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中考作文范文一.常用過(guò)渡詞1．表起始的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：firstofall,tobeginwith，firstandforemost，atfirst，butnow．．．e.g.Firstandforemost,Ithinkyoushouldgetalongwellwithyourparents.Theyaretheoneswhogivebirthtoyouandloveyouwithalltheirhearts.Englishlearningwasquitedifficultformeatfirst,butIcandoitwellnow.2．表推進(jìn)的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：What’smore，What’sworse，Tomakethings／mattersworse，Moreimportantly,Ontheonehand...,ontheotherhand...;foronething...,foranother...;notonly...,butalso...;Inaddition,Additionally,aswell,also,inotherwords,besides,furthermore,moreover3.表總結(jié)的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：Inshort，Inaword，Ingeneral，Inbrief，Inconclusion，Insummary，Allinall,Tosumup,Generallyspeaking,Todrawaconclusion,4．表列舉的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：forexample，forinstance，suchas，like，takesthasanexample，．．．isthebestexampleforthis;Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Whenitcomesto...e.g.Noteverythinginlanguagelearningisinteresting.Forinstance,Ihatememorizingthesentencepatterns,butIdoitbecauseIwanttogetbettergradesinwritingtest.5．表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)：Inmyopinion，Ithink；asfarasIamconcerned，Iholdthebeliefthat．．．，F(xiàn)rommypointofview,Frommyperspective,Asforme6．表因果的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：for，becauseof，Thisisbecause．．，That’swhy．．．，thus，so，Asaresult，Therefore,thereasonwhy...isthat....;thanksto/becauseof/dueto..e.g.Sheisagreatteacherwhohasknowledgeandpatience.Therefore,Ihavenohesitationinrecommendinghertoyou.7．表轉(zhuǎn)折的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：but，yet，however，afterall，infact，while，onthecontrary，insteadof,although,otherwise,neverthelesse.g.Someparentsexpresstheirappreciationtothesehelpfulcoursesatschool.Onthecontrary.othersarguethatthesecourseswouldbringaboutmorestresstostudentsandthusareagainstthispractice.Hewasaslowreader,neverthelessheneverstoppedreading.表時(shí)間的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：then，later，intheend，finally，afterwards，afterthat，sincethen，assoonas,meanwhile,lateron,soon,finally寫(xiě)作高頻詞匯--初高級(jí)詞匯轉(zhuǎn)化原則：晚詞優(yōu)先；名詞短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先；活用修飾詞一、形容詞許多；大量的；各種各樣的：many/much（1）a(great)numberof/quiteafew+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)+謂語(yǔ)原形/are/were（2)alotof/lotsof/massesof/plentyof越來(lái)越：moreandmore→increasing(ly)moreandmorecountries：agrowingnumberofcountriesWiththeincreasinglyrapideconomic(經(jīng)濟(jì)的)growth,moreproblemsarebroughttoourattention.也：too/also→...aswell(句末）.好的：good→fantastic，amazing，excellent，outstanding，perfect，promising壞/不好：bad→terrible，harmful高興：happy→pleased、joyful非常：very→quite、rather一點(diǎn)：alittle→slightly有時(shí)：sometimes→onceinawhile,fromtimetotime完全completely/wholly/totally事實(shí)上：infact→asamatteroffact通過(guò)：bydoingsth→bymeansofdoingsth和：and→aswellas,along/togetherwith（謂語(yǔ)→就遠(yuǎn)一致原則），此外：besides→moreover,inaddition,what’smore,一方面....，另一方面......：foronething…foranother但是，然而but→yet,ontheotherhand,however因?yàn)閎ecause→asaresultof...因此so→therefore,asaresult,thus能can→enable（使...能夠），allowsbtodo（允許...做某事）,使做某事成為可能：makeitpossibleforsbtodosth感謝thanksbfor→begratefultosbfor=express/showone’sgratitudetosb.for因……感激/感謝某人希望hopetodosth.→inthehopeof需要need→inneedof參觀visit→tour/payavisitto記住remember→keepinmindthatWeshouldbearinmindthatourhardworkwillpayoffoneday.建議advisesbtodosth，advise/suggestdoing→It’ssuggested/advisedthatsbshoulddoSbsuggest/advisethatsbshoulddoThesuggestionisthatsbshoulddo不能、沒(méi)法做...can’t→failtodo...=can't可能maybe→belikelytodo喜歡like→befondofdoingsth.，最喜愛(ài)welike...thebest...→sthstandoutasone’sfavorite代替要求beasktodo...→berequestedtodosth.=demand(ofsb.)todo...要求(某人)做……→Itisrequired/requested/demandedthat...(should)do...對(duì)...有益begoodfor→beof(great)benefitto...，behelpfultosth=beofusetosth使用use→/makeuseof/takeadvantageof成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit很激動(dòng)veryexcited→thrilledWewerethrilledtoknowthenewsthatwewouldtravelinShanghai.遇見(jiàn)meet→cameacrosssb.導(dǎo)致，促使：causesth.:giveriseto/leadto/resultin買(mǎi)buy→afford盡全力做某事tryone'sbesttodosth.→sparenoefforttodosth.，doone’sutmostAsthecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming/approaching(withtheexamapproaching),wealldoourutmosttoprepareforit對(duì)...感興趣beinterestedin/喜歡做...love/like/enjoy…verymuchbekeenon=bepassionateabout熱衷于……=beenthusiasticaboutbefondof:Manyteenagersarefondofplayingcomputergames更喜歡likebetterOfthetwo,likethelatterbetter→Ofthetwo,thelatterwinsmyfavor.引起某人的注意：attractone'sattention:captured/arrestedone'sattention即將來(lái)臨sthiscoming→sthisapproaching,bedrawingnear,bearoundthecornerThesummervacationisaroundthecorner/approaching(coming)在...時(shí)候（日期）...isonMay1st→...fallson在...地點(diǎn)...isin/at+地點(diǎn)→...islocatedin/at+地點(diǎn)結(jié)束complete→cometoanend(vi)=put/bringsthtoanend=put/bringanendtosth幫助某人helpsb.→dosb.afavour，doafavourforsb.，givesbahand向某人尋求幫助asksb.forhelp→turntosb.forhelp，askafavourofsb.幫助……克服困境helpoutbereadytohelpsb.:bealwaysthereforsb.決定decidetodo→bedeterminedtodo,makeupone’smindtodo意識(shí)到realize→beconscious/awareof我認(rèn)為Ithink→holdtheviewthat,Ithink/find/considerit+adj(importance,necessary）todosthIhavetheconfidencethat…，在我看來(lái)：inmyopinion:asfarasI'mconcerned解決solve→dealwith,workout面對(duì)facesth.→befacedwith，befacedwith/standuptoWhenwearefacedwith(facing)frustrationsandfailures,weshouldbringouremotioncontrol.為……做準(zhǔn)備preparefor→makepreparationsfor/bepreparedfor廣受歡迎→sthenjoyawidepopularity,gaine(huge)popularity享譽(yù)盛名→sthenjoyagoodreputation覆蓋廣泛→coverawiderangeof帶來(lái)更多的方便bringmuchmoreconvenience方便的多→alot/muchmoreconvenient豐富enrich→enrichstudents'campuslife迫不及待→can’twaittodosth.隨著→withtheemergence/developmentofsth,贊賞→admiresb.for(doing)sth.因(做)某事羨慕某人召集→callon值得→deserve/worthtobedone/doing祝愿→wishsb.apleasantjourney祝某人旅途愉快留意；注意→payattentionto注意；留意draw/attract/catchone'sattention引起某人的注意滿(mǎn)意→satisfyvt.使?jié)M意；滿(mǎn)足satisfactionn.滿(mǎn)意；滿(mǎn)足Be+adj=be+of+great+n1．realize→raiseone'sawarenessof意識(shí)到2．a(chǎn)ffect/work→makeadifference有影響；起作用3．a(chǎn)ttract→appealto吸引4．becoming→beapproaching/bearoundthecorner到來(lái)5．consider→oaccount/consideration考慮6．decide→makeadecision決定7．deliver→giveaway分發(fā)8．master→haveagoodcommandof掌握9．expect→lookforwardto盼望10．improve→makegreatprogress取得進(jìn)步11．finish→accomplish完成12．laughloud→burstintolaughter大笑13．leadto→resultin導(dǎo)致14．leaveschool→dropoutofschool輟學(xué)15．use→makeuseof/takeadvantageof利用16．praise→singhighpraisefor表?yè)P(yáng)17．reach→liveupto達(dá)到18．remember→keep/bearinmind記住19．represent→onbehalfof代表20．show→reflect顯示，反映二、常用諺語(yǔ)Asasayingdoes，Asayinggoesthat·.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords. 事實(shí)勝于雄辯Afriendinneedisafriendindeed. 患難朋友才是真朋友Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半Wherethereisawill,thereisaway. 有志者事竟成AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬Easiersaidthandone.說(shuō)起來(lái)容易，做起來(lái)難Failureisthemotherofsuccess. 失敗是成功之母Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行Nothingintheworldisdifficultifyousetyourmindtoit.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy. 萬(wàn)事開(kāi)頭難Alwaysprepareforarainyday. 未雨綢繆Asyousow,soshallyoureap. 種瓜得瓜種豆得豆Don’tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事今日畢！Practicemakesperfect. 熟能生巧Nopains，nogains.一分耕耘一分收獲Honestyisthebestpolicy：做人以誠(chéng)信為本Don’tjudgeamanbyhislooks.不可以貌取人AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聰明的孩子也變傻。Romewasnotbuiltinoneday. 偉業(yè)非一日之功。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswitha，singlestep.千里之行始于足下。Knowledgeispower.知識(shí)就是力量。Therosesinherhand，theflavorinmine.贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香。三。常見(jiàn)高級(jí)表達(dá)方式句型一：分詞作狀語(yǔ)的用法分詞作狀語(yǔ)可以用來(lái)替代時(shí)間、條件、原因等狀語(yǔ)從句，讓文章顯得更加簡(jiǎn)潔，同時(shí)功底更深。當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)與主句的主語(yǔ)一樣時(shí)，可直接省略從句的主語(yǔ)，并把從句的謂語(yǔ)改成分詞（主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)改成現(xiàn)在分詞，被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)改成過(guò)去分詞），從而構(gòu)成分詞作狀語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)?！纠?】WhenIseeDadworkingsohard，Icouldnothelpburstingintotears．→SeeingDadworkingsohard,Icouldnothelpburstingintotears.【例2】BecauseIwasmovedbythekidsinWenchuan，Idecidedtodonateallmymoneytothem.→MovedbythekidsinWenchuan,Idecidedtodonateallmymoneytothem.句型二：副詞提前：Obviously,oneofthebestwaystokeephealthyistodosports.顯然，保持健康最好的方法之一是做運(yùn)動(dòng)。Eventually,everychildwillleavehometoleadhisownlifeasafullyindependentadult.最終，每一個(gè)孩子都會(huì)離開(kāi)家庭去過(guò)自己的生活，成為一個(gè)完全獨(dú)立地成年人。句型三：動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)Listeningtomusicenablesustofeelrelaxed.聽(tīng)音樂(lè)可以讓我們感覺(jué)放松。Doingexercisekeepsushealthy.做運(yùn)動(dòng)讓我們保持健康。點(diǎn)評(píng)：動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)是最簡(jiǎn)單的一種加分句型了，非常容易掌握。當(dāng)然，即便如此還是有同學(xué)會(huì)用錯(cuò)，所以這里提醒同學(xué)們用的時(shí)候注意最核心的一點(diǎn)：如果主語(yǔ)只有一個(gè)動(dòng)作，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用三單！大家可能覺(jué)得上面給出來(lái)的兩個(gè)例句并不是十分精彩，但是動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)只要合理使用，還是會(huì)讓人眼前一亮的。請(qǐng)看下句：【例】Besides，takingsomesmallsportsequipmentalongwithyoucanhelpyoudoexercisewheneveryouarefree.另外，隨身攜帶一些小型運(yùn)動(dòng)器械可以讓你利用任何空閑的時(shí)間來(lái)運(yùn)動(dòng)。句型四：強(qiáng)調(diào)句Itisinrecentyearsthatpeoplebegintorealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.最近這些年人們才開(kāi)始意識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。Itisourparentsthatwecanalwaysdependonwhenweareintrouble.當(dāng)我們遇到麻煩時(shí)，可以依靠的總是我們的父母。Hedidreturnthebooktomeyesterday.Imayputitsomewhereelse.他昨天確實(shí)把書(shū)還給我了，或許我把它放到別的地方了。強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的基本模式是：Itis／was＋一個(gè)句子要強(qiáng)調(diào)的部分＋that＋句子中剩余的部分。例如，原本我們想寫(xiě)的句子是：Ericfoundabeautifulvaseinthecave.要強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)Eric，則為ItwasEricthatfoundabeautifulvaseinthecave.要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語(yǔ)abeautifulvase，則為ItwasabeautifulvasethatEricfoundinthecave.句型五：同位語(yǔ)or同位語(yǔ)從句Beijing,thecapitalofChina,hasagreatmanyplacesofinterests.北京是中國(guó)的首都，有很多的旅游景點(diǎn)。Thefactisclearthatourplanetisbecomingwarmerandwarmer.很顯然，地球正在變暖。點(diǎn)評(píng)：相比于前幾種閃光句型，同位語(yǔ)和同位語(yǔ)從句就要復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)了，尤其是同位語(yǔ)從句要復(fù)雜一些。同位語(yǔ)和同位語(yǔ)從句在初中不作要求，但平時(shí)見(jiàn)得也并不少。當(dāng)同位語(yǔ)從句被合理使用，尤其是和排比句一起使用的時(shí)候，所產(chǎn)生的效果是震撼性的。同位語(yǔ)從句的基本結(jié)構(gòu)是：抽象名詞＋that-抽象名字的內(nèi)容（從句）＋主句剩余部分?！纠?havejustreceivedthemessagethataseriousearthquakeslruckacountyofTaiwanyesterday.我剛收到一個(gè)消息：昨天臺(tái)灣某縣發(fā)生了嚴(yán)重的地震。句型六：萬(wàn)金油句型這些句型經(jīng)過(guò)前人的實(shí)踐發(fā)現(xiàn)非常容易使用，只要往自己寫(xiě)好的句子上硬套就行，甚至對(duì)時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)都無(wú)特殊要求，如同萬(wàn)金油一樣。無(wú)意義。這些句型本身并沒(méi)有什么特殊含義，只是輔助一下預(yù)期或讓表意更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)一點(diǎn)，有它無(wú)它對(duì)語(yǔ)義影響其實(shí)不大。