高考英語作文-模擬訓(xùn)練題20題（含范文）

高中英語作文模擬訓(xùn)練題20題（含范文）

學(xué)校:姓名：班級:考號：

一、概要寫作

1.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Punishingchildrenisacontroversialtopic.Everybodyhasdifferentopinionsabouthow

toacttocorrectachild'sbehavior.Parents,teachers,doctors,andspecialistssuchas

psychologists,havedisagreementsaboutwhetheritisgoodforachild'seducationtopunish

himorher.

Theword“punish“meansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Punishmentcanbe

physicaloremotional.Physicalpunishmentiswhentheparenthits,slapsorspanksthechild.

Ontheotherhand,emotionalpunishmentiswhentheparent,inordertoeducatethe

child,doesn*tlethimorherwatchTV,gotoplaywithhisorherfriends,orthelike.The

parentdoesn'tteachhimorher,butstillheorshepunishesthechild.

Althoughmanysurveysandstudieshavebeenmadeaboutwhatthecoirectwayisto

raiseachild,nobodyknowstheanswerorthetruth.Ithinkitwillbeverydifficulttofindthe

answerorgetpeopletoagree.

Ithinktheparentsshouldlovetheirchildandgivehimorherthebesteducation,butat

thesametime,theyshouldpunishthechildifheorshedeservesit.Ithinkifyouloveyour

child,youshouldberationalwhenyouapplythepunishment.ltshouldbereasonablebut

strict.

Theparents*goalistohaveinthefutureagoodmanorwomaninsociety,so

sometimesyoushoulddowhatisnecessarytogetyourchildtobehavewell.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

People'sattitudestowardspunishingchildrenvaryfrompersontoperson.Punishment

canbedividedintophysicalandemotionalpunishment.However,itishardtofindacorrect

waytoraiseachild.Tobecomeagoodpersoninthefuture,inmyopinion,notonlyshould

childrenbegivenloveandbesteducationbutalsoreasonableandstrictpunishment.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹說，人們對待懲罰孩子的態(tài)度因人而異。懲罰可以分為

身體懲罰和情感懲罰。然而，很難找到養(yǎng)育孩子的正確方法。在我看來，為了將來成

為一個好人，不僅應(yīng)該給孩子們愛和最好的教育，也應(yīng)該合理和嚴(yán)格的懲罰。

【詳解】

1要點摘錄

?Everybodyhasdifferentopinionsabouthowtoacttocorrectachild'sbehavior.

Parents,teachers,doctors,andspecialistssuchaspsychologists,havedisagreementsabout

whetheritisgoodforachild'seducationtopunishhimorher.

?Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional.Physicalpunishmentiswhentheparenthits,

slapsorspanksthechild.

③Althoughmanysurveysandstudieshavebeenmadeaboutwhatthecorrectwayistoraise

achild,nobodyknowstheanswerorthetruth.Ithinkitwillbeverydifficulttofindthe

answerorgetpeopletoagree.

@1thinktheparentsshouldlovetheirchildandgivehimorherthebesteducation,butatthe

sametime,theyshouldpunishthechildifheorshedeservesit.

@Theparents*goalistohaveinthefutureagoodmanorwomaninsociety,sosometimes

youshoulddowhatisnecessarytogetyourchildtobehavewell.

2.縝密構(gòu)思

將第4、5兩個要點進行重組，將第1、2、3三個要點進行整合。

3.遣詞造句

People'sattitudestowardspunishingchildrenvaryfrompersontoperson.

Punishmentcanbedividedintophysicalandemotionalpunishment.

However,itishardtofindacorrectwaytoraiseachild.

Tobecomeagoodpersoninthefuture,inmyopinion,notonlyshouldchildrenbegivenlove

andbesteducationbutalsoreasonableandstrictpunishment.

