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第十五單元

翻譯的境界

旅游文本翻譯賞析曾昭濤2011年第一節(jié)簡(jiǎn)介旅游文本就是旅游題材的文本本單元主要是欣賞翻譯質(zhì)量好的文本，目的是進(jìn)一步相識(shí)翻譯，使它更好地為溝通服務(wù)。主要以教材的相關(guān)內(nèi)容為題材，另外補(bǔ)充一些素材。譯例回顧—相識(shí)旅游文本HereinNewHampshiretherearemanyopportunitiestofindapeacefulspothiddenamongthelushforestsoftallevergreensandhard-woodsornexttoaramblingbrookorpictoriallake.新罕布爾州森林茂密,綠樹常青,泉水蜿蜒而流,湖邊風(fēng)景如畫,到處都是悠然安靜的好去處?；仡欝w驗(yàn)翻譯TrytotranslatethefolllowingintoChineseSpringSpringhassomuchmorethanspeechinitsunfoldingflowersandleaves,andthecoursingofitsstreams,andinitssweetrestlessseeking!點(diǎn)評(píng)參考譯文春花含苞欲放,綠葉緩緩伸展,溪水潺潺流淌,快樂的春天,涌動(dòng)著無限的追求和希望,這一切難以用語言傾訴表達(dá)。鮮花怒放，綠葉舒張,溪水流淌，于無聲處現(xiàn)春光！鮮花怒放，綠葉舒張,溪水流淌，無限春光，春天多奇異！漢譯英短句賞析環(huán)保無國(guó)界你我共參與Environmentprotectionwithoutborders,jointparticipationwithoutorders.Environmenttobeprotectedjointlywithoutborders.桂林山水甲天下Eastorwest,Guilinlandscapeisbest.（北京理工高校吳偉雄獲得參賽一等獎(jiǎng)的作品）小節(jié)上面的翻譯是抒情的，是特殊難翻譯的。但是奇異美麗的翻譯更簡(jiǎn)潔吸引游客，所以難都要做。目前我們呢只是相識(shí)這種境界，要做到這種境界還有不少時(shí)間努力。假如翻譯時(shí)不能達(dá)到抒情的效果，把景點(diǎn)描述清晰也挺好，因?yàn)橛⒚老嘧R(shí)比較留意事實(shí)陳述。英譯漢難，漢譯英更難。其次節(jié)英譯漢賞析BeautifulSunset

Itwassobeautiful:sobeautifulshecouldhardlybearthewonderfulflushedsky,withredstreakedandhazedagainsttheintenseblue;thebeautifulstilltrees,withtheirloadofsingingbirds;thevividstarrypoinsettias（一品紅）cuttingintotheairwithjagged（參差不齊的）scarlet（紅色）.

落日勝景落日的美景真是難以明狀。漂移的浮云，在湛藍(lán)的天穹下，被染成條條斑斑的紅暈，亦真亦幻。最美的是那些樹木，百鳥簇鳴，枝椏直插云霄，欲撥開漂移的紅暈，偷窺深藍(lán)天際的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)群星。

Theredspreadoutfromthecentreofthesky,seemedtotingethesmokehazeoverthekopjes（小山丘）,andtolightthetreeswithahotsulphurous（硫磺）yellow.Theworldwasamiracleofcolor....從我們頭頂，暮色的紅云遍布了天際。把小丘蒸騰的霧靄調(diào)繪成微紅的霧裟，灌木變得亮起來，似灼熱的硫磺。一切奇異的就像魔幻世界......ThesunlightabsorbingthecolorofthejungleThesunlightfilteredthroughavastintricatewebofleavesandfrondsandvinesandtrees,untilitabsorbedthecolorofthejungleandbecameatlastagreenshimmering(閃爍的)wash（薄涂層）ofvelvet.Thelighteddiedandshiftedasthoughrefracting(折射)throughtheintricatevaultsofacathedral;allabouttheyweresurroundedbythejungle,darkandmurmurous.陽光，從一片繁密的枝椏、葉片間滲透進(jìn)來，被叢林染成了淡綠，似乎天鵝絨般松軟。叢林變得流光異彩，絢麗多姿，恰似教堂拱頂投下的那般圣潔。四周一下子變得模糊，而一切又歸于安靜。