Thereisnodenyingthat＋陳述句 不可否認(rèn)Thereisnodoubtthat＋陳述句 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn).Needlesstosay，陳述句 不用多說(shuō)，......Itiswidelyacceptedthat＋陳述句 眾所周知.Asisknowntoall，陳述句 眾所周知，鑒于句型太多，就不一一舉例子了，大家只要把自己想說(shuō)的話(huà)放到“陳述句”那一部分就可以了、記住，剩余的部分一點(diǎn)都不要改，包括逗號(hào)！Mr.Zhangisthemosthandsometeacherintheworld：普普通通。但是如果我們加上一點(diǎn)流氓句型的話(huà)，就會(huì)好一點(diǎn)：【例】Asisknowntoall，Mr.Zhangisthemosthandsometeacherintheworld.眾所周知，張老師是世界上最帥的老師?！纠緼sfarasIamconcerned，Mr.Zhangisthemosthandsometeacherintheworld.我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，張老師是世界上最帥的老師。句型七：巧用with和asAswintercomes,moreandmoreleavesfalloffthetrees,yellowandsad.隨著冬天的來(lái)臨，越來(lái)越多悲傷地黃葉從樹(shù)上落下。Thepollutionisgettingworseastheeconomydevelops.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，污染在變得更加嚴(yán)重。Mom'shairisnotasblackasitusedtobe.媽媽的頭發(fā)不再像過(guò)去一樣烏黑亮麗。點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中階段我們要求同學(xué)們掌握as的一共5種意思或用法：①當(dāng)，隨若astimegoesby 隨著時(shí)間的流逝②作為regardAasB 把A當(dāng)做Basaresult 結(jié)果是③正如，就像asweallknow／aseveryoneknows正如我們都知道的aswehadexpected正如我們期待的那樣asisknowtoall眾所周知asismentionedbefore正如前面所提到的asthesayinggoes就像諺語(yǔ)說(shuō)的那樣asitturnsout正如結(jié)果所展示的那樣④因?yàn)棰荼容^as...asitusedto. 和過(guò)去一樣.with表伴隨，表照因1.Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology，ourlifebecomemuchmoreconvenientandmeanwhilewearefacingmorechallenges.2.Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.3.Hewascarryingabedrollandalargebagonhisshoulder,withalargesuitcaseinhislefthand.句型八：巧用從句1.定語(yǔ)從句Theman,whoiscalledfatherbyme,istryingtoensureusabetterlifewithallhiseffort.那個(gè)被我稱(chēng)作父親的人，正在竭盡全力為我們提供更好的生活。Iseldomwasteanytimeduringtheclasses,whichhelpsmetobehighlyefficientwhilestudying,在課堂上，我很少浪費(fèi)任何時(shí)間，這幫助我在學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候更加高效。2.賓語(yǔ)從句It'suptoyouwhatkindoflifeyouwillleadinthefuture.3.主語(yǔ)從句Whetherabooksellswelldependsonvariousreasons.4．狀語(yǔ)從句Don'tloseheartevenifyouhavefallenbehindothers.句型九：倒裝句OnlywhenInoticedthegreyhairsdidIrealizedthatMumwasgettingold.只在我注意到那一絲絲白發(fā)的時(shí)候，我才意識(shí)到，媽媽已經(jīng)老了。Notonlydowecollectinformationabouttheanimalsindanger,butwealsoposttheinformationontheinternet.我們不僅收集瀕危動(dòng)物的信息，還把這些信息發(fā)布在網(wǎng)上。NeverwillIforgetthedaysthatlspentwithmyfriends.我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘了和朋友們?cè)谝黄鸬娜兆印omovedwasIthatIlostmytongue.我太激動(dòng)了以至于說(shuō)不出話(huà)來(lái)。SuchahandsomemanisJackthateveryonelikeshim.Jack太帥了我們每個(gè)人都喜歡他。句型十：虛擬語(yǔ)氣IfIwereyou,Iwould....如果我是你的話(huà)，我就會(huì)..把你想說(shuō)的話(huà)放在Iwould后面就行了，注意前面只能用were。IfIwereyou.Iwouldhelpmyparentsdomorehousework.如果我是你的話(huà)，我會(huì)幫我爸媽做更多的家務(wù).句型十一：感嘆句Youcan'timaginehowhardtheroadtosuccessis!Nowmoreandmorepeoplehavesometorealizehowseriousthisproblemis.Whatanexcitingdayitwas!Howdeeply1wasmovedbyhiswords!一、用較高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)代替紅色的詞或短語(yǔ)1.Weallhavethesamechance.2.Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.3.Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.4.Hedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.5.We’lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.6.Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.按要求轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子：IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(用倒裝句句)Wedon’tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth.(用倒裝句)Ifitisn’twellorganized，themeetingwillbeafailure.(用省略句）Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday.(用感嘆句)Becausetherewastoomuchnoise，Icouldn’tgoonstudying.(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)).Ifitisso，Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.(用省略句) Wecanachieveourgoalinthisway.(用倒裝句)Muchtooursurprise，Maryfailedinthefinalexam.