高考英語應用文預測講義：建議信范文精講

高考英語應用文預測講義：建議信范文精講【預測題1】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件，內容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.推薦他上哪所大學；3.建議他做哪些準備工作?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earJim,I'msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajoris,perfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.AsforpreparationsomereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua這個一篇原題為是歡迎、建議、推薦綜合體，所以三個文體關鍵詞都要涉及一點。【優(yōu)化范文精講】I'msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.優(yōu)化：（歡迎）ExhilaratedtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijing,hardlycouldIrestrainmyecstasytoexpresswelcomeandoffersomerecommendationsaswellassuggestionsrelatedtolearning.聽到你們在北京未來的求學計劃，我?guī)缀鯚o法抑制自己的欣喜來表示歡迎，并做一些與學習有關的推薦和建議。LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajoris,perfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.優(yōu)化：（推薦）KnowingyouareanenthusiastforChineseculture,theChineseLiteraturemajorinPekingUniversityrankstoponmyrecommendationlist,whichwilldefinitelyopenanewdimensiontoyourChineselearning.知道你是中國文化的愛好者，北京大學的中國文學專業(yè)在我的推薦名單上名列前茅，這肯定會為你學習中文打開一個新的維度。AsforpreparationsomereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.優(yōu)化：（建議）Asforthepreparationsforstudying,IfIwereyou,Iwouldconsultwithprofessionalscholarsaboutliterature,attainingacomprehensiveinsightinthemajor.至于學習的準備工作，如果我是你，我會向專業(yè)學者咨詢關于文學的知識，從而獲得對綜合見解。Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.或：WishyoueverysuccessinyourChineselearning!（我喜歡隨便結個尾）優(yōu)化升格后的范文完整版DearJim,ExhilaratedtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijing,hardlycouldIrestrainmyecstasytoexpresswelcomeandoffersomerecommendationsaswellassuggestionsrelatedtolearning.KnowingyouareanenthusiastforChineseculture,theChineseLiteraturemajorinPekingUniversityrankstoponmyrecommendationlist,whichwilldefinitelyopenanewdimensiontoyourChineselearning.Asforthepreparationsforstudying,IfIwereyou,Iwouldconsultwithprofessionalscholarsaboutliterature,attainingacomprehensiveinsightinthemajor.WishyoueverysuccessinyourChineselearning!Yours,LiHua【預測題2】假定你是李華，你校要舉辦一次漢服(Hanfu)表演。請你寫封郵件邀請在你市做交換生的英國好友Peter觀看演出。內容包括：1.發(fā)出邀請；2.演出的時間和地點（介紹）；3.建議他上網(wǎng)搜索，簡要了解漢服?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earPeter,Haveyouadaptedtothenewenvironmentinourcity?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyashowwhichwillbehostedbyourschool.Andthedetailedinformationisasfollows.InordertoenrichourschoollifeandpromoteChinesetraditionalculture,aHanfuperformancewillbeheldinthehallofourschoolon25thSeptember.ItwillbeagreatshowplayedbymanystudentsdressedinHanfu.Itwillbecertainlyavisualfeast.It’sagoodideaforyoutosurftheInternetfortheintroductionofHanfu,especiallythoseintheTangDynasty,whichwillhelpyouappreciatetheshow.Areyouavailableonthatday?I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtime.Yours,LiHua【范文升格】Haveyouadaptedtothenewenvironmentinourcity?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyashowwhichwillbehostedbyourschool.Andthedetailedinformationisasfollows.優(yōu)化：AcquaintedthefactthatourschoolwilllaunchaHanfuperformance,hardlycouldIsuppressmydelighttoinviteyoutoappreciatetheshowandofferyousomeadvicerelatedtoChinesetraditionalclothes.獲悉我們學校將要推出漢服表演這件事，我?guī)缀鯚o法抑制我的喜悅，邀請您欣賞這個節(jié)目，并為您提供一些有關中國傳統(tǒng)服裝的建議。InordertoenrichourschoollifeandpromoteChinesetraditionalculture,aHanfuperformancewillbeheldinthehallofourschoolon25thSeptember.ItwillbeagreatshowplayedbymanystudentsdressedinHanfu.Itwillbecertainlyavisualfeast.優(yōu)化：Scheduledtobeheldinthehallofourschoolon25thSeptember,theshowwilldefinitelybeafeastforeyes.該節(jié)目定于9月25日在我們學校的大廳舉行，絕對是一場視覺盛宴。It’sagoodideaforyoutosurftheInternetfortheintroductionofHanfu,especiallythoseintheTangDynasty,whichwillhelpyouappreciatetheshow.優(yōu)化：Besides,ItneverfailstobeawisechoiceforyoutobrowsesomeinformationaboutHanfuontheInternetinadvance,whichisparticularlysuitabletoforeignstudentlikeyou.此外，提前在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上瀏覽一些關于漢服的信息，這對于像您這樣的外國學生來說，永遠是一個明智的選擇。Areyouavailableonthatday?I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtime.優(yōu)化：Shouldyoutakemyproposalandinvitationintoaccount,Iwouldbemorethandelightedtohearthat.如果你考慮到我的建議和邀請，我將非常高興聽到這一消息。優(yōu)化升格范文完整版DearPeter,AcquaintedthefactthatourschoolwilllaunchaHanfuperformance,hardlycouldIsuppressmydelighttoinviteyoutoappreciatetheshowandofferyousomeadvicerelatedtoChinesetraditionalclothes.Scheduledtobeheldinthehallofourschoolon25thSeptember,theshowwilldefinitelybeafeastforeyes.Besides,ItneverfailstobeawisechoiceforyoutobrowsesomeinformationaboutHanfuontheInternetinadvance,whichisparticularlysuitabletoforeignstudentlikeyou.Shouldyoutakemyproposalandinvitationintoaccount,Iwouldbemorethandelightedtohearthat.Yours,LiHua*如何表達建議？（建議信中多it，少Ithink會更顯禮貌態(tài)度）?Whenitcomesto…,I’dliketosuggestthat…?IfIwereyou,Iwould…?It’ssuggestedthatsbshoulddo…?It’ssensible/advisable/essentialforyouto?Itneverfailstobeawisechoiceto…?Itcouldn’tbebetterthan…?Itwouldbebeneficialifyoucould首段：表示相關+寫信目的。

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