信等，并在教師指導(dǎo)下進(jìn)行修改能使用常見(jiàn)的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系能簡(jiǎn)單描述人物或事件能根據(jù)所給圖示或表格寫(xiě)出簡(jiǎn)單的段落或操作說(shuō)明7-9年級(jí)分別完成三、四、五級(jí)目標(biāo)初中英語(yǔ)新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)五級(jí)寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)：7-9年級(jí)分別完成三、四、2中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（17-20分）寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢，有句式變化，有復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)第二檔（13-16分）基本寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢，有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（9-12分）寫(xiě)出大部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本通順有一些語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（5-8分）寫(xiě)出一半左右有關(guān)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言不通，影響理解。第五檔（0-4分）言不達(dá)意，不知所云。中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（17-20分）3注意：0分作文：1.空白卷2.原本照抄試卷上的閱讀文本。3.全中文4.全拼音5.無(wú)一個(gè)單詞與規(guī)定內(nèi)容有關(guān)。以下情況不給滿分作文：書(shū)寫(xiě)差，字跡不工整。有標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤的文中只要有一處及以上語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

文中出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學(xué)校名。

超出字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多的（原則上不超出30詞）注意：0分作文：4DearDr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.

What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用說(shuō))answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Pleasewritesoon.

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicstructure(基本結(jié)構(gòu)安排)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】DearDr.Know，

5basicsteps(基本寫(xiě)作步驟)search（審）list（列）add(加)connect(連)beautify(美化/修改)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】basicsteps(基本寫(xiě)作步驟)search（審6審體裁

（記敘文、說(shuō)明文、議論文、應(yīng)用文…）審題型(文字提示類、圖畫(huà)提示類、圖表提示類和開(kāi)放作文等）審主題（抓要點(diǎn)，緊扣主題，心中有數(shù)，不任意發(fā)揮）審人稱（第一人稱，第二人稱，三人稱）審時(shí)態(tài)（特定的文章有特定的時(shí)態(tài)…；根據(jù)內(nèi)容斟酌每個(gè)句子的時(shí)態(tài)）審（search）（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】審體裁審（search）（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)P7健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫(xiě)一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)8用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)一定要齊全，切勿漏掉。列（list）（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)一定要齊全，切勿漏掉。列9

如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用

簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】如何度假stayathomeworkvisitfri10

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Alotofpeopletravel.列(li11加（add）加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，吸引評(píng)卷教師的注意。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】加（add）加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教12Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.anicehead(thebeginning)anicetail(theending)anicebody加:（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Alotofpeopletravel.How13連(connect)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然，連貫，流暢。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】連(connect)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部14Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca15美（改）修改文中的小錯(cuò)誤（人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫(xiě)等等）。選好詞造句，修改文章。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言的精確性。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底，美化文章，贏得讀者的共鳴。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】美（改）修改文中的小錯(cuò)誤（人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)16Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)美(beautify)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca17Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleabo18Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）/sayingAccordingtoit,mostpe19加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處It20集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrate21加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEn22Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥(niǎo)兒有蟲(chóng)吃。失敗是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

Enjoysomeproverbs三思而后行。熟能生巧。23Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水難收。一天一個(gè)蘋果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。條條大路通羅馬。活到老，學(xué)到老。Enjoysomeproverbs覆水難收。一天一個(gè)蘋果24Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法一:善用詞匯

甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法一:善用詞匯25Whichisbetter?

他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。A26Whichisbetter?

我希望你能幫助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?我希望你能幫助我。A27Whichisbetter?

他們很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?他們很早就到了。A28Whichisbetter?