(用名詞性從句)二、用高級(jí)句式轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子1.Aboveall，wemustdosomethingtostoppollution.(使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句)3.Wedon’tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth.(使用倒裝句或強(qiáng)調(diào)句)4.Ifitisn’twellorganized，themeetingwillbeafailure.(使用省略句)5.TheforeignerhaslivedinChinaformanyyears.Hestillcan’tspeakChinesewell.(使用分詞作狀語(yǔ))6.Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday.(使用感嘆句)7.Becausetherewastoomuchnoise，Icouldn’tconcentrateonstudying.(使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))8.Ididn’ttakehisadvice，soIfailedintheexam.(使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣)9.ShewaseducatedatBeijingUniversity.Afterthatshewenttohaveheradvancedstudyabroad..(使用定語(yǔ)從句)三、學(xué)生習(xí)作Improvethecompositionbyusingthemethodslearntandrewriteitintheexercisebook.DearJack,Howiseverythinggoing?ThankyouforyourlettingmeliveinyourhouseduringmytriptoAmericaverymuch.I’llneverforgetthedayswespenttogether.Becauseofleavinginahurry,IleftagiftintheroomIlivedin,whichIboughtforafriend.Thegiftwasplacedunderthebed,wrappedwithpinkpaper.Myfriend’sbirthdayiscoming.Iwillpresentitasthebirthdaygift.Ineeditextremely.Pleasesendittomequickly.）Ihopeyou’llcometoChina.Thenwecanplayhappilyagain.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（優(yōu)秀）：19-20分高水平完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)一內(nèi)容豐富，構(gòu)思精巧，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，布局合理，過(guò)渡自然。一準(zhǔn)確地使用了豐富的詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)流暢、自然、無(wú)誤， 具有很強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。第四檔（良好）：16-18分較好完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。一內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，過(guò)渡自然。一比較準(zhǔn)確地使用了較為豐富的詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)流暢自然，具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。第三（中等）：13-15分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。一結(jié)構(gòu)明確，內(nèi)容較為詳實(shí)，詳略得當(dāng)。一較為準(zhǔn)確地使用了合理的詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠比較清楚表達(dá)意思，具有一定的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。第二檔（較差）：8-12分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。一文章結(jié)構(gòu)能夠基本符合試題寫(xiě)作要求。一詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不能完全滿(mǎn)足寫(xiě)作任務(wù)的要求，語(yǔ)言不夠連貫且錯(cuò)誤較多，影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。第一檔（差）：0-7分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。一內(nèi)容嚴(yán)重缺失，結(jié)構(gòu)詳略混亂。一詞匯和語(yǔ)言不能滿(mǎn)足寫(xiě)作任務(wù)的要求，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)漏太多，無(wú)法傳達(dá)有效信息。24個(gè)中考作文話(huà)題1.個(gè)人情況 2．家庭、朋友與周?chē)娜?．居住環(huán)境 4．日?；顒?dòng)5．學(xué)校 6．個(gè)人興趣7．情感與情緒 8．人際交往9．計(jì)劃與安排 10．節(jié)假日活動(dòng)11．購(gòu)物 12．飲食13．衛(wèi)生與健康 14．安全與救護(hù)15．天氣 16．文娛與體育17．旅游與交通 18．通訊19．語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí) 20．自然21．世界與環(huán)境 22．科普知識(shí)與現(xiàn)代科技23．歷史與社會(huì) 24．故事與詩(shī)歌寫(xiě)作步驟中考寫(xiě)作5步法：審--列--擴(kuò)-美-查1．審：1）審文體；2）審要點(diǎn)；3）審時(shí)態(tài)：4）審人稱(chēng)。2．列：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，分出大段、確定詳略、列全要點(diǎn)。1）列框架，定詳略：2）列出要點(diǎn)所需的詞匯或短語(yǔ)，為接下來(lái)的寫(xiě)作積累素材。3．?dāng)U：1）錢(qián)繞每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)加入該段的中心句，并圍繞中心句進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充和闡述：2）將要點(diǎn)的短語(yǔ)或短句擴(kuò)成一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句或美句，4．美：1）選詞優(yōu)美，善用高級(jí)詞匯：2）句式豐富：句型多變，如：定語(yǔ)從句；狀語(yǔ)從句：主語(yǔ)從句：表語(yǔ)從句：常見(jiàn)的諺請(qǐng)或俗語(yǔ)等，寫(xiě)作中同時(shí)注意長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合。3）書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，卷面整潔。4）加入連接詞，住文章的邏輯關(guān)系更加緊密，過(guò)設(shè)更加流暢，脈絡(luò)更加清晰。5．