四級(jí)作文升級(jí)詞匯課件

詞匯(1.)升級(jí)

盡量不用一些中學(xué)詞匯Moreandmorepeople:

anincreasingnumberofpeople;thereisanincreaseinthenumberofpeoplewho……Moreandmoredifficult:increasinglydifficult;thegrowingdifficultyBecauseof(because):duetosth.;givensth.;consideringsth.;onaccountof;inviewof;onthegroundsof(that)…inviewofthefactthat…;inthat…So---consequently;asaresult/consequence;therefore;hence,accordingly,correspondently;詞匯(1.)升級(jí)盡量不用一些中學(xué)詞匯1But---however;nevertheless;whereasImportant---significant;vital;prominent;critical;crucial;indispensable;essential;beofsignificanceMany---amultitudeof;ahostof;abigvarietyof;aseriesof;aworldof;manya;numerous;;awiderangeofplentyof;countless;immeasurableTrytodosth.---strivetodosth.;makegreatefforttodosth.;sparenoeffortsindoingsth./todosth.;endavortodosth.;tryeverymeanstodosth.Ithink---inmyopinion;Frommypointofview；I’moftheopinionthat…;asfarasI’mconcerned;But---2Very---extremely;increasingly;remarkably;quite;rather;extraordinarily;incredibly;exceedinglymaybe---possibly;belikelytoemphasize---layemphasison;attachimportanceto;placestresson;makeapointofencourage----inspire;stimulate;spur;excitegoal----aim;purpose;objective;ambitionchange---alter,transform;convert;transferthink/believe---reckon,suppose,figure,presume,assume,argue,defend,reason;deem;claim;maintainVery---3get---obtain,acquire,attainsame---similar,identicalcause---arouse,giveriseto,resultin;leadto;contributeto;triggerwanttodo---inclinetodosth.;tendtodosth.;desiretodosth.talkaboutsth.---whenitcomestosth.;intermsofdifferent---

various;avarietyof;diversifiedmost---themajorityof;forexample---acaseinpointisthat…;Take…asanexampleaninstanceoftencitedisthat…get---4know---understand;beawareof;remember---bearinmindthat…If---supposing;providingthat;providedthat;onconditionthat;have---possess;enjoy;boastabout---concerning//approximatelyadvantage---merit,;strongpoint;virtuedisadvantage---flaw;drawback;defectalways---Invariably;moreoftenthannot;constantlyknow---5indanger---indistress;injeopardybeendangered;bethreatened;bejeopardizedbeinterestedin----becrazyabout;befascinated;beobsessedwith/bysth.indanger---6詞匯升級(jí)的例子07.6作文題目ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?詞匯升級(jí)：1）v.動(dòng)詞替換—expectlookforwardtoanticipate----doconduct詞匯升級(jí)的例子07.6作文題目7ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?2）名詞替換Reward-----awardOne---aperson,individual,man,people(humanbeing)Shouldmanlookforwardtobeingrewardedwhenconductingagooddeed?ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhe8內(nèi)容中的替換－－Para.1Recently,theissue,arewardexpectedindoingagooddeedhasbeensharplybroughttopublicattention.

Currently,theissuethatshouldamanlookforwardtobeingrewardedafterconductingagooddeedisbeing

drastically

debatedinpublic.(intensely,volcanically,impetuously)內(nèi)容中的替換－－Para.1Recently,theis9Para.2Insomepeople’sopinion,itisreasonabletoexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed.Firstandforemost,“Nopay,nogain”.Nowthatsomeeffortshavebeentaken,peopleshouldgainrewards.Besides,ifholdingaexpectationofrewarding,peoplewouldbeencouragedtodogooddeeds.Somepeopledefendedthatitdeservestoberewardedafteragooddeedhasbeendoneinthattheybelievethatcontemporarysocietyhasincreasinglyconverted“money-worship”community.(因果）Nowthatitisinevitableforpeopletoextendtimeandeffortsorevenconsumemoneyindoinggooddeeds,itisappropriatetoacquirerewards.（承接）Besides,rewardingthosewhohaveconductedgooddeedswillinspire/excite/stimulatethemtodomore(willinspiremorepeopletofollowtheirleads)（遞進(jìn)）Para.2Insomepeople’sopinion10Para.3Inspiteofalltheseclaims,mostpeopleagreethatthereisunnecessarytorewardafterdoingagooddeed.Mostimportantofall,doinggooddeedshouldoriginateinhuman’sheart.It’spleasuretohelpothers.Moreover,Leifeng,doinglotsofgooddeedswithoutrewards,isregardedasamodel.Thatistosay,praiseisbeyondagooddeed.Finally,itisaresponsibilitytohelpothersintrouble.Inspiteoftheabove/afore-mentionedstatements,themajoritystillconsentthatitisdispensabletorewardpeopleofdoinggood.TakingLeiFengasanexample,hespenthiswholelifeinaidingandassistingotherswithoutexpectingreturns.Tothisday,peoplecommemoratehimineveryMarch5th.Hedeclinedrewardsandawards,butharvestedregardsandrespects.Therefore,doinggooddeedsshouldbebasedonone’sbeautifulmind,whichisasortofvirtueoutofone’sownwill.