【點睛】

[高分句型1]However,itishardtofindacorrectwaytoraiseachild.運用it作形式主語，

真正主語為不定式和不定式作定語的結(jié)構(gòu)，表達高級。

［高分句型2JTobecomeagoodpersoninthefuture,inmyopinion,notonlyshouldchildren

begivenloveandbesteducationbutalsoreasonableandstrictpunishment.運用不定式作目

的狀語，和notonly…butalso…引導(dǎo)的部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，表達非常高級。

二、開放性作文

2.假定你是李華，你校將在下周舉行創(chuàng)建“綠色學(xué)校”的英語演講比賽，請你寫一篇英

語演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.創(chuàng)建目的；

2.創(chuàng)建方式；

3.號召創(chuàng)建。

注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!

［答案］OnePossibleVersion

Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!

Weshouldcreateagreenschoolinordertocontributetoacomfortablestudying

environment.Howcanwesucceedatit?

Firstly,weshouldarrangeaseriesoflecturesrelatedenvironmentalprotection,thus

arousingstudents'awarenessofestablishingagreenschoolandlivingalowcarbonlife.

Secondly,wearewillingtoattachgreatimportancetosavingwater,paperandelectricityand

plantingtreesandputthemintopractice.Thirdly,wemusthavegoodhabitstokeepevery

cornertidyintheschool,wherewestayinharmonywitheachother.

Therefore,everyone,let'stakeactiontobuildabeautifulgreenschoolimmediately.

Thanksforlistening.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就學(xué)校舉行的創(chuàng)建“綠色學(xué)?！钡挠⒄Z演講比賽寫

一篇演講稿。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

過（某種生活）：liveTead

每個：every—>each

因此：therefore—?asaresult

立即：immediately—atonce

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Weshouldcreateagreenschoolinordertocontributetoacomfortablestudying

environment.

拓展句：Weshouldcreateagreenschoolinorderthatwecancontributetoacomfortable

studyingenvironment.

【高分句型】

Firstly,weshouldarrangeaseriesoflecturesrelatedenvironmentalprotection,thusarousing

students'awarenessofestablishingagreenschoolandlivingalowcarbonlife.（運用了現(xiàn)在

分詞作結(jié)果狀語）

Thirdly,wemusthavegoodhabitstokeepeverycornertidyintheschool,wherewestayin

harmonywitheachother.（運用了where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

3.每年，國家科學(xué)技術(shù)獎勵大會都會在北京人民大會堂隆重舉行，屆時黨和國家領(lǐng)導(dǎo)

人會為獲獎的科學(xué)家頒獎。請你圍繞以下要點談?wù)勀愕膫€人看法。

1.黨和政府為什么如此重視科技事業(yè)的發(fā)展；

2.作為一名高中生，你應(yīng)該如何去做。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：

2.短文要求包含所有要點，但不要逐條翻譯；

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

4.開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Everyyear,theNationalScienceTechnologyAwardCeremonyisheldintheGreatHall

ofthePeople.

【答案】Everyyear,theNationalScienceTechnologyAwardCeremonyisheldintheGreat

HallofthePeople.Atthattime,thetopleadersofourcountryawardmedalstoscientistswho

achievethosegoals.

It'sclearthatthegovernmentattachesgreatimportancetoscienceandtechnology.

There'snodoubtthatscienceandtechnologyplayavitalpartinacountry's

development.Thosewhoreceivetheawardsdeservethembecause,throughyearsofhard

work,theyhavemadeoutstandingcontributionstoourcountry.Chinaneedsmorescientists

andinventorslikethem.

Asaseniorschoolstudent,I'lltrymybesttolearnallmysubjectswellsoastoservethe

societyaswellasourcountry.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生談?wù)剛€人看法，介紹黨和政府為什么如此重視科

技事業(yè)的發(fā)展和作為一名高中生，你應(yīng)該如何去做。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

實現(xiàn)：achieve一accomplish

非常重視：attachgreatimportanceto—makemuchaccountof

有益的：helpful-^beneficial

盡努力做某事：tryone'sbest-sparenoefforttodo

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Asaseniorschoolstudent,Filtrymybesttolearnallmysubjectswellsoastoserve

thesocietyaswellasourcountry.