查：1）查文章是否切題：2）要點(diǎn)是否包含：3）時(shí)態(tài)和主語(yǔ)是否一致：4）名詞單復(fù)數(shù)是否恰當(dāng)：5）搭配是否準(zhǔn)確：6）大小寫(xiě)、單詞拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否有誤。中考寫(xiě)作題材不同模板中考寫(xiě)作---表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)型寫(xiě)作模板Para1:Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernoverthefactthat………It’sknowntoallthat………Thetopicof……isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Para2:people’sopinionsabout……varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythat…….Tothem,…….Whileothersthink……isabetterchoiceforthefollowingreasons.Tobeginwith,…….What’smore,…….Lastbutnotleast,…….Para3:AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat…….FromwhereIstand,itwouldbebetterto……,because……Iagreewiththeformer/latter.Iholdtheviewthat…….(二)問(wèn)題解決型寫(xiě)作模板Para1:Nowadays,peoplearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontotheproblemthat…….Inrecentlydays,wehavetofaceaproblemthat……Para2:Facedwiththis,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodealwithit.Foronething,weshould…….Foranotherthing,we’dbetter…….Besides,……doing……isalsoagoodway.Manywayscanhelptosolvetheseriousproblem,butthefollowingmaybethemosteffective.Tostartwith,…….Anotherwaytosolvetheproblemis…….Finally,…….Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,weknowthateveryoneshould…….onlyinthisway,canwe…………（三）闡述利弊型Para.l:Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernoverthefactthat....Thetopicof isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Nowadays,peoplearepayingmoreandmoreattentionto...Para.2:Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.First, What'smore, Everythinghastwosidesand isnotanexception,ithasalsobroughtalotofharms. Mostimportantofall, Para.3：AsfarasIamconcerned,IfirmlyholdtheviewthatFromwhereIstand,itwouldbebetterto ,because PersonallyI thinkitisclearthat playsanimportantroleinourdailylife.高分作文“十字訣”一、結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式：觀點(diǎn)-要點(diǎn)-總結(jié)二、要點(diǎn)：全，圍繞中心三、邏輯：邏輯詞遞進(jìn)：first,second,third,finally;firstofall,inaddition/what’smore/moreover(都是另外的意思),inaword/allinall(表示總結(jié));lastbutnotleast(最后但同樣重要的是)轉(zhuǎn)折：but,yet,however等因果：because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto,so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,so/such...that...總結(jié)：inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,afterall,generallyspeaking,tosumup,finally,inconclusion,insummary四、語(yǔ)法：硬性要求，如人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、從句、單復(fù)數(shù)等問(wèn)題五、亮點(diǎn)：高級(jí)詞匯和加分句型1.表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)看法的句型=1\*GB3①Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas/opinionsonthisproblem.關(guān)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題，不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)=2\*GB3②Somepeoplethinkthatitisadj.todosth.一些人認(rèn)為做某事是....的=3\*GB3③Someofthemareagainsttheideathatitis....他們中有些人反對(duì)....的想法=4\*GB3④AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat......(觀點(diǎn)一或二).Itisnotonlybecause......,butalsobecause....Allinall,themore...,themore...2.解決問(wèn)題的句型=1\*GB3①I(mǎi)nrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem--______,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.最近，我們不得不面臨一個(gè)問(wèn)題：_______,這個(gè)問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重；=2\*GB3②Facedwith...,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodealwiththesituation.Foronething,........(解決方法一).Foranother,......(解決方法二).Finally,.......(解決方法三).=3\*GB3③Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.我相信如果每個(gè)人都能對(duì)....做出貢獻(xiàn)，這個(gè)...將會(huì)變得越來(lái)越好。3.說(shuō)明原因句型=1\*GB3①Thereasonforthisareasfollows.