Meanwhile,doinggooddeedsistheembodimentofone’ssenseofsocialresponsibility.Para.3Inspiteofallthesec11ConclusionWeighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,I’minclinedtoagreewiththelatterpointofview.Althoughitisnotanerrortogetrewardslegallyindoinggooddeeds,Idon’tthinkitisvirtuous.Howcanwe,beingwarm-heartedandwell-educatedpeople,incontemporarysociety,notdogooddeedswithoutrewards?Weighingtheprosandcons,I’minclinedtoapproveofthelatterviewpoint.Althoughacceptingrewardscanhardlybeaccountedforablunder,Istilldeemthatdoinggooddeedswithoutrewardshouldbeconsistentlyafavorablecustominthecountry.Iholdthistruthself-evidentthatweshouldasknotwhatotherscandoforus,butaskwhatwecandoforothers.ConclusionWeighingtheprosan12(2.)豐富A.同義詞用法

eg.damage---destroy---undermine---doharmto---domoreharmthangoodB.詞性變化eg.Happy-----happiness-----happily----makesb.happyDanger—endangered---indanger—dangerous—hazard—hazardous(2.)豐富13(3.)邏輯Firstly,Secondly,LastbutnottheleastOntheonehand;ontheotherhand首先：tobeginwith,inthefirst其次：furthermore,moreover,inaddition最后：meanwhile,inthemeantime(3.)邏輯Firstly,Secondly,Last14(4)九大惡心詞及可用替換詞

good

beneficial//favorablemarvelous//terrificfavorable//positiveexcellent//amazingbad

negativediscouragingproblemissue

Crisisimportant

vital,indispensablebut

however,neverthelessWhereasfamousrenowned;distinguishedoutstanding;prestigiouscelebrated;improvestrengthen;enhancefurther;promotereinforce;consolidatethinkvery(4)九大惡心詞及可用替換詞

good15詞匯(1.)升級(jí)

盡量不用一些中學(xué)詞匯Moreandmorepeople:

anincreasingnumberofpeople;thereisanincreaseinthenumberofpeoplewho……Moreandmoredifficult:increasinglydifficult;thegrowingdifficultyBecauseof(because):duetosth.;givensth.;consideringsth.;onaccountof;inviewof;onthegroundsof(that)…inviewofthefactthat…;inthat…So---consequently;asaresult/consequence;therefore;hence,accordingly,correspondently;詞匯(1.)升級(jí)盡量不用一些中學(xué)詞匯16But---however;nevertheless;whereasImportant---significant;vital;prominent;critical;crucial;indispensable;essential;beofsignificanceMany---amultitudeof;ahostof;abigvarietyof;aseriesof;aworldof;manya;numerous;;awiderangeofplentyof;countless;immeasurableTrytodosth.---strivetodosth.;makegreatefforttodosth.;sparenoeffortsindoingsth./todosth.;endavortodosth.;tryeverymeanstodosth.Ithink---inmyopinion;Frommypointofview；I’moftheopinionthat…;asfarasI’mconcerned;But---17Very---extremely;increasingly;remarkably;quite;rather;extraordinarily;incredibly;exceedinglymaybe---possibly;belikelytoemphasize---layemphasison;attachimportanceto;placestresson;makeapointofencourage----inspire;stimulate;spur;excitegoal----aim;purpose;objective;ambitionchange---alter,transform;convert;transferthink/believe---reckon,suppose,figure,presume,assume,argue,defend,reason;deem;claim;maintainVery---18get---obtain,acquire,attainsame---similar,identicalcause---arouse,giveriseto,resultin;leadto;contributeto;triggerwanttodo---inclinetodosth.;tendtodosth.;desiretodosth.talkaboutsth.---whenitcomestosth.;intermsofdifferent---

