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寫作篇優(yōu)秀水平標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、能精確運(yùn)用詞匯和句型結(jié)構(gòu)，較生動(dòng)和具體地描述情境或敘述所給話題，能精確自如地表達(dá)看法和感情。2、能用流暢的語(yǔ)言組織常見體裁的短文，邏輯清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，層次清晰，內(nèi)容充溢，文體恰當(dāng)。3、能在寫作中恰當(dāng)?shù)匾觅Y料，能用諺語(yǔ)、俗語(yǔ)等，能清晰地闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)和評(píng)述他人的觀點(diǎn)，具有確定的人文意識(shí)。寫作分值逐年提高05年10分06年14分07、08年16分09、10、11年18分12年20分內(nèi)容（8分）是否緊扣主題是否涉及到所要求的幾個(gè)方面語(yǔ)言（8分）大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、單詞拼法、詞法、句法是否正確字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)標(biāo)組織結(jié)構(gòu)分（4分）內(nèi)容充溢，不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語(yǔ)規(guī)范、表達(dá)精確、無(wú)或少見語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者，可給4分。

組織結(jié)構(gòu)分

通篇句型、句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，一般亦不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。

學(xué)會(huì)審題寫人物寫事務(wù)寫物件寫場(chǎng)所寫感想03年：TobealovelyShanghainese（做可愛的上海人）04年：Leavingschool（畢業(yè)時(shí)分）05年：Growingpainsandgains（成長(zhǎng)的苦惱與快樂(lè)）06年：Ihaveadream（我有一個(gè)幻想）07年：ThingsIhatetodo(我不寵愛……)08年：Lovearoundme（我身邊的愛）09年：Iwanttodosomethingformyschool(我想為學(xué)校做點(diǎn)事）10年：Iamproudofmyself(我為自己感到傲慢)11年：I’mamemberof…（我是……的一員）要求1）要用正確的時(shí)態(tài)2）要用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)3）要用清晰的思路4）要用不同的句子5）要用確定的連接

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東拉西扯

時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

用詞不當(dāng)

結(jié)構(gòu)松散

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(1)LastweekIgotanAinthetest.(2)I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.(3)IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.(4)IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.(5)However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.(6)ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.(4)IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.(3)IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.(6)ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.(5)However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.(1)LastweekIgotanAinthetest.(2)I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.返回

Tomusedtogotobedat2a.m.Healwaysfeeltiredandgotoseethedoctor.Thedoctortoldhimthatplayingcomputergamesfortoolongisbadforhishealth.Tomisgoingtotakethedoctor’sadvice.Hedecidedtogotobedbefore10o’clockeveryday.Hisparentswereveryhappy.返回ChinglishIwanttobuyapresentforeverytaughtmeteacher.School’scleaningiseveryone’sface.Soourfacemustbecleanedeveryday.Iwanttothankmyfriendlyclassmatesandhusbandteacher.Sometimetheplaygroundarepiecesofpaper.Somestudentslooklikenosee.Iwanttocleanthefans,thefansaretall,butI’mnotshort,soit’seasily.返回MysummerholidayplanThisismysummerholidayplan.FirstIwillplayfootballeveryday.Iwillrunaroundthepark.Iwillgetupat6:00a.m..Afterbreakfast,Iwilldoalotofhomework.At12:00a.m.Iwillhavelunch.At1:00p.m.Iwillplaybasketballwithmyfriend.At4:00p.m.Iwillgotothesupermarketwithmymother.Mysummerholidayplanisveryinterestingandexciting.返回④.書寫規(guī)范,卷面整齊。返回怎樣改進(jìn)寫作學(xué)習(xí)寫作的步驟和方法學(xué)會(huì)套題的技巧和思路用好題目的提示和問(wèn)題運(yùn)用點(diǎn)睛之句和習(xí)語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)3+1的綜合寫作模式OurLastClassMeeting

OurclassmeetingwasheldlastSunday.Weinvitedmanyteachers.Wegavealotofperformances.Suchassing,dance.Ourteachergavephotostous.Shesaidsomething.Wesaidgoodbye.Wehadagoodtime.Wehadagreatday.Weremembertheday.OurLastClassMeetingOurclassmeetingwasheldlastSunday.Weinvitedmanyteacherstoourmeeting.Wegavealotofperformances,suchassinginganddancing.Ourclassteacherspokeatthemeeting.Shealsotookalotofphotosofus.Wehadagoodtime.Wewillalwaysrememberthelastclassmeeting.OurLastClassMeetingOurclassmeetingwasheldlastSunday.Weinvitedmanyteacherstoourmeeting.Firstwegavealotofperformances,suchassinginganddancing.Thenourclassteacherspokeatthemeeting.What’smore,shealsotookalotofphotosofus.Onthewhole,wehadagoodtime.Needlesstosaywewillalwaysrememberthelastclassmeeting.Lastweekwehadourclassmeeting.Allourteachersjoinedusinthemeeting.Ourmonitorfirsttalkedaboutourstudyandlifeatschoolandthankedtheteachersfortheirkindhelpandgoodcare.Thenourclassteachermadeaspeech.Hehopedthatwewouldkeepstudyinghard.Afterthatwegaveeachotherpresents.Wesanganddancedtogetheruntillateintheafternoon.Weallhadawonderfultimeandagreedthatitwasreallyanunforgettableclassmeeting.返回MyFatherMyfatherisadoctor.Heisoverforty.Heisnottall.Heisstrong.Heoftenhelpsmewithmylessons.Helikesreadingverymuch.Heworkshardinhishospital.Heisagooddoctor.Heisagoodfather,too.MyFather

Myfather,whoisoverforty,isadoctor.Heisnottall,butheisstrong.Heisagooddoctorbecauseheworkshardinhishospital.Heputsallhisheartinhisworkandheiswelcomedbyallhispatients.Helikesreadingverymuchandknowsalot.WhenImeetanydifficulty,hewillhelpme.Ithinkthatheisnotonlyagooddoctorbutagoodfatheraswell.返回MyFather

Myfather,whoisoverforty,isadoctor.Heisnottall,butheisstrong.Heisagooddoctorbecauseheworkshardinhishospital.Heputsallhisheartinhisworkandheiswelcomedbyallhispatients.Helikesreadingverymuchandknowsalot.WhenImeetanydifficulty,hewillhelpme.Ithinkthatheisnotonlyagooddoctorbutagoodfatheraswell.返回MyOpinionsabouttheInternetInternet

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Ilistentomusicwhiledrivingtowork.IlistentomusicwhenI’mthinking.IlistentomusicwhenI’mhappy.EvenwhenI’msad,Ilistentomusic,too.Ican’tlivewithoutmusic.Musicplaysanimportantpartinmylife.Musicplaysanimportantpartinmylife.WriteatopicsentencefortheparagraphWiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.Wecanalsowatchvariousmatches.TheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.TheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Conclusion:Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.

HowtowriteagoodparagraphNowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.Itisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesandwatchvariousmatchesonit.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.Linkingwords(Framework）Asweallknow…First,…Second,…Afterthat,Lateron,…Last,…Linkingwords(transition）what’smore,inaddition表示遞進(jìn)infact,asamatteroffact表示承接asaresult,表示結(jié)果forexample,inotherwords表示列舉ontheotherhand表示對(duì)比toone’sjoy/surprise表示反應(yīng)Linkingwords（conclusion）inmyopinion表示想法anyway,needlesstosay表示強(qiáng)調(diào)generallyspeaking表示總結(jié)inaword,onthewhole表示結(jié)論

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NowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.Itisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesandwatchvariousmatchesonit.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.MyOpinionsabouttheInternet

NowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.Itisnotonlyfastbutconvenientaswell.WecandomanythingswiththeInternet.Firstofall,wecangetthelatestnews.Secondly,wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.What’smore,wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanevenplaygamesandwatchvariousmatchesonit.Inaword,wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.