拓展句：Asaseniorschoolstudent,I'lltrymybesttolearnallmysubjectswellsothatIcan

servethesocietyaswellasourcountryinthefuture.

【點睛】

［高分句型1JAtthattime,thetopleadersofourcountryawardmedalstoscientistswho

achievethosegoals.（運用了who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

［高分句型2］It'sclearthatthegovernmentattachesgreatimportancetoscienceand

technology.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的主語從句）

4.請用英語寫一篇短文，描述自己的飲食習(xí)慣，并就“健康飲食”提出自己的看法或建

議。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案）LikemostpeoplefromtheNorth,cookedwheatenfoodisalwaysmy

favorite.Ioftenhavenoodlesforbreakfast,steambreadorpancakeforlunchandsupper.Ieat

vegetableseveryday.Ilikeseafoodthoughit'salittleexpensive.Ioftengooutforgood

mealswithmyfamiliesandfriends,butweofteneatalotofmeatthere.

Ithinkweshouldformhealthyeatinghabits.Breakfastisveryimportanttoourhealth.

Besides,we'dbettereatlessmeatandmorefreshvegetables.Allinall,weshouldrealizethe

importanceofhealthydiet.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

這是一篇說明文。要求考生描述自己的飲食習(xí)慣，并就“健康飲食”提出自己的看法或

建議。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

吃/食用：have—>eat

養(yǎng)成：develop—>fbrm

止匕夕卜：additionally—?besides

重要性：significance—>importance

2.句型拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Breakfastisveryimportanttoourhealth.

拓展句：Breakfastisveryimportanttoourhealth,withoutwhichwecannotstudyorwork

well.

【點睛】

[高分句型1]Ilikeseafoodthoughit'salittleexpensive.（運用了though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語

從句）

[高分句型2]Ithinkweshouldformhealthyeatinghabits.（運用了省略連接詞that的賓語

從句）

5.假定你是李華，受學(xué)校英文報的約稿，寫一篇關(guān)于我國2021年6月17日神州十二

號航天員（聶海勝、劉伯明和湯洪波）進入太空并在太空執(zhí)行為期3個月的飛行任務(wù)

的英文報道。內(nèi)容包括：

1.新聞概要；

2.太空生活和工作；

3.意義。

注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右

2.可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)使行文連貫。

Shenzhou-12Chinalaunchedfirstcrewtonewspacestation

［答案】Shenzhou-12Chinalaunchedfirstcrewtonewspacestation

ChinalaunchedthreeastronautsintoorbitbyShenzhou-12tobeginoccupationofthe

country'snewspacestation,whichlasted3monthsfromJune,17lhof2021.

Thelifeupinspacewastotallydifferentfromthatontheearth,whichposedalotof

challengestotheastronauts.Theyperformedsomedailyroutinesaswellasscientific

researchesandexperimentsinthecircumstancesoflowgravity.

Asitturnsout,itisChina'slongestcrewedspacemissiontodate,demonstratingChina's

growingconfidenceandcapabilityinthespacedomain.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于我國2021年6月17日神州十二號航

天員（聶海勝、劉伯明和湯洪波）進入太空并在太空執(zhí)行為期3個月的飛行任務(wù)的英

文報道。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

開始：begin—start

完全地：totally—completely

每日的：daily-everyday

能力：capability—>ability

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)化

原句：Asitturnsout,itisChina'slongestcrewedspacemissiontodate,demonstrating

China'sgrowingconfidenceandcapabilityinthespacedomain.

拓展句：Asitturnsout,itisChina'slongestcrewedspacemissiontodate,which

demonstratesChina'sgrowingconfidenceandcapabilityinthespacedomain.

【點睛】

[高分句型l]ChinalaunchedthreeastronautsintoorbitbyShenzhou-12tobeginoccupation

ofthecountry'snewspacestation,whichlasted3monthsfromJune,17thof2021.（運用

了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Thelifeupinspacewastotallydifferentfromthatontheearth,whichposeda

lotofchallengestotheastronauts.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

6.你校英文報正開展題為“我理想中的校園圖書館”的征文活動，請寫一篇短文投

稿。

注意：

1,詞數(shù)80左右;

2.請在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

【答案】

Myidealschoollibrary

Thereisanidealschoollibraryinmymind.Itshouldbelikethis.

First,thereshouldbeatimetable.Itopensfrom8:30to11:30a.m.andfrom1:30

to5:30p.m.everyday.WheneverIhavetime,Iwillgotheretoread.Second,thereareall

kindsofreferencebooksinthelibrarywhichprovidereadingguidancetohelpmesolvemy

problems.Besides,itshouldbeverybigandquietandofferenoughseats.Wecansitthere,

deeplyabsorbedinourreading.

Suchismyidealschoollibrary.IfirmlyholdabeliefthatIwillhaveoneinthe

future.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文。校英文報正開展主題為“我理想中的校園圖書館”的

征文活動，要求考生寫一篇短文投稿。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

各種各樣：allkindsofvarietyof

提供：provide-offer

全身心投入：(be)absorbedin—>(be)devotedto

相信:holdabelief—>believe

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Besides,itshouldbeverybigandquietandofferenoughseats.Wecansitthere,

deeplyabsorbedinourreading.

拓展句：Besides,itshouldbeverybigandquietandofferenoughseats,wherewecansit,

deeplyabsorbedinourreading.

【點睛】

[高分句型1]Second,thereareallkindsofreferencebooksinthelibrarywhichprovide

readingguidancelohelpmesolvemyproblems.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)

[高分句型2]IfirmlyholdabeliefthatIwillhaveoneinthefuture.(運用了that引導(dǎo)的同

位語從句)

7.你班英語課上討論了學(xué)生課外上網(wǎng)的利弊，以下是同學(xué)們的看法。請你用英語寫一

篇短文，小結(jié)他們的觀點，并呼吁正確使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。

使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的益處使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的弊端

1、資源豐富1、內(nèi)容良莠兼有

2、節(jié)省時間2、沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲會影響學(xué)業(yè)

3、方便交流和溝通3、過多使用會影響健康

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭已給出,不計入字?jǐn)?shù)。Withthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,the

Internethasbecomemoreandmorepopular.

【答案】

Withthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,theInternethasbecomemoreandmore

popular.Tmgoingtogiveyouasummaryoftoday'sdiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldgo

onlineinoursparetime.

ThefollowingaspectscouldbestillustratetheadvantagesofInternet.Resourcesarerich

ontheinternetwherewecangainplentyoftheknowledge.Itcanalsosavetimewhenwe

searchforknowledgeontheinternet.Inaddition,internetoffersusaconvenientwayto

communicatewitheachother.

TheInternetalsohasitsdisadvantages,justasacoinhastwosides.Firstly,some

columnsontheinternetmaycontainsomeunhealthycontentthathaveanegativeinfluence

onus.Secondly,somestudentsmayindulgeinonlinegameswhileneglectingtheirstudy.

What'smore,lingeringtolongontheinternetwilldoharmtoourhealth.

Inmyopinion,weneedtomakegooduseoftheinternetandshouldnotdependonittoo

much.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇書面表達屬于議論文。要求考生給寫一篇總結(jié)，總結(jié)英語課上同學(xué)們關(guān)于“學(xué)生課

外上網(wǎng)的利弊，，的討論，并呼吁正確使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

上網(wǎng)：goonline—>surfontheInternet

說明：illustrate—demonstrate

尋找：searchfor—>lookfor

沉迷于：indulgeimabandononeselfto

2.句式拓展

同義句

原句：Inmyopinion,weneedtomakegooduseoftheinternetandshouldnotdependonit

toomuch.

