初中英語 留言條

PARTTHREE第三篇寫作妙解篇類型(三)

留言條典例分析假如你是李華,你要和父母去度假,你給朋友Jim寫一個留言條,請求他幫助照顧一下你的家。告訴他你什么時候離開,要去哪里,你想讓他幫你做些什么以及回來的時間。[提示詞語]tomorrow,lookafter,walkthedog,clean[提示問題]·Whenandwherewillyougo?·WhatwillJimdo?·Whenwillyoucomeback?DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【寫作架構(gòu)】【思路點撥】1.要點提煉:本文是一篇應用文,類型是留言條。根據(jù)題目要求,可以提煉出3個要點:(1)說明離開的時間(2)說明你需要他幫你做的事情(3)說明什么時間回來2.時態(tài):一般將來時3.人稱:第一人稱和第二人稱【基礎寫作】Ⅰ.根據(jù)所給提示詞補全下列各句1.我和我的父母下周三要去度假。(goonvacation)

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2.你能幫我照看一下我的房子嗎?(Couldyouplease…)________________________________________________________3.請幫我給花兒澆水。(helpsbdo…)Please

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MyparentsandIaregoingonvacationCouldyoupleasehelpmelookaftermyhouse?helpmewatertheflowers4.當我外出的時候請幫我喂狗、遛狗。(when…)________________________________________________________________5.別忘了喂貓并陪它玩兒。(Don'tforgetto…)______________________________________________________PleasehelpmefeedandwalkthedogwhenIamout.Don'tforgettofeedthecatandplaywithit.Ⅱ.句子升格按括號中的要求改寫句子。6.Wouldyoupleasehelpmelookaftermyhouse?I'monvacation.(用while連接兩個句子)_________________________________________________________________________________________________7.Itismyhabit.Itakeawalkaftersupper.(合并為一句話)_________________________________________________________________________________________________8.Remembertogivemydogsomefoodandwater.(用Please改寫句子)_________________________________________________________________________________________________WhileI'monvacation,wouldyoupleasehelpmelookaftermyhouse?Itismyhabittotakeawalkaftersupper.Pleaseremembertogivemydogsomefoodandwater.9.Youneedtowatermyflowersandfeedthedog.(用both…and…連接兩個句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________10.MyparentswillbebacknextFriday.(用not…until…改寫句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________Youneedtobothwatermyflowersandfeedthedog.Myparentswon'tbebackuntilnextFriday.【連句成文】DearJim,MyparentsandIaregoingonvacationtomorrow.WewillgotoShanghai.Couldyoupleasehelpmelookaftermyhouse?Pleasecleanthehouseandwatertheflowers.Oh,Ihaveadog.Willyoupleasefeedmydog?Anddon'tforgettogivehimsomewaterandtakehimforawalk.We'llbebacknextweek.Thanks.LiHua拓展積累【說明外出的表達】1.MyparentsandIdecidetogotoHainannextweekend.2.IplantovisitmygrandparentswithmyparentsnextFriday.3.MyparentsandImakeadecisiontoleaveforShanghaithisSaturday.【要求對方做事情】1.Iwouldbehappyifyoucanlookaftermyhouse.2.Iwillbethankfulifyoucanhelpmewatermyflowers.3.Ihopeyoucangivemydogsomewaterandfood.4.Don'tforgettotakemydogforawalk.【說明返回時間并表示感謝】1.Wemakeaplantobebacknextweek.Thanks.2.Wewon'tbebackuntilnextSaturday.I'mreallythankfultoyouforyourhelp.3.WeplantocomebacknextMonday.Thankyouforhelpingmelookaftermyhouse.實戰(zhàn)演練假定你是李華,你正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs.Wilson不在家,你準備外出,請給Mrs.Wilson寫一個留言條。[內(nèi)容]1.外出購物;2.替房東還書;3.Tracy來電留言:(1)咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)見面取消;(2)此事已告知Susan;(3)盡快回電。[注意]1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。One

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version:Mrs.Wilson,I'mgoingoutshopping,andwon'tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1o'clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmornin