人教版九年級(jí)英語Unit4書面表達(dá)匯總課件

Unit4書面表達(dá)六、書面表達(dá)。(15分)假如你是劉梅，升入九年級(jí)后，你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活都發(fā)生了很大變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，給你的筆友瑪麗亞(Maria)寫一封電子郵件，介紹一下你最近在學(xué)習(xí)和生活上的變化。過去現(xiàn)在作業(yè)少，學(xué)習(xí)輕松作業(yè)多，壓力大放學(xué)后有時(shí)間參加各種活動(dòng)整天學(xué)習(xí)，甚至熬夜，放棄了自己的愛好周末有時(shí)間和家人、朋友相聚周末也要上課要求：1.包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．80詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Dear_Maria，How_are_you?My_life_has_changed_a_lot_since_I_became_a_student_of_Grade_9.IusedtohavelesshomeworkandIcouldlearneasily.However，everythingisdifferentnow.Ihavealotofhomeworktodoeveryday.I'mundergreatpressure.Iusedtotakepartinallkindsofactivitiesafterschool，butnowIhavetostudyallthetimeandsometimesevenstayuplate.Ihavegivenupmyhobbies.What'smore，Iusedtospendtheweekendswithmyfamilyandfriends.NowIhavetotakeclassesonweekends.Ifeelsounhappy.Doyoufeelthesame?Yours，Liu_Mei完成教材3a－3b的任務(wù)1．將你在外貌、性格和興趣方面的變化記錄下來，然后和你的搭檔談?wù)摪l(fā)生在你身上的變化。(7分鐘)2．結(jié)合3a的記錄內(nèi)容，以及3b的要求寫一篇文章，介紹自己的變化，寫作時(shí)可以參考給出的句型及短語。完成后小組內(nèi)互相交流糾錯(cuò)，借鑒好詞好句，教師抽查點(diǎn)撥。(10分鐘)參考案例Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtohavelonghair，butnowmyhairisshort.Iusedtobefat，butnowIgetthinnerbydoingexerciseeveryday.Iusedtobeveryquiet，butnowIamveryoutgoing，IamfriendlytoallmyclassmatesandImakefriendswiththem.ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasthatIlikereadingbooksnow.Ididn'tusetolikereading.Whatwasworse，Iwasnotgoodatwriting.Iseldomgotgoodgrades.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme.Mybestfriend，John，atopstudentintheclass，decidedtodosomethingtohelpme.Heoftenusedtotalkwithmetoletmeknowtheimportanceofreading.Healsohelpedmereadbooks.Attheendoftheschoolyear，IdidbetterintheexamsandImadegreatprogressinreadingandwriting.Now，withthehelpofJohn，Iamcarefulaboutreadingandwriting.Iamtryingmybesttodoitbetter.環(huán)節(jié)說明：通過這個(gè)教學(xué)環(huán)節(jié)鍛煉了學(xué)生的寫作能力和口語表達(dá)能力。義務(wù)教育教科書（人教版）九年級(jí)英語上冊(cè)二、篇章訓(xùn)練請(qǐng)以“IHaveChangedALot！”為題，從外貌、性格、愛好或其他方面談?wù)勀氵@幾年的變化。詞數(shù)120詞左右。【我的提綱】羅列你外貌、性格、愛好或其他方面的變化。請(qǐng)?jiān)凇皢卧獙懽餍ｎ}(答題頁)”相應(yīng)位置完成。Onepossibleversion：IHaveChangedALot!Timegoesby.Igrowupeveryday.OfcourseIhavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Letmeshowyoumychanges.IusedtobeshortandIoftenworriedaboutit.Buttomysurprise，I'mmuchtallernow.Ithinkthischangeisreallygreat.AndIusedtobeveryshyandquiet.Iwasalwayssilentinclass.WhenItalkedtopeople，myfaceoftenturnedred.NowI'mmuchmoreoutgoingandthatmakesmemorepopular.NowIcangiveaspeechforthewholeschool.Ialsomakelotsoffriends.Asformyhobby，Iusedtolikereadingbooks.ButnowI'mmoreinterestedinplayingsports.That'sbecausedoingsportsisnotonlyexcitingbutalsohelpfulformyhealth.Nowadayswestudentsaretoobusyandundertoomuchpressure.Iusedtohatethebusyandboringschoollife.Ayearago，myheadteachertalkedtomeinperson.Heletmeknowtheimportanceofstudy.That'swhenIdecidedtochange.NowIworkharderthanbefore.Bothmyparentsandmyteachersareproudofme.TheytakeprideineverythingIdo.Ialsofeelgoodaboutmyself.

