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Writing1Writing1Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時(shí)分）Growingpainsandgains（成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與歡樂(lè)）Ihaveadream（我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想）ThingsIhatetodo（我不喜歡。。。）Lovearoundme（我身邊的愛)Iwanttodosomethingformyschool(我為學(xué)校做件事）I’mproudofmyself（我為自己感到自豪）與生活相關(guān)與“我”相關(guān)2Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時(shí)分）與生活相關(guān)2Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".(以“最能使我快樂(lè)的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)3Writeatleast60wordsabout內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問(wèn)題）4內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合Whatshouldwewriteabout?Whatshouldn’twe(only)writeabout?Freetalk1.Myschoollife2.Mydreamteacher3.ThethingIhatetodo4.Myopinionsofkeepingpetdogs5.Thebestwaytomakemehappy5Whatshouldwewriteabout?Wh內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問(wèn)題）6內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)7Writeatleast60wordsabout

Thebestwaytomakemehappyisachievinggoodmarks.IthinkthiswayisthebestonetomakemehappybecauseitistheeasiestwaysanditcanimprovemyabilitysoIthinkitisthebestway.Inthisway,Icangetsomeprizes,soIwillfeelhappy,what’smoreitcanalsomakemyparentshappy.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全8Thebestwaytomakemehatherearealotofwaystomakemehappy.Thebestwaytomakemehappyistoplaybasketball.Toplaycomputergamesisalsoawaytomakemehappy.EverydaywehavePElesson.Thesearealotofinterestsinit.SoIfeelhappyinthisway.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全9therearealotofwaysto

thebestwaytomakemehappyistohelpanother.WhenIfeelsad,Icanhelpanother,becauseIhopetheothershappy.Icanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadandplaywithsmallchildren.InthiswayIfeelanotherhappy,thenIalsowillhappy.Helpothersnotonlymakemehappy,butalsomakeothershappy.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全10thebestwaytomakemehaThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?內(nèi)容不全1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.內(nèi)容得分5’11ThemostunforgettablethingIMyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,‘ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.’ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.MytroubleWhatismissedinthisarticle?Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)內(nèi)容得分5’12MyspokenEnglishusedtoTheenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,people’shealthisgettingworseandworse.What’smore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.EnvironmentaroundusWhatismissedinthisarticle?1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）內(nèi)容得分4’13TheenvironmentisimportThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?內(nèi)容不全1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.內(nèi)容得分5’14ThemostunforgettablethingIMyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,‘ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.’ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.MytroubleWhatismissedinthisarticle?Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)內(nèi)容得分5’15MyspokenEnglishusedtoTheenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,people’shealthisgettingworseandworse.What’smore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.EnvironmentaroundusWhatismissedinthisarticle?1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）內(nèi)容得分4’16TheenvironmentisimportNowadays,ourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Ourbadhabitscausemanyproblemslikeairpollution,landpollutionandwaterpollution.Tomakeourenvironmentbetter,Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector.WecanplanttreestomaketheaircleanbecausetreescantakeinCO2andreleaseO2intotheair.Weshouldbuyanduseenvironmentallyfriendlygoods.Finally,wemustn’tleavealotofrubbishintotheriver,pondorsea.Solet’sbeenvironmentprotectorsandenjoylivingabetterlifeontheearth.Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector17Nowadays,ourenvironmentisb內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問(wèn)題）*重點(diǎn)寫什么(提示問(wèn)題）18內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合

Nowadays,therearemanyproblemsofourenvironmentsuchasairpollution,waterpollutionandlandpollution.Peoplecutdownandburntheforest.Peopleusethingsonceandthrowthemaway.Peopleusechemicalstoproducemanythings.Becauseofthesereasons,ourearthisingreatdanger.Weliveontheearth,it’sourdutytoprotectit.IwilldoalotofthingssothatIcanprotecttheearth.Forexample,Iwillreusetheplasticbags.Therearealotofwaystobegreenconsumers.IwanttobeanenvironmentprotectorUsethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要點(diǎn)僅供參考）

Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?19Nowadays,therearemany

Everybodyhasmanywaystomakehappy.SodoI.First,Ilistensomefavoritemusic.Second,Ireadsomebooksandmakesomenotes.Ithinkitisgood.Third,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Inmyopinion,playbasketballisthebestwaytomakemehappy,becauseIfondofit.Becauseofthose,Ibecomehappyandstrong.1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)20Everybodyhasmanywaysto內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問(wèn)題）*重點(diǎn)寫什么(提示問(wèn)題）*時(shí)態(tài)(參考問(wèn)題）”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector(保護(hù)者)”Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要點(diǎn)僅供參考）

Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?21內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合MytroubleWhatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)Environmentaroundus1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）22MytroubleWhatwasyourtroub二、理清思路，列出提綱Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector(保護(hù)者)”(以”Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(下列要點(diǎn)僅供參考）1.Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment?2.Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector?3.Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment?23二、理清思路，列出提綱WriteapassageofWriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".(以“最能使我快樂(lè)的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)24Writeatleast60wordsabout三、連詞成句，初步成形四、檢查修改，內(nèi)容無(wú)誤Environmentisveryimportantforus.Inourlife,theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant.Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland.Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit.I’dsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar.Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag.Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth,ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful.Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector25三、連詞成句，初步成形四、檢查修改，內(nèi)容無(wú)誤EnvironmThewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingdaysintheyear.Ididalotofthingsthiswinterholidays.themostunforgetablethingistomakemybirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherbuythethingsweneedfromthesupermarket.Wemixedthefloorandeggs.Thenaddsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheiron.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilynumbers.Itwasreallydelicions.IwillneverforgetthatdaybecauseIlearnedtomakecakesaswellassharemyhappinesswithothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?錯(cuò)誤太多10’26ThewinterholidaysareoFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,

Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼寫）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小寫）Punctuation（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)）27Findoutthemistakesinthef6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（時(shí)態(tài)）Verbagreement(主謂一致)Wordform(詞形）286.Iwillrememberedthatday10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短語(yǔ)和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…2910.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibec16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏詞）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（詞序）Usingwrongword（選詞錯(cuò)誤）3016.Weplayedsnowinfrontof22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英語(yǔ)）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.3122.Heencouragedmetolookf1.Environmentisveryimportantforus.2.Inourlife,theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant.3.Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland.4.Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit.5.I’dsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar.7.Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag.8.Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth,ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful.6.Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.topollutinginordertosaveit/sothatIcansaveittakeabusinsteadofdrivingacarfromthrowingdevelopgoodhabitsusingsomethingmuchmorebeautifulserious

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主謂是否一致動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用是否正確詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣

…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting331.是否有大小寫錯(cuò)誤(capitallettersorDuringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so34DuringthewinterholidayDuringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so=9’7’+2’+0’Commentonthisarticle.1.What?(1’)

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(2’)35DuringthewinterholidayHowshouldwecheckthepassage?1.查主題，文章是否符合題目要求，內(nèi)容是否完整。(checkthetheme)

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查語(yǔ)法，是否有時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，是否有主謂不一致，是否有語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題，是否有詞形錯(cuò)誤，是否有不合乎搭配的詞組。(checkthegrammar)３．查標(biāo)點(diǎn)，是否有標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤(checkthepunctuation)4.

查拼寫，是否有拼寫錯(cuò)誤和大小寫問(wèn)題（checkthespelling)5．查表達(dá)，是否有不合乎英語(yǔ)慣用的表達(dá)，是否有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。(checkthewaysofexpression)Conclusion:36Howshouldwecheckthepassag五、遣詞造句，爭(zhēng)取文采考試手冊(cè)上的詞組常用的句型

