高考英語熱點(diǎn)題型訓(xùn)練

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書面表達(dá)概要寫作

【命題趨勢(shì)】

提供一篇350以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

考查要求：

對(duì)原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；

應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；

上下文的連貫性；

對(duì)各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。

【滿分技巧】

如何確保要點(diǎn)齊全？【訣竅】

劃分段落【不以自然段為單位】

段落數(shù)=要點(diǎn)數(shù)

說明文的段落劃分

L描述某事物的性質(zhì)功用等：

性質(zhì)/定義一功用/功能一應(yīng)用/利好

2.針對(duì)某問題提出解決辦法或措施：

問題一成因一解決方法/措施

3.介紹某現(xiàn)象及其原因結(jié)果：

現(xiàn)象一原因一結(jié)果

議論文的段落劃分

三要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和結(jié)論：

論點(diǎn)一論據(jù)1……論據(jù)n—結(jié)論

記敘文的段落劃分

人物、情節(jié)(whodidwhat)、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：

夾敘夾議者：+觀點(diǎn)/哲理性推論：

情節(jié)1一情節(jié)2……情節(jié)n一啟示

【熱點(diǎn)話題】社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)；學(xué)生生活；暑期活動(dòng)

【限時(shí)檢測(cè)】（建議用時(shí)：30分鐘）

（2019年浙江省高考真題）

話題：父母鼓勵(lì)孩子的方式難度：★★建議用時(shí)：5分

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfident

Kids,says,"We'vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict,^^By

givingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey'rebuildingtheirchildren'sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejustthe

opposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat'sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthings

ortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents'praisehasputthem.

Still,don'tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.

Kidswillfeellikethey'renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon'tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfor

theiraccomplishments.

Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.

Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomething

thatdeservesaverbalreward.44Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren'seffortstopushthemselvesandwork

hardtoachieveagoal,^^saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear.LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhat

ReallyMatters.t4Onethingtorememberisthatit'stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”

Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe'soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,you

shouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalso

meanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.But

whateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate（木目稱的）totheamountofeffort

yourchildhasputintoit.

【寫作思路】完成一篇概要寫作，需要經(jīng)過三個(gè)步驟，

1.讀懂原文，抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過程中，需要準(zhǔn)確把握文章的段落大意，學(xué)會(huì)剔除非重要信息，弄

清楚不同體裁的文章的內(nèi)部邏輯關(guān)系以及文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。

2.組織語言，轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎(chǔ)上，組織好語言，注重語言表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性和準(zhǔn)

確性以及高級(jí)性，不全盤照抄原文句子，盡量用自己的語言轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)，同時(shí)要注意篇幅的比例安排，用較

多的文字去表達(dá)重要的內(nèi)容。

3.通讀全文，邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點(diǎn)之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞去連貫全文。

【參考范文】

Parentstendtogotoextremeswhenitcomestopraisingtheirkids.（要點(diǎn)）Yet,bothtoomuchandtoolittle

praisecanbeequallydamaging.（要點(diǎn)二）Whengivingpraise,parentsshouldbesincereandconcentrateonthe

processinsteadoftheresult.（要點(diǎn)三）Similarly,theyoughttogivepraiseforhowmuchefforttheirkidshave

investedintheworkthey'reinvolvedin.（要點(diǎn)四）

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本次浙江高考書面表達(dá)采用了概要寫作題型。概要寫作是閱讀理解和書面表達(dá)的溝通橋梁，考查的是

學(xué)生在實(shí)現(xiàn)自由的思維表達(dá)之前，對(duì)他人的信息在理解的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行概括表達(dá)的能力。選材上，提供一篇

350詞以內(nèi)的短文，題材不限，要求考生寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

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話題：機(jī)器人難度：★★建議用時(shí).：5分

請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Robotswillcreatedoublethenumberofjobsthattheywilldestroy,accordingtotheWorldEconomic

Forum(WEF),buttherewillbesignificantshiftsinthestructureofAmerica'sworkforcethatmayimpacteveryone.