拓展句：Inmyopinion,weneedtomakegooduseoftheinternetratherthandependonit

toomuch.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]I'mgoingtogiveyouasummaryoftoday'sdiscussionaboutwhetherwe

shouldgoonlineinoursparetime.（運用whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Resourcesarerichontheinternetwherewecangainplentyofthe

knowledge.（運用了關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

三、讀后續(xù)寫

8.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短

文。

Thefirsttimeweseteyeson“BigRed,“father,motherandIweretrudgingthroughthe

freshlyfallensnowandpassingtheEaton9sdepartmentstore'swindow.Westoppedasusual

togazeanddoabitofdreaming.Thegailydecoratedwindowdisplaythebreathtakingskirt

ofBigRed.Mother'seyesweregluedtothemassiveflameofred."Mygoodness,she

managedtosayinwonder,4€wouldyoujustlookatthatdress?,,Then,totallyoutofcharacter,

mothertwirledonespinofawaltz（華爾茲）ontheslipperysidewalk.Beneaththeheavygrey

woolcoatshehadworneverywinterforaslongasIcouldremember,motherlostherbalance

andtumbled.Fatherquicklycaughther.

Hercheeksredderthanusual,4tOh,stopthat!”Sheorderedashesweptthesnowfrom

hercoat."WhatasillydresstobeplacedupthereinthewindowofEaton's!"Sheshookher

headindisgust."Whoonearthwouldwantsuchafancybutuselessdress?”Aswecontinued

downthestreet,motherturnedbackforonemorelook.

Christmaswasnearing,andthereddresswassoonforgotten.Mother,ofallpeople,was

notonetowishfbr,orspendmoneyonitemsthatwerenotpractical."Therearethingswe

needmorethanthisorthat,"she'dalwayssay.Father,ontheotherhand,likedtosatisfy

wheneverthebudgetallowed.Ofcourse,he'dgetscoldedforhisoccasionalsplurging（揮

霍），butitwasalldonewiththebestintention.

OnourlasttriptotownbeforeChristmas,weweredrivingupMainStreetwhenMother

suddenlyshoutedinsurprise:6<Wouldyoujustlookatthat!”ShepointedexcitedlyasDad

drovepastEaton's.

“Thatbigrealdressisgone,^^shesaidindisbelief.actuallygone.^^

“Well…!”Dadchucked.uOhGod,itis!”

“Who'dbefoolenoughtobuysuchadress?"Motherquestioned,shakingherhead.

IquicklystoleaglanceatDad.Hisblueeyesweretwinklingashenudgedmewithhis

elbow.Mothercranedherneckforanotherglimpseoutthewindowaswerodeonupthe

street."It'sgone...”Shewhispered,atraceofstoryinhervoice.

Paragraph1:

rilneverforgetthatChristmasmorning

Paragraph2:

Motheropenedtheboxonlytofindaredshiningdress.

【答案】rilneverforgetthatChristmasmorningwhenmyfathergavemymothera

box."Dear,themostsillygiftformyprincess!”fatherexclaimed,eyeingathiswifeina

lovingandexpectantway.Motherlookedatfatherandsaid,“IsitaChristmaspresent?What

isit?”Fathersmiledmysteriouslyandsaid,“Openitandhavealook.Ibelieveyou'Hlikeit.”

Motheropenedtheboxonlytofindaredshiningdress.Motherwassostunnedthatshe

couldn'tspeak.Sheheldtheboxwithhertremblinghands.Herpalmssweating,throat

tightening,herhandsslidthroughtheredsatinandlingeredatthetwinklingstars.tuYou

shouldn'thavebeenthatextravagant.^^mothersaid."No,baby,youdeservethehighesthonor

andmypassionateloveonthisspecialChristmas^^fatheranswered.Mymotherfelthappyand

huggedmyfather.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

文章主要講述了作者一家在經(jīng)過百貨公司的櫥窗時，看到一條大紅裙子，母親很喜

歡，但因為紅裙子很貴，所以母親裝作不喜歡的樣子，因為她一直是一個不會花錢買

不實用的東西的人。圣誕節(jié)前夕，當(dāng)作者一家人再次進城時，發(fā)現(xiàn)櫥窗里的大紅裙子

不見了，母親露出了難以置信的表情。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記那個圣誕節(jié)的早晨“可知，第一段可描寫圣誕節(jié)

的早晨發(fā)生了什么。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“母親打開盒子，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)一件閃閃發(fā)光的紅裙子?！笨芍诙?/p>

可描寫母親收到禮物后的反應(yīng)。

2.續(xù)寫線索：父親送禮物——母親猜想禮物會是什么——收到紅裙子——母親的反應(yīng)

——父親的表白

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①.給某人某物：givesb.sth./handsb.sth.

②.喜歡：like/befondof

③.擁抱：hug/embrace

情緒類

①.震驚的：stunned/shocked

②.高興的：happy/glad

【點睛】

[高分句型1].Fathersmiledmysteriouslyandsaid,"Openitandhavealook.1believeyou'H

likeit.”（由that引導(dǎo)的從句作believe的賓語,省略了that）

[高分句型2].Motherwassostunnedthatshecouldn'tspeak.（由so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀

語從句）

9.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

FromthetimewhenIwasachild,mymothermadeitclearthatshedidnotlikenursing

homes（敬老院）.Irememberhersayingthatnursinghomeswereterribleplaces.Whenever

mymothermentionedthetopic,shewouldshakeherfingeratmeandaddawarning:HIfyou

putmeinoneofthoseplaces,I'llnotforgiveyou!nIknewmymother'swishesandwantedto

obey.

Fortunately,mymotherlivednearme,andformanyyearsitwaseasytocheckonher

andhelpwithhercare.Butwitheachpassingyear,mymotherexperiencedadeclineinher

physicalandmentalabilities.Afterninety,whenshewasdiagnosedwithdementia（老年癡呆

癥），sheneededmoreassistancewiththenormalactivitiesofdailylivingandrequiredclose

observationjustforherownsafety.

Duringthepassageoftime,I,too,wasgettingolder,Ihadmyownmobility（移動性）

issuesandhealthconcerns,Asthedayspassed,itbecameclearerthatsomechangeswere

needed.IfIhadtogooutforgroceries（食品雜貨）,Icouldn'tleaveheralone.WhenI

slept,mymotherwasun-watched,andshecouldgetoutofbedandwanderoff.

Fortunately,whileIwasfiguringoutwhattodo,abrand-newnursinghomewasbuiltin

ourtown,Itouredthenursinghomeanddiscoveredthattheycouldprovideaprivateroom

formymother.Theyalsohadstaffmembersthatwereveryprofessionalandwell-trained,I

triedtoconvincemyselfthatthenewnursinghomewasthebestandsafestplaceformy

mother,butIseemedtohearmymother'swordsandseeherfingershakeinfrontofmyeyes.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

Eventually,IdecidedandsharedmyplanwithMom.

Thebigdaycamefinally.

【答案】Eventually,IdecidedandsharedmyplanwithMom.Hearingthatshewouldbe

senttoanursinghome,sheprotestedbitterly.Andshescreamedatthetopofhervoice,nYou

willnotbeforgiven.Itoldhermyconcerns,convincingherthatitwouldbethebestchoice

forbothofusatpresent.Besides,thenursinghomewasjustastone*sthrow,whichmeantI

couldvisitherfrequently.Withmuchpainstakingeffort,sheagreed.

Thebigdaycamefinally.Igotupearly,helpingherpackupthedailynecessities.With

everythinginplace,offwewent.AssoonasMomwassettledinhernewroom,shetookthe

changeasanopportunitytomovetoabrand-newhouse.However,itstilltookherawhileto

adapttothenewenvironment.Ialsokeptmypromisebypayingfrequentvisits.Seeingher

happyface,IknewImadearightdecision.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的媽媽不喜歡養(yǎng)老院，90歲以后，她被診斷出患

