Unit 5 Reading for Writing 寫作課件【知識精講+備課精研】 高中英語人教版選擇性必修第二冊 -

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manoeuvre?ReadandputA-E（P57)A.Chokingvictimsusuallyhaveonlyaboutfourminutesbeforetheycollapseandsometimesdie.B.Ifyouseesomeonechoking,firstcalltheemergencyservices.C.Chenwastednotime.D.Withchokingvictims,everyminutecounts.E.DoingtheHeimlichmanoeuvreonasmallchildisnotrecommended.CABEDFastReadingReadforthestructure

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theHeimlichmanoeuvrecommentsonthechokingincidentPart1:Para1-2Part2:Para3-5Part3:Para6①②③④⑤⑥thestoryofachokingincidentHowcanwewriteanarritiveessay?Whatcanwelearnfromthisarticle?readpart1carefullyAnarrativeessayshouldinclude:set-upconflictconclusionwhowhatwhere.........WhatdidChenWeido?What’stheendofthestory?...?...?...?...010203Part1Part1ChenWei,ZhangTaoZhangTaowaschokingonsomesteakwhileeating.arestaurantinBeijingThefoodwasinstantlyforcedout,andZhangbegantobreatheagain.(Hewasfine)01Hewastednotime,gotupandrantothetableatonce.02WiththehelpofZhang’sfriends,hewasabletohelpZhangtohisfeet.03StandingbehindZhang,ChendidtheHeimlichmanoeuvre.Howcanwedescribeanurgentsituationvividly?formsexpressionsadj.adv.v.sentencestructures_________someonescreamingwas________onsomesteak,wasnow________histhroatwere__________himonthebackwastednotime,ranto...atonce,helpZhangtohisfeetdesperate

friendswas__________forcedoutChenWeihadhisdinner

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holdingslappingwhenStandingTimetopractice!假設(shè)你和你的同學李明一起去鍋爐房打開水，在回寢室的路上，李明的熱水瓶突然破裂，開水燙傷了他的腳。于是你對他實施了必要的急救。請你結(jié)合此事，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校英文報Teens投稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.描述事故發(fā)生的經(jīng)過；2.你是如何實施急救的(冷水沖洗、送醫(yī)院做進一步的處理)；3.簡要談談你對掌握一定急救知識的重要性的認識。參考詞匯：鍋爐房boilerroom熱水瓶thermosbottleWriting

StructurePart1set-upPart2conflictPart3conclusionPart4commentsstructure要點翻譯1.燙傷非常嚴重。The____________wasverysevere.2.皮膚又紅又腫。Theskinwasredand____________.3.我設(shè)法保持鎮(zhèn)靜，并快速回想在急救課堂上學到的內(nèi)容。Imanagedto________________，andquicklyrecalledwhatIhadlearntinmy________________class.burnswollenremaincalmfirst-aid4.我立即把他的腳放到流動的涼水下，以減輕疼痛。Iplacedhisfeetunderthe__________________________________thepain.5.然后，我打電話叫了一輛出租車，并匆忙把他送往了醫(yī)院。Afterwards,Icalledataxiand___________________________.6.在醫(yī)院里，他接受了進一步的治療。Inthehospital，hereceivedfurther____________.7.在那時我意識到了基本的急救知識是多么重要和實用。ThenIwas_________howimportantand__________abasic____________of_______________.coolrunningwaterrightawaytoeaserushedhimtothehospitaltreatmentawarepracticalknowledgefirstaidwas1.將句1和句2合并為含有so...that...的句子_______________________________________________________________2.將句3升級為含有現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語的句子_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theburnwassoseverethattheskinwasredandswollen.Imanagedtoremaincalm,quicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidclass.詞句升級3.將句5和句6合并為含有where引導的定語從句的句子_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________將句7升級為“only＋狀語”放句首的倒裝句_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterwards,Icalledataxiandrushedhimtothehospitalwherehereceivedfurthertreatment.OnlythenwasIawarehowimportantandpracticalabasicknowledgeoffirstaidwas.1.Finishthestory

2.Exchangeyourarticlewithyourpartner.3.Polishyourarticlewiththehelpofthechecklistonpage57.

ls

the

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tell

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who,

what,

and

where?

Does

the

second

part

show

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third

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Oneday,LiMingandIwerewalkingbacktothedormfromtheboilerroomwhensuddenlyhisthermosbottleburstandtheboilingwatercausedinjuriestohisfeet.Theburnwassoseverethattheskinwasredandswollen.However,Imanagedtoremaincalm,quicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidclass.Iplacedhisfeetunderthecoolrunningwaterrightawaytoeasethepain.Afterwards,Icalledataxiandrushedhimtothehospitalwherehereceivedfurthertreatment.

OnlythenwasIawarehowimportantandpracticalabasicknowledgeoffirstaidwas.范文寫作積累有關(guān)避免/處理緊急狀況的一些表達:1、Bleeding:Try

to

stop

the

bleeding.Press

a

handkerchief

onto

the

bleeding

point

and

hold

it

there.Hold

up

the

part

of

the

body

which

is

bleeding

if

possible.2、Sprain(扭傷):It

is

better

to

avoid

walking

with

the

injured

ankle.It

is

correct

to

use

an

ice

pack

for

relieving

the

pain.寫作積累有關(guān)避免/處理緊急狀況的一些表達:3、Choke:Make

him/her

spit(吐)

it

out

by

slapping

him/her

on

the

back.To

avoid

this,

we

shouldn’t

talk

or

laugh

when

eating.4、Nosebleed: