2022年中考英語(百色專用)復習精講教學案-寫作指導話題6　節(jié)假日活動

話題六節(jié)假日活動eq\x(單元鏈接)年級單元話題功能九年級Unit2Ithinkthatmoon-cakesaredelicious！節(jié)日給出個人反應eq\x(話題解讀)《英語課程標準》中關于“節(jié)假日活動”的子話題有：1.節(jié)日與假日；2.慶?；顒?。分析百色近八年(2014～2021)中考書面表達的命題方向可知，未曾涉及“節(jié)假日活動”這一話題。從全國來看，關于“節(jié)假日活動”的相關話題主要從以下角度進行考查：1．介紹某個節(jié)日的起源、人們的慶祝方式及具體活動等(2021常州，2020淮安，2020大慶，2020溫州，2019眉山，2018蘭州)；2．為了慶祝節(jié)日所做的準備工作或計劃(2018江西，2018德陽)；3．比較節(jié)日之間的異同(2019通遼)；4．介紹假期或旅行(2020寧波，2020孝感，2020昆明，2018杭州)。eq\x(話題素材串聯(lián))一、常用話題詞匯1．中國主要節(jié)日：NewYear'sDay，theSpringFestival，theLanternFestival，Women'sDay，theDragonBoatFestival，Children'sDay，theMid-AutumnFestival，Teachers'Day…2．西方主要節(jié)日：Easter，Mother'sDay，F(xiàn)ather'sDay，ThanksgivingDay，Halloween，ChristmasDay…3．傳統(tǒng)文化相關詞匯：lantern，jiaozi/dumpling，zongzi，mooncake，sweetdumpling(湯圓)，noodles，chopsticks，Chinesecharacter(漢字)，papercutting/paper-cuts，Chineseknot(中國結)，traditionalopera(戲曲)，BeijingOpera…4．節(jié)假日慶祝活動：gettogether，visitrelativesandfriends，makeaspecialcardwithbestwishes，setofffireworks/crackers(放煙花/鞭炮)，haveabigdinner，cleanthehouse，admirethemoon，gosomewhereinteresting，takeavacation，giveredenvelopes(發(fā)紅包)，watchdragon/liondances，doChinesekungfu，guessriddles(猜燈謎)…二、佳句欣賞與運用◆節(jié)日介紹類TheSpringFestivaliscelebratedinJanuaryorFebruary.TheDragonBoatFestivalfallsonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar(農(nóng)歷)．ItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.TheDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionwhichdatesbackmorethantwothousandyears.Thanksgivingisatimeforaspecialdinneramongfamilyandfriends.It'satimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebratetheharvest.【仿寫】對孩子們來說，兒童節(jié)是盡情玩耍的時光。It's__a__time__for__children__to__have__fun__on__Children's__Day.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisadayforfamilyreunion.It'sfullofjoyandhappiness.◆活動安排類OntheeveoftheNewYear，thewholefamilygettogetherandhaveabigdinner.IthinkweshoulddosomethingspecialtoshowourlovetoourmothersonMother'sDay.Iboughtatieformyfatherasagiftbecauseit'sFather'sDaytoday.OnThanksgivingDay，Iwanttoexpressmythankstothosepeoplewhohaveeverhelpedme.Toshowtheirthanks，studentssendcardswithbestwishesorflowerstotheirteachers.Onthisday，wecleanourhouseandsweepawaybadluck.Mygrandmaoftendecoratesourhousewithpapercuttings.【仿寫】在圣誕節(jié)這一天，我們用一棵圣誕樹來裝飾房子。_On__Christmas__Day，we__decorate__our__house__with__a__Christmas__tree.eq\x(典例剖析)在即將舉行的中學生國際文化交流活動中，你將代表學校介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——春節(jié)，請你根據(jù)方框中所給的提示信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹該節(jié)日。theSpringFestivalTime：inJanuaryorFebruaryActivities：welcomethenewyear，visitrelatives，gettogether…Meaning：thebiggestdayofayear，anewstart…注意：1．發(fā)言稿中必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學校等信息；3．80詞左右(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。Ladiesandgentlemen，WelcometotheChineseculturetour.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.【審題指導】這是一篇關于節(jié)日介紹類的書面表達。全文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作前，應讀懂方框里的提示信息，理出寫作思路(春節(jié)的時間、慶祝春節(jié)的活動、春節(jié)的意義)；寫作時，注意提示信息的完整性，不要遺漏要點，可適當發(fā)揮。【寫作導圖】【作文失分點與句子升格】◎失分點節(jié)日類作文是學生熟悉的話題之一，學生寫作時相對比較輕松。結合本篇作文來說，學生易失分的地方主要有：1．對春節(jié)的了解不多，僅局限于提示信息，無法展開來敘述；2．詞匯和句式的儲備不足，簡單句運用太多，雖能避免錯誤，但會使整篇文章顯得平庸，得不到高分?！蚓渥由?答案均在【佳作欣賞】中加粗體現(xiàn))1．NowallowmetointroduceanimportantfestivalinChina，theSpringFestival.(用“oneofthe＋形容詞最高級＋名詞復數(shù)”結構升格句子)________________________________________________________________________2．Peoplecomebackhomeandgettogether.(用“fromdifferentplaces”和“forabigdinner”擴句升格句子)________________________________________________________________________3．Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear.Theyhopetheywillhaveabrightnewstart.(用“v.-ing表伴隨”結構改寫句子)________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】Ladies__and__gentlemen，Welcome__to__the__Chinese__culture__tour.NowallowmetointroduceoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina，theSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalfallsinJanuaryorFebruary.ItisChineseNewYearandalsothebiggestdayofayear.Onthisday，peoplecomebackhomefromdifferentplacesandgettogetherforabigdinner.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear，hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.Duringthefestival，peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriendsandwisheachothergoodluckforthenewyear.Childrencanoftengethongbaofromtheirelders.Doyouthinkitinteresting?That's__all.Thank__you__for__listening.【名師賞析】此篇作文無論是從結構上還是內容上都堪稱是一篇佳作。首先，開篇點題，用一個祈使句直接引入要介紹的節(jié)日；其次，按照方框里的提示信息，依次介紹了春節(jié)的時間、慶祝春節(jié)的活動和春節(jié)的意義；最后，表達了對對方聆聽的感謝。值得一提的是，文章介紹了大量與春節(jié)相關的文化習俗，如stayuplatetowelcomethenewyear，visitrelativesandfriends，gethongbaofromelders等。同時，句式結構多樣，富有變化，充分體現(xiàn)了作者深厚的語言文化功底。eq\x(實戰(zhàn)演練)假如你是李華，打算邀請你們的外教Jack來你家共度端午佳節(jié)，并觀看一年一度的龍舟賽。請根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。提示：1．WhendoChinesepeoplecelebratetheDragonBoatFestival?2．Whydotheycelebrateit?3．WhatwillyouandJackdoonthatday?要求：1．短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名；3．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：lunarcalendar農(nóng)歷DearJack，TheDragonBoatFestivaliscominginafewdays.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutospendthefestivalwithmyfamily.ChinesepeoplehavebeencelebratingitonMay5thofthelunarcalendarforcenturiestorememberapoet—QuYu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