有癡呆癥，而作者年齡也越來越大，作者覺得力不從心，幸運的是，鎮(zhèn)上建了一家全

新的養(yǎng)老院，作者覺得新的養(yǎng)老院是最好和最安全的地方，但是作者擔(dān)心母親會反

對。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“最后，我決定把我的計劃告訴媽媽?！翱芍?，第一段可描寫作者

如何說服母親同意自己的計戈

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“大日子終于來了。”可知，第二段可描寫作者母親搬進養(yǎng)老院。

2.續(xù)寫線索：反對——說服——同意——搬入養(yǎng)老院——媽媽很滿意

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①反對：protest/object

②同意：agree/consent

③安頓下來：settlein/settledown

④適應(yīng)：adaptto/accommodateto

情緒類

①激烈地：bitterly/vehemently

②高興的：happy/delighted

【點睛】

［高分句型1JItoldhermyconcerns,convincingherthatitwouldbethebestchoiceforboth

ofusatpresent.（由連接詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作convincing的賓語，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀

語）

［高分句型2JBesides,thenursinghomewasjustastone'sthrow,whichmeantIcouldvisit

herfrequently.（由關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

10.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

IalwayswonderhowpeoplewillreactifIwantatotalstrangerforhelpinabusyplace

likeastreetcornerorinacrowdedstation.Ipersonallyhavealwayshurriedpastastranger

whotriedtocatchmyattentioninabusyplaceorwhenIamrushingaround.

YesterdayIwasstuckinsuchahopelesssituationwheremyonlyhopeofhelpwould

havetocomefromatotalstranger.

Iwasinabusyshoppingmall（中心）buyingalargepieceofluggage.Afterthepurchase

inoneofthelarge,fancy,expensiveshops,Ipickedupmyphonefrommypockettocallmy

driverwaitingintheparkinglotandmyphonewasdead.

Ithenrequestedtheshopassistantwhohadjustsoldmetheluggage,whichwasnot

cheapatall,ifshecouldhelpmetelephonemydriver.Shereplied,stillallsmiles,"I'msorry,

Sir,butitistheshoppolicythatwecannotusemobilephoneswhileworkingintheshop.”

AsIwaswonderingwhatkindofpolicythatwas,Isawanice-lookingteenageboy

comingtowardme.Rememberingmywife'sinterestingtheory（理論）thatbeautifulpeople

aremorelikelytogiveyouahandwhenyou'reintrouble,IthoughtImighthaveachance.

ButbeforeIcouldsayaword,hewalkedpastme.Itturnedouthesimplydidn'tseeme.

Iwaitedabitlongerinthemallbutitseemednobodybotheredtolookatme.

Disappointedandtired,Igotoutoftheshopontothebusystreetinfront.Istoodtherewith

peoplerushingby,lookingattheirfacestoseeiftherewasasignofkindnessontheirface.I

beganwonderinghowmanytimesIhadreactedtostrangersliketheshopgirlandthe

teenager.

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AtthatpointIsawayoungmotherwithhertwokids.

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FinallyamanwearingacheapT-shirtanddirtyjeansseemedtonoticeme.

【答案】Paragraph1:

AtthatpointIsawayoungmotherwithhertwokids.Ithoughtthatabeautifulwoman

withcharmingblueeyesmustbewillingtohelpme.So,withgreatexpectation,Iwalked

towardsherwithanappropriatesmileonmyface,andrequestedifshecouldbekindenough

tomakeaphonecalltorme.However,withoutaword,shepulledherkidstoescapefrom

me,asifscaredbyamurderer.Istoodthere,hopeless,withablankfaceandasinkingheart.

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FinallyamanwearingacheapT-shirtanddirtyjeansseemedtonoticeme.Isqueezeda

smileandrequestedhimthesamething.Unexpectedly,hetookouthismobilephoneforme

withouthesitation.DancinginhiseyeswastherealkindnessthatIhadbeenstrugglingto

lookforsolong.Fromthatdayon,Ibeganhelpingotherstrangersintrouble,justlikethe

poor-lookingbutkindman,withtheaimofpassingkindnessandmeltingtheiceinmany

people'shearts.

