墨東博考研英語大作文

寫實派1Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,(圖的內(nèi)容原則上用一個主從句表達,功底.兩句合一句的途經(jīng),1AND連結(jié)2WHICH或WHEREAS連結(jié)3非謂語)thetwopetneighborsgreeteachotherpolitelyandamicably,whereas(=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND)thetwopets’ownersseemtoignoreeachother.Simpleasitis,thedrawingrendersusponderingawefully.(湊字數(shù),其富余時,可省去)Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety:(反映的現(xiàn)實)pets,ratherthan/insteadofpeoplearoundthem,aresuchanindispensablepartintheirdailylifetothepointwhere(加以講解)theyareexcessively/inordinately(負面詞匯,作者的態(tài)度盡在不言中,回避使用IBELIVE,ITHINK之類的句式)fondoftheirbelovedanimalswhileneglectingthosewhocarethem,whichhasarousedgreatconcernandshouldbegivenenoughconsideration.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitssymbolicmeaningthat(主題句,盡量避免使用1主系表2THEREBE結(jié)構(gòu)主張使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT無主句)indifferenceshouldbeclearedupamongpeople,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorouslynowadaysinChinaoughttobeweighed/taken/ponderedseriously./earnestly/conscientiouslyWhydowelayemphasisonthis(指代詞表過渡)severalpoints(名詞復(fù)數(shù),總分總的標(biāo)志)analyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Foronething,(分述標(biāo)志詞)sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wearedeniedchancestoshareourfeelingswithourfriendsandrelatives.Foranother(分述標(biāo)志詞),withsomanydishonestiesgoingaroundinourlifeandthenindifferenceoccurring,wemighthavenochoicebuttoenjoythecompanyofpets.Andaboveall(分述標(biāo)志詞),toomanytragedies-seeingsomeoneinmortaldangerwithoutliftingafingertosavehim-putonthestageinourdailylifealmosteveryday,Nobetterillustrationofthisideatouchedonabovecanbemaintained/taken/weighedthanthecaseaslistedbelow,(例證)acrowdofpeopleremainedappallinglynonchalance(=indifference,論據(jù)是論點的具體體現(xiàn),主題核心詞匯重復(fù))tothepleaofamother,sinceshefailedtooffertherequiredamountofcashasapricetosaveherdrowningson,thewomanatlastwatchedhersonsinktodeath..Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasictobuildupthesocietyinharmonyasironingoutindifferenceamongpeople.(此句為小節(jié),1與TS首尾呼應(yīng),重復(fù)原則growoutof=clearup2為第三段起勢)Judgingfromwhathasbeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsofindifferencehasbeen,likePandora’sbox,thecripplingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto(點主題重復(fù)原則)narrowandbridgethegapamongpeople.Tobeginwith,(以法治國)thegovernmentshouldmakelawtoestablishthesocietyinwhichpeopleliveinharmony.Inaddition,(以德治國)peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofconcernandcareeachotherespecially.Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,canwemakeoursociety,wherepeople,evennotknowingeachother,helpamongthem,appealtoeveryone.2Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,(圖的內(nèi)容原則上用一個主從句表達,功底.兩句合一句的途經(jīng),1AND連結(jié)2WHICH或WHEREAS連結(jié)3非謂語)aladyandagentlemanarewatchinganartificialsceneonthetopofabuildingwithnumeroustowerblockssurroundingthem.(=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND)Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch.(湊字數(shù),其富余時,可省去)Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsisacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety,(反映的現(xiàn)實)toomanyman-madeprojectssuchasskyscrapershaveexcessivelybeenbuilt,whereastoomuchnaturalresourcesincludingafforestedlandhasvanishedappallingly.(加以講解)(負面詞匯,作者的態(tài)度盡在不言中,回避使用IBELIVE,ITHINK之類的句式).Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningthat(主題句,盡量避免使用1主系表2THEREBE結(jié)構(gòu)主張使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT無主句)itisimperativetochecktheblindactionsandactivitiesofhumanbeingsintheurbandevelopment,withnowadaysvaluesofscientificdevelopmentechoedvigorously.whydowelayemphasisonthis(指代詞表過渡)?severalpoints(名詞復(fù)數(shù),總分總的標(biāo)志)analyzedbelowmighthelpusgainaninsightintothedramaticchangetowhichwehavebeenqualifiedtobearwitness.Tobeginwith,(分述標(biāo)志詞)overthepastdecades,mucharablelandhasbeendestroyedintherushforrapidurbandevelopment.Suchblinddevelopmenthasdamagedthenaturalbalancetothepointwherepeopleonlyliveinaboxoflifelesscementandsteel.Whatismore,mostpeoplestilllacktheconceptofscientificdevelopment.Someurbanplannersanddesignersfocustheirattentionsimplyontheirimmediateinterestsandproblems,whichhasinturndegradedwrethchedlythequalityofourlivingenvironment.Asmanyfamousecologistspointoutthataclusterofhigh-risebuildingsinacityoftenoverburdenlivingcapacities,whichoncecouldaffordtoresidentsenough.