Ihopeyouarebothhealthy.Ihaven'tseenyoufortwoyears，soImissyouverymuch.IrememberIusedtotalkwithyouafterschool.ButnowIhavenobodytotalkwithbecausemyparentsareverybusyeveryday.Andmyeatinghabitshavechanged，too.IusedtohavebreadandmilkforbreakfastinEngland，butnowIamusedtoeatingnoodlesandeggs.Theymakemestrongerthanbefore.Forsports，Ididn'tusetoplayballgames，butnowIaminterestedinplayingbasketball.It'sfuntoplaywithfriendsafterschool.That'sallIwanttotellyou.Momanddadsendtheirlove.Wishyouhappyandhealthy.2.不少于80詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Deargrandparents，Howisitgoing？Yours，DaveWritinng現(xiàn)在和過去進(jìn)行比較的短文屬于記敘文的范圍。此話題的作文通常會(huì)以提示性作文的形式給出。注意要將提示的要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)清楚。句子的時(shí)態(tài)通常為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，usedto句型在此類作文中應(yīng)用廣泛。

常用句型歸納如下：1.Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfew

years.2.Iusedto…NowI’m…3.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas…Example假如你叫李華，剛轉(zhuǎn)到一所新學(xué)校。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息，介紹你的一些變化。80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。IhavechangedalotsinceImovedtothisnewschoolthisterm…過去現(xiàn)在有很多朋友，性格開朗幾乎沒有朋友，變得沉默寡言花很多時(shí)間和朋友們一起玩多數(shù)時(shí)間用在功課上對(duì)功課沒有興趣，成績(jī)很差變得愛學(xué)習(xí)了，成績(jī)提高很快One

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spendmostofmytimeonmyschoolwork.Iusedtohavenointerestinmylessons,soIusuallygotbadgrades.However,nowIbecomemoreinterestedinmystudies,andmygradeshaveimprovedalot.書面表達(dá)第5-6版 你校英語俱樂部將舉辦題為“Greatchangesincommunication”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片提示，寫一篇應(yīng)征稿描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。參考詞匯：1.keepintouchwith2.send 3.receive 4.WeChat(微信) 5.improve 6.hearfrom寫作要求：1.根據(jù)圖片提示進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā) 揮；（參考詞匯僅供參考） 2.運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)的usedto結(jié)構(gòu)(至 少兩處)； 3.語句通順，語法正確，詞數(shù)80左 右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總 詞數(shù)。Greatchangesincommunication Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachother.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Inaword,peoplehaveaneasierlifenowadayswiththedevelopmentofcommunication.

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Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachother.Peopleusedtokeepintouchwitheachothermainlybywritinglettersorusingthepublictelephone.Butnoweveryonehashisownmobilephone.Peoplecancommunicatewitheachotheranywhereandanytime.Theysendandreceivee-mailsbyInternet.TheysendandreceivemessagesonQQorWeChat.Withthesechanges,people'slifehasimprovedalot.Theyknowmoreabouttheoutsideworld.Itusedtotakeseveraldaysorweekstohearfromeachother,butnowittakesonlyseveralminutes.