【解析】

【分析】

這是一篇記敘文。本文以發(fā)生在購物中心里的事為線索，講述了作者在向陌生人尋求

幫助時，不同的人對于作者的請求的回應(yīng)。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

(1)由第一段首句內(nèi)容“就在那時，我遇見了一位帶著兩個孩子的母親?！笨芍?，第一

段可描寫作者向一位母親求助的經(jīng)過。

(2)由第二段首句內(nèi)容“終于，一個穿著廉價t恤和臟牛仔褲的男人似乎注意到了

我?！笨芍?，該段可描寫作者向一位看似很貧窮的人求助時遇到的情況。

2.續(xù)寫線索：向一位母親求助——被拒絕——繼續(xù)向一位男子求助——獲得幫助

3.詞匯激活

行為類

(1)請求：request/require/ask

(2)害怕：scare/frighten

(3)注意：notice/observe

情緒類

(1)迷人的：charming/attractive

(2)合適的：appropriate/suitable

【點睛】

[高分句型l]So,withgreatexpectation,Iwalkedtowardsherwithanappropriatesmileon

myface,andrequestedifshecouldbekindenoughtomakeaphonecallfbrme.(with+名

詞在句中作狀語；if引起賓語從句）

[高分句型2]DancinginhiseyeswastherealkindnessthatIhadbeenstrugglingtolookfor

solong,（dancinginhiseyes位于句首，用完全倒裝）

11.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短

文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

ItwasrainingprettyhardonHalloween,butthatwasn'tgoingtostopmylittlesister

Kateandmefromtrickortreating.WedecidedtostartatMissParson'shouse.MissParson

waslovedbyuskidswholivednearbybecausesheoftensharedherself-madecookieswith

us.Weusuallyfinishedtheminasecond,especiallywhenwewerehungryafterclass.

Sometimes,whenwevisitedherordidsomethingforher,shealwaysgaveusasurprise.

KateandIwonderedwhatkindsoftreatsshe'doffer.Aswewalkeddownthestreet,I

heldanumbrella,abagforcandy,andmysister'shand.Jackolanternsgavesoftlightalong

thestreet.Spiderwebshunginallthewindows.Parentswhoweredresseduplike

monsters（怪物）stoodindoorways.Afterwehadwalkedafewblocks,wewerewetfrom

headtotoes,andIfeltKatewastremblingwithcold.

TherewasalightonatMissParson'shouse,buttherewerenoghosts,goblins（小妖精），

orJackolanterns.WeclimbedupthestepsandsawMissParsonthroughawindow.Shewas

drinkingacupofhottea.

“Maybeshedoesn'tcelebrateHalloween,Katesaidwithasigh,disappointedly.

“Well,evenifshedoesn't,sheusuallylikesitwhenwevisither,“Isaidandknockedon

thedoor.

MissParsonseemedsurprisedwhensheopenedthedoorandsawourdressing."Istoday

Halloween?^^sheasked.441completelyforgot.Iamsosorry.,,

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MissParsonrushedusintoherhouse.

Paragraph2：

Thenextmorning,ahotandsweetdiscussionaboutMissParsonandHalloweenspread

amonguskids.

【答案】MissParsonrushedusintoherhouse."Ifscoldoutthere,shesaid.Mysister's

facewasshiningfromtherainandMissParsondriedhercheeks,"ThankyouJKatesaid.

“Trickortreat?”"Oh,right!Treats,saidMissParson.Thenshedisappearedforamoment

andcamebackwithabigsmileonherface."Openthosebagswide,“shesaid.Shedropped

twoboxesofcocoa（可可）intoourbags."Winterisjustaroundthecomer,,9shesaid."Some

hotcocoawillkeepyouwarm.”"ThankyouJwebothsaid."HappyHalloween!^^

Thenextmorning,ahotandsweetdiscussionaboutMissParsonandHalloweenspread

amonguskids.WetoldMomabouthowMissParsonhadforgottenHalloweenandabout

whatsheha