various;avarietyof;diversifiedmost---themajorityof;forexample---acaseinpointisthat…;Take…asanexampleaninstanceoftencitedisthat…get---19know---understand;beawareof;remember---bearinmindthat…If---supposing;providingthat;providedthat;onconditionthat;have---possess;enjoy;boastabout---concerning//approximatelyadvantage---merit,;strongpoint;virtuedisadvantage---flaw;drawback;defectalways---Invariably;moreoftenthannot;constantlyknow---20indanger---indistress;injeopardybeendangered;bethreatened;bejeopardizedbeinterestedin----becrazyabout;befascinated;beobsessedwith/bysth.indanger---21詞匯升級(jí)的例子07.6作文題目ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?詞匯升級(jí)：1）v.動(dòng)詞替換—expectlookforwardtoanticipate----doconduct詞匯升級(jí)的例子07.6作文題目22ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?2）名詞替換Reward-----awardOne---aperson,individual,man,people(humanbeing)Shouldmanlookforwardtobeingrewardedwhenconductingagooddeed?ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhe23內(nèi)容中的替換－－Para.1Recently,theissue,arewardexpectedindoingagooddeedhasbeensharplybroughttopublicattention.

Currently,theissuethatshouldamanlookforwardtobeingrewardedafterconductingagooddeedisbeing

drastically

debatedinpublic.(intensely,volcanically,impetuously)內(nèi)容中的替換－－Para.1Recently,theis24Para.2Insomepeople’sopinion,itisreasonabletoexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed.Firstandforemost,“Nopay,nogain”.Nowthatsomeeffortshavebeentaken,peopleshouldgainrewards.Besides,ifholdingaexpectationofrewarding,peoplewouldbeencouragedtodogooddeeds.Somepeopledefendedthatitdeservestoberewardedafteragooddeedhasbeendoneinthattheybelievethatcontemporarysocietyhasincreasinglyconverted“money-worship”community.(因果）Nowthatitisinevitableforpeopletoextendtimeandeffortsorevenconsumemoneyindoinggooddeeds,itisappropriatetoacquirerewards.（承接）Besides,rewardingthosewhohaveconductedgooddeedswillinspire/excite/stimulatethemtodomore(willinspiremorepeopletofollowtheirleads)（遞進(jìn)）Para.2Insomepeople’sopinion25Para.3Inspiteofalltheseclaims,mostpeopleagreethatthereisunnecessarytorewardafterdoingagooddeed.Mostimportantofall,doinggooddeedshouldoriginateinhuman’sheart.It’spleasuretohelpothers.Moreover,Leifeng,doinglotsofgooddeedswithoutrewards,isregardedasamodel.Thatistosay,praiseisbeyondagooddeed.Finally,itisaresponsibilitytohelpothersintrouble.Inspiteoftheabove/afore-mentionedstatements,themajoritystillconsentthatitisdispensabletorewardpeopleofdoinggood.TakingLeiFengasanexample,hespenthiswholelifeinaidingandassistingotherswithoutexpectingreturns.Tothisday,peoplecommemoratehimineveryMarch5th.Hedeclinedrewardsandawards,butharvestedregardsandrespects.Therefore,doinggooddeedsshouldbebasedonone’sbeautifulmind,whichisasortofvirtueoutofone’sownwill.

Meanwhile,doinggooddeedsistheembodimentofone’ssenseofsocialresponsibility.Para.3Inspiteofallthesec26ConclusionWeighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,I’minclinedtoagreewiththelatterpointofview.Althoughitisnotanerrortogetrewardslegallyindoinggooddeeds,Idon’tthinkitisvirtuous.Howcanwe,beingwarm-heartedandwell-educatedpeople,incontemporarysociety,notdogooddeedswi