(74words)MyOpinionsabouttravelingOfallthewaysoftraveling,Iliketravelingbytrainbest.First,Ineedn’tworryabouttrafficjams.Second,thetrainsarefastandcomfortable.Youcanusethetimeindifferentways.Youcanjustsitandreadsomething,oryoucanenjoythesceneryoutofthewindow.Third,youcanhaveamealinthebuffetcarorsleepinthesleepingcar.Allinall,travelingbytrainismyfirstchoicewhenmakingadecision.MyOpinionsaboutSchoolUniformsInmyopinion,schooluniformrulemustbeobeyed.Firstofall,wedon’thavetospendtimethinkingaboutwhattoweareveryday.Second,wedon’tneedtoworryaboutcompetingwithothersbasedonhowwelook,either.Inaddition,wewillbecarefulabouthowwebehavewhenwewearuniformsbecausepeoplecaneasilyidentifyus.Inbrief,uniformsshouldberequiredinschools.MyOpinionsaboutcomputersBeforecomputerswerewidelyused,ourlifewassimpleandabitdull.Everythinghadtobedonebyhandsothatitwastedalotoftime.However,itallchangedwhen

westartedusingcomputers.Projectscanbedoneoncomputers,soitsavesustimeandmoney.Besides,we’vebeenabletoknowmoresincemoreinformationisavailableontheInternet.Wearegladtoseethatthesechangeshavebroughtusmuchconvenienceandenabledustoworkfaster.Inoneword,computershavechangedourlifedramatically.Mylifeusedtobequitesimpleandboringbeforecomputerswerewidelyused.Butmywayoflifehascompletelychangedbecauseofthewideuseofthecomputers.Forinstance,nowIcancommunicatewithmyfriendsmoreeasilybye-mail,andIcandownloadagreatdealofinformationfromtheNettosolvetheproblemsIcomeacrossinmyprojectsaswell.What’smore,onlineshoppinghasbroughtmemuchconvenience.Allinall,if

weusecomputersinaproperway,thesechangeswillcertainlydogoodtous.返回“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用2010初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)與評(píng)估（五）“Green”isjustanotherwordfor“expensive”.變式

1)“School”isjustanotherwordfor“family”.2)“Friend”isjustanotherwordfor“trust”3)“Honesty”isjustanotherphrasefor“alwaystellingthetruth”.學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用：“Computer”isjustanotherwordfor“convenience”.2)Tome,“pressure”isjustanotherwordfor“challenge”.3)Freedomisbasedon“obeyingrules”.Soinmyopinion,“rule”isjustanotherwordfor“freedom”.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用

2010初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)與評(píng)估（八）Nobodycandecidethelengthoflife.Soweshouldlivethemoment.變式：

Nobodycandecidethelengthoflife,butwecandecideitswidthanddepth.2)Nobodycandecidethelengthoflife,soweshouldsaveeveryminute,eveneverysecond.2010初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)與評(píng)估（十）

TherehavebeengoodtimeandbadtimeforStephanie,butshesaysit’simportanttorememberboth,becausetheyarethetreasureinherlife.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：Therearealwaysgoodtimeandbadtimeforus,butit’simportanttorememberboth,becausetheyarethetreasureinourlife.Therewillbegoodluckandbadluckinourlife,butbothareimportant,becausethisislife.Everybodyknowsthatoneflowermakesnogarden.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：1)Oneflowermakesnogarden,soweshouldlearntosharewithothers.

2)Ifinallycometounderstandtheimportanceofteamwork,becauseoneflowermakesnogarden.

Hethinksthatanythingispossibleaslongasyouputyourmindtoit.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用

變式1)Fromthisexperience,Irealizethatanythingispossibleaslongasyouputyourmindtoit.

2)Fromthenon,Ibegantobelieveinsuchafamoussaying“Nothingisimpossible!”2010初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)與評(píng)估（十二）

PartofBarrackObama’sBack-to-schoolSpeechThesepeoplesucceededbecausetheyunderstandthatyoucan’tletyourfailuresdefineyou---youhavetoletthemteachyou.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：1)WhatmyfathersaidmakesmeknowthatIcan’tletthefailuredefine(decide)me---Ihavetoletitteachme.2)Failuresometimesisnotabadthing,itisusuallytheentrancetothesuccess.Sodonotletthefailuredecideyou---youhavetoletitteachyou.

