2022屆高考英語書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫高三模擬練習(xí)一寫作指導(dǎo)和解讀含范文

千里之行，始于足下讓知識帶有溫度。第第2頁/共2頁精品文檔推薦2022屆高考英語書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫高三模擬練習(xí)一寫作指導(dǎo)和解讀含范文高三模擬練習(xí)“讀后續(xù)寫”（一）2022屆高考英語書面表達(dá)寫作指導(dǎo)與解讀

一、續(xù)寫原題

Mikelickedthelastofthemintchocolatechipicecream.Itwasalmosttimetoleave.Hejumpedintothecarwith

hisparentsandheadedofftotheOlympic-sizedpoolforthe

bigswimmeet.

Whenhisracecameup,Mikewasconfident.Hewasstrongandswift.Mikeclimbedoutthepool,smiling.Hehadjustwonfirstplace,makinghimthefastestboyinhisagegroup.Congratulations,son,hisfathersaid.Hismomgavehimahug,eventhoughhewassoakingwet.

Aweeklater,itwastimeforanotherswimmeet.Likebefore,Mikedecidedtoenjoyhisfavoriteicecreamflavor.Mikerememberedthatthelasttimehehadwonarace,healsoatemintchocolatechipicecreamfirst.Maybehe'dwinagain.

He'stakenfirstplaceagaininhisrace.Mikewasfeeling

prettygood.Asitturnedout,Mikedecidedtohavesomemintchocolatechipicecreambeforeeveryoneofthenextfewswimmeets.Hebegantothinkofitashisluckycharm.Afterseveralmonthsoffeeling

wasMikeswam,heraceeveryofpositionstoptheinplacingunbeatable.Andhewouldn'tadmitit,butallthaticecreamwasaddingafewpoundstohisathleticswimmer'sbuild.

Itdidn'ttakelongafterthatforMiketostartcominginsecondplace-andthenthird-andthenlastplaceinhisraces.Theluckymintchocolatechipicecreamhadlostitsmagic.

Onthedayofhisnextswimmeet,hismothersatdownatthetablewithhim.Mike,weallloveicecream,butit's

nothealthyforyourbodytoeatsomuchofit.Maybeit'stimetoquitthesweettreatsforawhile,especiallybeforeyougoswimming.”

Mikeunwillinglyagreed.Hewenttotheswimmeet,and

didn'tperformwell.Hisfatherofferedtogorunningwithhimafewdaysaweektohelphimfeelbetterandstrengthenhismuscles.Theextraweightsoondisappeared,andMikefoundhimselfbreathingeasieratswimpractices.

注重：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開始語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace.

二、下水續(xù)寫

“7+7”模式

Paragraph1:Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikewasn'tsurewhattoexpect.

↓1.Heonlyfeltaqueersenseoflossthathehadneverexperiencedinhislife.

↓2.Worsestill,allthepeoplethereseemedtobewhisperingabouthim,whichmadehisheartthumpingevenmorewildly.

↓3.Atthatmoment,hisparents'wordsofencouragement

echoedinhisears.

↓4.Nowcametherealtest,hethought.

↓5.SoMikeswallowedhard,tookadeepbreathandthenwaitedcalmlyforthestartsignal.

↓6.Whentheracestarted,deafeningcheersbegantoerupt

fromthecrowds.

↓7.Likeafishinthepool,Mikeswamasquicklyashecoulduntilhewasfaraheadofalltheotherswimmers.

↓Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace.

.Allthepeoplegotup,applauded,andcheeredloudly.

1↓．

firstthewon↓2.ItwasplainthatMikelaughedlast--he

inthelastmeet.

place.Asheclimbedoutthepool,roarsofloudapplausebroke3↓outagain.

.Asusual,hismomgavehimahugehug,eventhoughhewas↓4wetthrough.

↓5.Andhisfathergavehimsomeicecreamasarewardandsaidexcitedly,Congratulations,son!Whatamiracle

you'veperformed!.Withlipsshakingandtearsstreamingdownhischeeks,he

replied,Thankyou...

.Butinhisheart,heknewthatitwasnotlucky

charbuthealthyexercisethatmademagihappen.

Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikeParagraph1:Heonlyfeltaqueersenseoflosswasn'tsurewhattoexpect.

thathehadneverexperiencedinhislife.Worsestill,allthepeoplethereseemedtobewhisperingabouthim,whichmadehisheartthumpingevenmorewildly.Atthatmoment,his

wordsofencouragementechoedinhisears.Nowcameparents'therealtest,hethought.SoMikeswallowedhard,tookadeep

breathandthenwaitedcalmlyforthestartsignal.Whenstarted,deafeningcheersbegantoeruptfromtheracethecrowds.Likeafishinthepool,Mikeswamasquicklyashecoulduntilhewasfaraheadofalltheotherswimmers.

Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace.Allthe

peoplegotup,applauded,andcheeredloudly.ItwasplainthatMikelaughedlast—hewonthefirstplaceinthelastmeet.

Asheclimbedoutthepool,roarsofloudapplausebrokeoutagain.Asusual,hismomgavehimahugehug,eventhoughhewaswetthrough.Andhisfathergavehimsomeicecreamasarewardandsaidexcitedly,Congratulations,son!Whatamiracl