高中英語(yǔ)-Comments on the composition教學(xué)課件設(shè)計(jì)

寫(xiě)作講評(píng)

學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)能夠在寫(xiě)作中正確地使用動(dòng)詞，突破動(dòng)詞易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)。學(xué)會(huì)用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)潤(rùn)色簡(jiǎn)單句,使語(yǔ)句高級(jí)行文流暢。作文中出現(xiàn)的主要問(wèn)題

1.動(dòng)詞使用出錯(cuò)較多。

2.通篇簡(jiǎn)單句，寫(xiě)作中不能靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)句型結(jié)構(gòu)。作文改錯(cuò)

Areyouhavedreams?Peopleisalwaysproudoftheirdreams.Withdreams,wecanmoreconfident.

TodayIwanttotalkingsomethingaboutmydreamwithyou.Mydreamisbecomeadoctor.IhavethisdreamwhenIveryyoung.HowcanIrealizemydream?IthinkImuststudyhardsothatIcanadmittedtomydreamuniversity.Idon’tgiveupmydream.IbelieveIcansuccess.Doarebetalktowasbehadwon’tsucceed1.Peopleis…2.Ihave..whenIwas…4.mydreamisbecome5.canmoreconfident/

Iveryyoung6.wanttotalking7.Areyouhave..主謂不一致時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤3.canadmittedtomydreamuniversity語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句雙謂語(yǔ)句子缺少謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞的賓語(yǔ)習(xí)慣搭配助動(dòng)詞混用作文中動(dòng)詞常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤1.當(dāng)談到最好朋友的時(shí)候，我的腦海里會(huì)想起Mary.Whenit______tothebestfriend,I__________Maryinmymind.2.當(dāng)我還是個(gè)小女孩時(shí)，看動(dòng)畫(huà)片總是讓我感到很高興。WhenI___alittlegirl,Ialway____happytowatchcartoon.3.有一位老人坐在他身邊.There___anoldman________besidehim.4.那些日子永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)被遺忘。Thosedayswillnever___________.5.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，她忍不住哭了。_________thenews,Shecouldnothelp__________.6.他必須在7點(diǎn)起床。He_____________at7o’clock.7.看電視對(duì)我們的眼睛有害。___________toomuchTV__________harmtooureyes.FillintheblankscomeswillthinkofwasfeltissittingbeforgottenHearingcryingmustgetupWatchingdoes翻譯以下文章，注意動(dòng)詞的正確使用

擁有夢(mèng)想對(duì)每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都很重要。在我看來(lái)，夢(mèng)想就像太陽(yáng)一般。它可以帶給我們希望。夢(mèng)想能讓我們勇敢的面對(duì)困難。我的理想是當(dāng)一個(gè)志愿者。當(dāng)我很小的時(shí)候，我就有這樣一個(gè)夢(mèng)想。現(xiàn)在有很多人正處在困境當(dāng)中。當(dāng)一個(gè)志愿者可以幫助他們擺脫困境。當(dāng)一個(gè)志愿者也可以讓自己快樂(lè)。高考即將來(lái)臨，我要更加努力學(xué)習(xí)。這樣，我才可能被我理想的大學(xué)錄取。在那里，我可以學(xué)習(xí)更多的知識(shí)。在將來(lái)，這些知識(shí)一定可以讓很多人受益。我會(huì)遇到很多困難，但我一定會(huì)堅(jiān)持追求我的夢(mèng)想。我決不會(huì)放棄我的夢(mèng)想。我的夢(mèng)想終有一天會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)。Havingadreamisofgreatimportancetoeveryone.Dreamsarelikethesun.Dreamscanbringushope.Dreamsmakeusfacethedifficultybravely.Mydreamistobeavolunteer.WhenIwasyoung,Iwantedtobeavolunteer.Therearemanypeopleintrouble.Beingavolunteercanhelpthemgetridofthedifficulty.Beingavolunteercanalsomakeourselveshappy.Thecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.Iwillstudyharder.ThenIcanbeadmittedtomyidealuniversity.Icanlearnmoreknowledgethere.Theknowledgemustbenefitmanypeople.Iwillmeetwithalotofdifficulty.Imustinsistonmydream.Iwillnevergiveupmydream.Mydreamwillcometrueoneday.MydreamistobecomeanordinaryteachersothatIcanteachmystudentswhatIhavelearned(王菲）Thedreamissomethingthatonceyouaredeterminedtoachieve,whatevergreatdifficultyyouarefacedwith,you‘llnevergiveup(傅琦）Withthetestapproaching,Iwillmakemoreeffortsinmystudy(張文龍）Thereasonwhyweshouldhavedreamsisthatthedreamcanencourageusandgiveusstrength.(傅亞菲）Onlyifweknowwhatweshoulddo,canwemakeasuccess(隋亞鵬）