學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用：1)Wecan’tletthepressuredecideourlife-----Wehavetoturnitintochallenges.(Howtodealwiththepressure)2010初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)與評(píng)估（十六）Thiswillleadyoutoamuchbetterunderstandingandadeeperlove.Sostartwithsomethingsimpleandseewhatwonderfulthingscanfollow…“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：1)Aheart-to-hearttalkwillleadtoamuchbetterunderstandingandadeeperlove(friendship).Sostartwithsomethingsimpleandseewhatwonderfulthingsfollow…2)Trustwillleadtoamuchbetterunderstandingandadeeperlove.Sostartsomethingsimpleandseewhatwonderfulthingsfollow.學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用：1)Solet’skeeplearningandseewhatawonderfulworldisfollowing.(Themostimportantthinginmylife)

2)Ioftentalkwithmyparentsaboutmyschoollife,myproblemsandmyambition.Andtheysometimesgivemesomeadviceandencouragement.Thisleadsustoamuchbetterunderstandingandadeeperlove.(Themostimportantthinginmylife)Sadnessandregretfilledhisheart.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：Happinessandexcitementfillmyheart.學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用：1)Tearsfilledmyeyes.(V.S.Iwassomoved.)2)Happinessandlovefillmyheart.Ithinkshewasmyfriend,ismyfriendandwillbemyfriendforever.“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：Inmyeyes,hewasthebest,isthebestandwillbethebest.學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用：1)Myparentswerethebest,arethebestandwillalwaysbethebest.Iwilllovethemforever.2)Inmyheart,myschoolwasthebest,isthebestandwillalwaysbethebest!Whenbuyingstops,killingcantoo.(CCTV9,

公益廣告詞)“點(diǎn)睛”句收集整理和變式運(yùn)用變式：1)Whenourdreamstops,thefuturecantoo.2)Whentruststops,thefriendshipcantoo.3)Whenthecommunicationstops,theunderstandingbetweenuscantoo.思索篇Lifegoeson,anditneverstopsforanyone.AsAlbertEinsteinsays,“Lifeislikeridingabicycle.Tokeepyourbalanceyoumustkeepmoving.”Donotstoptryingbecauseyouareafraidofmakingmistakes,foryoushouldalwaysknowourgreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfallingbutinrisingeverytimewefall.時(shí)間從不為任何人停留。愛因斯坦說(shuō)：“人生就像騎自行車，想保持平衡就得往前走。”不要因?yàn)槟懬? 犯錯(cuò)而停下你的腳步，你應(yīng)當(dāng)知道我們最值得傲慢的不在于從不跌倒，而是在于每次跌倒之后都爬起來(lái)。學(xué)生作文交友篇Lifehasitsupsanddowns,andonlytruefriendsalwaysstayaround.Asweallknowthatafriendinneedisafriendindeed,truefriendsdonotturntheirbacksatyouwhenyouareintrouble.Forthatyoushouldknow,"Nevertrustafriendwholeavesyouatapinch,"saysAesop.真正的摯友會(huì)陪伴你走過(guò)生活中的凹凸起伏?；茧y見真情，這是大家都知道的道理，真正的摯友在你不幸的時(shí)候，不會(huì)對(duì)你束之高閣。因此你也應(yīng)當(dāng)聽過(guò)伊索所說(shuō)的：“千萬(wàn)不要信任在緊急時(shí)刻離你而去的摯友?！敝闫?/p>