這一點(diǎn)的幾種原因如下=2\*GB3②Foronereasonisthat.......Foranotherreasonisthat.....一個(gè)原因是....,另一個(gè)原因是....=3\*GB3③Ontheonehand,.......;Ontheotherhand,.......一方面.....，另一方面.....4.說(shuō)明利弊型句型=1\*GB3①Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover.......(作文題目).Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin...(題目議題).=2\*GB3②Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.通常來(lái)說(shuō)，人們相信有如下幾點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢(shì)。=3\*GB3③Justasapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides.”Itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,缺點(diǎn)一；Inaddition,缺點(diǎn)二.=4\*GB3④Tosumup,weshouldtrytomakefulluseoftheadvantagesandreducethedisadvantagesatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewillmakeabetteruseof.....總之，我們應(yīng)該盡力充分利用其優(yōu)勢(shì)，同時(shí)減少缺點(diǎn)。如果那樣的話(huà)，我們將能更好的利用....5.正反觀點(diǎn)式句型=1\*GB3①Recentlywehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshould.....Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.(導(dǎo)入，觀點(diǎn)有分歧)=2\*GB3②Mostofthestudentsareinfavorofit.(正方觀點(diǎn))Herearethereasonswhytheysupportit.(列出2-3個(gè)理由)However,theothersarestronglyagainstit.(反方觀點(diǎn)).Theirreasonsareasfollows.Inthefirstplace...What’smore...Inaddition...(列出2-3個(gè)反對(duì)理由)=3\*GB3③Personallyspeaking,theadvantagesoverweighthedisadvantages,foritwilldousmorebenefitsthanharms,soIsupportit.(個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))6.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)論述句型=1\*GB3①Asastudent,Iamstronglyinfavorofthedecision.Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.(亮明自己的觀點(diǎn)）=2\*GB3②Firstofall.....Secondly.....Besides.....(列出2-3個(gè)贊成或反對(duì)的理由)=3\*GB3③Inconclusion,Ibelievethat......(總結(jié)，構(gòu)成總分總結(jié)構(gòu))7.提出建議類(lèi)句型=1\*GB3①I(mǎi)’msogladtohearthatyoushowadeepinterestin......inyoulastlastletter(背景介紹).AsfarasIamconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingsuggestions.(導(dǎo)入下文)=2\*GB3②Iamsorrytohearthatyouaretroubledbysomething.AndIamgladtogiveyousomeadviceontheproblemyouarefacedwith.=3\*GB3③Tobeginwith,I’dliketosuggestthatyoushould.....Becauseitcan.......Inaddition,ifIwereyou,Iwould.......Thisisagoodwayof......What’smore,youaresupposedto.......Onlythenyouwill.....(列舉建議內(nèi)容以及理由)=4\*GB3④Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.(表達(dá)愿望)8.表達(dá)活動(dòng)邀請(qǐng)類(lèi)句型=1\*GB3①I(mǎi)knowthatyouareinterestedin....AndIamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartin.....(背景介紹，提出邀請(qǐng))=2\*GB3②Thereisanactivityabout.......(活動(dòng)名稱(chēng)),whichwillbeheld.......(活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)).Itwillbeginat2:00p.m.onJuly1st(時(shí)間)andalltheteachersandstudentswillattend.Onthatday,.....willbeputon.(活動(dòng)內(nèi)容).=3\*GB3③Comeandjoinus!Ithinkwe’llhaveagreattime.(再次提出邀請(qǐng))=4\*GB3④Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.(期待早日收到回信)9.表達(dá)求助類(lèi)句型=1\*GB3①......(背景介紹).Ifinditisquitehardto.....(提出問(wèn)題).Therefore,Iamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor/givemeahand.(表達(dá)目的)=2\*GB3②I’mfacedwithsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith.......What’smore.....Whattroublesmemostisthatitisdifficultformeto......=3\*GB3③Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.10.表達(dá)感謝類(lèi)句型=1\*GB3①Thanksto/Dueto/Owingto+n./V-ing（由于，多虧……）Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream.=2\*GB3②Withoutyourhelp,it’simpossibleformeto….(沒(méi)有你的幫助，……對(duì)我來(lái)視說(shuō)是不可能的)Withoutyourhelp,it’simpossibleformetogetsuchgoodgrades.=3\*GB3③Yourhelpmakesitpossibleforsb.todosth.(你的幫助使得我做某事成為可能。)Yourhelpmakesitpossibleformetochangemyself. 2021年中考英語(yǔ)作文范文必備1.【低碳生活-環(huán)?！楷F(xiàn)在我們周?chē)沫h(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。