(例證)Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasictogiveanexpressiontoinherentspiritofscientificdevelopmentasrestraintunbridledurbandevelopment.(此句為小節(jié),1與TS首尾呼應(yīng),重復(fù)原則)Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsarisingfromindiscriminatedevelopmenthasbeen,likethePandora’sbox,thecripplingforceoffollowingthevaluesofscientificdevelopment.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto(點主題重復(fù)原則)laymuchemphasisontheharmsfromblinddevelopmentattheexpenseofthebalanceofecosystem.Tobeginwith,(以法治國)thegovernmentshouldmakelawtochannelconstructiontothetrackofvaluesofscientificdevelopment,for,ifnot,ourdescendantswouldbethrownintounexpectedcrises.Inaddition,(以德治國)peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessthatenvironmentalproblemscannotbeseparatedfromthoseofhumanwelfareandfromtheprocessofeconomicdevelopmentingeneral.Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,canwemakeoursociety,wherebirdsaresingingandflowersaregivingforththeirfragrancehereandthere,appealtoeveryone.32008年考研英語作文范文寫實類，請同學(xué)們參考沖刺班“冷漠”范文的模版。Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,thetwodisabledpersonswhosecrippledlegsareboundtogetherdoalotoftraveling.Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch.Accordingly,whatthisfar-reachingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety:thepeopleinoursocietywhoareinthedarkwanttoturnthecornerbuttheycannotsucceedbythemselvesrespectivelyandinturntheyhavetochoosetopulltogetherintimesoftroubleItgoeswithoutsayingthatitssymbolicmeaningthatnomatterwhatdifficultieswemayfacewhenweworkorstudyweshouldhelpeachother,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorouslynowadaysinChina.Whydowelayemphasisonthis?Severalpointsanalyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Ononehand,sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wemayencounterthisorthatplight,wherewewouldbeatalosstodoanythingotherthantoneedothersassistance.Ontheotherhand,ifwedonotofferhelpeachotherwhenweconfrontdilemmawewouldnotrealizeourdream..Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecaseaslistedbelow,69peoplewerecaughtinanunfortunatemineaccidentinHenanprovinceseveralmonthsago,theysurvivedincrediblyowingtotheirmutualhelpatlast..Consequently,noissueinchinaisasbasictobuildupthesocietyinharmonyascoordinationinfaceofdisasterJudgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizethevaluesofmutualaidhasbeenthedrivingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadetoadvocatespiritofsupportingeachotherTobeginwith,thegovernmentshouldmakelawtoencouragegonetotheheartofmaintaininggoodmomentumofnationaleconomygrowth.c圖表文+圖文寫實P1(圖表)Asisdepictedinthepie/table/chart,theinvestorsindifferententerprisescomefrom26countriesandregions.(圖表標(biāo)題)Accordingtothepie/table/chart,HongKonginvestmentranksfirst,accountingfor44percentoftotal.Japaninvestmentmakesup19.2percent,puttingitinsecondspot.ThirdisUnitedStatesat16percent.(數(shù)據(jù)描述)Obviously,itgoeswithoutsayingthatBeijinghasmaderemarkableresultsinattractingforeignbusinesstoinvestinjointventures,especiallyafterChina’entryofWTO.(主題句)P2(圖文寫實)Itcanbeeasilyproved,hence,thatBeijing,oneofbiggestcitiesinChina,doesbenefitalotfromoutsideinvestment.(主題的延伸或結(jié)果)Severalpointsanalyzedbelowmighthelpusgainaninsightintothisdramaticchangetowhichwehavebeenqualifiedtobearwitness.Inthefirstplace,alargenumberofjointventureshavebeensetup,whichcontributesgreatlytothedevelopmentofBeijingeconomy.Inthesecondplace,theforeign-investedenterprisesofferalotofjobstotheresidentsinBeijing.Thisinturnrelieve