短語(yǔ)（上下連貫)邏輯關(guān)系的上下簡(jiǎn)單句--狀語(yǔ)從句加減合替重復(fù)、可有可無(wú)的what’smoreinadditionmoreimportantlyontheotherhandnotonly…butalso…條件if/unless因果because結(jié)果so…that目的sothat讓步although,though比較than,as…as時(shí)間when37五、遣詞造句，爭(zhēng)取文采考試手冊(cè)上的詞組短語(yǔ)（上下連貫)邏輯Atschool,sometimesIfeelbadandsadbecauseoftheterriblethings.IfIcamehomebutstillfeelbad,Iwillreadsomeinterestingbooks.Itcanmakemeforgettheterriblethings.Thestoryinitalsocanbringmefun.Iwilllistentosomesongstoo.Thesewayarethebestwaytomakemehappy.38Atschool,sometimesIfeelistentomusic,readdifferentbooksandruncanmakemehappy.Ithinkreadinterestingbooksisthebestonetomakemehappy.BecausewhenIreadbooksIcanforgetanythingandwhenIthinkthestoryinbookisamusingIwilllaugh.AndafterIreadthebookIwillneverfeelsad.Ithinkitisagoodway.39listentomusic,readdiffInmylife,Ioftenfeelverytired.SoIneedsomemethodstorelaxmyselfandmakemehappy.Forexample,Iusuallygoforasleepandlistentosomemusic.Ithinklisteningtomusicisfitofme.First,Imakemeforgetthingsthatmakemeunhappy.Second,Iaminterestedinmusic.WhenIlistenthemusic,Ifeelgood.Itbringsmehappiness.That’swhyIfeelhappyinthisway.40Inmylife,IoftenfeelvTherearealotofwaystomakemehappy.Suchaslisteningtothemusic,playingthepiano,readingbooksandsoon.Readingbooksisthebestontomakemehappy.Readingbooksmakemerelax.IalsolearnalotofinterestingknowledgewhenIreadabook.Ifeelhappyinthisway,becauseIlikereading.41Therearealotofwaysto結(jié)構(gòu)（7分）+內(nèi)容（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)正確二、理清思路，列出提綱三、連詞成句，初步成形四、檢查修改，內(nèi)容無(wú)誤五、遣詞造句，爭(zhēng)取文采42結(jié)構(gòu)（7分）+內(nèi)容（8分）+文采（3分）42Writing43Writing1Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時(shí)分）Growingpainsandgains（成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與歡樂(lè)）Ihaveadream（我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想）ThingsIhatetodo（我不喜歡。。。）Lovearoundme（我身邊的愛)Iwanttodosomethingformyschool(我為學(xué)校做件事）I’mproudofmyself（我為自己感到自豪）與生活相關(guān)與“我”相關(guān)44Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時(shí)分）與生活相關(guān)2Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".(以“最能使我快樂(lè)的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)45Writeatleast60wordsabout內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問(wèn)題）46內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合Whatshouldwewriteabout?Whatshouldn’twe(only)writeabout?Freetalk1.Myschoollife2.Mydreamteacher3.ThethingIhatetodo4.Myopinionsofkeepingpetdogs5.Thebestwaytomakemehappy47Whatshouldwewriteabout?Wh內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合理*寫什么(題目，參考問(wèn)題）48內(nèi)容（7分）+語(yǔ)言（8分）+文采（3分）一、認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)構(gòu)合Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Thebestwaytomakemehappy".Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)49Writeatleast60wordsabout

Thebestwaytomakemehappyisachievinggoodmarks.IthinkthiswayisthebestonetomakemehappybecauseitistheeasiestwaysanditcanimprovemyabilitysoIthinkitisthebestway.Inthisway,Icangetsomeprizes,soIwillfeelhappy,what’smoreitcanalsomakemyparentshappy.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全50Thebestwaytomakemehatherearealotofwaystomakemehappy.Thebestwaytomakemehappyistoplaybasketball.Toplaycomputergamesisalsoawaytomakemehappy.EverydaywehavePElesson.Thesearealotofinterestsinit.SoIfeelhappyinthisway.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全51therearealotofwaysto

thebestwaytomakemehappyistohelpanother.WhenIfeelsad,Icanhelpanother,becauseIhopetheothershappy.Icanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadandplaywithsmallchildren.InthiswayIfeelanotherhappy,thenIalsowillhappy.Helpothersnotonlymakemehappy,butalsomakeothershappy.Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:(所給提示僅供參考)1.Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy?2.Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy?3.Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway?(giveatleasttworeasons)內(nèi)容不全52thebestwaytomakemehaThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?內(nèi)容不全1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.內(nèi)容得分5’53ThemostunforgettablethingIMyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,‘ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.’ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.MytroubleWhatismissedinthisarticle?Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)內(nèi)容得分5’54MyspokenEnglishusedtoTheenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,people’shealthisgettingworseandworse.What’smore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.EnvironmentaroundusWhatismissedinthisarticle?1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）內(nèi)容得分4’55TheenvironmentisimportThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle?內(nèi)容不全1.Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays?(1’)2.Givesomedescriptionsaboutit,suchaswhere/when/how/who,etc.(4’)3.Whydoyouthinkit’sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid?(2’)Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday.Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket.Wemixedtheflourandeggs,thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft.Finally,weputitintotheoven.Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers.Itwasreallydelicious.Iwillneverforgetthatday.內(nèi)容得分5’56ThemostunforgettablethingIMyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor.Itriedtoimproveit,butfailed.SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice.HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish.Hesaid,‘ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish,themoreprogressyouwillmake.’ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible.Atlast,myspokenEnglishimproved.MytroubleWhatismissedinthisarticle?Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy?(2’)Howdidyoufacethetrouble?(3’)Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit?(2’)內(nèi)容得分5’57MyspokenEnglishusedtoTheenvironmentisimportanttousall.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean,butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair.Becauseoftheterriblepollution,people’shealthisgettingworseandworse.What’smore,thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate,whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation.EnvironmentaroundusWhatismissedinthisarticle?1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus?（4’）2.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?（3’）內(nèi)容得分4’58TheenvironmentisimportNowadays,ourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Ourb