Thereportsaysthat75millionjobswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence(AI),roboticsandautomation.Butit

alsosuggeststhat133millionnewjobsmaybecreatedasorganizationsshiftthebalancebetweenhumanworkers

andmachines.

Itisawidelyheldbeliefthatroutine,low-skilledjobsaremostatriskforautomation,butthereportshowsthat

manymiddle-classrolesarealsoatrisk.Financialanalysts,accountantsandlawyerscouldallseesignificant

changesby2022.Butmanualworkerscouldbeamongthehardesthit.

Meanwhile,therecouldbeahugechangeinthestructureoftheworkforce,withtheexecutivessurveyedby

WEFexpectingashiftawayfromfull-timeworktoflexibleemploymentwithafocusonproductivity.

Allindustriesexpectbigskillsgaps,statingthatatleast50percentoftheirworkforcewillrequirereskillingof

somedegree.Theaviation,travelandtourismindustrywillhavethelargestdemandforreskilling.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個(gè)單詞述短文的主要內(nèi)容；

2.用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因有哪些（不少于兩點(diǎn)）；（2）面對(duì)即將到來的“智能時(shí)代''你所做的準(zhǔn)備。

【寫作要求】

1.闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí)，不能直接引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【參考范文】

【概要】

Robotsarereplacinghumanbeingsbutarealsocreatingtwiceasmanyjobsastheyhavedestroyed,bringing

aboutgreatchangesinthestructureofworkforceandrequirementsforreskilling.

【論述】

Behindthephenomenonarevariousreasons.Foronething,greatadvancesinscienceandtechnologymakeit

possibleforrobotstobewidelyemployedinmanyfields.Foranother,productivityhasbeengreatlyincreasedby

usingrobots,whichinturnhelpspromotethepopularityofrobots.Meanwhile,thewidespreadapplicationofrobots

hasgeneratedgreatchangesinthewaypeopleworkaswellastheirchoicesofjobs.

Feelingluckytoliveintheintelligentage,I'dliketoequipmyselfwithrelevantknowledgeandenjoythe

convenienceitbringsus.Besides,Iwilltrytocultivatecreativethinkingandthesenseofinnovationsoastomeet

theurgentneedsofthefastdevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.

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話題：手機(jī)攝影大賽+收集難度：★★建議用時(shí).：5分

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（滿分15分）

假如你是李華，獲悉中國日?qǐng)?bào)（。初〃4。山/），）將舉辦“厲害了，我的國”（AmazingChina）手機(jī)攝影大賽。

請(qǐng)寫封郵件建議你的美國留學(xué)生朋友George參加，郵件內(nèi)容包括：

1.作品要求：展示風(fēng)土人情，附上作品名稱；

2.投稿方式與截止時(shí)間：12月30日前發(fā)郵件至〃c@

3.表示愿意提供幫助。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearGeorge,

Howiseverythinggoing?______________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

第二節(jié)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Whileittakestime,energyandmoneythatcouldsurelybeputtoamuchmoreproductiveuse,thereare

millionsofcollectorsaroundtheworld.Peoplecollectpostcards,chocolatewrappersorwhateverthey

like.Collectingmustbeoneofthemostvariedhumanactivities,andit'sonethatmanypsychologistsfind

fascinating.Manyformsofcollectinghavebeendignifiedwithatechnicalname:anarctophilistcollectsteddy

bears,aphilatelistcollectspostagestampsandadeltiologistcollectspostcards.

Therearepeoplewhocollectsomethingbecausetheywanttomakemoney,andthiscouldbecalledan

instrumentalreasonforcollecting,thatis,collectingasameanstoanend.Theywilllookfor,say,antiques（古董）

thattheycanbuycheaplyandexpecttobeabletosellataprofit.Buttheremaywellbeapsychologicalfactortoo:

buyingcheapandsellingdearcankeepthecollectorasenseofachievement.Andassellingonlineissoeasy,more

peoplearejoiningin.

Ifyouthinkaboutcollectingpostagestamps,anotherpotentialreasonforitisitseducationalvalue.Stamp

collectingopensawindowtoothercountriesandtotheplants,animalsorfamouspeopleshownonthestamps.