作為一個(gè)中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個(gè)“低碳生活”的中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)以“MyLow--carbonLife”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。MyLow-carbonLifeTheenvironmentalpollutionisworseandworsetoday.Manytreesarecutdown,andwaterandairarepolluted.AsastudentItrytohavealow-carbonlifetosaveenergyandreducepollution.Firstly,Ioftenwalktoschool.Itcanreduceairpollution.Secondly,Ialwaysturnoffthelightsandfanswhenleavingtheclassroom.Thirdly,Ialwaysmakefulluseofpaperandotherschoolthingsandneverwastewater.Iwishmorestudentstojoinmeandmaketheearthmoreandmorebeautiful. 2.【朋友-社交】每當(dāng)朋友之間即將分手的時(shí)候，耳邊常常會(huì)響起這首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，請(qǐng)你忘記我……”。請(qǐng)你以Friends為題，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文，可以圍繞主題適當(dāng)展開(kāi)，闡述交友的重要性和好處。FriendsWhatarefriends?Weoftentalkaboutthetopicwithothers.Ithinkfriendsarethosepeoplewhocanhelpyouwhenyouareintrouble.Don’tforgetthesaying,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Friendscantellyouyourmistakes,thoughwhattheysayishardforyoutolistento.Youcanshareyourhappiness,troubleandworrywithfriends.Someonealsosays,“Youcan’twalkanystepwithoutafriend.”SoIthinkfriendsareveryimportanttous.Iwouldliketomakeasmanyfriendsaspossible.3.【是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人-社會(huì)現(xiàn)象】最近，你們班就“是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人”展開(kāi)了討論，同學(xué)們就這一話(huà)題意見(jiàn)不一，你的看法如何?根據(jù)所提供的信息，以“ShouldWeHelpStrangers?”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。贊成幫助他人是美德；幫助他人就是幫助自己反對(duì)怕陷入麻煩；怕被誤解ShouldWeHelpStrangers?Recentlyourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldhelpstrangers.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somethinkweshouldtrytohelpstrangers.Helpingothersisavirtue,andhelpingothersishelpingourselves.Wemaycomeacrosssometroubleandneedothers'helpsomeday.Ifeveryoneisn'twillingtohelpusjustbecausewearestrangerstothem,it'shardtoimaginewhatourworldwillbelike.However,someareafraidthathelpingotherscansometimesbringustrouble.Sometimeswearejustmisunderstoodandevenhavetopaythecostofkindness.Inmyopinion,weshouldtryourbesttohelpotherswhentheyareinneedofhelp,butweshouldalsoprotectourselvesfromgettingintotrouble.Ifeveryonetriesalittlekindness,ourworldwillbefulloflove.4.【對(duì)我影響最深的人-人物介紹】學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)在舉辦征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇題為“ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMost”的英語(yǔ)文章。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.對(duì)我影響最大的人是我的媽媽?zhuān)氖畮讱q;2.她總是耐心傾聽(tīng)我的問(wèn)題，并建議我如何解決它們;3.作為一名醫(yī)生，她常說(shuō)再怎么仔細(xì)也不為過(guò)。她總是加班，把她的大部分時(shí)間都奉獻(xiàn)給了工作;4.所以，我認(rèn)為她不僅是位好媽媽?zhuān)彩敲冕t(yī)生。5.我希望……ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMostMymotheristhepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost.Sheisinherforties.Shealwayslistenstomyproblemspatiently.Andsheadvisesmehowtosolvethem.Asadoctor,sheoftensaysshecan’tbetoocareful.Sheoftenworksextrahours.Shehasdevotedmostofhertimetoherwork.SoIthinksheisnotonlyagoodmotherbutalsoagooddoctor.IhopeIcanbeapersonlikeher.Ialsohopeshewillpaymoreattentiontoherownhealth.She’dbetterhavemoretimetorelaxherself.5.【如何與父母保持良好的關(guān)系-家庭教育】某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話(huà)題開(kāi)展題為“Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)一篇80個(gè)詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文參加此次活動(dòng):1.父母規(guī)矩太多,過(guò)于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī),不理解自己等問(wèn)題;2.你對(duì)這些問(wèn)題的看法;3.你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法。HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.My