Itisonlythroughmuchdifficultthatthedreamwillbeachieved.(張琦）Iwanttosetupacompanybelongingtomyself（馬躍晉）強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)狀/賓從定語(yǔ)從句/讓步狀語(yǔ)從句with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)定/表從句倒裝句非謂語(yǔ)精彩語(yǔ)句一覽人靠衣裝文靠詞裝

1.定語(yǔ)從句2.狀語(yǔ)從句3.名詞性從句4.強(qiáng)調(diào)句6.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞5.倒裝句7.with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)潤(rùn)色Part1作文

.1.(1)Dreamsarelikethesun.⑵Dreamscanbringushope.————————————————————————————————2.Dreamsmakeusfacethedifficultybravely.————————————————————————————————3.Therearemanypeopleintrouble————————————————————————————————4.⑴Beingavolunteercanhelpthemgetridofthedifficulty.⑵Beingavolunteercanalsomakeourselveshappy.————————————————————————————————5.⑴Thecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.⑵Iwillstudyharder—————————————————————————————————6.⑴Iwillstudyharder.⑵ThenIcanbeadmittedtomyidealuniversity.____________________________________________________________7.⑴Iwillmeetwithalotofdifficulty.⑵Imustinsistonmydream.____________________________________________________________8.⑴Iwillnevergiveupmydream.⑵Mydreamwillcometrueoneday

⑴Dreamsarelikethesun.⑵

Dreamscanbringushope.

Dreamsarelikethesunthatbringushope.2.Dreamsmakeusfacethedifficultybravely.2.Itwasdreamsthatmakeusfacethedifficultybravely.

定語(yǔ)從句強(qiáng)調(diào)句

Dreamsarelikethesun,becauseitcanbringushope.原因狀語(yǔ)從句3.Therearemanypeopleintrouble

4.⑴Beingavolunteercanhelpthemgetridofthedifficulty.⑵Beingavolunteercanalsomakeourselveshappy.4.Beingavolunteernotonlycanhelpthemgetridofthedifficultybutalsocanmakeourselveshappy.定語(yǔ)從句3.Therearemanypeoplewhoareintroulbe

notonly…butalso

with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)5.⑴Thecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.⑵Iwillstudyharder5.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationcoming,Iwillstudy

harder6.⑴Iwillstudyharder.⑵ThenIcanbeadmittedtomyidealuniversity.6.IwillstudyhardersothatIcanbeadmittedtomyidealuniversity.

結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句讓步狀語(yǔ)從句7.⑴Iwillmeetwithalotofdifficulty.⑵Imustinsistonmydream7.WhateverdifficultyImeetwith,Imustinsistonmydream8.⑴Iwillnevergiveupmydream.⑵Mydreamwillcometrueoneday8.Iwillnevergiveupmydreamuntilitcomestrue.

時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句華麗變身

Havingadreamisofgreatimportancetoeveryone.Dreamsarelikethesunthatcanbringushope.Itwasdreamsthatmakeusfacethedifficultybravely.Mydreamistobeavolunteer.Ihad