Donottakelifeforgranted.Cherishwhatyouhave.Thegrassisnotgreenerontheotherside.Takeamoment,thinkamoment,sharethemomentwithyourbelovedones.AsAesopsays,"Bewarelestyoulosethesubstancebygraspingattheshadow."不要把生活的一切當(dāng)作天經(jīng)地義，珍惜你當(dāng)下所擁有的。不用去跟別人比較，這山望著那山高?；c(diǎn)時(shí)間，想一會(huì)兒，跟你所愛的人一起共享那個(gè)奇異時(shí)刻。就猶如伊索告戒過(guò)的：“記住，切莫追逐幻影而丟失已有的東西?！边M(jìn)取篇Lifeisnotfair,buttimeis!Forricherorpoorer,everyonehasonlytwentyfourhoursaday.Youcannotturnbacktime,yetyoucannotbuyaminute.OscarWildesays,"Nomanisrichenoughtobuybackhisownpast."What'sdonecannotbeundone.Don'tlookback.Thefutureawaits.人生不是公允的，但時(shí)間是！無(wú)論貧困或富有，一人一天只能擁有二十四小時(shí)。你無(wú)法使時(shí)間倒轉(zhuǎn)，你也不能多買一分鐘。王爾德說(shuō)：“沒(méi)有人富有到可以贖回自己的過(guò)去?！币呀?jīng)發(fā)生的事情不能挽回。別再回頭看，將來(lái)在等你。勤奮篇BenjaminFranklinsays,"Iftimebeingofthingsthemostprecious,wastingtimemustbethegreatestprodigality."Ifyoustilldon'trealizehowprecioustimeisandhowimportantitistousetimewisely,letmeputitthisway,wastingyourtimeiswastingyourlife,forthat'sthestufflifeismadeof.富蘭克林曾經(jīng)說(shuō)：“假如時(shí)間是最珍貴的東西，那么浪費(fèi)時(shí)間就是最大的奢侈?！奔偃缒氵€不知道時(shí)間有多珍貴，不知道聰慧地利用時(shí)間有多重要，讓我這么說(shuō)吧，奢侈時(shí)間就等于是奢侈生命，因?yàn)樯褪怯蓵r(shí)間所組成的。友情篇Somesaythattrustislikeavase,onceit'sbroken,thoughyoucanfixit,thevasewillneverbethesameagain.Whentalkingabouttrustinafriendship,Emersonsays,"Betrayingatrustisaveryquickandpainfulwaytoterminateafriendship."Trusttakesyearstobuild,secondstobreak,andforevertorepair.Loveyourfriends,don'tbetrayatrust.有人說(shuō)，信任就像是一只花瓶，一旦裂開，即使你能修復(fù)，花瓶也不會(huì)跟原本的一模一樣。信任之于友情，愛默生則說(shuō)：“背信棄義快速而苦痛地?cái)嗨陀亚??！毙湃雾氁脦啄甑臅r(shí)間去累積，只需幾秒就能失去信任，然后恒久無(wú)法挽回。愛你的摯友，就不要背叛他的信任。工作篇Ifyoudon'tlikesomething,changeit.Ifyoucan'tchangeit,changeyourattitude.GeorgeBernardShawsays,"Thereasonablemanadaptshimselftotheworld;theunreasonableonepersistsintryingtoadapttheworldtohimself."Donotcomplain.Beingself-centeredisnohelpingettingoninthisworld.Copewithit.假如你不寵愛某件事，那么變更它。假如無(wú)法變更它，那么變更你的看法。蕭伯納說(shuō)：“明白事理的人使自己適應(yīng)世界；不明事理的人想使世界適應(yīng)自己?！蓖Ｖ孤裨拱?。太過(guò)自我中心並不是在這社會(huì)出人頭地的方法。感悟篇Lifeisagift,themostpreciousgiftthatonecouldeverhave.Liveeverydaylikeit'syourlast,andwhenthetimecomes,takeabowandsaygoodbyegracefullytotheworld.AsRabindranathTagoreputsitthisway,"Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautumnleaves."生命是份禮物，是份人生中最珍貴的禮物。把每一天都當(dāng)作人生的最終一天度過(guò)，當(dāng)最終的時(shí)刻到來(lái)，優(yōu)雅地下臺(tái)一鞠躬，道別這世界。就猶如泰戈?duì)栒f(shuō)的：“使生如夏日花朵之絢燦、死如秋天樹葉之靜美。”成敗篇Thesecretofsuccessistobelieveinyourself.Taketimetodeliberate,butwhenthetimeforactionhasarrived,stopthinkingandgoin.NapoleonBonapartesays,"Besuccessful!Ijudgemenonlybytheresultsoftheiractions."Whenitcomestovictory,hesitationandindecisionaresureofdefeat.人必需信任自己，這是成功的秘訣。事前慎重考慮，但是行動(dòng)時(shí)刻一到，就要堅(jiān)決堅(jiān)決，全力以赴。拿破侖說(shuō)過(guò)：“確定要成功！我只以成敗論英雄?！边t疑不決和優(yōu)柔寡斷，只會(huì)導(dǎo)致失敗。生活篇Happinessissimple.ItissotruethatGoethesays,"Amanshouldhearalittlemusic,readalittlepoetry,andseeafinepictureeverydayofhislife."Manistheartificerofhisownhappiness.Howhappyandcontentyouare,myfriend?Youareaboutashappyasyoumakeupyourmindtobe!華蜜很簡(jiǎn)潔。哥德說(shuō)得沒(méi)錯(cuò)：“生活中，人應(yīng)當(dāng)每天聽一點(diǎn)音樂(lè)，讀一點(diǎn)詩(shī)歌，欣賞一幅好畫?！比耸亲约喝A蜜的設(shè)計(jì)者。你有多快樂(lè)呢，我的摯友？你認(rèn)定自己有多快樂(lè)，就有多快樂(lè)哦！處事篇Doyoualwayshaveagoaltoreach?Alifetimedreamtofulfill?Ifyoudo,stopbeinganarmchairstrategist.Talkingwithouttakingactionisinvain.Youshouldknow,inthisway,wordsarenotenough,actionspeakslouder.AsW.WilliamShakespeareputsit,"Actioniseloquence."你有目標(biāo)嗎？你有志向嗎？假如有的話，不要再紙上談兵?？湛诎自挷粫?huì)使你的幻想實(shí)現(xiàn)。坐而言不如起而行，套句莎士比亞的名言：“行動(dòng)就是雄辯。”沖突篇Dowhatyouaretryingtoaccomplishwithpassion.OnlyifyoucandoasCharlesDickenssays,"WhateverIhavetriedtodoinlife,Ihavetriedwithallmyhearttodoitwell;whateverIhavedevotedmyselfto,Ihavedevotedmyselfcompletely;ingreataimsandinsmallIhavealwaysthoroughlybeeninearnest,"successisnotfarfromyouthen.