TheyoungmoonEveninghadfallen.Arimoftheyoungmooncleftthepalewasteofskyline,therimofasilverhoopembeddedingreysand.暮色悄然來臨。在蒼茫、孤寂的天際，一輪新月一躍升起，像銀色的項(xiàng)圈鑲嵌在暮靄中的沙灘上。DampSpringAirAllthelowerairwasfullofthedamphazerisingfromheavysoakingwaterontheearth,mingledwithawarmandpleasantsmellfromthebluesmokeofthespringfiresinalltheopenfields.重浸潤(rùn)的水從地面氤氳升騰，低空一片霧氣蒙蒙。空氣中摻雜著一種溫煦愉悅的香氣，來自全部空地上春之火中裊裊升起的藍(lán)色煙霧。第三節(jié)漢英翻譯水長(zhǎng)城旅游區(qū)北京黃花城水長(zhǎng)城旅游區(qū)位于北京市懷柔區(qū)九渡河境內(nèi)，距離北京市區(qū)６５公里，是以奇而著稱，融山川、碧波、古長(zhǎng)城為一體的旅游休閑勝地。譯文BeijingHuanghuachengLakesideGreatWallReserveislocatedwithinBeijingHuairouDistrictJiuduheTownship.Convenientlylocatedonly65kilometersfromBeijing,itisabeautifultouristresortwell-knownforitsmesmerizingmixtureofmajesticmountainranges,serenewaterbodies,andancientGreatWallartifacts.

而這里的“三絕景”更是引人入勝，嘆為觀止：Furthermore,theawesome“ThreeUniqueness”scenerieswillcertainlyturnthevisitorsspeechlesswithamazement:“一絕”建于明永樂年間的長(zhǎng)城，回旋于山脊之上，環(huán)繞在顥明湖畔，景色秀美壯麗?！癋irstUniqueness”:AsectionoftheGreatWallbuiltduringtheYongleeraoftheMingDynastysnakesaroundthemountainranges.ItembracestheHaomingLakeandoffersamajesticallypicturesqueexperience.“二絕”湖水將長(zhǎng)城自然斷開，形成長(zhǎng)城戲水、水沒古城垣的奇異景觀?！癝econdUniqueness”:ThetwopiecesoftheGreatWallnaturallybreaksoffatthelake,creatingasplendidblendingofsurroundingswherethewaterandwallbeautifullymergeinperfectharmony.“三絕”明代板栗圓，古樹盤根錯(cuò)節(jié)，形態(tài)各異?！癟hirdUniqueness”:InChestnutGardenintheMingDynasty,oneencountersancienttreeswithuniquelyshapedandentangledroots.

那巨龍戲珠之軀和撐掩蒼天之冠，令人嘬舌贊揚(yáng)不已。Inparticular,thetrees-“GiantDragonToyingaPearl”and“TheCrownHoldingtheSky”,vividlynamedfortheirfantasticshapes,providevisitorswithconstantastonishmentandimagination.沿古道、過木橋、涉小溪、跨怪石，上行可達(dá)黑龍?zhí)丁trollingalongtheancientpath,crossingthewoodenbridge,passingoverthestream,andsteppingalongtheoddrocks,onecangoupandreachtheBlackDragonPond.途中，可見龍尾洞、紫翠峰、醉女山、石浪谷、情人峰、三珠連潭等自然景觀。Alongtheway,onewillrunintobeautifulscenicspotssuchastheDragon’sTailCave,AmethystandEmeraldPeaks,DrunkLadyMountains,RockWaveVale,Lovers’PeakandThreePearlPonds.九寨溝九寨溝位于四川省阿壩藏族羌族自治州九寨溝縣境內(nèi)，是國(guó)家級(jí)自然疼惜區(qū)，國(guó)家重點(diǎn)風(fēng)景名勝區(qū)。疼惜區(qū)面積643平方公里，海拔2000～4760米；年均氣溫7.8℃；因溝內(nèi)有九個(gè)藏族村寨而得名。下面的是網(wǎng)上下載的，看看是否妥當(dāng)，為什么？Jiuzhaigou,reputedasa"fairyland",issituatedinthecentralsouthpartoftheJiuzhaigoucountyoftheAbaTibetanandQiangAutonomousPrefectureinSichuanProvince,China,beingatributaryoftheBaishuiheRiverontheJialingjiangRiveroftheChangjiangwatersystem.ItissonamedbecausethescenicareaconsistsofnineTibetanvillages.Withanelevationof2000-3100mabovesealevel,thescenicareaenjoyspleasantclimateandbeautifulcolorsalltheyearround,beingoneoftheworld'sfamousscenic