How-to-write-a-good-composition-公開課教案教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)課件案例試卷

Howtowriteagoodcomposition?寫作7步曲寫作第一步-審1.認(rèn)真審題，找出文章所要表達(dá)的中心。

1.介紹Betty

2.計(jì)劃

2.時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)3.信息點(diǎn)寫作第二步—列用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)goodfriendashortgirlwith

likewatchingmoviesdoingsportsnextSundaymorninggotothemuseumintheafternoonplaybasketballintheeveninggotoanEnglishparty寫作第三步—加短語加上主語等其它成分變句子加上開頭和結(jié)尾，注意開頭結(jié)尾要簡潔、漂亮加上之后結(jié)構(gòu)完整，一般可以采用總分總或總分結(jié)構(gòu)寫作第四步—連

恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章層次清晰，各部分銜接自然1.并列，遞進(jìn)2.表選擇3.表因果4.表轉(zhuǎn)折5.表?xiàng)l件6.表解釋7.表強(qiáng)調(diào)8.表順序9.表結(jié)論1.and,aswellas.notonly..butalso,both..and..2.or3.because,so4.but,however5.if6.suchas,forexample7.what’smore,infact8.first/firstly,firstofall,second/-ly,then,later,next,finally,atlast,intheend…9..inaword,Ithink,allinall,inmyopinion,inmyeyes寫作第五步—美選好詞句，美化文章，在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。（切忌使用太多從句）Sheisa12-year-oldgirlcalledBetty.It’sgreatforhertoplaybasketballwithherfriends.Shelikesplayingbasketball.Sheisquiteinterestedinplayingbasketball.寫作第六步—查1.動詞錯(cuò)誤SheisjointheMusicClub.ShejoinstheMusicClubShewillveryhappy.Shewillbeveryhappy.Shelikesdoingsports,suchasplaybasketball.Shelikesdoingsports,suchasplayingbasketball.寫作第六步—查2.名詞ShemakesafewChinesefriend.ShemakesafewChinesefriends.3.形容詞和副詞Sheisgoodatsports.Icanplayfootballgood.Sheisgoodatsports.Icanplayfootballwell.寫作第七步—抄1.字體工整2.卷面整潔3.再次檢查再加工1.開頭宜直忌曲1.MynameisWangPing,astudentinGardenMiddleSchool.2.I’mWangPing.I’mfromGardenMiddleSchool.3.I’maGardenMiddleSchoolstudentwhoisinGradeNine.Bettyismygoodfriend.Sheis…2.過渡句引入銜接自然I’dliketotellyousomethingabouther.3.主要內(nèi)容充實(shí)有序,

句型靈活，長短句結(jié)合1.Andshespends….on….Asaresult,2.NextSundaymorning,sheisgoingto…andtheywill…3.Ibelievewewill…4.結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題不拖沓I’msurewewillhaveagreattimethere.

Bettyismygoodfriend.Sheisashortgirlwithlonghairandtwobigeyes.Shelooksverybeautiful.Bettylikeswatchingmoviesand

sheisalsoquiteinterestedinsports.NextSundaymorning,sheisgoingtothemuseumwithherparentsandtheywillspendalotoftimethere.Intheafternoon,shewillplaybasketballwithherfriendsinthe