Similarly,inthenineteenthcenturymanycollectorsamassed（積累）animalsandplantsfromaroundtheglobeand

theircollectionsprovideavastamountofinformationaboutthenaturalworld.Withoutthosecollections,our

understandingwouldbegreatlyinferiortowhatitis.

Notallcollectorsareinterestedinlearningfromtheirhobby,though,sowhatwemightcallapsychological

reasonforcollectingistheneedforasenseofcontrolandasenseoffulfillment,perhapsasawayofdealingwith

insecurity.Stampcollectors,forinstance,arrangetheirstampalbums,usuallyveryneatly,organizingtheir

collectionsaccordingtocertaincommonplaceprinciples-perhapsbycountryinalphabeticorderorgrouping

stampsbywhattheydescribe-people,birds,mapsandsoon.

【應(yīng)用文范文】

DearGeorge,

Howiseverythinggoing?IhavesomeexcitingnewsforyouthatChinaDailywillholdamobilephoto

contestnameduAmazingChina”.Iknowyouhaveagreatloveforphotography,sowhynotgiveitatry?

Thecontestwelcomessubmissionsaboutnaturalscenery,attractivefiguresorlocalcustomsofChina.Itwill

bebetterifeachphotoisaccompaniedwithatitle.You'dbettersendyourphotostoac@andthe

deadlineforentrieswillbeDec.30th.

Ibelieveitisagreatopportunitytoshareyourpreciousexperienceswithus.Ifyouareinterested,Vmmore

thanhappytobeyourhelperandoffermyadvice.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyourgreatworks.

Yours,LiHua

【概要范文】

Collectingwinstheheartsofmanypeopledespitethetime,effortandmoneytheyhavetoinvest.Tomakea

fortuneisoneofthereasonsaccountingfbrthehabitofcollecting,whereasenseofaccomplishmentisalso

granted.Itsacademicmeritsarealsoobviousbecausepeoplemayhaveabettercomprehensionoftheworldwiththe

informationtheircollectionsprovide.Actually,peoplesometimesjustenjoythefeelingofdominationand

collectingservesasahobbytoresistinsecurity.

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請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Asglobalfast-foodchainsandcoffeeshopsbeginphasingout（逐步淘汰）single-useplasticstraws,

McDonald'sChinaintroduceda"strawless”lid（蓋子）forcoldbeveragesat10BeijingrestaurantsonNov.1,2018.

Likemanyconsumers,WuYanmei,abankclerkinBeijing,hadneverthoughtabouttheimpactasimplestraw

couldhaveontheenvironment/4Actually,Idon'tlikeusingstraws,butthecupsatfast-foodrestaurantsareall

designedforusewithastraw,“shesaid.'Tdon'tthinkstrawsarenecessary,sothemovesareagoodwaytoraise

people'sawarenessofnotusingsingle-useplasticproducts.^^

However,JiangJianguo,aprofessorofenvironmentalstudiesatTsinghuaUniversity,saidhedoubtssuch

activitiesalonecanhaveamajoreffectontheglobalpollutionproblem/41don'tthinkthemovebyMcDonald'swill

beasuccessbecausepreviouslytherewerelotsofhotelscallingforabanonsingle-useplastics,butitendedin

nothingbecausebusinessescompetebytryingtomakethingsconvenientforconsumers,“hesaid.

寫作內(nèi)容：

1.用約30個(gè)單詞概括上述材料的主要內(nèi)容；

2.用約120詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“快餐連鎖店逐步棄用塑料吸管”的看法，并用2?3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

寫作要求：1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【背誦范文】

【概要】Fast-foodchainslikeMcDonald'shavetakenactiontostopusingplasticstrawsgraduallytobe

environmentallyfriendly,butastowhethersuchamovecanhaveeffectsonimprovingtheenvironment,people

holddifferentopinions.

