專題12讀后續(xù)寫構造“動作鏈”兩大句式仿寫20例及高考真題片段運用

專題12讀后續(xù)寫構造“動作鏈”兩大句式仿寫20例及高考真題片段運用講義CONTENTS構造動作鏈句式一：主語+動作A+動作Band動作C構造動作鏈句式二：Havingdone…,主謂賓【高考實戰(zhàn)運用一】(2023年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實戰(zhàn)運用二】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實戰(zhàn)運用三】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實戰(zhàn)運用四】(2022年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實戰(zhàn)運用五】(2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)PARTONE01

構造動作鏈句式一：主語+動作A+動作Band動作C(三個并列謂語,動作依次發(fā)生)【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫1:Hetookataxitothepolicestation.翻譯:他攔下一輛的士，拿著手提箱跳進去沖著司機說，“去”改寫:He_____ataxi,_______inwiththesuitcaseand_____thedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”

tookjumpedtold【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫2:Theboysjumpedintothelaketoplay.翻譯:男孩們興奮地跑到湖邊，脫下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。改寫:Theboysexcitedly

______tothelake,quickly_____offtheirclothesand_______intothewatertoplay.rushedtookjumped【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫3:Shehuggedhersontightly.翻譯:她沖上前，跪下，把兒子抱在懷里。改寫:She______forwardwithouthesitation,_______downand_________hersonintoherarmstightly.

dashedkneltgathered【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫4:Irushedhometogetthecottoncat.翻譯:我沖回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那頂棉質的。改寫:I______home,_______throughmycollectionofhatsand_________thecottonone.

rushedsearchedgrabbed【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫5:ShelookedatthetrophyandthankedTUNTUN.翻譯:她先看一下獎杯，深吸一口氣，說道：“謝謝吞吞！”改寫:She_______atthetrophy,______adeepbreathand_____,“ThankTUNTUN!”glancedtooksaid【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫6:Macjumpedoffthebicycletoshutthedoor.翻譯:麥克毫不猶豫跳下自行車，沖向車的后門，猛然地關上車門。改寫:Mac_______offthebicyclewithoutanyhesitation,________tothebackdoorand________thedoorheavily.jumpeddashedslammed【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫7:Iwenttoschoolinahurrythismorning.翻譯:翻譯：我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起書包，騎著自行車匆忙去上學了。改寫:I_____onmycoathurriedly,________mybagand_______toschoolhurriedlythismorning.putgrabbedcycled【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫8:Mymumgavefiftydollarstothepooroldman.翻譯:媽媽打開錢包，拿出五十元錢，遞給那個貧困的老人。改寫:Mymom_______thepurse,______outfiftydollarsand_______ittothepooroldman.openedtookhanded【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫9:Shepickedupthephotoandplaceditintothealbum.翻譯:她拿起照片，盯著看一會兒，仔細放進相冊里。改寫:She________upthephoto,_______atitforawhileand_______itcautiouslyintothealbum.

pickedstaredplaced【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫10:Jimmyquicklythrewthemeatatthefiercewolf.翻譯:吉米快速拿出肉，瞄準，徑直朝兇猛的狼扔過去。改寫:Jimmy______outthemeat,_______atthewolfand_______itstraighttothefierceanimal.pulledaimedthrewPARTTWO02構造動作鏈句式二:Havingdone…,主謂賓(表示先做了某事,再發(fā)生核心動作)【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaited

inlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫1:Afterhavingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.翻譯:排了三個小時隊后，他被告知票賣完了。改寫:_______________for3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.

Havingqueued【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫2:Shewanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,thenshefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.翻譯:她在街上漫無目的地逛了好幾個小時，感到有點餓，想吃點東西。改寫:___________________aimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.

Havingwandered【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫3:Afterhetoldthetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.翻譯:說出真相后、他心里輕松了很多、心情放松地回家了。改寫:___________thetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.Havingtold【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫4:Aftergettingmypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.翻譯：得到了我會好好照顧母親的承諾后，爸爸放心地把行李放進車里。改寫:____________mypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.Havinggot【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫5:Afterfightinginthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.翻譯:征戰(zhàn)多年后，戰(zhàn)士回到家中，發(fā)現(xiàn)家人已經搬走了。改寫:_____________inthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.Havingfought【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫6:AfterIpromisedthatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.翻譯:因為承諾了五點之前我們一定到那兒，所以當車拋錨的時候，我非常慌張。改寫:_______________thatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.

Havingpromised【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫7:Aftershemadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindowandexpectedthearrivalofherdaughter.翻譯:做好充分的準備后，她站在窗邊，期待著女兒的到來。改寫:_____________fullpreparations,shestoodbythewindow,expectingthearrivalofherdaughter.Havingmade【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫8:AfterreceivingtheNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathedidn’tknowwhattodo.翻譯:哈利波特收到光輪2000后高興得不知所措。改寫:_______________theNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathewasatalosswhattodo.

HavingreceivedHavingwaited【示例】在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫10:Afterexperiencingsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.翻譯:她接連經歷了那么多次失敗后，終于振作起來了。改寫:__________________somanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.HavingexperiencedPARTTHREE03高考實戰(zhàn)運用一(2023年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運用讀后續(xù)寫“動作鏈”技巧，把下面的語篇補充完整。（再三仔細檢查后，我再也無法控制自己，立即與我的英語老師分享了這個消息）Withoutherhelp,Iwouldneverhavehadthechancetoobtainthehonor.MyfacelitupwithjoyasIacceptedtheaward,mysmilefilledwithpride.Ifeltaburstofgratitudewellingupinmyheartandsurgingthoughme.Havingdouble-checkedit,IcouldnolongercontainmyselfandpromptlysharedthenewswithmyEnglishteacherPARTFOUR04高考實戰(zhàn)運用二(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)

運用讀后續(xù)寫“動作鏈”技巧，把下面的語篇補充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Passingthedesertedhouse,Ispottedthebrokenglass,whichhadbeenfixedperfectly.Itremindedmeofthehummingbird,thetinycutecreature.__________________________________________________________________________________________（在和主人聊了一會兒之后，我被告知她從那天起就再也沒有回來過。）“Perhapssheisenjoyingthevaluablefreedomatthismoment,”Isaidtomyself.Hourslater,thesunbegantosink.Havinghadasmallchatwiththehost,IwasinformedthatshePARTFIVE05高考實戰(zhàn)運用三(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運用讀后續(xù)寫“動作鏈”技巧，把下面的語篇補充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Istillrememberedmyfriends‘promisesoIwentpasttheabandonedmilkinghousetoseeiftheyhadfixedthebrokenwindow.To

my