做任何事情都要抱持熱忱。假如你能做到像狄更斯說(shuō)的：“每當(dāng)我嘗試做任何事，我都會(huì)一心一意去做好它；每當(dāng)我奉獻(xiàn)自己做某件事，我都會(huì)無(wú)怨無(wú)悔奉獻(xiàn)原委；無(wú)論是大目標(biāo)或小目標(biāo)，我總是懷抱滿腔熱忱面對(duì)?！蹦浅晒驮诓贿h(yuǎn)處了。返回用好提示回答好問(wèn)題（05中考）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.(以“成長(zhǎng)的苦惱與快樂(lè)”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。以下圖片僅供參考。)（06中考）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream”.(以“我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型僅供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue,…Mydreamistobeateacher.Ithinkthatstudentsareverylovely.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Iwillstudyharder.Iwillreadmorebooksinordertobroadenmymindandenrichmyknowledge.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatNopains,nogains.Practicemakesperfect.Ifmydreamcomestrue,I’lltreatmystudentsasmybestfriends.Mydreamistobeawomanpresident.Perhapsyou’llthinkthatImustbemad,andbeingawomanpresidentinChinaisevenmoredifficultthanflyingintotheskywithoutwings.However,Iwanttosayitisjustabigambition.IhaveadreamtobeawomanpresidentbecauseIwanttoshowthatawomancandothethingsthatamancando.Nomatterwhethermydreamwillcometrueornot,Iwilltrymybesttodoeverythingbecausenothingisimpossible.Everybodyhashisowndream.Mydreamistobeatourguide.Somepeoplemaythinkit’stiringtobeatourguide.ButIdon’tthinksobecauseIcanvisitmanyplacesofinterestaroundtheworldandIcanlearndifferentculturesandcustoms.Besides,Ialsocanmeetdifferentpeopleindifferentplaces.SoIreallywanttobeaguide.Itisanexcitingjob.Fromnowon,Imuststudygeographywell.Ithinkthroughmyhardwork,mydreamwillcometrueinthefuture.（07中考）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo”.(以“我不寵愛……”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybad

forourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.What’smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Ihatedoingthingsagainstrules.Ihatebeingindifferentwhenothersareintrouble.But,thethingIhatedoingmostistobedishonest.Itisreally