【論述】Thoughplasticstrawscanaffordpeoplegreatconvenience,Ithinkphasingthemoutinfast-food

chainsisadvisable.First,plasticsareamajorsourceofpollutionbecausethey'redifficulttodegrade.Therefbre,

phasingthemoutisgreatlybeneficialtotheenvironment,suchasremindingpeopleoftheurgencytoprotectthe

environment.Moreover,withoutstraws,consumerscanstillhavetheirdrinks.Sowhymustweequipeachdrink

withastraw?Whydon'twesavesuchresourcesforotheruses?Maybe,somewhere,theplasticssavedcanmake

abigdifferencetothesociety.

Asaseniorthreestudent,IhopealltheChinesepeoplewilltakeanactivepartinthecampaignagainstusing

plasticstraws,whichisofgreatbenefitforourlivingenvironment.

E

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第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作

假定你是李華，報(bào)名參加了“全國中學(xué)生英語能力競(jìng)賽”(NEPCS)。賽前，為更好地提高寫作能力，請(qǐng)給

外教Michael寫封郵件，請(qǐng)他幫忙修改一篇作文并提出建議。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

第二節(jié)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Nowadays,moreandmorecollegestudentshavenoproblemwalkingintoaclassroomandopeningtheir

laptops.Othersmayspendanentirestudyperiodwithasmartphoneinhand.Somepeoplearguethattheincreasing

useoftechnologycanhavemanyhelpfuleffectsonsociety.Butarecentresearchsuggeststhatusingtechnology

duringclasstimemayharmcollegestudents'abilitytorememberandprocessthesubjectmaterial.

ArnoldGlass,aprofessorinRutgersUniversityinNewJersey4,andastudentresearcherinvestigatedtheissue

ofdividedstudentattention.Thestudyinvolved118Rutgersstudentswhoweretakingthesamelevelcollegeclass.

Thestudentswerepermittedtouseanyelectronicdeviceduringhalfoftheirdailyclassperiods.Duringtheother

half,noonewasallowedtouseanytechnology.

Theresearchersfoundthattheaveragedailyquizresultsshowednoevidenceofharmfuleffectsfromtheuse

oftechnology.However,theaverageresultsofthelargertestsandfinalexamshowedthatallthestudents

performedpoorlywhentheywerepermittedtousetechnologyintheclassroom.Glassarguesthatitshowstheuse

ofelectronicdevicesintheclassroompreventsstudentsfromprocessinginformation.Whenthestudentshearwhat

theprofessorissaying,theymightbebuyingthingsonlineorreadingunrelatedemailsatthesametime.Andthat,

Glasssays,makesitharderfortheinformationtoentertheirlongtermmemory.Eventhoughthestudentsknow

whattheprofessorsaidatthattime,theynolongerrememberitaweeklaterbecausetheymissedtheopportunity.

However,LaurenMargulieux,anassistantprofessoratGeorgiaStateUniversityinAtlantaarguesthatthere

aretimeswhenclassroomuseoftechnologyisunavoidable.So,hesays,educatorsneedtoconsiderthatsomething

otherthantechnologyisdistractingstudents.

Infact,aspecialsoftwareprogramhasbeencreated.Studentscanusetheprogram,whichengagesstudents

morewiththeclassmaterialontheirpersonaldevicesduringagivenclass.Itcanalsobeusedtoobservestudent

activityandpreventthemfromopeningunrelatedpagesandprograms.

【背誦范文】

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作

DearMichael,

IhavesignedupfortheNEPCS.Inpreparationforit,IthinkwhatIamindesperateneedofistoimprovemy

writingability.Wouldyoupleasedomeafavoraboutit?

I'vefinishedanessay,butstillfinditfarfromsatisfactory.I'mnotsureoftheproperexpressionsofsome

Englishwords,whichmakestheessaylacknaturalness.Besides,theremayalsobesomemistakesingrammarand

sentencepattern.SoIwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththeseproblems.

1wouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

第二節(jié)概要寫作

Arecentresearchshowsusingtechnologyinclassmaypreventcollegestudentsrememberingandprocessing

information.（要點(diǎn)、一）118studentsparticipatedintheresearchwheretheyusedtechnologyduringhalfofclass

periods.（要點(diǎn)二）Theresearchersfoundinthelongrunthestudents5performanceswerepoorwhenusing

technologybecausetheyweredistracted.（要點(diǎn)三）Butanotherresearcherthinkssomethingelseexcepttechnology

istoblamefordistractingstudents.（要點(diǎn)四）Actually,aspecialsoftwareprogramhasbeenmadetokeepstudents

focused.（要點(diǎn)五）（76woids）

F

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請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Adecadeago,summervacationforcollegestudentswasallaboutoutdooractivities,whethertheytraveled

withtheirfriendsorconductedfieldwork.Nowadays,whiletherearestillstudentswholovetogooutside,the

majorityofstudentsprefertostayindoors.

AccordingtoarecentsurveyonChinesecollegestudents'summervacationactivitiesbyTheDynasty,almost

60percentoftherespondentssaythattheybarelystepoutside.Wakingupnaturally,surfingtheInternetalldaylong

andorderingsometakeoutfoodhavebecomethenewnorm.

Theindoortrendamongcollegestudentshasundoubtedlyraisedsomeconcern.ZhuHaoliang,anassociate

professorofpsychologyatWenzhouUniversity,warnsthatstudents9lackofoutdooractivitiesnotonlyaffectstheir

physicalcondition,butalsoweakenstheirpsychologicalwell-being.

“Humansareborntobesocial.Wegainself-esteemandself-respectthroughsocialinteractions,“hetold

ChinaScienceDaily."Iftheyarespendingtoomuchtimeathome,studentsmayloseinterestinlifeorevensuffer

fromsocialanxiety,lonelinessanddepression,“headded.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2.用約120詞闡述你對(duì)“大學(xué)生暑假期間宅在家里”的看法，并用2?3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【背誦范文】

【概要】

Nowadays,manycollegestudentsprefertostayindoorsduringtheirsummervacationratherthantakepartin

outdooractivities,whichaccordingtoauniversityassociateprofessor,coulddoharmtotheirphysicalandmental

health.

【論述】

Icouldn'tagreemorewiththeprofessor.Firstly,stayingindoorsmeanstherewillbealackofexercise.Asthe

sayinggoes,"Asoundmindisinasoundbody.,,Thatistosay,one'smindandbodyarecloselyrelated.Ifone's

physicalhealthfails,hismindwillbeverylikelytosuffer.Secondly,wehumanbeingsarecreaturesthatinteract

greatlywithothermembersinoursociety.Withourpersonaldevelopmenthighlydependentontheoverall

developmentofoursociety,withoutsocialinteractions,we'llbecutofffromtheoutsideworld,fallintoloneliness

andevensufferfromdepression.

Therefore,asfarasIamconcerned,collegestudentsshouldgooutsideratherthanstayathomeduringtheir

summervacation.

G

（2020浙江寧波諾丁漢大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)二上期中）

話題：工作難度：★★建議用時(shí)：5分

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

WorkisaveryimportantpartoflifeintheUnitedStates.Whentheearlyimmigrantscametothiscountry,

theybroughttheideathatworkwasthewaytoGodandheaven.ThisattitudestillinfluencesAmericatoday.Work

isnotonlyimportantforthesalary,butalsoforsocialandpsychologicalworking,beingproductive.Formost

Americans,theyarewhattheydo.Whathappens,then,whenapersonretiresattheageofsixty-fiveorseventy?

It'seasytoimaginethatretirementisnoeasything.Retireesoftenfeeltheyareunproductiveandnolongerneeded

byothers.

Oncepeopleretire,theymayalsogetintofinancialtrouble.ManypeoplerelyonSocialSecuritychecksevery

month.Duringtheirworkingyears,employeescontributeacertainpercentageoftheirsalariestothegovernment.

Whenpeopleretire,theyreceivethismoneyasincome.Thesechecksdonotprovideenoughmoneytoliveon,

however,becausepricesareincreasingveryrapidly.Afterretirement,theyhavetochangetheirlifestyles.They

havetospendcarefullytobesurethattheycanaffordtobuyfood,fuel,andothernecessities.