Inaword,peoplehaveaneasierlifenowadayswiththedevelopmentofcommunication.六、作文（共1小題；共25分）34.假如你有一位同學(xué)叫HuangQiang，他在你和朋友的幫助下有了很大的進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示寫一篇短文，介紹一下他的進(jìn)步。詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。

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現(xiàn)在

起床晚，經(jīng)常上課遲到早早起床讀英語，按時(shí)到校上課說話，不聽課認(rèn)真聽講，記筆記晚上不學(xué)習(xí)，抄作業(yè)晚上在家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，有問題向父母尋求幫助經(jīng)常和其他同學(xué)打架熱心幫助有困難的同學(xué)，和其他同學(xué)相處很好

【參考范文】

Ihaveaclassmate.HisnameisHuangQiang.Heusedtobeaproblemstudent.Butnowheisoneofthebeststudentsinourclass.Heusedtogetuplateandwasalwayslateforschool.ButnowhegetsupearlyandreadsEnglisheverymorning.Hegetstoschoolontimeeveryday.Heusedtotalkwithothersinclass.Hedidn'tusetolistentotheteachers.Butnowheisverycarefulinclassandtakesalotofnotes.Intheevening,heusedtoplaycomputergamesorwatchTVathome.Butnowhestudiesanddoeshishomeworkcarefully.Whenhehasproblems,heaskshisparentsforhelp.Heusedtofightwithotherstudents,butnowheusuallyhelpsstudentswhoareintroubleandgetsonwellwithhisclassmates.書面表達(dá)(15分)假如你叫李明，進(jìn)入九年級(jí)后，周末活動(dòng)發(fā)生了很大的變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息，以“HowI'vechanged！”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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FeelinghappystressedoutHowI'vechanged!Mylifeonweekendshaschangedalotinthepasttwomonths.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：HowI'vechanged!Mylifeonweekendshaschangedalotinthepasttwomonths.YouknowIusedtogoshoppingwithmymotherandIplayedsportswithmyfriendsonweekends.But__now__I__have__no__time__to__play.①Ihavetogotoschoolonweekendsbecausewehavemanyclassesallday.Atnight，Iused__to__watch__TV,__and__read__newspapers②.Ifelthappy.Now，Ifeelstressedout.Ihavetodolotsofhomework.It'sboring.I__really__miss__the__old__days.③點(diǎn)評(píng)：①But表示“轉(zhuǎn)折”，havenotimetodosth.“沒時(shí)間干某事”。②usedtodosth.表示“過去常常干某事”。③揭示主題，點(diǎn)明中心，且文章首尾呼應(yīng)。

書面表達(dá)(20分)假如你是張洋，這個(gè)學(xué)期剛轉(zhuǎn)到一所新學(xué)校，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的信息，介紹一下你的變化，80詞左右。過去現(xiàn)在留直發(fā)，性格開朗留卷發(fā)，沉默寡言花很多時(shí)間和朋友一起玩多數(shù)時(shí)間花在學(xué)習(xí)上喜歡踢足球喜歡集郵范文：Everythingischangingallthetime.I__have__changed__a__lot__since__I__moved__to__this__new__school__this__term.①Iusedtohave②straighthairandbeoutgoing.ButnowIhavecurlyhairandI'mquiet.Iusedtospend__much__time__playing③withmyfriends.ButnowIspendmostofmytimestudying.Iusedtolikeplayingsoccer,butIlikecollectingstampsnow.Howaboutyou？Haveyouchanged?名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：◆本文用“對(duì)比描述法”描寫事物的變化。寫人的改變可以先寫人物外貌的改變，再寫性格特征的改變，最后寫興趣、愛好的改變。◆本文的添彩點(diǎn)：①此處現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，對(duì)全文起畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。②此處的have不可換成be。③spend...doing...意為“花費(fèi)……干……”?！皩?duì)比描述法”寫事物變化的短文對(duì)比描述法即常從一個(gè)或幾個(gè)方面對(duì)同一事物的過去和現(xiàn)在的區(qū)別等進(jìn)行對(duì)比。根據(jù)提示，簡(jiǎn)要介紹你朋友的成長(zhǎng)變化，詞數(shù)：10