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immoralthingtobedishonest.Youwillfeelguiltyaftercheatingothers.Ifyourlieisrecognized,you’llgetpunishments.Youwillneverbetrustedonceyoutelllies,andnotrespectedaswell.Ihatepeoplewhoaredishonest.Ihatebeingdishonest,andIhopethateveryoneishonesttoothers.（08中考）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Lovearoundme”(以“我身邊的愛”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide(短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))Isthereanylovearoundyou?Howdoyoufeelwhenyougetlovefromhim/her/them?Whatareyougoingtodotoshowyourlove?Thereislovearoundme.Forexample,mymothertookgoodcareofmewhenIwassickeveryday.What’smore?ShealwaysbuysplentyofdrinksandfoodIlikeforme,aswellasmanytoys.ShealsohelpsmewithmystudysothatIcanmakegreatprogress.ThusIfeeldeeplymoved.I’mthankfultoherforthethingsshedidformetheseyears.SoIhavemadeupmymindthatIwillworkharderatmystudytoshowmylovetoher.It’swidelyacceptedthateveryoneneedslove.AndIthinkthereisalwayslovearoundme.Myparentsshowlovetomebylookingaftermewell.Myclassmates'helpmakesmefeeltheirlove.I’msomovedthatwordscan'texpresshowmuchIlovethem!SoIwillsparenoefforttohelpmyparentsdohouseworkandhelpmyfriendsinreturn.Finally,Ireallywanttosaythankstothemfromthebottomofmyheart!

I‘maluckyteenagerbecausethereislotsoflovearoundme.Forexample,myparentslovemeverymuch.TheyencouragedmetobebravewhenIfailedtopassthe800-meterracelastterm.I’mverythankfultothem.Theirlovemakesmefeelwarmandpowerful.Inordertoshowmylove,I’mgoingtohelpthemwithhousework.Thiswillenablethemtohavemoretimetorest.Lovearoundmeisgreat.（09中考）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”.（以“我想為學(xué)校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?Whydoyouwanttodoit?Howareyougoingtodoit?Afterfouryears’studyatschool,theideaofbuyingsomemirrorsfortheschoolcomesintomymind,becausemirrorsarejustlikemyeyes,lookingateverythingaround,aswellassendingmybestwishestomyteachersandclassmates.I’llbuymirrorsofallshapesandsizes.Forexample,therectangleonesarethedoorstosuccesswhiletheroundonesstandformyeyes.I’llsetupallthemirrorsbymyselftoshowhowmuchIlovemyschool.That’swhatIwanttodoformyschool.It’swidelybelievedthatacleanenvironmentplaysanimportantpartinourschoollife.Needlesstosay,schoolismysecondhome,soIwanttotrymybesttomakemyschoolcleanandtidy.Inmyopinion,pickinguptherubbishonthegroundisthebasicwayofmakingmyschoolclean.What’smore,tellingotherstheimportanceofprotectingourschoolenvironmentisnecessary.“Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.”Ihopemyschoolwillbemoreattractivewithitscleanenvironment.NowthatI’mleavingsecondaryschoolinafewdays,Iwanttowriteasongformyschooltoexpressmygratitude.Thelyricswillbefullofourgloriousmemories,andthemusicwillbeplayedbythebandofourown.Ihopethattheteachersandstudentswillenjoythesongasitcanalwaysremindusofourunforgettableschoollifeevenifwe’llbeapartsomeday.Yousee,nowI’vegottoworkhardtomakemydreamofwritingasongformyschoolcometrue!I’vebeeneagerlyhopingtohelpimprovetheenvironmentofourschool.Thereasonisthatsomestudentsinourschoolhavepoorhabitsoflitteringeverywhereandsteppingonthelawnsrandomly.They’redoingharmtotheschool’sbeauty.Tochangethecurrentsituation,I’mgoingtoputuppostersandsignstellingthestudentstotakecareofenvironment.I’malsogoingtogiveshortspeechestoarousetheirawarenessofprotectingtheschool’senvironment.I’mt