Ofcourse,notallseniorcitizensfeelsadwhentheyareinfaceofretirement.Workingforsomanyyears,

theyeventuallyhavetimetospendwiththeirfamiliesortoenjoytheirhobbiessuchasreading,travelingorjoining

someseniorcitizenclubs.Somecontinuetoworkparttime;otherschoosetodovolunteerworklikehelpingyoung

peopletogetstartedinnewbusiness.

Americangovernmentistakingstepstoeasetheproblemsofretiredpeople.Theyarebuildingnewhousing,

offeringdiscountsinstoresandmuseumsandonbuses,andprovidingotherservices,suchasfreecourses,food

service,andhelpwithhousework.Itiswisetodoso.Retiredcitizensareanimportantpartofthepopulationand

theirspecialneedsmustbeconcernedabout.Afterall,everyonewillbeaseniorcitizensomeday.

【參考范文】

WorkplaysanextremelyimportantroleinAmericanculture,sopeoplefindretirementdifficultastheymay

feeluselesswithoutjobs.（要點(diǎn)1）RetirementcanalsobringfinancialproblemsasSocialSecuritychecksdon't

provideenoughmoney.（要點(diǎn)2）However,someseniorcitizensfeelhappyaboutretirementastheyfinallyget

timetodowhattheyreallywant.（要點(diǎn)、3）Americangovernmentissolvingretiredcitizens'problemsand

concerningtheirspecialneeds,whichiswiseandnecessary,becauseeveryonewillgetold.（要點(diǎn)4）

精品基礎(chǔ)教育教學(xué)資料，僅供參考，需要可下載使用！

書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題類（二）

【熱點(diǎn)話題】垃圾分類、運(yùn)動(dòng)比賽、共享單車、手機(jī)低頭族、科技創(chuàng)新

【限時(shí)檢測(cè)】（建議用時(shí)：30分鐘）

話題：垃圾分類難度：★★建議用時(shí)：6分鐘

假定你是大慶實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)高三學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)被選定為大慶市垃圾分類試點(diǎn)單位，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)

以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇倡議書，倡議全體同學(xué)垃圾分類，內(nèi)容包括：

1.告知學(xué)校要進(jìn)行垃圾分類；

2.垃圾分類的重要意義：

3.提出倡議。

詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

參考詞匯：垃圾分類wastesorting/rubbishclassification可回收的recyclable

Dearfellowstudents,

Thankyou!

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

Dearfellowstudents,

Ourschoolhasbeenselectedasoneoftheexperimentalunitsforrubbishclassification.Differentkindsof

garbagearerequiredtobesortedoutandplacedindifferentdustbins.Papercanberecycled,whileleftoverscan

becollectedasfoodforpigsorprocessedasfertilizerforplants.Aboveall,suchharmfulthingsasplasticsandused

batteriesshouldnotbemixedwithotherwastes.

Theprogramisofgreatbenefit.Wewillbeabletosaveresourcesbymakinguseofrecyclablegarbageand

harmfulthingswillnotpolluteourenvironmentafterspecialtreatment.

Let'sworktogetherforabettercampus!

【寫作思路】

這是一封倡議信。寫倡議信語言應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)潔明了，用詞精準(zhǔn)，內(nèi)容明確。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知，寫作主要分

為三部分：倡議內(nèi)容、垃圾分類的意義以及提出倡議。

第1步：審題。確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱。根據(jù)提示：你作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席，向大家發(fā)起倡議。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。

第2步：確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），提煉寫作要點(diǎn)。如：experimentalunits（試點(diǎn)）,sortout（分類），becollectedas

foodforpigs（回收喂豬），beprocessedasfertilizerforplants（被加工成植物肥料），mixedwith（混在一起）

等。

第3步：對(duì)寫作要點(diǎn)遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美

觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

范文內(nèi)容完整，段落清晰，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。第一段話介紹垃圾分類的內(nèi)容都是用了

被動(dòng)語態(tài)，闡述的客觀準(zhǔn)確。第一段第三句話使用while連接了兩個(gè)并列句，最后一句話中使用了such...as...

