廣東高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技巧方法新題型基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

新題型基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練一.基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作基本要求I.基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作考我們什么能力?A.信息處理或整理的能力;[如:信息之間能否合并為邏輯關(guān)系或處理先后順序等]B.組詞造句能力;[如內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性]C.連句成文能力;[信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性]A.如何處理或整理信息?1.存在問(wèn)題

Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.

Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.…(1)IamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagencyandthelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，

especiallytotheolderpeople….錯(cuò)誤診斷：總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并

(2)

However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofus.Quiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.

錯(cuò)誤診斷：因果關(guān)系的信息合并

However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.(Hehadahighfeverandwenttoseethedoctor.)(3)Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiastic,hecouldconcernoldmeninourgroup.錯(cuò)誤診斷：

‘‘一逗到底”的中式英語(yǔ)表達(dá)導(dǎo)致信息表達(dá)出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題，不能用多個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)多個(gè)不同類型的信息內(nèi)容。Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandhecouldconcernoldmeninourgroup.II.如何處理或整理信息?一、按信息內(nèi)容或邏輯關(guān)系分為五大信息塊；[例：]二、一個(gè)完整的信息用一個(gè)句子來(lái)表達(dá)；三、信息之間如果存在邏輯關(guān)系就應(yīng)該合并，但如果它們之間沒(méi)有邏輯關(guān)系就不能隨便合并。四、總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并；五、要正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)避免影響信息的正確表達(dá)人們對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見(jiàn).請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn),并表達(dá)自己的看法.贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由1.廣交朋友1.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2.可跟同齡人交流2.影響學(xué)習(xí)3.利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)3.可能上當(dāng)受騙注意:1.必須用五句話表達(dá)表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容;2.參考詞匯:網(wǎng)絡(luò)朋友on-linefriend(s)

上當(dāng)受騙tobecheated3.文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出.如何整理信息?思考

Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.B.組詞造句能力;[如內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性]旅行社

travelagency2.食物不合味口

thefooddidn’tagreewithus3.他講解清晰,生動(dòng)。

Heexplainedeverythingabouttheplacesinaclearandlivelyway.Hisexplanationaboutthoseplacesofinterestwasveryclearandvivid.

4.貨真價(jià)實(shí)的購(gòu)物場(chǎng)所

theshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainstheshopswherewecouldbuynicethingswithreasonableprices1.我表示對(duì)旅行社提供的服務(wù)總體感到滿意。Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravellingcompany.Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelercentre.2.當(dāng)?shù)貙?dǎo)游對(duì)游客非常熱情，體貼，耐心照顧團(tuán)中的老人。John,whowasthetravelleader,agency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.錯(cuò)句修正3.導(dǎo)游對(duì)游地講解清晰、生動(dòng)，增長(zhǎng)了我們的見(jiàn)聞。Theinterviewoftheviewisclearandfunnyandit’sclearlythatweimproveknowledgeforJohn’sdirection.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedusbroadenourhorizons.4.飯館提供的膳食不合口味。我們有些人不得不自買(mǎi)食物。

Thedietprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tfitussomanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.5.建議應(yīng)該多提供貨真價(jià)實(shí)的購(gòu)物場(chǎng)所。Isuggestyoucanoffermoreandmoreshops.wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.錯(cuò)句修正例：1)Wearedon’tlikethefood.Wearedon’tlikethefood.2)Wedon’tsatisfiedwiththefood.Wedon’tsatisfiedwiththefood.3)Peoplehadtoboughtsomefood.Peoplehadtoboughtsomefood.4)Guide’sspokenisverylively.Guide’sspokenisverylively.weren’tbuyspeechC.連句成文信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性]存在問(wèn)題Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,ithelpedusbroadenourhorizons.Thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofus,quiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.錯(cuò)誤診斷：內(nèi)容缺乏連貫Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedusbroadenourhorizons.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Inaddition,wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.二.基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作基本步驟基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟審抓擴(kuò)連改抄基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟一、審題理清文字信息判斷文章格式、人稱、要點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)、基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟二、抓要點(diǎn)確定主要行為用一兩個(gè)詞或短語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出每句的要點(diǎn)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟三、擴(kuò)展成句形成基本語(yǔ)義單位用一些簡(jiǎn)單句、不同句型、不同句式或高級(jí)詞匯將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟四、連句成文時(shí)間空間細(xì)節(jié)連貫呼應(yīng)背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）、邏輯關(guān)系、開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾、巧用連接詞和過(guò)渡句書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)要盡量剔除錯(cuò)誤如要點(diǎn)齊全、句法、語(yǔ)法有無(wú)問(wèn)題；單詞拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；句數(shù)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟六、謄寫(xiě)卷面要工整建議：1.注重基礎(chǔ),單詞短語(yǔ)多2.培養(yǎng)寫(xiě)句意識(shí),以動(dòng)詞為中心1

如何在寫(xiě)作中避免句式單一Rewritethesentences1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.

2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.Hewantstoimprovehis

English.Hestudieshard.方法一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔Whentheyarrivedattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.IfIamgivenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.InordertoimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.方法一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng)._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò).__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

HavingbeentoldinvitedTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)1,面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。2，引入市場(chǎng)后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1.Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.Notuntil2.Wecansavetheearthbychangingthewaywelive.

Only

3.Heiscleverbuthedoesnotworkhard.

as/though4.Theclocktowerstandsontheothersideofthestreet.

OntheothersideofthestreetCompletethesentenceshereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness.bychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.Clever

heis,hedoesnotworkhard.standstheclocktower.方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力TranslatethesentencesbyusingInvertedSentences(倒裝句)1.他從不說(shuō)關(guān)于他家庭的事.2.只有我們每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到水的重要性,我們才能生活得更好.3.只有用這種方式,我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí).Neverdidhespeakabouthisownfamily.Onlywheneachofusrealizestheimportanceofwater,canweliveabetterlife.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力4.DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒裝句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力5.

他是個(gè)孩子，卻知道很多。6.

墻上有個(gè)通知，上面寫(xiě)著“請(qǐng)節(jié)約用水”.Childas/thoughheis,heknowsalot.Onthewallisanoticesaying“PleaseSaveWater”.

Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture

方法三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式一…就受到歡迎AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomeddirectly/themomenttheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…方法三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式

Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful._____________________________________________which_____________________________________Withthedevelopmentof________________________________________________________________________

____________________________so___that______________________________________________________Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…

Beijing,people’slivesarebecomingmoreandmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.Nowadays,Beijingisdevelopingfastpeople’slivesaregettingmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.我校是一所省重點(diǎn)中學(xué)，

位于徐州東郊。校園很美,綠樹(shù)成蔭。

EastofXuZhou

liesourschool,whichisakeyschoolofJiangSuprovince.Itisbeautiful,surroundedwithmanytrees/withmanytrees.Translatethesentences:句式多樣文章增“靚”一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔二.巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式三.基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐人們對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見(jiàn).請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn),并表達(dá)自己的看法.贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由1.廣交朋友1.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2.可跟同齡人交流2.影響學(xué)習(xí)3.利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)3.可能上當(dāng)受騙注意:1.必須用五句話表達(dá)表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容;2.參考詞匯:網(wǎng)絡(luò)朋友on-linefriend(s)

上當(dāng)受騙tobecheated3.文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出.Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.參考范文:Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.TheInternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.A.Trytofindoutthemistakes;Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.BecausetheInternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnotdosoandsaythatmakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,youwillgetcheatedonline.SomepeoplehadjustbeencheatedA.Trytofindoutthemistakes