最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很驚訝。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到29AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語(yǔ)很有趣。

我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.AIthinklearningEnglish30方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技31

她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisv32方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧331.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示選擇:or,either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對(duì)比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,bo34Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\AtlastLet’stry_____________Iamti35方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Wri36青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagers37加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。Ioftenhe38書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧審列加連美提示策略：熟悉句型特點(diǎn)（如五種簡(jiǎn)單句的基本結(jié)構(gòu)，疑問(wèn)句，感嘆句等）背誦范文有的放矢勤訓(xùn)練仔細(xì)審題切莫偏書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧審列加連美提示策略：39知己知彼，學(xué)范文Lookatthesmallpaper！知己知彼，學(xué)范文Lookatthesmallpap40

ToBeaGreenerPerson

Asweknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseanditisourdutytotakeactiontoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldsavewater,electricityandpaper.Whenwebrushourteeth,we’dbetter

turnoffthetap.Whenweleavetheroom,weshouldshutofftheelectricity.Weshouldalsousebothsidesofthepaper.Wecantakeaclothbagwhenwegoshopping.Don’tbuyunnecessarythingsinthesupermarket.It’sgoodforourhealthtowalkorridetoschoolinsteadoftakingcars.Don’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Let’sactnowandmakeourworldmoreandmorebeautiful.

ToBeaGreenerPers41

ToBeaGreenerPerson

Asweknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseanditisourdutytotakeactiontoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldsavewater,electricityandpaper.Whenwebrushourteeth,we’dbetter

turnoffthetap.Whenweleavetheroom,weshouldshutofftheelectricity.Weshouldalsousebothsidesofthepaper.Wecantakeaclothbagwhenwegoshopping.Don’tbuyunnecessarythingsinthesupermarket.It’sgoodforourhealthtowalkorridetoschoolinsteadoftakingcars.Don’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Let’sactnowandmakeourworldmoreandmorebeautiful.

ToBeaGreenerPers42Goodwords:Goodsentences:Connectionwords:Goodwords:Goodsentences:Conn43

TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybestto

doeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!

It’syourturn!（請(qǐng)分析以下的文章）It’s44寫(xiě)作的“五項(xiàng)基本原則”

一、長(zhǎng)短句原則

Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.

二、主題句原則

Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam（主題句）.Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.

寫(xiě)作的“五項(xiàng)基本原則”一、長(zhǎng)短句原則45三、一二三原則

1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast4）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand10）foronething,foranotherthing三、一二三原則46四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則

Icannotbear/standit.Icannotputupwithit.Iwantit.

Iamlookingforwardtoit.

四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則47

五、多變句式原則

Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.

Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.

Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.

hen,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,sothat…ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.

Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.Idon’tenjoythatbookyouarereading.Mrliu,ouroralEnglishteacher,iseasy-going.

Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional,sophisticatedorsimple,thereisplentyinLondonforyou.Nowadays,energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil,coal,naturalgas,solarheat,thewindandoceantides.Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.

五、多變句式原則48THANKYOU!THANKYOU!49中考英語(yǔ)作文8個(gè)常考話題一、介紹人和事件（自己、家庭、朋友、老師、個(gè)人變化、個(gè)人感受等）二、介紹地點(diǎn)（旅游等）三、校園生活（春游、校規(guī)、科目、學(xué)習(xí)困難等）四、課外生活（家庭生活、家務(wù)勞動(dòng)、電影、個(gè)人愛(ài)好等）五、假期安排（計(jì)劃、過(guò)去經(jīng)歷等）六、節(jié)假日活動(dòng)（志愿者活動(dòng)、過(guò)去經(jīng)歷）七、環(huán)境、健康（環(huán)保、疾病、食品健康等）八、個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)建議（提建議、勸告等）中考英語(yǔ)作文8個(gè)?？荚掝}一、介紹人和事件50EnglishwritingEnglishwriting51初中英語(yǔ)新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

五級(jí)寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)：能根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，收集，準(zhǔn)備素材能獨(dú)立起草短文，短信等，并在教師指導(dǎo)下進(jìn)行修改能使用常見(jiàn)的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系能簡(jiǎn)單描述人物或事件能根據(jù)所給圖示或表格寫(xiě)出簡(jiǎn)單的段落或操作說(shuō)明7-9年級(jí)分別完成三、四、五級(jí)目標(biāo)初中英語(yǔ)新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)五級(jí)寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)：7-9年級(jí)分別完成三、四、52中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（17-20分）寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢，有句式變化，有復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)第二檔（13-16分）基本寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢，有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（9-12分）寫(xiě)出大部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本通順有一些語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（5-8分）寫(xiě)出一半左右有關(guān)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言不通，影響理解。第五檔（0-4分）言不達(dá)意，不知所云。中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（17-20分）53注意：0分作文：1.空白卷2.原本照抄試卷上的閱讀文本。3.全中文4.全拼音5.無(wú)一個(gè)單詞與規(guī)定內(nèi)容有關(guān)。以下情況不給滿分作文：書(shū)寫(xiě)差，字跡不工整。有標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤的文中只要有一處及以上語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