詞組，提升了語言檔次。第二段第一句話使用了"of+名詞"短語，第二句話用and連接了兩個(gè)并列句，而

且介詞by與after使用的也很巧妙。本文中前后使用的介詞值得大家推敲，供大家以后寫作中使用。全文中

沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。且全文語句間過渡自然，為文章增色添彩。

B

（河北省承德市2018屆高三上學(xué)期期末考試）

話題：運(yùn)動(dòng)比賽難度：★★建議用時(shí)：6分鐘

假定你是李華。外教Peter計(jì)劃于本周日組織你校學(xué)生進(jìn)行一場(chǎng)橄欖球比賽，并委托你以學(xué)生會(huì)名義用

英語寫一則通知，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.比賽時(shí)間和場(chǎng)地；

2.提前到場(chǎng)以了解規(guī)則;

3.準(zhǔn)備運(yùn)動(dòng)裝備，注意安全。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【參考范文】

NOTICE

ThereisarugbymatchtobeheldthisSundayonourschoolplayground.Everystudentiswelcometowatch

thematchorganizedbyMrPeter.Studentswhoareinterestedinrugbycanjoininthematch.Andtherearesome

importantthingseverybodyshouldpayattentionto.

Firstly,anyparticipantshouldgototheplaygroundontimesothattherewillbeenoughtimeleftforMrPeter

toexplainsomerulesaboutrugby.Secondly,eachplayershouldwearsportsclothesandshoes.Itwillbebetterif

youhaveaprotectivehelmet.Lastbutnotleast,everyplayershouldfocusonyourownsafety.Boysandgirls,let's

moveandjointogether.

【寫作思路】

這是一篇提綱類作文。主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)的語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和已掌握的英語寫作技能，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)客

觀事實(shí)，闡述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行思想交流的書面表達(dá)能力。

【一】解題思路。1.認(rèn)真審題，抓住信息點(diǎn)。除了列出的三條要點(diǎn)，還有外教Peter計(jì)劃于本周II組織你校

學(xué)生進(jìn)行一場(chǎng)橄欖球比賽。2.注意人稱，確定時(shí)態(tài)。本文用第二人稱，面向全體學(xué)生?，F(xiàn)在和將來時(shí)態(tài)。

3.文體是書面通知。4.恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用高級(jí)句型和關(guān)聯(lián)詞。5.書寫工整，卷面清潔。

【二】范文亮點(diǎn)。

Firstly,secondly,lastbutnotleast使行文層次分明。

whoareinterestedinrugby,everybodyshouldpayattentionto定語從句

sothattherewillbeenoughtimeleftforMrPetertoexplainsomerulesaboutrugby,ifyouhaveaprotective

helmet.原因，條件狀語從句，等高級(jí)句型增強(qiáng)了邏輯性

leftforMrPetertoexplainsomerulesaboutrugby過去分詞短語作后置定語

(廣東省茂名市2018屆高三上學(xué)期第一次綜合測(cè)試)

話題：共享單車難度：★★建議用時(shí)：6分

近來，共享單車(sharedbikes)成為中國時(shí)尚，它因方便、環(huán)保而廣受好評(píng)，然而共享單車也出現(xiàn)了許多

弊病，例如亂停放、人為破壞、非法占有等。假如你是光明中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你將有關(guān)情況反映給政府

相關(guān)部門并闡述你的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

1.共享單車的問題；

2.出現(xiàn)問題的原因；

3.解決問題的意見或建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearSir,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearSir,

I'mLiHua,astudentfromGuangmingmiddleschool.Tmwritingtoexpressmyopinionsabouttheshared

bike.

Beingconvenientandenvironmentallyfriendly,sharedbikeshavealreadybeenpopularthroughoutChina.

However,withitsrapiddevelopment,itbringsaboutmanyproblems.Insomeplacessharedbikesareleft

everywhereandsidewalksareoccupied.What'sworse,somepeopleevendamagethemortakethemjustastheir

ownpossessions.

Inmyopinion,it'sthelackofpublicawarenessandrelatedlawsthatresultsinsuchphenomena.Tosolvethe

problems,measuresmustbetakenrightaway.First,thegovernmentshouldmakesomestrictlawsandrulesto

regulatetheoperationandmanagementofthesharedbikes.Second,thepublicshouldraisetheirawarenessof

usingth