文中出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學(xué)校名。

超出字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多的（原則上不超出30詞）注意：0分作文：54DearDr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.

What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用說(shuō))answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Pleasewritesoon.

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicstructure(基本結(jié)構(gòu)安排)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】DearDr.Know，

55basicsteps(基本寫(xiě)作步驟)search（審）list（列）add(加)connect(連)beautify(美化/修改)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】basicsteps(基本寫(xiě)作步驟)search（審56審體裁

（記敘文、說(shuō)明文、議論文、應(yīng)用文…）審題型(文字提示類、圖畫(huà)提示類、圖表提示類和開(kāi)放作文等）審主題（抓要點(diǎn)，緊扣主題，心中有數(shù)，不任意發(fā)揮）審人稱（第一人稱，第二人稱，三人稱）審時(shí)態(tài)（特定的文章有特定的時(shí)態(tài)…；根據(jù)內(nèi)容斟酌每個(gè)句子的時(shí)態(tài)）審（search）（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】審體裁審（search）（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)P57健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫(xiě)一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)58用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)一定要齊全，切勿漏掉。列（list）（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)一定要齊全，切勿漏掉。列59

如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用

簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】如何度假stayathomeworkvisitfri60

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Alotofpeopletravel.列(li61加（add）加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，吸引評(píng)卷教師的注意。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】加（add）加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教62Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.anicehead(thebeginning)anicetail(theending)anicebody加:（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Alotofpeopletravel.How63連(connect)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然，連貫，流暢。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】連(connect)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部64Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

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somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

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afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca65美（改）修改文中的小錯(cuò)誤（人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫(xiě)等等）。選好詞造句，修改文章。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言的精確性。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底，美化文章，贏得讀者的共鳴。（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】美（改）修改文中的小錯(cuò)誤（人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)66Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

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somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

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afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)美(beautify)（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】（新）中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)教學(xué)教學(xué)PPT-(50頁(yè))-PPT執(zhí)教課件【推薦】Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca67Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleabo68Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）/sayingAccordingtoit,mostpe69加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處It70集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrate71加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEn72Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥(niǎo)兒有蟲(chóng)吃。失敗是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

Enjoysomeproverbs三思而后行。熟能生巧。73Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水難收。一天一個(gè)蘋果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。條條大路通羅馬?；畹嚼?，學(xué)到老。Enjoysomeproverbs覆水難收。一天一個(gè)蘋果74Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法一:善用詞匯

甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法一:善用詞匯75Whichisbetter?

他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。A76Whichisbetter?

我希望你能幫助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?我希望你能幫助我。A77Whichisbetter?

他們很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?他們很早就到了。A78Whichisbetter?

最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很驚訝。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到79AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語(yǔ)很有趣。

我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.AIthinklearningEnglish80方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技81

她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisv82方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧831.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示選擇:or,either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對(duì)比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,bo84Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\AtlastLet’stry_____________Iamti85方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Wri86青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagers87加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。Ioftenhe88書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧審列加連美提示策略：熟悉句型特點(diǎn)（如五種簡(jiǎn)單句的基本結(jié)構(gòu)，疑問(wèn)句，感嘆句等）背誦范文有的放矢勤訓(xùn)練仔細(xì)審題切莫偏書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧審列加連美提示策略：89知己知彼，學(xué)范文Lookatthesmallpaper！知己知彼，學(xué)范文Lookatthesmallpap90

ToBeaGreenerPerson

Asweknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseanditisourdutytotakeactiontoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldsavewater,electricity